Call me by your name
Executive Summary
Call Me by Your Name Synopsis
Synopsis
Set in the summer of 1983 in Northern Italy, 'Call Me by Your Name' follows the passionate and transformative relationship between Elio Perlman, a 17-year-old boy, and Oliver, a 24-year-old American graduate student who comes to stay with Elio's family for the summer. Elio, who is intelligent and introspective, spends his days transcribing music and exploring the beautiful Italian countryside. When Oliver arrives, he is immediately captivated by the older man's charm and confidence, which contrasts sharply with his own more reserved nature.
As the summer unfolds, Elio and Oliver engage in a series of flirtatious encounters, filled with tension and unspoken desires. Elio's initial feelings of jealousy and confusion about his attraction to Oliver are compounded by his relationship with Marzia, a local girl with whom he shares a brief romance. However, it is Oliver who occupies Elio's thoughts, leading to a complex emotional journey as Elio grapples with his burgeoning sexuality and the societal expectations of the time.
The two young men eventually find themselves drawn together, sharing intimate moments that deepen their connection. They explore the lush landscapes of Italy, swim in the river, and share their thoughts on life, love, and art. Their relationship culminates in a passionate encounter that changes both of their lives forever. However, as the summer comes to an end, Oliver must return to America, leaving Elio heartbroken and longing for the connection they shared.
In the aftermath of their summer romance, Elio reflects on the impact Oliver had on his life, grappling with the bittersweet memories of their time together. The film concludes with a poignant moment of realization for Elio, as he learns to embrace the beauty of love, loss, and the fleeting nature of youth. 'Call Me by Your Name' is a tender exploration of first love, identity, and the complexities of human relationships, set against the backdrop of a sun-soaked Italian summer.
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Logline: A transformative summer romance unfolds between a seventeen-year-old and his father's charming guest, leaving an indelible mark on their lives. See other logline suggestoins
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USP: What sets this screenplay apart is its intimate portrayal of a summer romance that transcends cultural and generational boundaries. The lush Italian setting serves as a backdrop for a deeply personal story that resonates with anyone who has experienced the complexities of love and loss. Its unique blend of poetic dialogue and vivid imagery creates a compelling narrative that invites the audience to reflect on their own experiences of love.
Overview
Genres: Drama, Romance, Comedy, Adventure
Setting: 1980s, Perlman villa and surrounding areas in Italy
Overview: The overall score of 8.5 reflects the screenplay's strong character development, emotional depth, and thematic richness, particularly in the portrayal of Elio and Oliver's relationship. However, areas such as pacing and the development of supporting characters present opportunities for enhancement.
Themes: First Love and its Complexities, Self-Discovery and Identity, Cultural and Class Differences, Parental Influence and Observation
Conflict and Stakes: Elio's internal struggle with his burgeoning feelings for Oliver, the complexities of young love, and the fear of impending separation.
Overall Mood: Bittersweet and introspective
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Curiosity and tension as Elio grapples with jealousy upon Oliver's arrival.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The story's focus on a summer romance between a young boy and an older man, exploring the complexities of first love.
- Distinctive Setting : The picturesque Italian countryside serves as a vibrant backdrop, enhancing the romantic atmosphere.
- Character Depth : The nuanced portrayal of Elio's emotional journey and his relationship with Oliver adds layers to the narrative.
- Cultural Context : The exploration of Jewish identity and cultural heritage adds depth to the characters' backgrounds.
Comparable Scripts:
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$10-15 million
Target Audience Demographics: Young adults and adults aged 18-35, particularly those interested in romance, coming-of-age stories, and LGBTQ+ themes.
Marketability: The screenplay's exploration of universal themes of love and identity, combined with its rich setting and character depth, makes it highly appealing to a broad audience.
The film's potential for critical acclaim and awards recognition, particularly in LGBTQ+ cinema, enhances its marketability.
The intimate portrayal of relationships and emotional depth can resonate with viewers, though it may have niche appeal.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, as it can attract both mainstream audiences and niche markets, especially with potential festival circuit success.
Scene Level Percentiles
The screenplay excels in character development and emotional resonance but needs improvement in stakes, pacing, and originality to enhance its overall impact.
Emotions Elicited Percentiles
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Screenplay Analysis
Key Strengths
Note: The ratings are the averages of all the scenes.
- Exceptional character development, with a characters rating in the 97th percentile, indicating well-crafted and relatable characters.
- Strong emotional impact, scoring in the 90th percentile, suggesting the screenplay effectively resonates with audiences on an emotional level.
- High dialogue rating at 82.76, reflecting the writer's ability to create engaging and authentic conversations between characters.
- Low stakes score at 10.76 indicates a need to enhance the tension and consequences within the plot to keep audiences invested.
- The pacing score is very low at 1.62, suggesting that the screenplay may benefit from a more dynamic rhythm to maintain viewer engagement.
- Originality score at 45.13 indicates that the screenplay may lack unique elements or fresh perspectives, which could be improved to stand out.
The writer appears to be intuitive, with strengths in character and dialogue development but lower scores in concept and plot structure.
Balancing Elements- Focus on enhancing the stakes and conflict levels to complement the strong character and dialogue elements.
- Work on improving pacing to ensure that the emotional and character-driven moments are effectively balanced with plot progression.
- Consider integrating more original concepts to elevate the overall uniqueness of the screenplay.
Intuitive
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay shows great potential due to its strong character and emotional elements, but it requires significant work on plot structure, stakes, and pacing to achieve a more balanced and engaging narrative.
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How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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| Script Emotional Impact | 9.25 | 99 | Women talking: 8.75 | Harold and Maude: 9.25 |
| Scene Characters | 8.9 | 98 | Deadpool & wolverine : 8.8 | Black mirror 304: 8.9 |
| Overall Script | 8.50 | 94 | Interstellar: 8.46 | Erin Brokovich: 8.50 |
| Script Originality | 9.25 | 91 | American Hustle: 9.00 | the pursuit of happyness: 9.25 |
| Scene Emotional Impact | 8.6 | 89 | A real pain : 8.5 | Casablanca: 8.6 |
| Scene Character Changes | 7.6 | 87 | Coda: 7.5 | Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde : 7.6 |
| Script Premise | 8.75 | 85 | Manchester by the sea: 8.50 | Erin Brokovich: 8.75 |
| Script Theme | 8.75 | 83 | Gran Torino: 8.50 | scream : 8.75 |
| Script Visual Impact | 8.50 | 82 | Women talking: 8.25 | a few good men: 8.50 |
| Scene Dialogue | 8.2 | 81 | Women talking: 8.1 | The good place draft: 8.2 |
| Scene Overall | 8.6 | 80 | Coda: 8.5 | face/off: 8.6 |
| Scene Internal Goal | 8.13 | 76 | Women talking: 8.12 | Her: 8.13 |
| Scene Concept | 8.3 | 72 | The father: 8.2 | the 5th element: 8.3 |
| Script Structure | 8.25 | 65 | Gladiator: 8.00 | Titanic: 8.25 |
| Scene Plot | 8.0 | 52 | Triangle of sadness: 7.9 | True Blood: 8.0 |
| Script Conflict | 7.75 | 49 | Inception: 7.50 | the pursuit of happyness: 7.75 |
| Script Structure | 8.12 | 48 | Moonlight: 8.11 | Good Will Hunting: 8.12 |
| Script Characters | 8.25 | 47 | The Hudsucker Proxy: 8.00 | Erin Brokovich: 8.25 |
| Scene Originality | 8.68 | 45 | The Greatest Showman: 8.67 | True Blood: 8.68 |
| Scene Formatting | 8.12 | 42 | 12 Monkeys: 8.11 | Memento: 8.12 |
| Scene Engagement | 8.90 | 33 | Triangle of sadness: 8.89 | El Mariachi: 8.90 |
| Scene External Goal | 7.01 | 15 | Women talking: 7.00 | Promising young woman: 7.01 |
| Scene Story Forward | 7.3 | 12 | A real pain : 7.2 | There's something about Mary: 7.3 |
| Scene High Stakes | 5.7 | 10 | The Addams Family: 5.6 | As good as it gets: 5.7 |
| Scene Unpredictability | 6.91 | 9 | The father: 6.89 | Call me by your name: 6.91 |
| Scene Conflict Level | 5.6 | 4 | Swingers: 5.5 | The apartment: 5.6 |
| Scene Pacing | 8.00 | 2 | The father: 7.99 | Queens Gambit: 8.00 |
Emotional Analysis
Emotional Variety
Critique
- The screenplay exhibits a strong emotional variety, transitioning between longing, joy, sadness, and vulnerability, particularly in scenes like 8, 41, and 57, where Elio's internal struggles are vividly portrayed.
- However, certain scenes, such as 2 and 3, feel somewhat repetitive in their emotional tone, primarily focusing on Elio's jealousy and longing without introducing new emotional dimensions.
- Additionally, while the emotional landscape is rich, there are moments where the emotional shifts could be more pronounced, particularly in scenes leading up to climactic moments.
Suggestions
- Incorporate moments of humor or light-heartedness in scenes that currently feel heavy, such as introducing playful banter in scenes 2 and 3 to break the tension.
- Introduce more varied emotional responses in key scenes, such as adding elements of surprise or conflict in scenes where Elio interacts with Oliver, to enhance engagement.
Emotional Intensity Distribution
Critique
- The emotional intensity is generally well-distributed, with peaks in scenes like 48 and 57, where the emotional stakes are high due to the intimacy shared between Elio and Oliver.
- However, there are valleys of low intensity in scenes like 2 and 3, where the emotional engagement feels flat, risking audience disengagement.
- The transition between high and low intensity could be smoother, as seen in scenes 30 and 31, where the emotional shifts feel abrupt.
Suggestions
- Balance the emotional intensity by interspersing lighter, more humorous moments in between heavier scenes, particularly in the build-up to climactic moments.
- Consider increasing the emotional stakes in scenes that currently feel low in intensity, such as enhancing Elio's internal conflict in scenes 2 and 3 to maintain audience engagement.
Empathy For Characters
Critique
- Empathy for Elio is strong throughout the screenplay, particularly in scenes like 41 and 57, where his vulnerability and longing are palpable.
- However, empathy for Oliver could be enhanced, as his internal struggles are less explored, particularly in scenes where he interacts with Elio but remains emotionally distant.
- In scenes like 19 and 20, the emotional connection to Marzia feels less developed, which could detract from the audience's empathy for her character.
Suggestions
- Add more backstory or internal dialogue for Oliver in key scenes to deepen audience empathy for his character, particularly in scenes where he grapples with his feelings for Elio.
- Enhance Marzia's emotional depth by including moments that showcase her vulnerabilities and desires, particularly in scenes where she interacts with Elio.
Emotional Impact Of Key Scenes
Critique
- Key scenes such as 48 and 57 deliver strong emotional impacts, effectively capturing the intensity of Elio and Oliver's relationship.
- However, some pivotal moments, like scene 30, feel underwhelming in their emotional punch, lacking the depth needed to resonate with the audience.
- The climactic moments could benefit from heightened emotional stakes, particularly in scenes leading to the separation between Elio and Oliver.
Suggestions
- Enhance the emotional impact of pivotal scenes by restructuring dialogue to increase tension and stakes, particularly in scenes leading to significant character decisions.
- Consider adding visual or auditory elements, such as music or imagery, to amplify the emotional resonance in key moments, particularly in scenes like 30 and 31.
Complex Emotional Layers
Critique
- The screenplay effectively utilizes complex emotional layers in many scenes, particularly in Elio's interactions with Oliver, where longing and vulnerability intertwine.
- However, some scenes, such as 2 and 3, feel one-dimensional emotionally, primarily focusing on jealousy without exploring deeper sub-emotions.
- The emotional layers could be further enriched in scenes where Elio interacts with Marzia, as her character often feels secondary to Elio's feelings for Oliver.
Suggestions
- Introduce sub-emotions such as guilt or regret in scenes where Elio interacts with Marzia to deepen the emotional complexity of their relationship.
- In scenes that currently feel one-dimensional, such as 2 and 3, consider adding layers of internal conflict or contrasting emotions to enhance the depth of Elio's experiences.
Additional Critique
Character Development
Critiques
- While Elio's character is well-developed, Oliver's character could benefit from more depth, particularly in exploring his internal struggles and motivations.
- Marzia's character feels underdeveloped in comparison to Elio and Oliver, which may limit audience empathy for her situation.
- The emotional arcs of supporting characters, such as Perlman and Annella, could be expanded to provide a richer context for Elio's experiences.
Suggestions
- Incorporate more scenes that delve into Oliver's backstory and emotional state, particularly in moments of vulnerability, to create a more rounded character.
- Enhance Marzia's character by providing her with more agency and emotional depth, particularly in scenes where she interacts with Elio.
Pacing and Flow
Critiques
- The pacing of the screenplay occasionally feels uneven, particularly in scenes that linger too long on emotional tension without resolution.
- Some scenes, such as 2 and 3, could be tightened to maintain audience engagement and prevent emotional fatigue.
- The transitions between high and low emotional intensity could be smoother to create a more cohesive narrative flow.
Suggestions
- Consider tightening scenes that feel drawn out, particularly those that focus on emotional tension without significant character development or plot progression.
- Enhance transitions between emotional peaks and valleys by incorporating lighter moments or dialogue to maintain audience engagement.
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a subtle, nuanced exploration of complex emotions and interpersonal relationships. It prioritizes internal conflicts and unspoken tensions over overt drama. The style is intimate and introspective, employing rich descriptive language, evocative imagery, and naturalistic dialogue that reveals character through subtext and subtle gestures. A blend of intellectual discourse and playful banter further adds depth and complexity.
Best representation: Scene 3 - Breakfast Tensions. Scene 3 best encapsulates the author's voice because it perfectly balances rich descriptive language ('dimly lit Perlman villa') with subtle character interaction and unspoken emotions. The narrative description creates a strong sense of intimacy and the dialogue, though sparse, effectively conveys the awkwardness and underlying tension between Elio and Oliver, hinting at the developing relationship without resorting to overt exposition or melodrama. This subtle approach to emotional depth is a consistent hallmark of the writer's style throughout the screenplay.
Memorable Lines:
- ELIO: I worship you. (Scene 36)
- Elio: Because there is no one else I can say this to but you. (Scene 28)
- PERLMAN: We rip out so much of ourselves to be cured of things faster, that we go bankrupt by the age of thirty and have less to offer each time we start with someone new. (Scene 59)
- ELIO: All I had to do was find the courage to reach out and touch, she would have said yes. (Scene 20)
- Oliver: Does this make any sense to you? Not to me. Nor to your dad. (Scene 14)
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a consistent style characterized by intimate storytelling, emotional depth, and nuanced character interactions. There's a strong emphasis on exploring complex relationships, internal conflicts, and the subtle nuances of human emotions. Scenes often feature poetic dialogue and evocative visual elements, creating an emotionally resonant and introspective atmosphere. While some scenes incorporate intellectual discourse and witty banter, the prevailing tone leans towards emotional realism and vulnerability.
Style Similarities:
- Luca Guadagnino
- Call Me By Your Name (James Ivory/André Aciman)
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
suspense Analysis
Executive Summary
Suspense in 'Call Me by Your Name' is subtly woven into the narrative, primarily through Elio's internal conflicts regarding his feelings for Oliver. The tension arises from Elio's anticipation of Oliver's reactions and the potential consequences of their budding relationship. For instance, in Scene 1, Elio's jealousy and curiosity about Oliver create a charged atmosphere, leaving the audience eager to see how their dynamic will unfold. However, the suspense is often low, as the story focuses more on emotional exploration than on high-stakes drama.
Usage Analysis
- In Scene 1, Elio's anticipation of Oliver's arrival creates a mild suspense, as viewers sense his mixed feelings about the newcomer. This is further developed in Scene 3, where Elio's embarrassment when waking Oliver hints at the potential for deeper emotional connections, yet the suspense remains low as the interactions are straightforward.
- Scene 16 introduces a slight suspense when Elio hesitates about his feelings for Oliver, creating tension about whether he will act on his desires. The viewer is left wondering if Elio will embrace his feelings or retreat into his insecurities.
- In Scene 50, the suspense peaks as Elio and Oliver navigate their intimacy, with the viewer questioning how their relationship will evolve amidst the emotional stakes.
Critique
- The suspense effectively engages the audience by highlighting Elio's internal struggles, particularly in scenes where he grapples with his feelings for Oliver. However, the overall suspense could be heightened by introducing more external conflicts or stakes that challenge their relationship.
- In Scene 50, the tension surrounding Elio's hesitation adds depth to their connection, but the lack of significant external conflict may leave some viewers wanting more dramatic tension.
Suggestions
- To enhance suspense, consider introducing external conflicts that challenge Elio and Oliver's relationship, such as societal pressures or family expectations, particularly in scenes where their intimacy is explored.
- Incorporate moments of uncertainty where Elio's actions could lead to significant consequences, such as being caught in a compromising situation, to heighten the stakes and engage the audience further.
Questions for AI
- How can the screenplay better integrate external conflicts to enhance the suspense surrounding Elio and Oliver's relationship?
- What specific moments could be restructured to create a greater sense of anticipation for the audience?
fear Analysis
Executive Summary
Fear in 'Call Me by Your Name' manifests primarily through Elio's anxieties about rejection and the implications of his feelings for Oliver. This emotional undercurrent adds depth to Elio's character, as he navigates the complexities of first love and the societal constraints surrounding their relationship. The fear of losing Oliver or not being accepted creates a poignant tension that resonates throughout the screenplay.
Usage Analysis
- In Scene 3, Elio's fear of rejection is palpable when he wakes Oliver, showcasing his anxiety about how Oliver perceives him. This fear is further explored in Scene 11, where Elio expresses frustration over Oliver's perceived rudeness, hinting at his deeper insecurities.
- Scene 50 highlights Elio's fear of intimacy and the potential consequences of their relationship, as he grapples with the implications of their actions and the societal expectations surrounding them.
Critique
- The portrayal of fear effectively enhances Elio's character development, allowing the audience to empathize with his struggles. However, the fear could be more pronounced in moments of confrontation or decision-making, particularly when Elio faces the possibility of losing Oliver.
- In Scene 50, while Elio's fear is evident, the lack of external pressures may dilute the emotional impact. Introducing more significant stakes could amplify the tension and deepen the audience's engagement.
Suggestions
- To strengthen the portrayal of fear, consider adding scenes where Elio faces direct confrontation with societal expectations or family pressures regarding his relationship with Oliver.
- Incorporate moments where Elio must make difficult choices that could lead to rejection or loss, heightening the emotional stakes and engaging the audience more effectively.
Questions for AI
- How can the screenplay better illustrate Elio's fears in moments of confrontation or decision-making?
- What specific scenes could be enhanced to amplify the emotional stakes surrounding Elio's relationship with Oliver?
joy Analysis
Executive Summary
Joy in 'Call Me by Your Name' is intricately tied to the moments of connection between Elio and Oliver, as well as the warmth of familial interactions. These joyful moments provide a counterbalance to the underlying tension and sadness, creating a rich emotional tapestry that resonates with the audience. The screenplay effectively captures the fleeting nature of summer love, allowing viewers to experience the highs of Elio's relationship with Oliver.
Usage Analysis
- In Scene 4, the light-hearted breakfast scene showcases the joy of familial interactions, creating a warm atmosphere that contrasts with Elio's internal struggles. This joy is further emphasized in Scene 10, where playful moments during the volleyball game highlight the carefree nature of summer.
- Scene 36 captures a pivotal moment of joy when Elio openly expresses his feelings for Oliver, leading to a shared understanding that deepens their connection. This moment of vulnerability is met with relief and joy, showcasing the emotional stakes of their relationship.
Critique
- The effective use of joy enhances the emotional diversity of the screenplay, allowing the audience to experience the highs and lows of Elio's journey. However, the joy could be more pronounced in moments of connection, particularly when Elio and Oliver share intimate experiences.
- In Scene 36, while the joy of connection is evident, the emotional weight of their relationship could be further explored to create a more profound impact on the audience.
Suggestions
- To enhance the portrayal of joy, consider incorporating more moments of shared laughter and connection between Elio and Oliver, particularly during their intimate interactions.
- Incorporate scenes that highlight the joy of discovery and exploration, allowing the audience to experience the exhilaration of young love alongside Elio.
Questions for AI
- How can the screenplay better integrate moments of joy to enhance the emotional landscape of Elio and Oliver's relationship?
- What specific scenes could be restructured to create a greater sense of happiness and connection between the characters?
sadness Analysis
Executive Summary
Sadness in 'Call Me by Your Name' is a pervasive theme that underscores Elio's journey of self-discovery and the complexities of first love. The emotional weight of Elio's longing for Oliver, coupled with the inevitability of their separation, creates a poignant atmosphere that resonates deeply with the audience. The screenplay effectively captures the bittersweet nature of their relationship, allowing viewers to empathize with Elio's emotional turmoil.
Usage Analysis
- In Scene 11, Elio's frustration over Oliver's absence evokes a sense of sadness, highlighting his feelings of inadequacy and longing for connection. This theme is further explored in Scene 57, where Elio grapples with the reality of Oliver's departure, showcasing the emotional weight of their relationship.
- Scene 58 captures Elio's sadness as he reflects on his feelings for Oliver, emphasizing the bittersweet nature of their connection and the emotional turmoil he experiences in the wake of their separation.
Critique
- The portrayal of sadness effectively enriches the narrative, allowing the audience to empathize with Elio's struggles and the complexities of his emotions. However, the sadness could be more pronounced in moments of confrontation or decision-making, particularly when Elio faces the reality of his feelings for Oliver.
- In Scene 57, while the sadness is evident, the emotional impact could be heightened by exploring Elio's internal conflict more deeply, allowing the audience to fully grasp the weight of his longing.
Suggestions
- To strengthen the portrayal of sadness, consider adding scenes that delve deeper into Elio's emotional struggles, particularly in moments of reflection or confrontation regarding his feelings for Oliver.
- Incorporate moments where Elio must confront the reality of his relationship with Oliver, allowing the audience to experience the full weight of his sadness and longing.
Questions for AI
- How can the screenplay better illustrate Elio's sadness in moments of confrontation or decision-making?
- What specific scenes could be enhanced to amplify the emotional stakes surrounding Elio's relationship with Oliver?
surprise Analysis
Executive Summary
Surprise in 'Call Me by Your Name' is used sparingly, primarily to highlight moments of emotional revelation or unexpected connections between characters. While the screenplay relies more on emotional depth and character development, the few moments of surprise serve to enhance the overall narrative and engage the audience. The subtle surprises often reflect the complexities of Elio's feelings for Oliver, adding layers to their relationship.
Usage Analysis
- In Scene 8, Elio's unexpected reaction to Oliver's request to play the original Bach piece creates a moment of surprise that deepens their connection. This surprise highlights Elio's vulnerability and desire for validation from Oliver.
- Scene 55 introduces a mild surprise when Elio and Oliver's fingertips almost touch at the memorial, symbolizing their emotional connection. This moment of near-contact adds tension and anticipation to their relationship.
Critique
- The effective use of surprise enhances the emotional depth of the screenplay, allowing the audience to experience moments of revelation alongside Elio. However, the surprises could be more pronounced to create a greater impact on the narrative.
- In Scene 55, while the surprise is subtle, it could be amplified by introducing more dramatic stakes or emotional weight to the moment, allowing the audience to fully grasp the significance of their connection.
Suggestions
- To enhance the portrayal of surprise, consider incorporating more unexpected moments that challenge Elio's perceptions of his relationship with Oliver, particularly during their intimate interactions.
- Incorporate scenes that highlight the unpredictability of young love, allowing the audience to experience the thrill of surprise alongside Elio.
Questions for AI
- How can the screenplay better integrate moments of surprise to enhance the emotional landscape of Elio and Oliver's relationship?
- What specific scenes could be restructured to create a greater sense of unexpectedness and emotional revelation?
empathy Analysis
Executive Summary
Empathy in 'Call Me by Your Name' is a driving force that connects the audience to Elio's emotional journey. The screenplay effectively captures Elio's internal struggles, desires, and vulnerabilities, allowing viewers to resonate with his experiences. The emotional depth of the characters and their relationships fosters a strong sense of empathy, making the audience invested in Elio's journey of self-discovery and love.
Usage Analysis
- In Scene 3, Elio's embarrassment and longing for connection with Oliver evoke a strong sense of empathy from the audience, as they relate to his vulnerability and desire for acceptance.
- Scene 41 showcases Elio's emotional turmoil as he grapples with his feelings for Oliver while being intimate with Marzia. This complexity allows viewers to empathize with Elio's internal conflict and the challenges of navigating young love.
Critique
- The portrayal of empathy effectively enhances the emotional resonance of the screenplay, allowing the audience to connect deeply with Elio's struggles and desires. However, the emotional depth could be further explored in moments of confrontation or decision-making, particularly when Elio faces the reality of his feelings for Oliver.
- In Scene 41, while empathy is present, the emotional impact could be heightened by delving deeper into Elio's internal conflict, allowing the audience to fully grasp the weight of his longing.
Suggestions
- To strengthen the portrayal of empathy, consider adding scenes that delve deeper into Elio's emotional struggles, particularly in moments of reflection or confrontation regarding his feelings for Oliver.
- Incorporate moments where Elio must confront the reality of his relationship with Oliver, allowing the audience to experience the full weight of his emotional journey.
Questions for AI
- How can the screenplay better illustrate Elio's emotional struggles to enhance the audience's empathy?
- What specific scenes could be enhanced to amplify the emotional stakes surrounding Elio's relationship with Oliver?
Engine: Gemini
Screenplay Rating:
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
Call Me By Your Name is a remarkably well-crafted screenplay demonstrating exceptional strengths in character development, evocative setting, and thematic resonance. The subtle yet powerful exploration of first love and its complexities, coupled with the exquisite use of language and visual storytelling, makes it a truly compelling and moving cinematic experience. While minor areas for improvement exist regarding pacing in certain scenes and potentially expanding on secondary characters, these are overshadowed by the overall brilliance of the script.
Strengths
- The screenplay masterfully develops its characters through subtle actions, nuanced dialogue, and evocative imagery. The setting of the Italian countryside is beautifully rendered, adding depth and emotional weight to the narrative. The use of the narrator provides insightful commentary and adds an additional layer to the storytelling. The film masterfully balances intimacy and restraint, leading to potent emotional impact. high ( Scene 10 Scene 14 Scene 27 Scene 116 Scene 141 )
- The intimate scenes are handled with both sensitivity and honesty, avoiding gratuitous depictions while fully conveying the emotional intensity of the relationship. high ( Scene 105 Scene 116 Scene 132 )
- The dialogue is sharp, witty, and realistic, reflecting the complexities of the characters' personalities and relationships. medium ( Scene 11 Scene 36 Scene 68 )
- The screenplay utilizes evocative imagery and visual storytelling to enhance the emotional impact of the narrative and the beauty of the setting. The pacing is generally well-managed creating a sense of realism and allowing the emotional arc to unfold naturally. high ( Scene 6 Scene 12 Scene 58 Scene 128 Scene 137 )
- The ending is both satisfying and poignant, leaving a lasting impression on the audience. The thematic exploration of love, loss, and self-discovery resonates long after the credits roll. high ( Scene 141 )
Areas of Improvement
- While the primary relationship is deeply explored, some secondary characters could benefit from further development to enrich the overall texture of the community surrounding Elio and Oliver. low ( Scene 17 Scene 18 )
- A few scenes could be slightly tightened to maintain a consistent pace. Some segments might feel slightly slow compared to others. low ( Scene 130 )
MissingElements
- The screenplay could potentially benefit from a slightly more explicit depiction of the aftermath of Oliver's departure. A brief scene might add emotional depth to the final moments. low
NotablePoints
- The use of the narrator to associate Oliver's personality with his swimsuit choices is a unique and memorable stylistic choice. medium ( Scene 27 )
- The discovery of the bronze statue serves as a powerful metaphor for the uncovering of hidden emotions and desires. medium ( Scene 41 )
- The father's final speech is a masterpiece of subtle wisdom and acceptance, offering profound insights into the complexities of love and life. high ( Scene 141 )
Blind Spots
- Underrepresentation of female perspectives While Marzia and Chiara are present, their experiences and motivations are not explored as deeply as Elio and Oliver's. Their roles primarily revolve around their relationships to the two male protagonists, rather than having fully developed internal lives and desires of their own. For example, Marzia's emotional journey after Elio's confession is somewhat underdeveloped. medium
Engine: Claude
Screenplay Rating:
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for "Call Me By Your Name" is a beautifully crafted, emotionally resonant coming-of-age drama that explores the complexities of first love and the profound impact of a transformative summer. Set in 1980s Italy, the story follows the blossoming romance between 17-year-old Elio and his father's 25-year-old summer intern, Oliver. The screenplay deftly navigates the characters' journey, capturing the nuances of their burgeoning relationship, the social and familial dynamics at play, and the universal themes of self-discovery, desire, and the bittersweet nature of young love. With its rich visual storytelling, well-developed characters, and poetic dialogue, the screenplay showcases a distinctive and compelling voice that would likely appeal to an audience seeking a thoughtful, character-driven drama.
Strengths
- The screenplay's opening scenes effectively introduce the central characters, Elio and Oliver, and establish the setting and tone of the story. The descriptions of their interactions and the Perlman family's dynamics create an immersive and authentic world that draws the reader in. high ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) )
- The scenes depicting the growing connection and rapport between Elio and Oliver, through their discussions and musical exchanges, are beautifully crafted and effectively convey the developing bond between the two characters. high ( Scene 5 (11) Scene 7 (15) )
- The screenplay's handling of the intimate moments between Elio and Oliver, including the pivotal scene in the secluded spring, is sensitive and emotionally resonant, capturing the characters' vulnerabilities and the complexity of their feelings. high ( Scene 28 (58) Scene 29 (72) )
- The screenplay's exploration of the Perlman family dynamics and the nuanced relationship between Elio and his father is a strength, providing depth and context to the central narrative. high ( Scene 39 (139) Scene 41 (141) )
- The screenplay's strong sense of place, captured through the vivid descriptions of the Perlman villa and its surrounding environment, helps to immerse the reader in the story's setting and enhance the overall atmosphere. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) )
Areas of Improvement
- While the intimate scenes between Elio and Marzia are effectively portrayed, the screenplay could potentially benefit from further exploration and development of their relationship, as it serves as a counterpoint to Elio's connection with Oliver. medium ( Scene 33 (83) Scene 34 (84) )
- The scenes involving Elio's friends and their reactions to Oliver's presence could be expanded upon to provide a richer understanding of the social and cultural context in which the story takes place. medium ( Scene 10 (18) Scene 11 (19) )
- The screenplay could benefit from occasional moments of levity or humor to balance the more serious and emotional moments, as the overall tone can sometimes feel quite heavy. low ( Scene 4 (10) Scene 6 (13) )
MissingElements
- While the screenplay effectively establishes the setting and the Perlman family's dynamics, there could be a more explicit exploration of the socio-cultural and historical context in which the story takes place, particularly in relation to the characters' backgrounds and experiences. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) )
- The screenplay could benefit from additional scenes or moments that provide a deeper understanding of Oliver's motivations and decision-making process, as his actions and choices can sometimes feel opaque to the reader. medium ( Scene 26 (55) Scene 27 (56) )
NotablePoints
- The screenplay's handling of the intimate scenes between Elio and Oliver is a notable strength, as it manages to capture the tenderness, vulnerability, and complexity of their relationship without resorting to gratuitous or exploitative depictions. high ( Scene 28 (58) Scene 29 (72) )
- The screenplay's exploration of the Perlman family dynamics and the nuanced relationship between Elio and his father is a notable strength, as it provides depth and context to the central narrative and reflects the universal themes of love, loss, and self-discovery. high ( Scene 39 (139) Scene 41 (141) )
- The screenplay's strong sense of place, captured through the vivid descriptions of the Perlman villa and its surrounding environment, is a notable strength that helps to immerse the reader in the story's setting and enhance the overall atmosphere. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) )
- The screenplay's handling of the aftermath of Oliver's departure and Elio's emotional journey is a notable strength, as it sensitively explores the character's grief, growth, and the lasting impact of their relationship. high ( Scene 51 (137) Scene 58 (144) )
- The screenplay's use of multiple perspectives, including the Perlman family members and various supporting characters, is a notable strength that provides a richer and more nuanced understanding of the story's themes and emotional impact. medium ( Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) Scene 4 (10) )
Blind Spots
- Representation While the screenplay effectively explores the intimacy and complexities of Elio and Oliver's relationship, it could benefit from a more nuanced representation of the broader LGBTQ+ community and their experiences within the cultural and social context of the story's setting. The screenplay's focus on the central romance, while powerful, may overlook opportunities to provide a richer and more diverse portrayal of the LGBTQ+ experience. medium
Amateur Giveaways
- Overwriting Occasionally, the screenplay exhibits a tendency towards excessive description or flowery language, particularly in certain scene descriptions. While the poetic nature of the writing is generally a strength, there are a few instances where the descriptive elements may be overstated or could be condensed to streamline the storytelling. low
Engine: GPT4
Screenplay Rating:
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Call Me by Your Name' is a beautifully crafted exploration of first love, identity, and the bittersweet nature of memory. It excels in character development, particularly in the nuanced portrayal of Elio and Oliver's relationship, which evolves from curiosity to deep emotional connection. The dialogue is rich and layered, enhancing the themes of longing and desire. However, there are moments where pacing could be improved, particularly in the middle sections, which may feel drawn out. Overall, the screenplay is compelling and resonates with audiences through its authentic emotional depth.
Strengths
- The screenplay effectively establishes a strong sense of place and atmosphere, immersing the audience in the Italian summer setting. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (1) Scene Sequence number 2 (10) )
- Character development is rich and layered, particularly in the evolution of Elio and Oliver's relationship, which feels authentic and relatable. high ( Scene Sequence number 3 (22) )
- The dialogue is beautifully written, capturing the nuances of youthful longing and the complexities of love. high ( Scene Sequence number 4 (19) )
- The emotional depth of the screenplay resonates strongly, allowing the audience to connect with the characters' experiences. high ( Scene Sequence number 5 (50) )
- The use of symbolism, such as the recurring peaches, adds layers of meaning to the narrative and enhances thematic depth. high ( Scene Sequence number 6 (142) )
Areas of Improvement
- Some sections of the screenplay feel drawn out, particularly in the middle, which could benefit from tighter pacing. medium ( Scene Sequence number 7 (34) )
- There are moments where character motivations could be more clearly defined, particularly regarding Elio's feelings towards Marzia. medium ( Scene Sequence number 8 (50) )
- The resolution of certain subplots, such as Elio's relationship with Marzia, feels somewhat abrupt and could be explored further. medium ( Scene Sequence number 9 (86) )
- The transition between scenes can sometimes feel jarring, disrupting the flow of the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 10 (125) )
- The screenplay could benefit from more varied emotional beats to maintain engagement throughout. medium ( Scene Sequence number 11 (142) )
MissingElements
- A deeper exploration of the cultural context surrounding the characters could enhance the narrative's richness. medium ( Scene Sequence number 12 (50) )
- Additional background on Oliver's life in America could provide more depth to his character and motivations. medium ( Scene Sequence number 13 (86) )
- More insight into Elio's internal struggles and conflicts would strengthen the emotional impact of the story. medium ( Scene Sequence number 14 (125) )
- The screenplay could benefit from a clearer thematic statement that ties together the various narrative threads. medium ( Scene Sequence number 15 (142) )
- A more explicit exploration of the consequences of Elio and Oliver's relationship could add depth to the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 16 (50) )
NotablePoints
- The ending is poignant and reflective, leaving a lasting impression on the audience about the nature of love and memory. high ( Scene Sequence number 17 (142) )
- The use of music throughout the screenplay enhances the emotional landscape and connects the characters' experiences. high ( Scene Sequence number 18 (125) )
- The screenplay's exploration of sexuality is handled with sensitivity and authenticity, making it relatable to a wide audience. high ( Scene Sequence number 19 (50) )
- The dynamic between Elio and his parents adds depth to the narrative, showcasing a supportive family environment. high ( Scene Sequence number 20 (86) )
- The screenplay's ability to evoke nostalgia and longing is a significant strength, resonating with audiences on a personal level. high ( Scene Sequence number 21 (142) )
Blind Spots
- Character Motivation The screenplay occasionally lacks clarity in character motivations, particularly regarding Elio's feelings towards Marzia and how they contrast with his feelings for Oliver. This could lead to confusion about his emotional journey. medium
Amateur Giveaways
- Pacing Issues Certain scenes feel overly drawn out, which can disrupt the flow of the narrative. For example, the middle sections may benefit from tighter editing to maintain engagement. medium
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.25, The screenplay effectively develops its characters, particularly Elio and Oliver, showcasing their emotional depth and complex relationships. However, there are opportunities to enhance the relatability and consistency of supporting characters, which could deepen the audience's connection to the narrative. See More
Premise: 8.75, The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling premise centered around the complex emotional relationship between Elio and Oliver, set against the backdrop of a picturesque Italian summer. However, there are opportunities to enhance clarity and engagement by refining character motivations and deepening thematic exploration. See More
Structure: 8.25, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively captures the emotional complexity of first love through its well-structured narrative and character arcs. The pacing is generally strong, allowing for moments of tension and release that engage the audience. However, there are areas where the plot could benefit from clearer conflict escalation and resolution, particularly in the latter half, to enhance dramatic tension and thematic depth. See More
Theme: 8.75, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively conveys its themes of love, longing, and the complexities of human relationships through rich character development and evocative imagery. The emotional depth is palpable, particularly in the exploration of Elio's internal struggles and his relationship with Oliver. However, there are opportunities to refine the clarity of certain themes and enhance their integration into the narrative, particularly regarding the implications of societal expectations and the passage of time. See More
Visual Impact: 8.5, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' excels in its evocative visual imagery, effectively capturing the emotional nuances of its characters and their relationships. The vivid descriptions of settings and interactions create a rich tapestry that immerses the audience in the story's emotional landscape. However, there are opportunities to enhance the creativity and dynamism of the visual storytelling to further elevate the screenplay's impact. See More
Emotional Impact: 9.25, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively elicits deep emotional responses through its nuanced character arcs and rich thematic exploration of love, longing, and self-discovery. However, there are opportunities to enhance emotional depth by further developing the supporting characters and their relationships with Elio and Oliver. See More
Conflict: 7.75, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes through Elio's internal struggles and his evolving relationship with Oliver. However, there are opportunities to enhance narrative tension by deepening the emotional stakes and integrating more external conflicts that challenge the characters' desires. See More
Originality: 9.25, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' showcases a profound exploration of love and identity through its unique characters and evocative setting. Its originality lies in the nuanced portrayal of a summer romance that transcends conventional storytelling, while its creativity is evident in the rich emotional depth and sensory details that enhance the narrative. See More
Premise: 8.75, The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling premise centered around the complex emotional relationship between Elio and Oliver, set against the backdrop of a picturesque Italian summer. However, there are opportunities to enhance clarity and engagement by refining character motivations and deepening thematic exploration. See More
Structure: 8.25, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively captures the emotional complexity of first love through its well-structured narrative and character arcs. The pacing is generally strong, allowing for moments of tension and release that engage the audience. However, there are areas where the plot could benefit from clearer conflict escalation and resolution, particularly in the latter half, to enhance dramatic tension and thematic depth. See More
Theme: 8.75, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively conveys its themes of love, longing, and the complexities of human relationships through rich character development and evocative imagery. The emotional depth is palpable, particularly in the exploration of Elio's internal struggles and his relationship with Oliver. However, there are opportunities to refine the clarity of certain themes and enhance their integration into the narrative, particularly regarding the implications of societal expectations and the passage of time. See More
Visual Impact: 8.5, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' excels in its evocative visual imagery, effectively capturing the emotional nuances of its characters and their relationships. The vivid descriptions of settings and interactions create a rich tapestry that immerses the audience in the story's emotional landscape. However, there are opportunities to enhance the creativity and dynamism of the visual storytelling to further elevate the screenplay's impact. See More
Emotional Impact: 9.25, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively elicits deep emotional responses through its nuanced character arcs and rich thematic exploration of love, longing, and self-discovery. However, there are opportunities to enhance emotional depth by further developing the supporting characters and their relationships with Elio and Oliver. See More
Conflict: 7.75, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes through Elio's internal struggles and his evolving relationship with Oliver. However, there are opportunities to enhance narrative tension by deepening the emotional stakes and integrating more external conflicts that challenge the characters' desires. See More
Originality: 9.25, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' showcases a profound exploration of love and identity through its unique characters and evocative setting. Its originality lies in the nuanced portrayal of a summer romance that transcends conventional storytelling, while its creativity is evident in the rich emotional depth and sensory details that enhance the narrative. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- In this scene, 17-year-old Elio observes the arrival of 25-year-old Oliver at the Perlman villa, feeling a mix of jealousy and rivalry as he refers to Oliver as 'the usurper.' Accompanied by Marzia, Elio is instructed by his mother, Annella, to assist Oliver with his luggage. The tension escalates as Elio and Oliver are formally introduced in Professor Perlman's study, where their handshake reveals Oliver's non-committal demeanor, leaving Elio grappling with his emotions.
- Elio and Oliver arrive at the Perlman villa, where Elio offers to share his room with the tired Oliver. As they pass Marzia, Oliver shows curiosity, hinting at potential interest. Once in the room, Oliver quickly falls asleep, leaving Elio to manage the situation alone. The scene captures the contrast between Elio's eagerness and Oliver's exhaustion, setting the stage for their developing relationship.
- In a dimly lit Perlman villa, Elio wakes Oliver to inform him about dinner. Oliver, disoriented and reluctant, decides to skip the meal and asks Elio to excuse him to his mother. Elio, feeling a mix of concern and embarrassment, agrees and leaves Oliver to return to sleep. The scene captures the awkward yet intimate dynamic between the two, setting the stage for their evolving relationship.
- During breakfast at the Perlman villa, Oliver struggles to crack a soft-boiled egg, prompting Mafalda to assist him. As the family engages in light conversation about local towns and Oliver's needs, Elio offers to show him around, revealing his fascination with Oliver. The atmosphere is playful yet tense, highlighted by Oliver's self-awareness when he declines a third egg, leaving Elio feeling intimidated.
- In Professor Perlman's study, he attempts to organize his correspondence with the help of Oliver and Elio. Annella brings apricot juice, sparking a discussion about the word's etymology. Oliver corrects Perlman's assertion about the word's origins, impressing the group with his knowledge. The atmosphere is light-hearted, filled with playful banter and camaraderie, as Perlman concedes to Oliver's correctness. The scene concludes with Perlman jokingly claiming he was testing Oliver, while Annella and Elio share a knowing smile.
- On a hot summer day in Crema, Elio and Oliver ride bicycles to a cafe where they share coffee and discuss their lives as Jewish individuals in small towns. Elio opens up about his summer activities, while Oliver appears distracted. As they prepare to leave, Oliver steadies Elio when he loses his balance, but ultimately rides off, leaving Elio alone in the almost empty town square, highlighting a mix of camaraderie and isolation.
- In a tense scene at the Perlman Villa, Elio practices guitar in the shade, feeling unsettled by Oliver's cold gaze as he interacts with Anchise. After Oliver lies down to read, he encourages Elio to play his music again, despite Elio's insecurities about Oliver's indifference. The emotional complexity of their interaction leaves Elio feeling intimidated, ultimately leading him to retreat into the house, leaving their conversation unresolved.
- In a sunlit living room, Elio plays a piano piece, infusing it with his own variations inspired by Liszt and Busoni, while Oliver listens from the doorway. Oliver's curiosity turns to frustration as he requests the original Bach piece, which Elio eventually plays, revealing its dedication to Bach's brother. The scene shifts to Elio writing in his diary, where he reflects on his earlier harshness towards Oliver and grapples with feelings of insecurity about their relationship.
- In a bustling cafe, Oliver joins a lively card game, quickly bonding with the players and showcasing his charm. Elio, sitting nearby, translates for Oliver but feels sidelined as Oliver becomes engrossed in the game. The scene captures the lighthearted atmosphere of the cafe while highlighting Elio's subtle longing and sense of being overlooked.
- On the lawn of the Perlman villa, Elio's friends engage in a lively volleyball game with Oliver, a charming American who draws Elio's admiration and discomfort. As Oliver playfully massages Elio's shoulder, Elio feels a mix of attraction and unease, leading him to retreat to a table under the lime trees. While his friends, including Marzia and Maria, joke about the situation, Elio grapples with his feelings, rubbing the spot where Oliver touched him, as the playful atmosphere shifts to a more introspective tone.
- In the evening at the Perlman villa, a gangly teenager observes Perlman entertaining his young nieces with a card trick while Elio, upstairs, anxiously awaits Oliver's arrival. As dinner guests gather, Elio expresses frustration over Oliver's absence, perceiving him as rude and arrogant. Perlman defends Oliver's shyness, but Elio fears growing resentment towards him. Annella dismisses Elio's concerns and orders the removal of Oliver's place setting, deepening Elio's sense of loss. The scene concludes with Perlman performing for the children, highlighting the tension of Oliver's absence.
- In the Perlman villa's living room, Elio initially resists playing music despite his father's encouragement and Annelia's playful urging to socialize. A teenage boy's humorous imitation of a spider lightens the mood, prompting Elio to finally engage with the piano. The scene shifts to Elio's bedroom, where he experiences restlessness and curiosity about Oliver, culminating in a moment of hesitation as dawn breaks.
- In the afternoon light at the Perlman villa, Elio sits under lime trees, absorbed in his work while listening to his father, Perlman, engage in a thoughtful critique of Oliver's manuscript on Heraclitus. Perlman encourages Oliver to embrace the philosopher's paradoxical ideas, prompting Oliver to acknowledge the need for improvement. Meanwhile, Anchise arrives with a large fish, adding a touch of familial warmth to the scene. The atmosphere blends intellectual discourse with light-hearted domesticity, culminating in Elio's distraction by the lively sounds from the kitchen.
- In this scene, Elio relaxes with his eyes closed while Oliver, in a red bathing suit, reads from a manuscript he previously shared with Perlman. Oliver expresses confusion about his work, prompting Elio to offer a compliment that leads to an awkward moment. The narration explores Oliver's multifaceted personality through the symbolism of his colorful bathing suits. The setting at the Perlman villa adds to the introspective and subtly tense atmosphere, highlighting Elio's mixed feelings of admiration and discomfort in their interaction.
- In a light-hearted afternoon at the Perlman villa, Elio watches Oliver swim in a stone trough while his mother, Annella, picks fruit. After a playful exchange where Elio keeps his thoughts private, Oliver joins Annella in the orchard, climbing a ladder to pick ripe fruit. The scene captures their youthful curiosity and attraction as Oliver tosses apricots down to Elio and Annella, ending with a transition to a quieter moment as Oliver arrives on his bike from town.
- In Elio's bedroom, he finds himself in an embarrassing situation when Oliver enters shirtless from the bathroom. Elio awkwardly claims to have an allergy to avoid swimming with others, but Oliver suggests they swim together, intensifying Elio's internal struggle with his feelings. After Oliver leaves to change, Elio, frustrated with himself, decides to change his bathing suit and catches a glimpse of Oliver getting dressed, leaving him in a state of heightened awareness and confusion.
- In the Perlman villa's bocchirale, Oliver descends shirtless, followed by Elio, and encounters Chiara and Marzia. Chiara playfully tosses Oliver's shirt and insists on going to the river, while teasingly flirting with Oliver, much to Elio's envy. As Oliver gathers loose papers, Chiara boasts about her translation skills, and Oliver humorously engages with her. Elio hands Oliver his sunglasses and a book, highlighting their intimacy. The scene culminates with Chiara leading Oliver out as he puts on his blue shirt, leaving Elio feeling a mix of admiration and jealousy.
- In a vibrant restaurant with an open-air dance floor, Chiara dances seductively with Oliver, igniting Elio's jealousy and longing as he watches from a distance with Marzia and friends. As Oliver showcases his charm, Elio struggles with his feelings but is encouraged by Marzia to join the dance. The scene captures the playful energy and underlying tension of attraction, culminating in Elio's confident dance that earns him applause from his friends, while Marzia observes with amusement.
- Elio and Marzia share an intimate night by the river, undressing and swimming together, which highlights their playful connection. Marzia questions Elio about his feelings for Chiara, revealing underlying tension, but Elio denies any anger. After a tender moment of kissing, they agree to meet again the next night, with Marzia insisting on secrecy about their rendezvous.
- Elio wakes up to the sound of Oliver in the bathroom, leading to a playful breakfast scene where Oliver showcases his skills with a soft-boiled egg. Amidst light-hearted teasing about Elio's romantic pursuits, Professor Perlman invites Oliver on a trip to Sirmione, humorously insisting that Elio must remain silent. The scene captures a blend of self-reflection and humor, culminating in a sense of curiosity for the adventures ahead.
- Elio cleans the Perlmans' car when Chiara arrives on her bike, asking about Oliver. Disappointed to learn they are leaving for Lake Garda, she shares a moment with Oliver before kissing him goodbye. Elio playfully comments on Chiara's beauty and hints at matchmaking, but Oliver prefers solitude. The tension escalates when Professor Perlman suggests Oliver sit in the front seat, shifting the dynamics among the characters.
- Perlman drives through the Italian countryside with Oliver and Elio, who is captivated by Oliver. They arrive at the Grotte di Catullo, where Perlman shares his enthusiasm for the archaeological site. As they witness the recovery of a bronze statue of a boxer from Lake Garda, excitement and admiration fill the air, highlighting the beauty of the ancient artifact and the bond between the characters.
- On the beach at Sirmione, Perlman shares the historical significance of a newly discovered bronze statue with Elio and Oliver, highlighting its connection to the Vatican. As the sun sets, they share light-hearted jokes about the statue's fate before enjoying a swim in the tranquil lake. Afterward, Elio expresses his urgency to leave, contrasting with Perlman and Oliver's desire to celebrate with a drink. The scene captures a blend of wonder and celebration against the backdrop of a picturesque evening.
- In a cozy yet tense atmosphere at the Perlman villa during a thunderstorm, Oliver works late while Elio seeks connection with Marzia. The family gathers as the lights flicker, prompting Annelia to read from the Heptameron, exploring themes of love and courage. As the lights go out, discussions about youth and relationships unfold, with Annelia encouraging Elio to embrace risks in love. The scene culminates in a tender moment between mother and son, reinforcing their bond as the lights return.
- The day after a storm, Elio finds himself lost in thought while playing the piano. He notices Oliver's bike is missing and, driven by longing, sneaks into Oliver's room through the bathroom. There, he intimately explores Oliver's belongings, particularly his bathing suit, which he smells and kisses. Seeking a connection to Oliver, Elio puts on the bathing suit and lies in his bed, but is interrupted by the sound of Oliver's bicycle. He quickly tidies up and exits the room, still grappling with his unspoken feelings.
- Elio and Oliver share a contemplative moment under the trees at the Perlman villa, discussing a 16th-century French romance that reflects Elio's internal struggles. As they prepare to go into town, Elio accidentally spills lemonade, and Oliver's instinctive act of picking it up signifies his caring nature. Their interaction reveals a growing bond, marked by unspoken feelings and a sense of companionship as they decide to leave together.
- In this light-hearted scene outside the Perlman villa, Oliver receives his repaired bike from Anchise and shows Elio a scrape on his hip, treated with an unusual remedy. Elio expresses concern about Anchise's character, questioning if he gives Oliver the creeps. Oliver reassures him, describing Anchise as a lost soul, which alleviates Elio's worries. The scene captures their camaraderie as they prepare to ride their bikes together.
- In a quaint town square, Oliver and Elio share a moment of vulnerability as they discuss history and Elio's feelings of inadequacy. Oliver, taking on a mentor-like role, encourages Elio while grappling with his own emotions. Their conversation hints at deeper feelings, but tension arises as Elio confesses his self-doubt. The scene captures a blend of light-heartedness and emotional depth, culminating in Oliver asking Elio to wait while he resolves a mix-up, leaving their deeper conversation momentarily paused.
- Elio and Oliver explore a picturesque country road, sharing laughter over a Mussolini picture before retreating to a tranquil spot by spring water ponds. In this serene setting, they delve into deep conversations about loneliness and their feelings for each other, leading to a tentative kiss. However, Oliver expresses a need for boundaries, creating tension as Elio's boldness clashes with Oliver's desire for propriety. The scene captures a blend of playful exploration and emotional vulnerability, ending with Oliver helping Elio up, symbolizing both care and the return to reality.
- Elio and Oliver share a playful footsie moment during lunch at the Perlman villa, deepening their intimate bond amidst the pompous chatter of an art historian couple. However, Elio's joy turns to panic when he suddenly experiences a nosebleed, prompting him to leave the table in search of ice, highlighting his internal struggle with their impending separation.
- In a vulnerable moment at the Perlman villa's bar, Elio tends to his bleeding nose while Oliver finds him and expresses concern. Their interaction deepens as Oliver massages Elio's feet, leading to a light-hearted conversation about their Jewish heritage and Elio's mother's views on discretion. Chiara and Marzia add a playful atmosphere, but the focus remains on the intimacy and care Oliver provides. The scene concludes with Oliver helping Elio to his feet and suggesting he rest on the couch, highlighting their growing connection.
- In the Perlman villa's living room, Chiara playfully teases Elio about his 'peasant feet,' provoking a shy yet playful reaction from him. Marzia defends Elio, providing comfort amidst Chiara's competitive teasing. Elio expresses concern about his mother seeing him and asks about Oliver, but Chiara dismisses his inquiry. The scene captures a playful yet tense dynamic among the characters, ending with Elio swimming in the river, symbolizing a moment of freedom from the earlier tension.
- Elio prepares a smoothie in the kitchen with the help of Mafalda, who is unfamiliar with the process. He takes the smoothie outside to join his mother, Annella, who encourages his feelings for Oliver. As they discuss Oliver, Elio grows anxious about his absence. Later, he waits for Oliver on the terrace, struggling to focus on a book. When Oliver finally arrives, Elio pretends to be asleep but feels betrayed when Oliver walks past his room without stopping, leaving him in disappointment.
- In the garden of the Perlman villa, Elio arrives last, avoiding eye contact with Oliver, indicating tension. Oliver, weary, engages in a conversation with Perlman and Annella about his lifestyle choices, particularly his gambling and drinking habits. Perlman expresses concern for both Oliver and Elio, while Annella worries about Oliver's health and encourages him to rest. The scene concludes with Oliver agreeing to take it easy that night, alleviating Annella's concerns, as she offers him more coffee and reminds her son to sit up straight, reinforcing the familial atmosphere.
- In a tense and awkward encounter on the Perlman Villa lawn, Elio attempts to connect with Oliver, who is absorbed in his work. Elio's restlessness prompts him to kick a volleyball at Oliver, breaking the silence and leading to a conversation about their previous night. While Elio expresses his desire to go into town and share his feelings, Oliver remains indifferent, highlighting their emotional disconnect. Perlman observes the interaction from his studio, adding a layer of parental oversight to the scene.
- On the main entrance lawn of the Perlman Villa, Elio and Oliver share a heartfelt conversation about their relationship. Elio expresses a longing to spend time together again, reminiscing about a previous day, while acknowledging the passage of time. Oliver compliments Elio's wisdom and inquires about his feelings, leading Elio to fervently admit he worships him. This emotional exchange resolves Elio's hesitation, and Oliver agrees to meet in half an hour for a bike ride, requesting no formalities. The scene captures their deepening bond in a tender and introspective atmosphere.
- In a picturesque setting by a fresh water spring in Crema, Italy, Elio and Oliver enjoy their carefree days together, filled with swimming and volleyball. Their connection deepens when Elio gifts Oliver a book he has written, symbolizing his affection. Despite the joy of their companionship, an underlying tension from Elio's feelings for Oliver remains unresolved. The scene captures a nostalgic and bittersweet tone, ending with Elio playfully reminding Oliver of their unspoken agreement to avoid speeches, hinting at the complexities of their relationship.
- Elio and Oliver return from a ride, with Elio avoiding the turn to his home, signaling his inner conflict. At the Perlman villa, the family enjoys drinks as Oliver joins them, appearing refreshed and charismatic. They share light conversation about missing each other and Oliver's fondness for the villa, while Elio remains cautious and reserved. Anella expresses warmth towards Oliver, and Perlman encourages him to consider their home as his own. The scene is set against a sunset backdrop, highlighting the bittersweet emotional tension between Elio's unacknowledged feelings and Oliver's relaxed charm, leaving the emotional stakes unresolved.
- After dinner, Elio feels restless and seeks connection, first gazing at Oliver's window and noticing a drying red bathing suit. He joins his parents in the living room but is distracted by the news and lights a cigarette. Elio then calls Marzia, inviting her out, and they agree to meet, indicating a shift in his focus from Oliver to her.
- Elio and Marzia stroll through the enchanting streets of Crema at night, where Elio impulsively buys a book for her. Their conversation in French reveals Marzia's fears of emotional pain and Elio's struggle with vulnerability. A brief kiss ignites a passionate moment, leading them to explore each other's bodies in a secluded corner of Palazzo Premoli. The scene captures the romantic tension and vulnerability of young love, culminating in Marzia's poignant question about Elio's true feelings.
- In this poignant scene, Elio and Marzia share a playful and intimate moment by the river at night, filled with laughter and love. As dawn breaks, Elio finds himself in a state of emotional turmoil, grappling with his feelings for Oliver while attempting to write a heartfelt note expressing his longing and anxiety over Oliver's silence. After several drafts, he finally pens a note that captures his need for communication, reflecting on his emotions as he smells his hands. The scene concludes with Elio slipping the note under Oliver's door, symbolizing his hope for connection amidst uncertainty.
- In the garden of the Perlman villa during breakfast, Professor Perlman reads the newspaper while a sleepy Elio cracks an egg. Oliver joins them, casually asking Elio about his night, which Elio brushes off. Perlman hints at upcoming work with color slides from Berlin. The scene shifts to Elio's bedroom, where he discovers a note he wrote to Oliver, now with Oliver's addition urging him to grow up and meet at midnight. Overwhelmed, Elio kisses the note and realizes it's only 10:30 AM, leaving him excited yet anxious about their connection.
- In Professor Perlman's study, Oliver and Perlman discuss the sensuality of Hellenistic sculptures, captivating Oliver with their stylistic differences. The scene shifts to a lunch under lime trees, where Annella reminds the group about dinner guests. Elio feels self-conscious about a large birthday shirt and seeks Oliver's opinion, but Oliver remains non-committal. Anxious about the time, Elio tries to hide his watch but ultimately runs upstairs, frustrated. The scene concludes with Oliver informing Mafalda that he won't be home for dinner, indicating a change in his plans.
- Elio is awakened by Marzia's kiss at the abbeveratoio, leading to a playful and intimate moment between them. They decide to escape to the attic, where they share a romantic encounter on a mattress, illuminated by the soft afternoon light. As the scene concludes, Marzia leaves just before dinner, and Elio introduces her to arriving guests, a gay couple, marking a shift from their private intimacy to the social atmosphere of the villa.
- In Elio's bedroom, his father, Perlman, encourages him to wear a Hawaiian shirt gifted by their guests, whom he playfully refers to as 'Laurel and Hardy.' Despite Elio's initial reluctance and teenage angst, Perlman teaches him about acceptance and maturity. The scene shifts to an outdoor table under lime trees, where Elio makes a lively entrance in the shirt, delighting their guests and marking a moment of familial connection and growth.
- Elio performs a piano piece by Poulenc in the living room of the Perlman villa, captivating his audience, including the enigmatic Oliver. After the performance, Elio retreats to his bedroom, where he reflects on his identity and feelings for Oliver while writing in his journal. The scene captures Elio's internal struggle and longing, juxtaposed with Oliver's calm demeanor in his room. As Elio questions himself in the bathroom, the atmosphere is filled with introspection and curiosity, leaving him in contemplation about his emotions.
- Elio, after hearing guests leave the Perlman villa, rushes to join Oliver on the balcony. They share a moment of vulnerability, both admitting their nervousness about their feelings for each other, creating an intimate connection amidst the tension of the night.
- In Oliver's bedroom at the Perlman villa, Elio and Oliver share a tender and intimate moment. Initially hesitant, Elio moves closer to Oliver, leading to playful foot touching and a heartfelt hug. As they kiss passionately, they undress each other, experiencing a mix of pain and pleasure during their sexual encounter. This moment deepens their emotional connection, culminating in a shared sense of vulnerability. Afterward, Oliver comforts Elio, holding him as he falls asleep, encapsulating a sense of safety and intimacy.
- As dawn breaks in Oliver's room, he cradles Elio, who wakes but avoids confronting the emotions from their intimate night. Oliver expresses concern for Elio's feelings, hinting at the need for discussion about their actions. Elio, while evasive, admits he didn't hate the experience, yet his smile suggests a wish for distance. After a moment of intimacy, Elio decides to shift their focus by suggesting they go swimming, indicating a desire to move forward despite lingering uncertainties.
- In this scene, Oliver and Elio share a tense morning after a secretive encounter the night before. While swimming in the river, Elio feels distant from Oliver, who later asks if Elio will hold their previous night against him. Their awkward dynamic continues as they sneak into the villa, where Oliver surprises Elio in his room, leading to an off-screen sexual encounter that leaves Elio feeling uncomfortable. At breakfast with the Perlman family, Oliver subtly initiates physical contact with Elio, but the mood shifts as Oliver announces his plans to leave for town, heightening Elio's anxiety about Oliver's impending departure. The scene concludes with Elio feeling conflicted as he prepares to follow Oliver outside.
- In the central square of Crema, Elio rushes to Oliver, expressing his desire to be close while Oliver reveals his fears about their relationship's emotional implications. Despite Elio's reassurances, uncertainty lingers between them. The scene transitions to a montage of life in the garden and a brief kitchen interaction between Mafalda and Anchise, before concluding with a tender moment between Elio and his mother as he picks peaches.
- In the attic of the Perlman villa, Elio reflects on his intimate moment with Marzia while distracted by the summer sky and peaches. Engaging in a sexual act with a peach, he grapples with feelings of absurdity and shame before falling asleep. Oliver discovers him, leading to a playful yet intimate exchange where Oliver teases Elio about his actions. This moment of vulnerability culminates in a kiss, solidifying their emotional connection and commitment to each other.
- At the Perlman villa, Elio and Oliver share an intimate conversation in the garden, grappling with their feelings and the pain of impending separation as Oliver prepares to return to the States. Elio expresses his anxiety and regrets about their time together, while Oliver reassures him of their bond. Meanwhile, Mafalda irons in the background, symbolizing domesticity, and Anchise works in a hut, contrasting the emotional turmoil of the young lovers. The Perlman parents, Perlman and Annella, listen to the conversation, acknowledging the depth of their son's relationship with Oliver. The scene is filled with a melancholic tone, highlighting longing and unspoken emotions amidst the warm light of the villa.
- In this poignant scene, Elio dons Oliver's blue shirt, symbolizing his growing affection. At breakfast, he tenderly cracks an egg for Oliver, while their connection deepens with a subtle foot touch under the table. Elio faces tension with Marzia, who confronts him about his feelings, leaving her hurt and him speechless. By the pool, Elio expresses regret for Marzia's feelings, yet shares an intimate moment with Oliver. Perlman and Annella discuss Oliver's upcoming trip, adding humor that contrasts with Elio's emotional turmoil, highlighting the complexities of young love.
- At dusk in front of the War World I Memorial in Pandino, Oliver and Elio, still in their swimsuits, share a playful yet intimate moment as they attempt to embrace the large monument. Their fingertips almost touch, but when Oliver leans in for a kiss, Elio pushes him away, insisting it's not the right place for such intimacy. They leave the memorial together on their bikes, observed by a young couple nearby, reflecting the innocence and complexity of young love.
- Elio and Oliver share a playful and intimate moment in their hotel room before venturing into the lively streets of Bergamo. As they stumble through the night, their romantic connection is tested when Oliver kisses Elio but is distracted by a distant melody. At a small square, Oliver engages with a group of New Romantics, expressing his admiration for the band Psychedelic Furs, while Elio feels increasingly out of place. The scene culminates in Elio's unexpected vomiting, highlighting his discomfort amidst the carefree atmosphere.
- In this emotionally charged scene, Oliver comforts Elio after a bout of vomiting, leading to a passionate kiss that defies the judgment of onlookers. Their intimacy deepens in the hotel room, but the mood shifts as Oliver prepares to leave for Rome. At the train station, he sings a heartfelt song that encapsulates their feelings, leaving Elio visibly affected as the train departs. Alone on the platform, Elio grapples with the pain of separation before calling his mother for a ride home.
- Elio is driven back to the villa by Anella, visibly upset and crying over Oliver's departure. In the parked car, he encounters Marzia, who expresses her love and reassures him, leading to a heartfelt moment where they agree to remain friends. Upon returning to the villa, Elio briefly interacts with Anchise, who shares his sadness about Oliver, but Elio chooses to avoid further discussion, highlighting his emotional struggle with loss.
- Elio confronts his anger upon learning from Mafalda that his room has been restored, leading him to reflect on his cherished memories with Oliver in the latter's former room. A heartfelt conversation with his father, Professor Perlman, follows, where they discuss the significance of Elio's relationship with Oliver and the importance of embracing emotions. Perlman shares his own regrets, fostering a deep understanding between father and son as they navigate themes of love, loss, and the passage of time.
- Six months after their summer together, Elio wanders the foggy countryside, reflecting on his deep connection with Oliver. Upon returning to the Perlman villa, he receives a phone call from Oliver, who shares news of his potential marriage, leaving Elio feeling a mix of longing and sadness. As they discuss their feelings and the awareness of Elio's parents regarding their relationship, the scene shifts to the Perlman family evaluating new scholar applications, which Elio finds uninteresting. The emotional tension culminates as Elio prepares for a celebration dinner, lost in thought, before the scene fades to black.
CharacterInconsistencies
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Character Oliver
Description The narrator's description of Oliver having three personalities based on his swimsuit color feels contrived and undermines Oliver's character development. It's a simplistic device to explain shifts in his behavior that could be better achieved through nuanced writing and consistent character portrayal.
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Character Elio
Description Elio's actions in Scene 53 (sniffing and licking Oliver's discarded underwear) are jarring and feel out of character. While the film aims for realism, this action borders on obsessive and detracts from Elio's otherwise nuanced portrayal. A more subtle approach would be more effective in conveying Elio's longing.
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Character Elio
Description Elio's masturbation with a peach in the attic is a shocking and arguably gratuitous scene that disrupts the film's overall tone. While exploring themes of sexuality and self-discovery, this specific act seems excessive and potentially detracts from the emotional impact of the story.
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StoryInconsistencies
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Description The narration in Sequence 9 and 17 repeats the explanation of the Perlmans' summer guest program. This information is crucial early on, but repeating it later feels redundant and slows down the narrative.
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Description The narrator's sudden intrusion to explain the Professor's guest program disrupts the natural flow of the scene. This information could be integrated more subtly through dialogue or action.
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PlotHoles
DialogueAuthenticity
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Description The dialogue feels slightly stilted in Sequence 10, particularly Oliver's overly formal language ("I know myself") in the context of a relaxed breakfast setting. The dialogue aims to create a certain dynamic, but it could be more natural.
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Description The extended dialogue between Elio and Marzia in French, while adding depth, might feel slightly verbose and less natural in its rhythm than other conversations in the film. Some streamlining could enhance pacing and realism.
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Redundancies
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Element Repeated emphasis on the soft-boiled egg scene
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Suggestion The recurring soft-boiled egg motif, used to illustrate Oliver's integration into the family and Elio's contrasting skill, could be streamlined. Perhaps focusing on one key scene would enhance its impact. -
Element Multiple instances of language switching
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Suggestion While the multilingual aspect is a feature of the film, the constant switching could be slightly more concise to avoid jarring the reader/viewer. Consider subtle shifts, instead of abrupt changes, between languages.
Elio - Score: 93/100
Role
Protagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Oliver - Score: 88/100
Role
Protagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Perlman - Score: 78/100
Role
Mentor
Character Analysis Overview
Primary Theme: First love and its complexities, particularly the intensity, insecurity, and bittersweet transience of a summer romance.
How Multiple Themes Interact: Several themes intertwine to enrich the primary theme. The themes of cultural difference and class, parental influence, and self-discovery all contribute to the nuances of Elio and Oliver's relationship. While these themes are significant, they ultimately serve to deepen and complicate the central narrative of first love, rather than overshadowing it. The cultural and class differences create tension and unspoken anxieties. Parental influence shapes Elio's reactions and behaviors. The journey of self-discovery intensifies the emotional weight of the romance and gives it a lasting resonance beyond the summer's end.
| Theme | Theme Details | Theme Explanation | Primary Theme Support | ||||||||||||
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| First Love and its Complexities (60%) | The central focus is on Elio's intense, confusing, and ultimately heartbreaking first love for Oliver. The narrative follows the emotional arc of their relationship, from initial attraction and burgeoning intimacy to the inevitable parting and its lingering effects. | The theme explores the overwhelming emotions, insecurities, and uncertainties inherent in first love. It highlights the intoxicating blend of desire, joy, pain, and self-discovery that defines this formative experience. The film uses the brevity of summer as a metaphor for the fleeting nature of this specific type of romance, while emphasizing the lasting impact of it on Elio's emotional and personal growth. | This is the core theme around which all other themes revolve. The other themes provide context, adding layers of complexity to the emotional core of the story. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening First Love and its Complexities:
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| Self-Discovery and Identity (25%) | Elio's journey of self-discovery is intertwined with his relationship with Oliver. He grapples with his sexuality, his emotions, and his place in the world. His interactions with Marzia and his own introspective moments throughout the story highlight this process. | The film explores how the experience of first love forces Elio to confront his own identity and feelings. His reactions and insecurities reveal his journey towards a deeper understanding of himself and the world around him. | This theme directly supports the primary theme by providing crucial insight into Elio's emotional responses to his love for Oliver. The self-discovery is fundamentally shaped and catalyzed by this relationship. | ||||||||||||
| Cultural and Class Differences (10%) | Oliver's American background and his more worldly demeanor create a subtle tension and unspoken anxieties in his relationship with Elio, who is immersed in the Italian environment and his family's traditions. | The differences in cultural backgrounds and social standing influence the dynamics of their interaction. These differences contribute to the unspoken anxieties and uncertainties that underlie their romance. | This theme adds layers of complexity to the relationship, highlighting the challenges and misunderstandings that can arise from such differences. It subtly impacts the way both characters interact and communicate, adding to the overall emotional resonance. | ||||||||||||
| Parental Influence and Observation (5%) | Elio's parents, particularly his mother, observe and comment on the relationship. Their presence and reactions shape Elio's experience and the overall atmosphere. | The parents act as observant figures, adding a layer of commentary and indirect guidance to Elio's journey. Their subtle understanding of the dynamics and their approach influences Elio's self-awareness. | The parental perspectives provide a contrasting viewpoint to Elio's intense emotional journey. Their involvement underscores the complexities of first love within a family context, adding a dimension of societal expectations and unspoken anxieties. | ||||||||||||
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
| Site | Description |
|---|---|
| Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
| Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
| John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
|---|---|
| Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
| What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
| Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
| Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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| internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals evolve from a desire for connection and understanding to grappling with feelings of love and jealousy regarding Oliver. Initially, Elio seeks hospitality and friendship but ultimately strives for emotional intimacy and affirmation of his identity amidst societal expectations. |
| External Goals | The protagonist's external goals shift from helping Oliver adjust to his new environment to pursuing moments of shared experience and connection, culminating in Elio's desire to maintain a relationship with Oliver despite the looming separation. |
| Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the tension between self-acceptance and societal expectations of relationships and identity during a period of cultural conservatism. This conflict intertwines with Elio's journey as he navigates love and desire in a repressive environment. |
Character Development Contribution: The progression of Elio's internal and external goals contributes significantly to his character development, showcasing his evolution from a youth grappling with confusion about his identity and desires to a more self-aware individual who ultimately embraces and communicates his emotions.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The interplay of internal goals and external actions drives the narrative structure, creating a compelling arc as Elio's experiences progress from uncertainty to empowerment, all while advancing the plot through his interactions with both Oliver and other characters.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The juxtaposition of goals and conflicts deepens the screenplay's themes, such as love, identity, longing, and the impact of societal norms, illustrating the complexities of personal relationships alongside the coming-of-age experience.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
| Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
| Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
| Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \
It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.
| Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
| 1 - The Arrival of the Usurper | Intimate, Tense, Formal | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 2 - A Quiet Introduction | Curious, Intimate, Reflective | 7.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 3 - A Quiet Dinner Invitation | Awkward, Reserved, Intrigued | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 4 - Breakfast Tensions | Awkward, Intrigued, Intimidating, Casual | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 5 - A Lesson in Etymology | Informative, Light-hearted, Intellectual | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 3 | 7 | 2 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 6 - A Summer's Farewell | Introspective, Playful, Inquisitive | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 3 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 7 - Unresolved Tensions | Introspective, Tense, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 8 - Variations of the Heart | Introspective, Emotional, Intellectual | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 9 - A Game of Connection | Intriguing, Lively, Friendly | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 10 - Tension Under the Lime Trees | Tension, Jealousy, Awkwardness, Playfulness | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 11 - The Absence of Oliver | Tension, Intrigue, Discomfort | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 12 - A Night of Reluctance and Revelations | Tension, Resentment, Loneliness | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 13 - Under the Lime Trees: A Moment of Reflection | Intellectual, Reflective, Inquisitive | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 14 - Reflections at the South Terrazza | Introspective, Intellectual, Playful | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 15 - Playful Moments in the Orchard | Introspective, Playful, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 16 - Awkward Tensions | Tense, Awkward, Confused, Defiant | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 17 - Flirtations and Rivalries | Intimate, Playful, Envious | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 18 - Dancing with Desire | Envy, Amusement, Mesmerized, Embarrassment | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 19 - Secrets by the River | Intimate, Reflective, Tender | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 20 - Morning Banter and Anticipation | Reflective, Playful, Intimate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 21 - A Tense Farewell | Tense, Teasing, Awkward, Surprised | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 22 - A Moment of Discovery | Excitement, Curiosity, Pride | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 23 - A Serene Discovery at Sirmione | Reflective, Informative, Playful | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 24 - Reflections in the Storm | Reflective, Intimate, Nostalgic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 25 - Longing in Silence | Introspective, Longing, Sensual | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 26 - A Moment of Connection | Reflective, Intimate, Light-hearted | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 27 - A Lost Soul's Care | Intimate, Reflective, Tender | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 28 - Moments of Connection | Intense, Confessional, Reflective | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 29 - Whispers by the Water | Intimate, Tense, Yearning, Conflicted | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 30 - A Moment of Connection and Crisis | Intimate, Playful, Tender | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 2 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 31 - Tender Moments in the Villa | Intimate, Playful, Tender | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 2 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 32 - Playful Tensions | Intimate, Playful, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 33 - Betrayal in the Night | Intimate, Emotional, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 34 - Morning Reflections | Reflective, Intimate, Melancholic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 4 | 8 | 3 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 35 - Restless Longing | Introspective, Tense, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 36 - A Moment of Connection | Intimate, Reflective, Tender | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 37 - Unspoken Bonds | Intimate, Reflective, Tender | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 38 - Bittersweet Reunion at Sunset | Reflective, Intimate, Content | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 39 - Restless Longing | Restless, Intimate, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 40 - Whispers of the Night | Intimate, Vulnerable, Passionate, Confused | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 41 - Whispers of Longing | Intimate, Reflective, Yearning | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 42 - Morning Whispers | Intimate, Reflective, Tender | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 43 - Art, Anxiety, and Dinner Plans | Reflective, Playful, Serious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 44 - Afternoon Whispers | Intimate, Passionate, Playful | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 45 - A Lesson in Acceptance | Amused, Reflective, Intimate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 5 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 46 - Introspection in the Night | Introspective, Yearning, Melancholic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 47 - Nervous Connections | Anxious, Intimate, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 48 - A Night of Intimacy | Intimate, Passionate, Vulnerable | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 49 - Morning Reflections | Intimate, Reflective, Vulnerable | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 50 - Awkward Longing | Intimate, Vulnerable, Awkward | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 51 - A Moment of Longing | Intimate, Reflective, Vulnerable | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 52 - Summer Confessions | Intimate, Vulnerable, Emotional, Sensual | 8.7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 53 - A Night of Longing | Intimate, Reflective, Melancholic | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 54 - Tangled Emotions | Intimate, Reflective, Anxious | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 55 - A Moment at the Memorial | Intimate, Reflective, Playful | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 56 - A Night of Laughter and Discomfort | Intimate, Reflective, Playful | 8.7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 57 - Bittersweet Farewell | Intimate, Bittersweet, Reflective | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 58 - Moments of Comfort | Emotional, Reflective, Intimate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 3 | 8 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 59 - Embracing Memories | Reflective, Intimate, Emotional, Parental, Philosophical | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 60 - Echoes of the Past | Reflective, Emotional, Intimate, Bittersweet, Nostalgic | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Emotional depth
- Intimate character interactions
- Character development
- Engaging dialogue
- Effective portrayal of tension
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited plot progression
- Low external conflict
- Minimal conflict
- Slow pacing in certain sections
- Lack of clarity in character motivations
Suggestions
- Introduce more external conflicts to raise stakes and propel the plot forward.
- Enhance plot progression through dynamic events or challenges that characters must navigate.
- Maintain the strong emotional and intimate moments but ensure they tie into the overarching narrative.
- Consider balancing the subtle character dynamics with clearer motivations to avoid confusion.
- Pacing could be improved by interspersing moments of tension or conflict to keep the audience engaged.
World Building
- Physical environment: The screenplay is set in a picturesque villa in Italy, characterized by a blend of old and new elements, including refurbished rooms, a fruit orchard, and serene gardens. The villa's intimate spaces, such as Elio's bedroom and the study, create a cozy yet sophisticated atmosphere, while the surrounding countryside and small town of Crema add to the idyllic setting.
- Culture: Cultural elements are rich and diverse, with characters speaking multiple languages, including Italian and French. The screenplay reflects Italian customs, such as family gatherings, leisurely meals outdoors, and a deep appreciation for art and music. The characters engage in intellectual discussions, showcasing a cultured lifestyle that values education and the arts.
- Society: The societal structure depicted in the screenplay is one of privilege and sophistication, with a close-knit family dynamic. Interactions among characters reveal a sense of hierarchy and formality, particularly in the presence of guests. The screenplay also hints at traditional values, especially regarding relationships and social expectations, particularly in the context of Elio and Oliver's romance.
- Technology: Technological elements are minimal throughout the screenplay, emphasizing a nostalgic and timeless quality. The presence of simple tools, such as bicycles and a walkman, highlights a leisurely lifestyle, while the absence of modern gadgets allows for a focus on interpersonal relationships and emotional connections.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment and cultural backdrop shape the characters' experiences and actions by providing a setting that fosters intimacy and exploration of emotions. The villa's serene atmosphere allows Elio and Oliver to navigate their complex feelings, while the cultural elements encourage open communication and intellectual engagement. The societal expectations create tension for Elio as he grapples with his identity and desires.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute significantly to the narrative by establishing a rich context for the characters' relationships and experiences. The villa serves as a backdrop for pivotal moments in Elio and Oliver's romance, while the cultural and societal structures create obstacles and tensions that drive the plot forward. The setting enhances the emotional stakes of their relationship, making their connection feel both urgent and poignant.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes of love, identity, and the passage of time. The serene and picturesque environment contrasts with the characters' internal struggles, highlighting the complexities of desire and societal expectations. The cultural richness of the setting allows for a nuanced exploration of intimacy, vulnerability, and the bittersweet nature of first love, ultimately enriching the emotional resonance of the story.
| Voice Analysis | |
|---|---|
| Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a subtle, nuanced exploration of complex emotions and interpersonal relationships. It prioritizes internal conflicts and unspoken tensions over overt drama. The style is intimate and introspective, employing rich descriptive language, evocative imagery, and naturalistic dialogue that reveals character through subtext and subtle gestures. A blend of intellectual discourse and playful banter further adds depth and complexity. |
| Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a deeply immersive and emotionally resonant experience. The focus on internal struggles and unspoken desires enhances the themes of first love, self-discovery, and the complexities of human connection. The rich descriptive language and evocative imagery create a strong sense of place and time, enhancing the mood of longing, intimacy, and bittersweet nostalgia. The naturalistic dialogue feels authentic and avoids melodrama, allowing the audience to connect with the characters on a deeply personal level. |
| Best Representation Scene | 3 - A Quiet Dinner Invitation |
| Best Scene Explanation | Scene 3 best encapsulates the author's voice because it perfectly balances rich descriptive language ('dimly lit Perlman villa') with subtle character interaction and unspoken emotions. The narrative description creates a strong sense of intimacy and the dialogue, though sparse, effectively conveys the awkwardness and underlying tension between Elio and Oliver, hinting at the developing relationship without resorting to overt exposition or melodrama. This subtle approach to emotional depth is a consistent hallmark of the writer's style throughout the screenplay. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
| Pattern | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Dialogue and Emotional Impact: A Delicate Balance | Scenes with high Dialogue scores (8 or above) generally correlate with high Emotional Impact scores, except for scenes 5, 6, 9, 13, 20, 22, 24, 26, 30, 31, 34, 36, 37, 38, 42, 45, 46, 52, 53, 58 and 60. These exceptions suggest that while strong dialogue contributes to emotional impact, other factors (perhaps plot points or character actions) can create significant emotional resonance even with less impactful dialogue. Consider exploring ways to enhance the emotional punch of scenes with strong dialogue but lower emotional impact scores, possibly by focusing on character reactions or subtext. |
| Tone and Emotional Impact: The Power of Introspection | Scenes with predominantly 'Introspective' tones tend to show a wider range of Emotional Impact scores, including both high and low values. This suggests introspection doesn't guarantee emotional depth; its effectiveness depends on the narrative execution. Conversely, scenes with more action-oriented tones ('Tense,' 'Playful,' etc.) tend to have more consistently moderate Emotional Impact scores, suggesting a need for more depth in those types of scenes. |
| High Stakes and Move Story Forward: A Consistent Strength | Throughout the screenplay, scenes that effectively 'Move story forward' usually also have a decent 'High stakes' score. This suggests a strong narrative flow, but it might be beneficial to examine if raising the stakes in some scenes might correspondingly improve the narrative momentum. |
| Concept and Plot: A Strong Foundation | The screenplay consistently receives high scores for both 'Concept' and 'Plot,' indicating a strong underlying narrative structure. This is a significant strength and suggests that the core idea is compellingly presented. |
| Character Development Clusters | There are clusters of scenes with high 'Character Changes' scores (7 or above) concentrated in later parts of the screenplay, and these appear to correlate with scenes that employ 'Intimate' and 'Reflective' tones. Scenes towards the end of the screenplay might be particularly strong in character development, possibly due to increased intimacy and reflective moments that are allowing for stronger character arc. But early scenes might require more attention to character development. |
| Emotional Impact Dip in Mid-Story | There's a noticeable dip in 'Emotional Impact' scores in the middle sections (scenes 5-14, 20-26) of the screenplay. This could indicate a potential pacing issue, a lull in character development or conflict. Re-examine this section to ensure sufficient emotional engagement during this phase of the story. |
| Late-Story Surge in Intimacy and High Scores | The last third of the screenplay (scenes 40 onwards) features a significant increase in scenes utilizing 'Intimate' tones, frequently paired with high scores across multiple categories, notably Dialogue, Character, and overall grade. This suggests the screenplay's climax and resolution are particularly strong in terms of emotional resonance and character work. Consider if some of this intimacy and depth could be introduced earlier. |
| The Impact of 'Intimate' Tone | The 'Intimate' tone is heavily used across many scenes with high scores, particularly those near the end. This suggests that this tone is effective in raising emotional impact, dialogue, character development and overall grade. Yet this tone is not employed in scenes with lower emotional scores. Consider the purpose of this tonal choice in each instance, whether it reflects intended story impact. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a strong ability to create emotionally resonant scenes with authentic character interactions, particularly focusing on intimacy, vulnerability, and internal conflicts. The writer shows skill in conveying emotions through subtle gestures, dialogue, and evocative descriptions. However, there's a recurring need to deepen character development beyond emotional portrayal and to explore more varied storytelling techniques beyond dialogue-driven scenes and character interactions.
Key Improvement Areas
Character Development
Many analyses praise the emotional depth but suggest further work on character motivations and backstories. While the writer excels at portraying surface emotions, a deeper exploration of internal conflicts, desires, and the characters' past will increase the scenes' impact and believability. Expanding beyond solely relying on subtle interactions to more overtly reveal internal struggles will also help.
Dialogue and Subtext
While the dialogue is often lauded as rich, witty, or intimate, feedback consistently points toward the need to improve its subtext and unspoken emotions. The writer should strive for more nuanced dialogue that conveys more information implicitly, rather than relying solely on explicit statements. This will create more engaging and layered scenes.
Storytelling Techniques Diversification
The writer heavily relies on dialogue and character interaction to convey the story. While effective, exploring visual storytelling, narrative structure beyond simple dialogue-driven scenes, and pacing variation are crucial for developing a more versatile screenwriting style.
Suggestions
| Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Screenplay | Read and analyze 'Call Me By Your Name' (James Ivory), 'Before Sunrise' (Richard Linklater), 'Moonlight' (Barry Jenkins), 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind', and 'Lost in Translation'. | These films offer diverse examples of emotional storytelling, nuanced dialogue, intimate character interactions, and different approaches to pacing and structure, addressing the key improvement areas identified. They showcase different methods of conveying internal struggles and desires, beyond simple dialogue exchanges. |
| Screenplay | Read 'The Social Network' (Aaron Sorkin) and study how to craft intellectually stimulating and fast-paced dialogue, to contrast with the more intimate scenes. | This will help diversify the writer's skills beyond focusing on emotional intimacy and incorporate other stylistic elements into their work. |
| Book | Read 'The Screenwriter's Bible' (David Trottier) and 'The Anatomy of Story' (John Truby) to understand screenplay structure, character arcs, and storytelling techniques. | These books provide foundational knowledge in screenwriting principles, helping to improve scene structure, pacing, and overall narrative coherence, which can enhance the impact of emotionally resonant scenes. |
| Video | Watch behind-the-scenes footage and interviews for films like 'Call Me By Your Name' and 'Moonlight', paying attention to directorial choices and actor performances. | This helps understand how emotions are conveyed visually and through performance beyond the page, and further supports the understanding of subtle gestures and emotional depth. |
Additional Notes:
The writer displays a strong grasp of emotional storytelling and creates compelling character interactions, particularly in scenes focused on intimacy and desire. However, consistent focus on strengthening character development beyond emotional expression, diversifying storytelling techniques beyond dialogue, and developing subtext in dialogue will elevate their work to a higher level of sophistication and impact. A deeper exploration of themes beyond desire and interpersonal relationships might also be beneficial in expanding the writer's range.
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|---|---|
| Forbidden Love | ||
| Summer Romance | ||
| Love Triangle | ||
| Coming of Age | ||
| The Usurper | ||
| Intellectual Connection | ||
| The Mentor | ||
| The Best Friend | ||
| The Secret | ||
| The Bittersweet Ending |
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 36 | ELIO: I worship you. |
| 28 | Elio: Because there is no one else I can say this to but you. |
| 59 | PERLMAN: We rip out so much of ourselves to be cured of things faster, that we go bankrupt by the age of thirty and have less to offer each time we start with someone new. |
| 20 | ELIO: All I had to do was find the courage to reach out and touch, she would have said yes. |
| 14 | Oliver: Does this make any sense to you? Not to me. Nor to your dad. |
Some Loglines to consider:
| A transformative summer romance unfolds between a seventeen-year-old and his father's charming guest, leaving an indelible mark on their lives. |
| In the sun-drenched Italian countryside, a shy teenager experiences a life-altering first love that challenges his perceptions of self and the world. |
| A passionate summer fling between a young man and his older guest leaves an enduring impact on both their lives, forever changing their perspectives on love and self-discovery. |
| Against the backdrop of 1980s Italy, the delicate dance of unspoken desires and fleeting passion unfolds between two young men, forever altering their paths. |
| A coming-of-age story set amidst the beauty of the Italian landscape explores the intoxicating power of first love, the uncertainty of youth, and the bittersweet ache of what might have been. |
| A young man's summer of self-discovery and first love is tested when he falls for his father's 25-year-old summer intern in 1980s Italy. |
| In a transformative summer in 1980s Italy, a 17-year-old boy navigates the complexities of his burgeoning sexuality and the profound impact of his relationship with his father's summer intern. |
| Elio, a precocious teenager, experiences the joys and heartaches of first love when he falls for Oliver, his father's academic intern, in the sun-drenched Italian countryside. |
| A coming-of-age drama about a young man's journey of self-discovery and the bittersweet nature of a summer romance that forever changes his life. |
| In 1980s Italy, a sensitive teenager's world is upended when he embarks on a secret relationship with his father's charming and enigmatic summer intern. |
| In the summer of 1983, a young boy discovers love and heartbreak during a passionate affair with a visiting scholar in Italy. |
| Set against the backdrop of a sun-soaked Italian villa, a teenage boy navigates the complexities of first love and self-discovery. |
| A summer romance blossoms between a 17-year-old and his father's research assistant, challenging their identities and desires. |
| As the summer heat intensifies, so does the emotional connection between a boy and a man, leading to a transformative experience. |
| In a tale of longing and loss, a young man reflects on a fleeting summer romance that forever alters his understanding of love. |
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Engine: Gemini
Highly Recommend
Explanation: Call Me By Your Name is a remarkably well-crafted screenplay demonstrating exceptional strengths in character development, evocative setting, and thematic resonance. The subtle yet powerful exploration of first love and its complexities, coupled with the exquisite use of language and visual storytelling, makes it a truly compelling and moving cinematic experience. While minor areas for improvement exist regarding pacing in certain scenes and potentially expanding on secondary characters, these are overshadowed by the overall brilliance of the script.
Engine: GPT4
Highly Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for 'Call Me by Your Name' is a beautifully crafted exploration of first love, identity, and the bittersweet nature of memory. It excels in character development, particularly in the nuanced portrayal of Elio and Oliver's relationship, which evolves from curiosity to deep emotional connection. The dialogue is rich and layered, enhancing the themes of longing and desire. However, there are moments where pacing could be improved, particularly in the middle sections, which may feel drawn out. Overall, the screenplay is compelling and resonates with audiences through its authentic emotional depth.