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1 INT. ELIO’S/OLIVER’S ROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 1 The sound of an approaching car. ELIO, 17, barefoot and in his bathing suit, is in the process of moving his clothes from his room to the adjacent room - a wardrobe somehow refurbished into a single bedroom. The two rooms are

4 INT. STAIRCASE - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 4 They head up the stairs together; ELIO lunges for the heavy suitcase, OLIVER takes the backpack. ELIO My room is now your room. I’ll be

8 INT. ELIO’S/OLIVER’S ROOM/BATHROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - DUSK 8 ELIO is at the desk in his small “new” bedroom; he is transcribing music. Next to his desk lamp a walkman is playing music. He hears the bell. He enters the bathroom and the door that connects it to the

10 EXT. GARDEN IN FRONT OF THE KITCHEN - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 10 The PERLMANS are eating breakfast outside, in front of the kitchen. OLIVER comes out and sits down, watching how ELIO expertly cracks his soft-boiled egg shell, then attempts to do the same, but only a tiny bit of the shell is pierced, so

11 INT. PROFESSOR PERLMAN’S STUDY - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 11 PERLMAN is attempting to devise a new filing system for his correspondence; there are packs of letters lying about and open boxes with more letters. OLIVER is helping him, ELIO is with them. The professor makes a joking comment like "My

12 EXT. ROAD TO CREMA - DAY 12 ELIO and OLIVER are riding bicycles, with Elio in the lead. They go along the main road towards the town of Crema and its bank. The day is already hot. 13 EXT. CAFE - CREMA TOWN SQUARE - DAY 13 *

14 EXT. SOUTH TERRAZZA - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 14 The same day. ELIO is sitting at a table in the shade of the house, practicing his guitar. From where he sits he can see OLIVER ride up on his bike and dismount. He has to pass by ANCHISE, who is doing some garden work with small plants and

15 INT. LIVING ROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 15 ELIO plays the piece on the piano. OLIVER leans on the door looking in. The music sounds very different from when he played it on his guitar. OLIVER

17 EXT. STREETS/CARD CAFE - TOWN STREET - DAY 17 Another day. OLIVER and ELIO walk down a street; OLIVER steps into a cafe. Some men inside are sitting at two or three tables with playing cards. Waiters bring coffee and other drinks to the

18 EXT. MAIN ENTRANCE LAWN - PERLMAN VILLA - AFTERNOON 18 A few of ELIO’S FRIENDS play a volleyball game in a makeshift court set up on the lawn by the main entrance of the villa. OLIVER is playing with CHIARA, MARZIA’s slightly older sister, and another BOY.

19 EXT. TABLE UNDER THE LIME TREES - PERLMAN VILLA - EVENING 19 A gangly TEENAGER looks on with pretended disdain; his voice is just changing, he has a dark fuzz, unshaven, on his upper lip, he could be Elio three or four years earlier. PERLMAN is amusing the boy’s sisters, TWO YOUNG NIECES, aged

22 INT. LIVING ROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - NIGHT 22 When everyone returns to the living room, PERLMAN asks his son to play something he then goes in the bar. ELIO Non mi va. (I don’t feel like it)

25 EXT. LIME TREES - PERLMAN VILLA - AFTERNOON 25 Another day. ELIO is sitting at his usual table under the lime trees, working. From where he's sitting, Elio can see PERLMAN and OLIVER through an open window in his father's study. They are discussing Oliver’s manuscript on

26 EXT. SOUTH TERRAZZA/ABBEVERATOIO - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 26 Later. ELIO sits with his head back on the cushion of his chair, his eyes closed. OLIVER, far away, is sitting on the edge of the trough, his feet in the water, reading the pages from the manuscript he showed Perlman. He looks towards Elio.

28 EXT. ABBEVERATOIO - PERLMAN VILLA - AFTERNOON 28 ELIO observes OLIVER swimming in the narrow and long stone trough. ANNELLA is close, but she's moving away with a basket of freshly picked fruit. OLIVER comes out of the water with his green swim trunks.

30 INT. ELIO’S BEDROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - AFTERNOON 30 ELIO is on his bed wearing only a bathing suit. His right hand is down inside his swim suit. He is tense, expectant, alert to every sound. There are footsteps just outside his door. OLIVER, shirtless, enters the room from the bathroom.

32 INT. STAIRCASE/BOCCHIRALE - PERLMAN VILLA - AFTERNOON 32 OLIVER comes down the stairs of the house followed by ELIO. They are surprised to find CHIARA and MARZIA there. OLIVER isn’t wearing any shirt and CHIARA makes a ball of the billowy blue shirt he’d been wearing earlier and tosses it at

33 EXT. RESTAURANT WITH DANCE FLOOR - NIGHT 33 A restaurant bar with an open air dancing floor. Everyone dances. CHIARA does her sexy dancing for OLIVER, who is enjoying himself and is a very good dancer. The music is “Paris Latino” by Bandolero.

34 EXT. RIVER - NIGHT 34 ELIO and MARZIA are at the river. They strip their clothes off. MARZIA (in french)

35 INT. ELIO’S BEDROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - NIGHT 35 The same night. All the lights are off. ELIO, sleeping in his bed, is woken up by the sound of Oliver peeing in the adjoining bathroom - the careless, uninhibited male force of it. ELIO listens, then stands up and goes towards the door.

37 EXT. MAIN ENTRANCE - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 37 Later. ANCHISE is wiping the windshield of the Perlmans’ car. ELIO comes out just as CHIARA arrives on her bike. She asks him where Oliver is. ELIO

38 INT./EXT. PERLMAN CAR - DAY - LATER 38 PERLMAN drives the car through the countryside, OLIVER has a map open on his legs. Hot air blows in through all the open windows. They are silent as the news plays on the radio, reporting on the P2 Masonic lodge.

42 EXT. SIRMIONE - GROTTE DI CATULLO (BEACH) - AFTERNOON 42 Later, back on the beach. The bronze has been dried and cleaned. PERLMAN is speaking in Italian with the other men and women who took part in the operation, and who are analyzing the find.

46 INT. OLIVER’S ROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - NIGHT 46 OLIVER is sitting at his desk in his boxer shorts only, working; only the desk light is on. A lit cigarette between his fingers. A radio plays some summer music at a low volume. Oliver wraps up his corrections on a page and marks it: “to

50 INT. LIVING ROOM / KITCHEN - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 50 The next day. The storm has passed, leaving a coolness. ELIO is playing the piano. He is immersed in thought, his mind is elsewhere. He breaks off, gets up, moves from room to room downstairs. The kitchen is empty as well. It’s the hour of

55 EXT. ABBEVERATOIO - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 55 Later. ELIO is sitting under the trees with his score book open. OLIVER sits on the edge of the stone trough with his feet in the water, he is wearing his straw hat. ELIO

56 EXT. PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 56 On the way to the shed to collect their bikes, they pass ANCHISE, who hands OLIVER his bike with a wry smile. OLIVER smiles back. ANCHISE

57 EXT. TOWN SQUARE - DAY 57 They arrive on their bikes at the little town square. OLIVER buys a pack of cigarettes, Gauloises. He lights one up, then offers one to ELIO. OLIVER

58 EXT. COUNTRY ROAD/SPRINGS - FONTANILI GAVERINE - DAY 58 Now that ELIO has laid his cards on the table, the scenery and the fine weather buoy his spirits. They ride together on the empty country road that at this time of day is all for them. The sun pounds exposed patches along the way, exposing

59 EXT. ROAD - DAY 59 They glide down the slope on their bikes, with wind in their hair. ELIO We’ll never speak again, you know..

62 INT. BAR - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 62 Later. In a very tight and confined space beside the living room is the Perlman bar. ELIO is sitting on the floor, his head tilted back, and is holding a napkin full of ice - now a mixture of blood and water - on his nose. Beside him is an

64 INT. LIVING ROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 64 The girls burst into the living room where Elio is lying on the couch. CHIARA sits at the foot of it, MARZIA stands peering down at ELIO. He looks up at her a bit sheepishly. CHIARA takes a cigarette out of a pack and lights it. She

65A INT. KITCHEN / PATIO - PERLMAN VILLA - LATER 65A ELIO makes himself a smoothie in Mafalda’s kitchen, cutting up a peach, a banana, then a pear, dates. Mafalda wants to do it for him and tries to take the knife away. To her, a smoothie is a foreign concoction.

68 EXT. GARDEN IN FRONT OF THE KITCHEN - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 68 * The next day. ELIO is the last to arrive. He pretends to ignore OLIVER, who is cracking open the top of his soft- boiled egg. ANNELLA looks at OLIVER in a worried way: ANNELLA

69 EXT. MAIN ENTRANCE LAWN - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 69 OLIVER is doing some work for Perlman, specify. He seems hard at work and does not look up as ELIO approaches. ELIO doesn’t know how to break the silence. Then he sees and kicks the volleyball lying under the nearby lime trees. The ball hits

71 EXT. MAIN ENTRANCE LAWN - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY (CONT’D) 71 The conversation continues. OLIVER I’ll pick it up for you if you want.

72 EXT. SPRINGS - FONTANILI GAVERINE - DAY 72 The vital, pure, and joyful sight of a fresh water spring, the unstoppable stream gushing out from earth. NARRATOR (V.O.) Two young men travelling by bike,

75 EXT. COUNTRY ROAD - FONTANILI GAVERINE - DAY 75 On the return ride, ELIO ignores the turn to “his place”, i Fontanili. OLIVER, on the other hand, recognizes it, and as he passes sees the pathway disappearing into the trees. Oliver’s POV of the path.

77 INT. KITCHEN - PERLMAN VILLA - NIGHT 77 Later, after dinner. MAFALDA is cleaning up the kitchen. ELIO, restless, comes in and goes to the fridge, scoops up some ice cream into a bowl, and goes outside, eating as he walks.

81 EXT. STREETS - CREMA - NIGHT 81 Elio and Marzia are wheeling their bikes through the town streets. Elio sees a bookstand and asks Marzia to hold his bicycle. We stay with Marzia who sees Elio feverishly browse through the stand. He finds something he likes and buys it.

84 EXT. RIVER - NIGHT 84 A deserted spot on the river, later. MARZIA and ELIO make love on the grass. He pulls out just in time and ejaculates on her belly. They burst out laughing. ELIO

86 EXT. GARDEN IN FRONT OF THE KITCHEN - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 86 Breakfast. PROFESSOR PERLMAN sits behind his newspaper, while a very sleepy ELIO cracks his egg. OLIVER walks in, sits down, and without looking at ELIO, says:

88 INT. PROFESSOR PERLMAN’S STUDY - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 88 * OLIVER and PROFESSOR PERLMAN project images of classical athletes in his study. On the screen is a close-up detail of a bronze navel in an impressively muscled stomach. There are several of these, and PERLMAN points out stylistic

91 EXT. ABBEVERATOIO - PERLMAN VILLA - AFTERNOON 91 By the abbeveratoio. ELIO is asleep, his face resting on his hand. MARZIA arrives on her bike just as OLIVER leaves on his. They pause in the road to say hello. MARZIA continues towards the house and approaches the sleeping ELIO.

97 INT. ELIO’S BEDROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - EVENING 97 ELIO finds his father in his room going through all his son’s shirts hanging in the closet in order to pick out the unwanted present. He hands it to ELIO, who groans. ELIO

99 INT. LIVING ROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - LATER 99 ELIO is playing the piano. For his final selection, he has chosen a piece by Poulenc. The others listen almost reverently. His wristwatch is on the piano. As he is concluding, OLIVER comes in from outside and makes

103 INT. ELIO’S BEDROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - NIGHT 103 When ELIO emerges from the bathroom he hears voices coming up from below as the guests are leaving. He reaches the window and looks down at “Laurel and Hardy” who stand by the car saying their goodbyes and laughing affectionately. The two

105 INT. OLIVER’S BEDROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - NIGHT 105 OLIVER sits on the bed, his legs crossed, looking smaller, younger. ELIO stands awkwardly at the foot of the bed, not knowing what to do with his hands. He keeps putting them in his pockets, then taking them out again.

106 INT. OLIVER’S ROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - DAWN 106 Dawn. Light is coming in. OLIVER is still cradling ELIO in his arms but has shifted to a more comfortable position for them both. ELIO opens his eyes, sees OLIVER looking down at him but instead of smiling or lifting his face to be kissed,

108 EXT. RIVER - FIRST LIGHT OF DAY 108 At the river, OLIVER walks knee-deep in the water with the blue shirt on, then dives in and swims away. Elio is swimming 200 meters away, from a distance they look like two complete strangers.

113 EXT. PIAZZA DUOMO - CREMA - DAY 113 The central square with Crema's Duomo. ELIO sees OLIVER at the newstand, sitting on his bike and scanning the headlines of the International Herald Tribune, before heading in the direction of the post office. ELIO rushes up to him.

116 INT. ATTIC - PERLMAN VILLA - EARLY AFTERNOON 116 ELIO enters the attic. Puts the remaining peach on the old bedside table and lies down on the mattress where he made love with Marzia. He opens his book and starts reading but, easily distracted, starts looking outside the window at the

117 INT./EXT. HUT - PERLMAN VILLA - NIGHT 117 The same night. The Perlman house is mostly dark, the window shutters all closed. There is a little light out in the hut next to the garage, where Anchise sleeps. We see him through the window, sitting at a table working on something. He has

121 INT. ELIO’S BEDROOM - PERLMAN VILLA - DAY 121 Next day. Oliver’s blue shirt is on a hanger, all clean and pressed by Mafalda, with an attached note: “For Oliver, from Elio.” Elio strips off the shirt he’s wearing and puts on the fresh one from Oliver. He looks at himself approvingly in the

125 EXT. WAR MEMORIAL - PANDINO - DUSK 125 * OLIVER and ELIO, still wearing their swimsuits, are in front * of the War World I Memorial for Fallen Soldiers, in the nearby town of Pandino. Elio crosses the steps and tries to * put his arms around it; he stands there spread-eagled. *

129 INT. HOTEL BEDROOM - BERGAMO - AFTERNOON 129 ELIO and OLIVER enter their hotel bedroom in Bergamo. They look around and laugh, for no apparent reason. Later. There is a large window looking out over the front entrance of the hotel and a parking lot adjoining it.

132 EXT. STRADA CON FONTANA - BERGAMO - DAWN 132 OLIVER holds ELIO's forehead as he pukes. Elio stands away from the wall making an "I'm okay now" gesture, and goes to the fountain nearby to splash water on his face. ELIO

136 INT./EXT. CAR/COUNTRY ROAD - AFTERNOON 136 ANNELLA is with ELIO in the car. She is driving back to the villa. ELIO is silent. Oliver’s blue shirt is open over Elio's bare chest and blows in the wind. She looks at him. She reaches out with her free hand and

139 INT. STAIRCASE - PERLMAN VILLA - AFTERNOON 139 ELIO meets MAFALDA coming down the stairs. MAFALDA I fixed up your room the way it was.

142 EXT. CAMPAGNA - PERLMAN VILLA - WINTER DAY 142 The Perlman villa in Winter. A foggy day. Six months later, ELIO walks in the countryside that surrounds the villa. NARRATORE They had become each other that

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Call me by your name

A transformative summer romance unfolds between a seventeen-year-old and his father's charming guest, leaving an indelible mark on their lives.

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Overview

Unique Selling Point

What sets this screenplay apart is its intimate portrayal of a summer romance that transcends cultural and generational boundaries. The lush Italian setting serves as a backdrop for a deeply personal story that resonates with anyone who has experienced the complexities of love and loss. Its unique blend of poetic dialogue and vivid imagery creates a compelling narrative that invites the audience to reflect on their own experiences of love.

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Story Facts

Genres:

Drama 60% Romance 50% Comedy 20%

Setting: 1980s, Perlman villa and surrounding areas in Italy

Themes: First Love and its Complexities, Self-Discovery and Identity, Cultural and Class Differences, Parental Influence and Observation

Conflict & Stakes: Elio's internal struggle with his burgeoning feelings for Oliver, the complexities of young love, and the fear of impending separation.

Mood: Bittersweet and introspective

Standout Features:

Unique Hook: The story's focus on a summer romance between a young boy and an older man, exploring the complexities of first love.
Distinctive Setting: The picturesque Italian countryside serves as a vibrant backdrop, enhancing the romantic atmosphere.
Character Depth: The nuanced portrayal of Elio's emotional journey and his relationship with Oliver adds layers to the narrative.
Cultural Context: The exploration of Jewish identity and cultural heritage adds depth to the characters' backgrounds.

Comparable Scripts: Call Me by Your Name, The Talented Mr. Ripley, Maurice, Brokeback Mountain, The Way He Looks, A Single Man, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Pride, The Dreamers

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Key Strengths

Exceptional character development, with a characters rating in the 97th percentile, indicating well-crafted and relatable characters.
Strong emotional impact, scoring in the 90th percentile, suggesting the screenplay effectively resonates with audiences on an emotional level.
High dialogue rating at 82.76, reflecting the writer's ability to create engaging and authentic conversations between characters.

Areas for Improvement

Low stakes score at 10.76 indicates a need to enhance the tension and consequences within the plot to keep audiences invested.
The pacing score is very low at 1.62, suggesting that the screenplay may benefit from a more dynamic rhythm to maintain viewer engagement.
Originality score at 45.13 indicates that the screenplay may lack unique elements or fresh perspectives, which could be improved to stand out.

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The writer appears to be intuitive, with strengths in character and dialogue development but lower scores in concept and plot structure.

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Intuitive

Overall Assessment

The screenplay shows great potential due to its strong character and emotional elements, but it requires significant work on plot structure, stakes, and pacing to achieve a more balanced and engaging narrative.

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Title	Grade	Percentile	Before	After
Scene Overall	8.6	74	Casablanca : 8.5	the black list (TV) : 8.7
Scene Concept	8.3	66	face/off : 8.2	fight Club : 8.4
Scene Plot	8.0	44	the 5th element : 7.9	Breaking Bad : 8.1
Scene Characters	8.9	97	Deadpool : 8.8	Good Will Hunting : 9.0
Scene Emotional Impact	8.6	84	Black mirror 304 : 8.5	Titanic : 8.7
Scene Conflict Level	5.6	3	Swingers : 5.5	Charlie and The Choclate Factory : 5.7
Scene Dialogue	8.2	72	Mr. Smith goes to Washington : 8.1	Casablanca : 8.3
Scene Story Forward	7.3	9	The Good place release : 7.2	the pursuit of happyness : 7.4
Scene Character Changes	7.6	75	fight Club : 7.5	the black list (TV) : 7.7
Scene High Stakes	5.7	8	Easy A : 5.6	groundhog day : 5.8
Scene Unpredictability	6.91	7	The father : 6.89	Coda : 6.98
Scene Internal Goal	8.13	73	Memento : 8.12	The whale : 8.14
Scene External Goal	7.01	13	Bad Boy : 7.00	Mulholland Drive : 7.02
Scene Originality	8.68	48	Psycho : 8.67	There's something about Mary : 8.69
Scene Engagement	8.90	32	Triangle of sadness : 8.89	groundhog day : 8.91
Scene Pacing	8.00	2	The father : 7.99	Midnight in Paris : 8.01
Scene Formatting	8.12	42	Mr. Smith goes to Washington : 8.11	Erin Brokovich : 8.13
Script Structure	8.12	46	Casablanca : 8.11	Erin Brokovich : 8.13
Script Characters	8.00	55	Her : 7.90	Erin Brokovich : 8.10
Script Premise	8.60	75	Erin Brokovich : 8.50	the black list (TV) : 8.70
Script Structure	8.10	68	Knives Out : 8.00	Erin Brokovich : 8.20
Script Theme	8.40	70	the dark knight rises : 8.30	face/off : 8.50
Script Visual Impact	7.60	37	fight Club : 7.50	face/off : 7.70
Script Emotional Impact	8.70	97	Her : 8.60	Pinocchio : 8.80
Script Conflict	7.40	47	Rick and Morty : 7.30	Casablanca : 7.50
Script Originality	8.60	84	the pursuit of happyness : 8.50	Killers of the flower moon : 8.70
Overall Script	8.50	92	The usual suspects : 8.46	Silence of the lambs : 8.51

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Executive Summary

Call Me By Your Name is a remarkably well-crafted screenplay demonstrating exceptional strengths in character development, evocative setting, and thematic resonance. The subtle yet powerful exploration of first love and its complexities, coupled with the exquisite use of language and visual storytelling, makes it a truly compelling and moving cinematic experience. While minor areas for improvement exist regarding pacing in certain scenes and potentially expanding on secondary characters, these are overshadowed by the overall brilliance of the script.

Strengths

The screenplay masterfully develops its characters through subtle actions, nuanced dialogue, and evocative imagery. The setting of the Italian countryside is beautifully rendered, adding depth and emotional weight to the narrative. The use of the narrator provides insightful commentary and adds an additional layer to the storytelling. The film masterfully balances intimacy and restraint, leading to potent emotional impact. high ( Scene 10 Scene 14 Scene 27 Scene 116 Scene 141 )
The intimate scenes are handled with both sensitivity and honesty, avoiding gratuitous depictions while fully conveying the emotional intensity of the relationship. high ( Scene 105 Scene 116 Scene 132 )
The dialogue is sharp, witty, and realistic, reflecting the complexities of the characters' personalities and relationships. medium ( Scene 11 Scene 36 Scene 68 )
The screenplay utilizes evocative imagery and visual storytelling to enhance the emotional impact of the narrative and the beauty of the setting. The pacing is generally well-managed creating a sense of realism and allowing the emotional arc to unfold naturally. high ( Scene 6 Scene 12 Scene 58 Scene 128 Scene 137 )
The ending is both satisfying and poignant, leaving a lasting impression on the audience. The thematic exploration of love, loss, and self-discovery resonates long after the credits roll. high ( Scene 141 )

Areas of Improvement

While the primary relationship is deeply explored, some secondary characters could benefit from further development to enrich the overall texture of the community surrounding Elio and Oliver. low ( Scene 17 Scene 18 )
A few scenes could be slightly tightened to maintain a consistent pace. Some segments might feel slightly slow compared to others. low ( Scene 130 )

Missing Elements

The screenplay could potentially benefit from a slightly more explicit depiction of the aftermath of Oliver's departure. A brief scene might add emotional depth to the final moments. low

Notable Points

The use of the narrator to associate Oliver's personality with his swimsuit choices is a unique and memorable stylistic choice. medium ( Scene 27 )
The discovery of the bronze statue serves as a powerful metaphor for the uncovering of hidden emotions and desires. medium ( Scene 41 )
The father's final speech is a masterpiece of subtle wisdom and acceptance, offering profound insights into the complexities of love and life. high ( Scene 141 )

Blind Spots

Underrepresentation of female perspectives While Marzia and Chiara are present, their experiences and motivations are not explored as deeply as Elio and Oliver's. Their roles primarily revolve around their relationships to the two male protagonists, rather than having fully developed internal lives and desires of their own. For example, Marzia's emotional journey after Elio's confession is somewhat underdeveloped. medium

GPT4

Executive Summary

The screenplay for 'Call Me by Your Name' is a beautifully crafted exploration of first love, identity, and the bittersweet nature of memory. It excels in character development, particularly in the nuanced portrayal of Elio and Oliver's relationship, which evolves from curiosity to deep emotional connection. The dialogue is rich and layered, enhancing the themes of longing and desire. However, there are moments where pacing could be improved, particularly in the middle sections, which may feel drawn out. Overall, the screenplay is compelling and resonates with audiences through its authentic emotional depth.

Strengths

The screenplay effectively establishes a strong sense of place and atmosphere, immersing the audience in the Italian summer setting. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (1) Scene Sequence number 2 (10) )
Character development is rich and layered, particularly in the evolution of Elio and Oliver's relationship, which feels authentic and relatable. high ( Scene Sequence number 3 (22) )
The dialogue is beautifully written, capturing the nuances of youthful longing and the complexities of love. high ( Scene Sequence number 4 (19) )
The emotional depth of the screenplay resonates strongly, allowing the audience to connect with the characters' experiences. high ( Scene Sequence number 5 (50) )
The use of symbolism, such as the recurring peaches, adds layers of meaning to the narrative and enhances thematic depth. high ( Scene Sequence number 6 (142) )

Areas of Improvement

Some sections of the screenplay feel drawn out, particularly in the middle, which could benefit from tighter pacing. medium ( Scene Sequence number 7 (34) )
There are moments where character motivations could be more clearly defined, particularly regarding Elio's feelings towards Marzia. medium ( Scene Sequence number 8 (50) )
The resolution of certain subplots, such as Elio's relationship with Marzia, feels somewhat abrupt and could be explored further. medium ( Scene Sequence number 9 (86) )
The transition between scenes can sometimes feel jarring, disrupting the flow of the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 10 (125) )
The screenplay could benefit from more varied emotional beats to maintain engagement throughout. medium ( Scene Sequence number 11 (142) )

Missing Elements

A deeper exploration of the cultural context surrounding the characters could enhance the narrative's richness. medium ( Scene Sequence number 12 (50) )
Additional background on Oliver's life in America could provide more depth to his character and motivations. medium ( Scene Sequence number 13 (86) )
More insight into Elio's internal struggles and conflicts would strengthen the emotional impact of the story. medium ( Scene Sequence number 14 (125) )
The screenplay could benefit from a clearer thematic statement that ties together the various narrative threads. medium ( Scene Sequence number 15 (142) )
A more explicit exploration of the consequences of Elio and Oliver's relationship could add depth to the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 16 (50) )

Notable Points

The ending is poignant and reflective, leaving a lasting impression on the audience about the nature of love and memory. high ( Scene Sequence number 17 (142) )
The use of music throughout the screenplay enhances the emotional landscape and connects the characters' experiences. high ( Scene Sequence number 18 (125) )
The screenplay's exploration of sexuality is handled with sensitivity and authenticity, making it relatable to a wide audience. high ( Scene Sequence number 19 (50) )
The dynamic between Elio and his parents adds depth to the narrative, showcasing a supportive family environment. high ( Scene Sequence number 20 (86) )
The screenplay's ability to evoke nostalgia and longing is a significant strength, resonating with audiences on a personal level. high ( Scene Sequence number 21 (142) )

Blind Spots

Character Motivation The screenplay occasionally lacks clarity in character motivations, particularly regarding Elio's feelings towards Marzia and how they contrast with his feelings for Oliver. This could lead to confusion about his emotional journey. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Pacing Issues Certain scenes feel overly drawn out, which can disrupt the flow of the narrative. For example, the middle sections may benefit from tighter editing to maintain engagement. medium

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Executive Summary

The screenplay for "Call Me By Your Name" is a beautifully crafted, emotionally resonant coming-of-age drama that explores the complexities of first love and the profound impact of a transformative summer. Set in 1980s Italy, the story follows the blossoming romance between 17-year-old Elio and his father's 25-year-old summer intern, Oliver. The screenplay deftly navigates the characters' journey, capturing the nuances of their burgeoning relationship, the social and familial dynamics at play, and the universal themes of self-discovery, desire, and the bittersweet nature of young love. With its rich visual storytelling, well-developed characters, and poetic dialogue, the screenplay showcases a distinctive and compelling voice that would likely appeal to an audience seeking a thoughtful, character-driven drama.

Strengths

The screenplay's opening scenes effectively introduce the central characters, Elio and Oliver, and establish the setting and tone of the story. The descriptions of their interactions and the Perlman family's dynamics create an immersive and authentic world that draws the reader in. high ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) )
The scenes depicting the growing connection and rapport between Elio and Oliver, through their discussions and musical exchanges, are beautifully crafted and effectively convey the developing bond between the two characters. high ( Scene 5 (11) Scene 7 (15) )
The screenplay's handling of the intimate moments between Elio and Oliver, including the pivotal scene in the secluded spring, is sensitive and emotionally resonant, capturing the characters' vulnerabilities and the complexity of their feelings. high ( Scene 28 (58) Scene 29 (72) )
The screenplay's exploration of the Perlman family dynamics and the nuanced relationship between Elio and his father is a strength, providing depth and context to the central narrative. high ( Scene 39 (139) Scene 41 (141) )
The screenplay's strong sense of place, captured through the vivid descriptions of the Perlman villa and its surrounding environment, helps to immerse the reader in the story's setting and enhance the overall atmosphere. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) )

Areas of Improvement

While the intimate scenes between Elio and Marzia are effectively portrayed, the screenplay could potentially benefit from further exploration and development of their relationship, as it serves as a counterpoint to Elio's connection with Oliver. medium ( Scene 33 (83) Scene 34 (84) )
The scenes involving Elio's friends and their reactions to Oliver's presence could be expanded upon to provide a richer understanding of the social and cultural context in which the story takes place. medium ( Scene 10 (18) Scene 11 (19) )
The screenplay could benefit from occasional moments of levity or humor to balance the more serious and emotional moments, as the overall tone can sometimes feel quite heavy. low ( Scene 4 (10) Scene 6 (13) )

Missing Elements

While the screenplay effectively establishes the setting and the Perlman family's dynamics, there could be a more explicit exploration of the socio-cultural and historical context in which the story takes place, particularly in relation to the characters' backgrounds and experiences. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) )
The screenplay could benefit from additional scenes or moments that provide a deeper understanding of Oliver's motivations and decision-making process, as his actions and choices can sometimes feel opaque to the reader. medium ( Scene 26 (55) Scene 27 (56) )

Notable Points

The screenplay's handling of the intimate scenes between Elio and Oliver is a notable strength, as it manages to capture the tenderness, vulnerability, and complexity of their relationship without resorting to gratuitous or exploitative depictions. high ( Scene 28 (58) Scene 29 (72) )
The screenplay's exploration of the Perlman family dynamics and the nuanced relationship between Elio and his father is a notable strength, as it provides depth and context to the central narrative and reflects the universal themes of love, loss, and self-discovery. high ( Scene 39 (139) Scene 41 (141) )
The screenplay's strong sense of place, captured through the vivid descriptions of the Perlman villa and its surrounding environment, is a notable strength that helps to immerse the reader in the story's setting and enhance the overall atmosphere. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) )
The screenplay's handling of the aftermath of Oliver's departure and Elio's emotional journey is a notable strength, as it sensitively explores the character's grief, growth, and the lasting impact of their relationship. high ( Scene 51 (137) Scene 58 (144) )
The screenplay's use of multiple perspectives, including the Perlman family members and various supporting characters, is a notable strength that provides a richer and more nuanced understanding of the story's themes and emotional impact. medium ( Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) Scene 4 (10) )

Blind Spots

Representation While the screenplay effectively explores the intimacy and complexities of Elio and Oliver's relationship, it could benefit from a more nuanced representation of the broader LGBTQ+ community and their experiences within the cultural and social context of the story's setting. The screenplay's focus on the central romance, while powerful, may overlook opportunities to provide a richer and more diverse portrayal of the LGBTQ+ experience. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Overwriting Occasionally, the screenplay exhibits a tendency towards excessive description or flowery language, particularly in certain scene descriptions. While the poetic nature of the writing is generally a strength, there are a few instances where the descriptive elements may be overstated or could be condensed to streamline the storytelling. low

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High-level overview

Title: Call Me by Your Name

Summary:

Set against the picturesque backdrop of 1980s Italy, "Call Me by Your Name" follows the intense and transformative summer romance between a 17-year-old boy, Elio Perlman, and his father's graduate student, 25-year-old Oliver. As Oliver arrives at the Perlman villa, Elio grapples with feelings of jealousy and rivalry, referring to Oliver as 'the usurper.' Their initial interactions are marked by awkwardness and tension, yet an undeniable attraction begins to emerge.

Elio's fascination with Oliver grows as they share mundane moments together, from bike rides and coffee at a café to intimate family dinners—all infused with playful banter and emotional complexity. Elio's attempts to connect with Oliver often feel thwarted by Oliver's non-committal demeanor, leaving Elio both inspired and frustrated. Their dynamic shifts as they share moments of vulnerability, playfulness, and artistic expressions, underpinning Elio’s growing feelings and insecurities.

As the days unfold, Elio navigates conflicting emotions, dating Marzia while simultaneously developing a profound connection with Oliver. Tension builds through intimate conversations and physical closeness, culminating in a pivotal moment where Elio and Oliver finally surrender to their desires, leading to a passionate encounter that deepens their bond.

However, the fleeting nature of their summer together looms overhead. Elio wrestles with the pain of impending separation as Oliver prepares to return to America. Their experiences culminate in bittersweet moments of intimacy, longing, and emotional honesty, ultimately highlighting the beauty and tragedy of youth and desire.

As the summer comes to a close, Elio faces the fallout of their romance. He is left to confront his feelings of loss and heartache when Oliver departs, leading to introspective reflections on love and the ephemeral nature of shared moments. The story concludes months later as Elio hears from Oliver, who is now engaged, prompting a poignant examination of memory, longing, and the enduring impact of their time together.

"Call Me by Your Name" is a rich exploration of first love, self-discovery, and the bittersweet nature of fleeting moments, capturing the essence of youthful passion and the complexity of emotional connections that resonate long after the summer sun has set.

Call Me by Your Name

Synopsis

Set in the summer of 1983 in Northern Italy, 'Call Me by Your Name' follows the passionate and transformative relationship between Elio Perlman, a 17-year-old boy, and Oliver, a 24-year-old American graduate student who comes to stay with Elio's family for the summer. Elio, who is intelligent and introspective, spends his days transcribing music and exploring the beautiful Italian countryside. When Oliver arrives, he is immediately captivated by the older man's charm and confidence, which contrasts sharply with his own more reserved nature.

As the summer unfolds, Elio and Oliver engage in a series of flirtatious encounters, filled with tension and unspoken desires. Elio's initial feelings of jealousy and confusion about his attraction to Oliver are compounded by his relationship with Marzia, a local girl with whom he shares a brief romance. However, it is Oliver who occupies Elio's thoughts, leading to a complex emotional journey as Elio grapples with his burgeoning sexuality and the societal expectations of the time.

The two young men eventually find themselves drawn together, sharing intimate moments that deepen their connection. They explore the lush landscapes of Italy, swim in the river, and share their thoughts on life, love, and art. Their relationship culminates in a passionate encounter that changes both of their lives forever. However, as the summer comes to an end, Oliver must return to America, leaving Elio heartbroken and longing for the connection they shared.

In the aftermath of their summer romance, Elio reflects on the impact Oliver had on his life, grappling with the bittersweet memories of their time together. The film concludes with a poignant moment of realization for Elio, as he learns to embrace the beauty of love, loss, and the fleeting nature of youth. 'Call Me by Your Name' is a tender exploration of first love, identity, and the complexities of human relationships, set against the backdrop of a sun-soaked Italian summer.

Scene by Scene Summaries

In this scene, 17-year-old Elio observes the arrival of 25-year-old Oliver at the Perlman villa, feeling a mix of jealousy and rivalry as he refers to Oliver as 'the usurper.' Accompanied by Marzia, Elio is instructed by his mother, Annella, to assist Oliver with his luggage. The tension escalates as Elio and Oliver are formally introduced in Professor Perlman's study, where their handshake reveals Oliver's non-committal demeanor, leaving Elio grappling with his emotions.
Elio and Oliver arrive at the Perlman villa, where Elio offers to share his room with the tired Oliver. As they pass Marzia, Oliver shows curiosity, hinting at potential interest. Once in the room, Oliver quickly falls asleep, leaving Elio to manage the situation alone. The scene captures the contrast between Elio's eagerness and Oliver's exhaustion, setting the stage for their developing relationship.
In a dimly lit Perlman villa, Elio wakes Oliver to inform him about dinner. Oliver, disoriented and reluctant, decides to skip the meal and asks Elio to excuse him to his mother. Elio, feeling a mix of concern and embarrassment, agrees and leaves Oliver to return to sleep. The scene captures the awkward yet intimate dynamic between the two, setting the stage for their evolving relationship.
During breakfast at the Perlman villa, Oliver struggles to crack a soft-boiled egg, prompting Mafalda to assist him. As the family engages in light conversation about local towns and Oliver's needs, Elio offers to show him around, revealing his fascination with Oliver. The atmosphere is playful yet tense, highlighted by Oliver's self-awareness when he declines a third egg, leaving Elio feeling intimidated.
In Professor Perlman's study, he attempts to organize his correspondence with the help of Oliver and Elio. Annella brings apricot juice, sparking a discussion about the word's etymology. Oliver corrects Perlman's assertion about the word's origins, impressing the group with his knowledge. The atmosphere is light-hearted, filled with playful banter and camaraderie, as Perlman concedes to Oliver's correctness. The scene concludes with Perlman jokingly claiming he was testing Oliver, while Annella and Elio share a knowing smile.
On a hot summer day in Crema, Elio and Oliver ride bicycles to a cafe where they share coffee and discuss their lives as Jewish individuals in small towns. Elio opens up about his summer activities, while Oliver appears distracted. As they prepare to leave, Oliver steadies Elio when he loses his balance, but ultimately rides off, leaving Elio alone in the almost empty town square, highlighting a mix of camaraderie and isolation.
In a tense scene at the Perlman Villa, Elio practices guitar in the shade, feeling unsettled by Oliver's cold gaze as he interacts with Anchise. After Oliver lies down to read, he encourages Elio to play his music again, despite Elio's insecurities about Oliver's indifference. The emotional complexity of their interaction leaves Elio feeling intimidated, ultimately leading him to retreat into the house, leaving their conversation unresolved.
In a sunlit living room, Elio plays a piano piece, infusing it with his own variations inspired by Liszt and Busoni, while Oliver listens from the doorway. Oliver's curiosity turns to frustration as he requests the original Bach piece, which Elio eventually plays, revealing its dedication to Bach's brother. The scene shifts to Elio writing in his diary, where he reflects on his earlier harshness towards Oliver and grapples with feelings of insecurity about their relationship.
In a bustling cafe, Oliver joins a lively card game, quickly bonding with the players and showcasing his charm. Elio, sitting nearby, translates for Oliver but feels sidelined as Oliver becomes engrossed in the game. The scene captures the lighthearted atmosphere of the cafe while highlighting Elio's subtle longing and sense of being overlooked.
On the lawn of the Perlman villa, Elio's friends engage in a lively volleyball game with Oliver, a charming American who draws Elio's admiration and discomfort. As Oliver playfully massages Elio's shoulder, Elio feels a mix of attraction and unease, leading him to retreat to a table under the lime trees. While his friends, including Marzia and Maria, joke about the situation, Elio grapples with his feelings, rubbing the spot where Oliver touched him, as the playful atmosphere shifts to a more introspective tone.
In the evening at the Perlman villa, a gangly teenager observes Perlman entertaining his young nieces with a card trick while Elio, upstairs, anxiously awaits Oliver's arrival. As dinner guests gather, Elio expresses frustration over Oliver's absence, perceiving him as rude and arrogant. Perlman defends Oliver's shyness, but Elio fears growing resentment towards him. Annella dismisses Elio's concerns and orders the removal of Oliver's place setting, deepening Elio's sense of loss. The scene concludes with Perlman performing for the children, highlighting the tension of Oliver's absence.
In the Perlman villa's living room, Elio initially resists playing music despite his father's encouragement and Annelia's playful urging to socialize. A teenage boy's humorous imitation of a spider lightens the mood, prompting Elio to finally engage with the piano. The scene shifts to Elio's bedroom, where he experiences restlessness and curiosity about Oliver, culminating in a moment of hesitation as dawn breaks.
In the afternoon light at the Perlman villa, Elio sits under lime trees, absorbed in his work while listening to his father, Perlman, engage in a thoughtful critique of Oliver's manuscript on Heraclitus. Perlman encourages Oliver to embrace the philosopher's paradoxical ideas, prompting Oliver to acknowledge the need for improvement. Meanwhile, Anchise arrives with a large fish, adding a touch of familial warmth to the scene. The atmosphere blends intellectual discourse with light-hearted domesticity, culminating in Elio's distraction by the lively sounds from the kitchen.
In this scene, Elio relaxes with his eyes closed while Oliver, in a red bathing suit, reads from a manuscript he previously shared with Perlman. Oliver expresses confusion about his work, prompting Elio to offer a compliment that leads to an awkward moment. The narration explores Oliver's multifaceted personality through the symbolism of his colorful bathing suits. The setting at the Perlman villa adds to the introspective and subtly tense atmosphere, highlighting Elio's mixed feelings of admiration and discomfort in their interaction.
In a light-hearted afternoon at the Perlman villa, Elio watches Oliver swim in a stone trough while his mother, Annella, picks fruit. After a playful exchange where Elio keeps his thoughts private, Oliver joins Annella in the orchard, climbing a ladder to pick ripe fruit. The scene captures their youthful curiosity and attraction as Oliver tosses apricots down to Elio and Annella, ending with a transition to a quieter moment as Oliver arrives on his bike from town.
In Elio's bedroom, he finds himself in an embarrassing situation when Oliver enters shirtless from the bathroom. Elio awkwardly claims to have an allergy to avoid swimming with others, but Oliver suggests they swim together, intensifying Elio's internal struggle with his feelings. After Oliver leaves to change, Elio, frustrated with himself, decides to change his bathing suit and catches a glimpse of Oliver getting dressed, leaving him in a state of heightened awareness and confusion.
In the Perlman villa's bocchirale, Oliver descends shirtless, followed by Elio, and encounters Chiara and Marzia. Chiara playfully tosses Oliver's shirt and insists on going to the river, while teasingly flirting with Oliver, much to Elio's envy. As Oliver gathers loose papers, Chiara boasts about her translation skills, and Oliver humorously engages with her. Elio hands Oliver his sunglasses and a book, highlighting their intimacy. The scene culminates with Chiara leading Oliver out as he puts on his blue shirt, leaving Elio feeling a mix of admiration and jealousy.
In a vibrant restaurant with an open-air dance floor, Chiara dances seductively with Oliver, igniting Elio's jealousy and longing as he watches from a distance with Marzia and friends. As Oliver showcases his charm, Elio struggles with his feelings but is encouraged by Marzia to join the dance. The scene captures the playful energy and underlying tension of attraction, culminating in Elio's confident dance that earns him applause from his friends, while Marzia observes with amusement.
Elio and Marzia share an intimate night by the river, undressing and swimming together, which highlights their playful connection. Marzia questions Elio about his feelings for Chiara, revealing underlying tension, but Elio denies any anger. After a tender moment of kissing, they agree to meet again the next night, with Marzia insisting on secrecy about their rendezvous.
Elio wakes up to the sound of Oliver in the bathroom, leading to a playful breakfast scene where Oliver showcases his skills with a soft-boiled egg. Amidst light-hearted teasing about Elio's romantic pursuits, Professor Perlman invites Oliver on a trip to Sirmione, humorously insisting that Elio must remain silent. The scene captures a blend of self-reflection and humor, culminating in a sense of curiosity for the adventures ahead.
Elio cleans the Perlmans' car when Chiara arrives on her bike, asking about Oliver. Disappointed to learn they are leaving for Lake Garda, she shares a moment with Oliver before kissing him goodbye. Elio playfully comments on Chiara's beauty and hints at matchmaking, but Oliver prefers solitude. The tension escalates when Professor Perlman suggests Oliver sit in the front seat, shifting the dynamics among the characters.
Perlman drives through the Italian countryside with Oliver and Elio, who is captivated by Oliver. They arrive at the Grotte di Catullo, where Perlman shares his enthusiasm for the archaeological site. As they witness the recovery of a bronze statue of a boxer from Lake Garda, excitement and admiration fill the air, highlighting the beauty of the ancient artifact and the bond between the characters.
On the beach at Sirmione, Perlman shares the historical significance of a newly discovered bronze statue with Elio and Oliver, highlighting its connection to the Vatican. As the sun sets, they share light-hearted jokes about the statue's fate before enjoying a swim in the tranquil lake. Afterward, Elio expresses his urgency to leave, contrasting with Perlman and Oliver's desire to celebrate with a drink. The scene captures a blend of wonder and celebration against the backdrop of a picturesque evening.
In a cozy yet tense atmosphere at the Perlman villa during a thunderstorm, Oliver works late while Elio seeks connection with Marzia. The family gathers as the lights flicker, prompting Annelia to read from the Heptameron, exploring themes of love and courage. As the lights go out, discussions about youth and relationships unfold, with Annelia encouraging Elio to embrace risks in love. The scene culminates in a tender moment between mother and son, reinforcing their bond as the lights return.
The day after a storm, Elio finds himself lost in thought while playing the piano. He notices Oliver's bike is missing and, driven by longing, sneaks into Oliver's room through the bathroom. There, he intimately explores Oliver's belongings, particularly his bathing suit, which he smells and kisses. Seeking a connection to Oliver, Elio puts on the bathing suit and lies in his bed, but is interrupted by the sound of Oliver's bicycle. He quickly tidies up and exits the room, still grappling with his unspoken feelings.
Elio and Oliver share a contemplative moment under the trees at the Perlman villa, discussing a 16th-century French romance that reflects Elio's internal struggles. As they prepare to go into town, Elio accidentally spills lemonade, and Oliver's instinctive act of picking it up signifies his caring nature. Their interaction reveals a growing bond, marked by unspoken feelings and a sense of companionship as they decide to leave together.
In this light-hearted scene outside the Perlman villa, Oliver receives his repaired bike from Anchise and shows Elio a scrape on his hip, treated with an unusual remedy. Elio expresses concern about Anchise's character, questioning if he gives Oliver the creeps. Oliver reassures him, describing Anchise as a lost soul, which alleviates Elio's worries. The scene captures their camaraderie as they prepare to ride their bikes together.
In a quaint town square, Oliver and Elio share a moment of vulnerability as they discuss history and Elio's feelings of inadequacy. Oliver, taking on a mentor-like role, encourages Elio while grappling with his own emotions. Their conversation hints at deeper feelings, but tension arises as Elio confesses his self-doubt. The scene captures a blend of light-heartedness and emotional depth, culminating in Oliver asking Elio to wait while he resolves a mix-up, leaving their deeper conversation momentarily paused.
Elio and Oliver explore a picturesque country road, sharing laughter over a Mussolini picture before retreating to a tranquil spot by spring water ponds. In this serene setting, they delve into deep conversations about loneliness and their feelings for each other, leading to a tentative kiss. However, Oliver expresses a need for boundaries, creating tension as Elio's boldness clashes with Oliver's desire for propriety. The scene captures a blend of playful exploration and emotional vulnerability, ending with Oliver helping Elio up, symbolizing both care and the return to reality.
Elio and Oliver share a playful footsie moment during lunch at the Perlman villa, deepening their intimate bond amidst the pompous chatter of an art historian couple. However, Elio's joy turns to panic when he suddenly experiences a nosebleed, prompting him to leave the table in search of ice, highlighting his internal struggle with their impending separation.
In a vulnerable moment at the Perlman villa's bar, Elio tends to his bleeding nose while Oliver finds him and expresses concern. Their interaction deepens as Oliver massages Elio's feet, leading to a light-hearted conversation about their Jewish heritage and Elio's mother's views on discretion. Chiara and Marzia add a playful atmosphere, but the focus remains on the intimacy and care Oliver provides. The scene concludes with Oliver helping Elio to his feet and suggesting he rest on the couch, highlighting their growing connection.
In the Perlman villa's living room, Chiara playfully teases Elio about his 'peasant feet,' provoking a shy yet playful reaction from him. Marzia defends Elio, providing comfort amidst Chiara's competitive teasing. Elio expresses concern about his mother seeing him and asks about Oliver, but Chiara dismisses his inquiry. The scene captures a playful yet tense dynamic among the characters, ending with Elio swimming in the river, symbolizing a moment of freedom from the earlier tension.
Elio prepares a smoothie in the kitchen with the help of Mafalda, who is unfamiliar with the process. He takes the smoothie outside to join his mother, Annella, who encourages his feelings for Oliver. As they discuss Oliver, Elio grows anxious about his absence. Later, he waits for Oliver on the terrace, struggling to focus on a book. When Oliver finally arrives, Elio pretends to be asleep but feels betrayed when Oliver walks past his room without stopping, leaving him in disappointment.
In the garden of the Perlman villa, Elio arrives last, avoiding eye contact with Oliver, indicating tension. Oliver, weary, engages in a conversation with Perlman and Annella about his lifestyle choices, particularly his gambling and drinking habits. Perlman expresses concern for both Oliver and Elio, while Annella worries about Oliver's health and encourages him to rest. The scene concludes with Oliver agreeing to take it easy that night, alleviating Annella's concerns, as she offers him more coffee and reminds her son to sit up straight, reinforcing the familial atmosphere.
In a tense and awkward encounter on the Perlman Villa lawn, Elio attempts to connect with Oliver, who is absorbed in his work. Elio's restlessness prompts him to kick a volleyball at Oliver, breaking the silence and leading to a conversation about their previous night. While Elio expresses his desire to go into town and share his feelings, Oliver remains indifferent, highlighting their emotional disconnect. Perlman observes the interaction from his studio, adding a layer of parental oversight to the scene.
On the main entrance lawn of the Perlman Villa, Elio and Oliver share a heartfelt conversation about their relationship. Elio expresses a longing to spend time together again, reminiscing about a previous day, while acknowledging the passage of time. Oliver compliments Elio's wisdom and inquires about his feelings, leading Elio to fervently admit he worships him. This emotional exchange resolves Elio's hesitation, and Oliver agrees to meet in half an hour for a bike ride, requesting no formalities. The scene captures their deepening bond in a tender and introspective atmosphere.
In a picturesque setting by a fresh water spring in Crema, Italy, Elio and Oliver enjoy their carefree days together, filled with swimming and volleyball. Their connection deepens when Elio gifts Oliver a book he has written, symbolizing his affection. Despite the joy of their companionship, an underlying tension from Elio's feelings for Oliver remains unresolved. The scene captures a nostalgic and bittersweet tone, ending with Elio playfully reminding Oliver of their unspoken agreement to avoid speeches, hinting at the complexities of their relationship.
Elio and Oliver return from a ride, with Elio avoiding the turn to his home, signaling his inner conflict. At the Perlman villa, the family enjoys drinks as Oliver joins them, appearing refreshed and charismatic. They share light conversation about missing each other and Oliver's fondness for the villa, while Elio remains cautious and reserved. Anella expresses warmth towards Oliver, and Perlman encourages him to consider their home as his own. The scene is set against a sunset backdrop, highlighting the bittersweet emotional tension between Elio's unacknowledged feelings and Oliver's relaxed charm, leaving the emotional stakes unresolved.
After dinner, Elio feels restless and seeks connection, first gazing at Oliver's window and noticing a drying red bathing suit. He joins his parents in the living room but is distracted by the news and lights a cigarette. Elio then calls Marzia, inviting her out, and they agree to meet, indicating a shift in his focus from Oliver to her.
Elio and Marzia stroll through the enchanting streets of Crema at night, where Elio impulsively buys a book for her. Their conversation in French reveals Marzia's fears of emotional pain and Elio's struggle with vulnerability. A brief kiss ignites a passionate moment, leading them to explore each other's bodies in a secluded corner of Palazzo Premoli. The scene captures the romantic tension and vulnerability of young love, culminating in Marzia's poignant question about Elio's true feelings.
In this poignant scene, Elio and Marzia share a playful and intimate moment by the river at night, filled with laughter and love. As dawn breaks, Elio finds himself in a state of emotional turmoil, grappling with his feelings for Oliver while attempting to write a heartfelt note expressing his longing and anxiety over Oliver's silence. After several drafts, he finally pens a note that captures his need for communication, reflecting on his emotions as he smells his hands. The scene concludes with Elio slipping the note under Oliver's door, symbolizing his hope for connection amidst uncertainty.
In the garden of the Perlman villa during breakfast, Professor Perlman reads the newspaper while a sleepy Elio cracks an egg. Oliver joins them, casually asking Elio about his night, which Elio brushes off. Perlman hints at upcoming work with color slides from Berlin. The scene shifts to Elio's bedroom, where he discovers a note he wrote to Oliver, now with Oliver's addition urging him to grow up and meet at midnight. Overwhelmed, Elio kisses the note and realizes it's only 10:30 AM, leaving him excited yet anxious about their connection.
In Professor Perlman's study, Oliver and Perlman discuss the sensuality of Hellenistic sculptures, captivating Oliver with their stylistic differences. The scene shifts to a lunch under lime trees, where Annella reminds the group about dinner guests. Elio feels self-conscious about a large birthday shirt and seeks Oliver's opinion, but Oliver remains non-committal. Anxious about the time, Elio tries to hide his watch but ultimately runs upstairs, frustrated. The scene concludes with Oliver informing Mafalda that he won't be home for dinner, indicating a change in his plans.
Elio is awakened by Marzia's kiss at the abbeveratoio, leading to a playful and intimate moment between them. They decide to escape to the attic, where they share a romantic encounter on a mattress, illuminated by the soft afternoon light. As the scene concludes, Marzia leaves just before dinner, and Elio introduces her to arriving guests, a gay couple, marking a shift from their private intimacy to the social atmosphere of the villa.
In Elio's bedroom, his father, Perlman, encourages him to wear a Hawaiian shirt gifted by their guests, whom he playfully refers to as 'Laurel and Hardy.' Despite Elio's initial reluctance and teenage angst, Perlman teaches him about acceptance and maturity. The scene shifts to an outdoor table under lime trees, where Elio makes a lively entrance in the shirt, delighting their guests and marking a moment of familial connection and growth.
Elio performs a piano piece by Poulenc in the living room of the Perlman villa, captivating his audience, including the enigmatic Oliver. After the performance, Elio retreats to his bedroom, where he reflects on his identity and feelings for Oliver while writing in his journal. The scene captures Elio's internal struggle and longing, juxtaposed with Oliver's calm demeanor in his room. As Elio questions himself in the bathroom, the atmosphere is filled with introspection and curiosity, leaving him in contemplation about his emotions.
Elio, after hearing guests leave the Perlman villa, rushes to join Oliver on the balcony. They share a moment of vulnerability, both admitting their nervousness about their feelings for each other, creating an intimate connection amidst the tension of the night.
In Oliver's bedroom at the Perlman villa, Elio and Oliver share a tender and intimate moment. Initially hesitant, Elio moves closer to Oliver, leading to playful foot touching and a heartfelt hug. As they kiss passionately, they undress each other, experiencing a mix of pain and pleasure during their sexual encounter. This moment deepens their emotional connection, culminating in a shared sense of vulnerability. Afterward, Oliver comforts Elio, holding him as he falls asleep, encapsulating a sense of safety and intimacy.
As dawn breaks in Oliver's room, he cradles Elio, who wakes but avoids confronting the emotions from their intimate night. Oliver expresses concern for Elio's feelings, hinting at the need for discussion about their actions. Elio, while evasive, admits he didn't hate the experience, yet his smile suggests a wish for distance. After a moment of intimacy, Elio decides to shift their focus by suggesting they go swimming, indicating a desire to move forward despite lingering uncertainties.
In this scene, Oliver and Elio share a tense morning after a secretive encounter the night before. While swimming in the river, Elio feels distant from Oliver, who later asks if Elio will hold their previous night against him. Their awkward dynamic continues as they sneak into the villa, where Oliver surprises Elio in his room, leading to an off-screen sexual encounter that leaves Elio feeling uncomfortable. At breakfast with the Perlman family, Oliver subtly initiates physical contact with Elio, but the mood shifts as Oliver announces his plans to leave for town, heightening Elio's anxiety about Oliver's impending departure. The scene concludes with Elio feeling conflicted as he prepares to follow Oliver outside.
In the central square of Crema, Elio rushes to Oliver, expressing his desire to be close while Oliver reveals his fears about their relationship's emotional implications. Despite Elio's reassurances, uncertainty lingers between them. The scene transitions to a montage of life in the garden and a brief kitchen interaction between Mafalda and Anchise, before concluding with a tender moment between Elio and his mother as he picks peaches.
In the attic of the Perlman villa, Elio reflects on his intimate moment with Marzia while distracted by the summer sky and peaches. Engaging in a sexual act with a peach, he grapples with feelings of absurdity and shame before falling asleep. Oliver discovers him, leading to a playful yet intimate exchange where Oliver teases Elio about his actions. This moment of vulnerability culminates in a kiss, solidifying their emotional connection and commitment to each other.
At the Perlman villa, Elio and Oliver share an intimate conversation in the garden, grappling with their feelings and the pain of impending separation as Oliver prepares to return to the States. Elio expresses his anxiety and regrets about their time together, while Oliver reassures him of their bond. Meanwhile, Mafalda irons in the background, symbolizing domesticity, and Anchise works in a hut, contrasting the emotional turmoil of the young lovers. The Perlman parents, Perlman and Annella, listen to the conversation, acknowledging the depth of their son's relationship with Oliver. The scene is filled with a melancholic tone, highlighting longing and unspoken emotions amidst the warm light of the villa.
In this poignant scene, Elio dons Oliver's blue shirt, symbolizing his growing affection. At breakfast, he tenderly cracks an egg for Oliver, while their connection deepens with a subtle foot touch under the table. Elio faces tension with Marzia, who confronts him about his feelings, leaving her hurt and him speechless. By the pool, Elio expresses regret for Marzia's feelings, yet shares an intimate moment with Oliver. Perlman and Annella discuss Oliver's upcoming trip, adding humor that contrasts with Elio's emotional turmoil, highlighting the complexities of young love.
At dusk in front of the War World I Memorial in Pandino, Oliver and Elio, still in their swimsuits, share a playful yet intimate moment as they attempt to embrace the large monument. Their fingertips almost touch, but when Oliver leans in for a kiss, Elio pushes him away, insisting it's not the right place for such intimacy. They leave the memorial together on their bikes, observed by a young couple nearby, reflecting the innocence and complexity of young love.
Elio and Oliver share a playful and intimate moment in their hotel room before venturing into the lively streets of Bergamo. As they stumble through the night, their romantic connection is tested when Oliver kisses Elio but is distracted by a distant melody. At a small square, Oliver engages with a group of New Romantics, expressing his admiration for the band Psychedelic Furs, while Elio feels increasingly out of place. The scene culminates in Elio's unexpected vomiting, highlighting his discomfort amidst the carefree atmosphere.
In this emotionally charged scene, Oliver comforts Elio after a bout of vomiting, leading to a passionate kiss that defies the judgment of onlookers. Their intimacy deepens in the hotel room, but the mood shifts as Oliver prepares to leave for Rome. At the train station, he sings a heartfelt song that encapsulates their feelings, leaving Elio visibly affected as the train departs. Alone on the platform, Elio grapples with the pain of separation before calling his mother for a ride home.
Elio is driven back to the villa by Anella, visibly upset and crying over Oliver's departure. In the parked car, he encounters Marzia, who expresses her love and reassures him, leading to a heartfelt moment where they agree to remain friends. Upon returning to the villa, Elio briefly interacts with Anchise, who shares his sadness about Oliver, but Elio chooses to avoid further discussion, highlighting his emotional struggle with loss.
Elio confronts his anger upon learning from Mafalda that his room has been restored, leading him to reflect on his cherished memories with Oliver in the latter's former room. A heartfelt conversation with his father, Professor Perlman, follows, where they discuss the significance of Elio's relationship with Oliver and the importance of embracing emotions. Perlman shares his own regrets, fostering a deep understanding between father and son as they navigate themes of love, loss, and the passage of time.
Six months after their summer together, Elio wanders the foggy countryside, reflecting on his deep connection with Oliver. Upon returning to the Perlman villa, he receives a phone call from Oliver, who shares news of his potential marriage, leaving Elio feeling a mix of longing and sadness. As they discuss their feelings and the awareness of Elio's parents regarding their relationship, the scene shifts to the Perlman family evaluating new scholar applications, which Elio finds uninteresting. The emotional tension culminates as Elio prepares for a celebration dinner, lost in thought, before the scene fades to black.

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8.50

What's Working

Emotional Impact 8.7

The emotional climax between Elio and Oliver, particularly their intimate moments, effectively captures the essence of first love and longing, resonat...

Premise 8.6

The exploration of Elio's internal struggles and emotional growth is compelling, setting up a rich narrative that resonates with audiences.

Where to Focus

Characters 8

The lack of a clear antagonist or opposing force diminishes the tension and stakes in the story, which could be addressed to enhance character engagem...

Theme 8.4

Some themes, such as the impact of societal expectations on personal identity, could be more explicitly addressed to enhance clarity.

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Characters

8.0

The screenplay effectively develops its characters, particularly Elio and Oliver, showcasing their emotional journeys an...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively develops its characters, particularly Elio and Oliver, showcasing their emotional journeys and complex relationships. However, there are opportunities to enhance the depth of secondary characters and their interactions to further enrich the narrative.

Key Strengths

Elio's emotional journey from confusion to acceptance of his feelings for Oliver is compelling and relatable, showcasing the complexities of first love.
Oliver's transformation from a distant figure to someone who embraces his emotions adds depth to his character and enhances the narrative's emotional impact.

Areas to Improve

The lack of a clear antagonist or opposing force diminishes the tension and stakes in the story, which could be addressed to enhance character engagement.

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Premise

8.6

The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling premise centered around the complex emotional journey of Elio and Ol...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling premise centered around the complex emotional journey of Elio and Oliver, exploring themes of love, identity, and the bittersweet nature of first love. However, enhancing the clarity of character motivations and refining the emotional stakes could further engage the audience.

Key Strengths

The exploration of Elio's internal struggles and emotional growth is compelling, setting up a rich narrative that resonates with audiences.

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Structure

8.1

The screenplay effectively captures the emotional depth and complexity of Elio and Oliver's relationship, utilizing a st...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively captures the emotional depth and complexity of Elio and Oliver's relationship, utilizing a strong narrative structure that unfolds gradually to maintain audience engagement. However, there are areas where pacing could be refined, particularly in the middle sections, to enhance dramatic tension and character development.

Key Strengths

The emotional depth of Elio and Oliver's relationship is effectively portrayed, particularly in scenes where they confront their feelings for each other.

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Theme

8.4

The screenplay effectively conveys themes of love, identity, and the complexities of human relationships, particularly t...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively conveys themes of love, identity, and the complexities of human relationships, particularly through the lens of a summer romance. The emotional depth and character arcs resonate well with the audience, though there are opportunities to refine the clarity and integration of certain themes to enhance overall impact.

Key Strengths

The exploration of first love and the complexities of desire is portrayed with emotional depth, particularly through Elio's internal struggles and growth.

Areas to Improve

Some themes, such as the impact of societal expectations on personal identity, could be more explicitly addressed to enhance clarity.

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Visual Impact

7.6

The screenplay effectively captures the emotional depth and complexity of its characters through vivid and evocative vis...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively captures the emotional depth and complexity of its characters through vivid and evocative visual imagery. The descriptions of settings, interactions, and emotional moments create a rich tapestry that enhances the storytelling. However, there are opportunities to further enhance the visual storytelling by incorporating more dynamic imagery and symbolism.

Key Strengths

The vivid descriptions of the Italian countryside and the Perlman villa create a strong sense of place, enhancing the emotional landscape of the story. Scenes like the fruit orchard and the river are particularly evocative, immersing the reader in the beauty of the setting.

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Emotional Impact

8.7

The screenplay effectively elicits deep emotional responses through its rich character development and poignant storytel...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively elicits deep emotional responses through its rich character development and poignant storytelling. The complex relationships, particularly between Elio and Oliver, create a compelling emotional journey that resonates with the audience. However, there are opportunities to enhance emotional depth by further exploring the characters' internal conflicts and the consequences of their actions.

Key Strengths

The emotional climax between Elio and Oliver, particularly their intimate moments, effectively captures the essence of first love and longing, resonating deeply with the audience.

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Conflict

7.4

The screenplay effectively presents the internal and external conflicts faced by Elio and Oliver, particularly in the co...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively presents the internal and external conflicts faced by Elio and Oliver, particularly in the context of first love and self-discovery. However, there are opportunities to enhance narrative tension by deepening the stakes associated with their relationship and the consequences of their choices. The emotional stakes could be elevated through more pronounced external pressures and clearer consequences for their actions.

Key Strengths

The emotional depth of Elio's internal conflict regarding his feelings for Oliver is a significant strength, particularly in scenes where he grapples with jealousy and longing.

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Originality

8.6

The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' showcases a profound exploration of love and identity through its unique character...

Analysis: The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' showcases a profound exploration of love and identity through its unique characters and evocative setting. Its originality lies in the nuanced portrayal of a summer romance that transcends cultural boundaries, while its creative execution employs rich dialogue and sensory imagery to immerse the audience in the emotional landscape of the characters.

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Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The screenplay boasts a strong foundation in its exploration of a complex, passionate relationship between two young men. The setting of the Italian villa provides a rich backdrop for the unfolding romance, enhancing the emotional depth of the story. The character development, particularly of Elio, is compelling; his internal struggles are palpable, making him a sympathetic and relatable protagonist. The incorporation of intellectual discussions and cultural details adds layers of depth and sophistication, enriching the overall narrative. However, the pacing sometimes feels uneven, with certain plot points lingering longer than necessary while others feel underdeveloped. The narrative occasionally loses focus, straying from the central relationship's progression. The subplot with Marzia, while adding complexity, sometimes detracts from the core emotional trajectory of Elio and Oliver's dynamic. The ending, while poignant, might benefit from a more conclusive resolution.

Suggestions:

Streamline the narrative, focusing more intensely on the central relationship between Elio and Oliver while subtly reducing the subplots.
Introduce a clear overarching conflict that drives the plot forward, perhaps related to external pressures or internal struggles within the relationship.
Develop a stronger sense of rising stakes, intensifying the emotional tension as the story progresses towards its climax.
Explore Oliver's character more deeply, providing greater insight into his motivations and internal conflicts.
Re-evaluate the ending to ensure a more satisfying conclusion, perhaps offering a more definitive resolution to the central relationship.

Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here

Beginning The opening scenes effectively establish the setting and introduce the key characters. The initial tension between Elio and Oliver is intriguing, immediately creating a sense of anticipation. The use of French adds a subtle layer of sophistication and complexity to the dialogue. However, the introduction feels somewhat slow, lacking a compelling hook that immediately grabs the audience's attention. The early scenes also lack a clear inciting incident that sets the story's central conflict in motion. While the introduction of the characters is adequate, there’s a lack of immediate understanding of their motivations and the stakes involved in their relationship.

Suggestions:

Begin the story with a more dramatic or emotionally charged scene to immediately engage the audience.
Introduce a clear inciting incident early on to establish the central conflict.
Develop the initial tension between Elio and Oliver more explicitly, making their conflict more immediate and understandable.
Provide more backstory for the characters, particularly Oliver, to provide the audience with a clearer understanding of their motivations.

Middle The middle section effectively develops the relationship between Elio and Oliver, showcasing both the intimacy and the tension between them. The incorporation of various social events and settings adds dynamism to the narrative. The intellectual conversations and cultural details add layers of complexity and richness. However, the pacing feels uneven in the middle; certain scenes drag while others feel rushed. The introduction of subplots, like Elio's relationship with Marzia, sometimes feels jarring and distracts from the central focus on Elio and Oliver. The narrative could benefit from a stronger sense of dramatic arc, with clearer rising action leading to a well-defined climax.

Suggestions:

Streamline the subplots, focusing more on their impact on the central relationship rather than on their own independent developments.
Create a more defined dramatic arc, with clearer rising action and a more impactful climax.
Develop the emotional tension between Elio and Oliver more consistently, ensuring a gradual build-up towards the climax.
Ensure a smoother integration of subplots, connecting them more directly to the central relationship's progression.

Ending The ending is poignant and bittersweet, reflecting the complexities of the relationship. The final scenes effectively capture the emotional weight of separation and the lingering feelings between Elio and Oliver. The phone call between Elio and Oliver provides a satisfying sense of closure. However, the ending might feel somewhat abrupt for some viewers. The resolution of Elio's relationship with Marzia feels somewhat underdeveloped. The final scenes showing the family at the villa feel somewhat inconsequential to the emotional journey of Elio and Oliver, and the final image might lack the symbolic weight necessary for a strong emotional conclusion.

Suggestions:

Extend the final scenes between Elio and Oliver, giving more emotional weight to their farewell.
Provide a more conclusive resolution to Elio's relationship with Marzia.
Create a more powerful and symbolic final image that encapsulates the themes of the story.
Consider adding a brief epilogue that hints at the characters' futures, offering a sense of lasting impact.

CharacterInconsistencies

Character Oliver
Description The narrator's description of Oliver having three personalities based on his swimsuit color feels contrived and undermines Oliver's character development. It's a simplistic device to explain shifts in his behavior that could be better achieved through nuanced writing and consistent character portrayal.
( Scene 27 )
Character Elio
Description Elio's actions in Scene 53 (sniffing and licking Oliver's discarded underwear) are jarring and feel out of character. While the film aims for realism, this action borders on obsessive and detracts from Elio's otherwise nuanced portrayal. A more subtle approach would be more effective in conveying Elio's longing.
( Scene 53 )
Character Elio
Description Elio's masturbation with a peach in the attic is a shocking and arguably gratuitous scene that disrupts the film's overall tone. While exploring themes of sexuality and self-discovery, this specific act seems excessive and potentially detracts from the emotional impact of the story.
( Scene 116 )

StoryInconsistencies

Description The narration in Sequence 9 and 17 repeats the explanation of the Perlmans' summer guest program. This information is crucial early on, but repeating it later feels redundant and slows down the narrative.
( Scene 9 Scene 17 )
Description The narrator's sudden intrusion to explain the Professor's guest program disrupts the natural flow of the scene. This information could be integrated more subtly through dialogue or action.
( Scene 11 )

PlotHoles

DialogueAuthenticity

Description The dialogue feels slightly stilted in Sequence 10, particularly Oliver's overly formal language ("I know myself") in the context of a relaxed breakfast setting. The dialogue aims to create a certain dynamic, but it could be more natural.
( Scene 10 )
Description The extended dialogue between Elio and Marzia in French, while adding depth, might feel slightly verbose and less natural in its rhythm than other conversations in the film. Some streamlining could enhance pacing and realism.
( Scene 83 )

Redundancies

Element Repeated emphasis on the soft-boiled egg scene
( Scene 10 Scene 36 Scene 68 )
Suggestion The recurring soft-boiled egg motif, used to illustrate Oliver's integration into the family and Elio's contrasting skill, could be streamlined. Perhaps focusing on one key scene would enhance its impact.
Element Multiple instances of language switching
( Scene 1 Scene 21 )
Suggestion While the multilingual aspect is a feature of the film, the constant switching could be slightly more concise to avoid jarring the reader/viewer. Consider subtle shifts, instead of abrupt changes, between languages.

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Elio - Score: 93/100

Role

Protagonist

Personality

MBTI: INFP
Enneagram: Type 4 - The Individualist

Scenes

Strongest: #34
Weakest: #19

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 9/10

Elio is an introspective teenager grappling with complex emotions.

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Elio's emotional complexities revolve around desire, fear of rejection, and vulnerability.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 9/10

Elio grows from a self-conscious teenager to a young man defined by a profound love experience.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Elio’s dialogue is marked by introspection, uncertainty, and emotional depth.

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Elio’s choices reflect a deep conflict between desire and fear of vulnerability.

Relationship Dynamics 10/10

Elio's relationships reveal his depth while showcasing his internal struggles with love.

Scene Impact 10/10

Elio's presence often sparks emotional tension and drives the narrative forward.

Role Fulfillment 10/10

Elio fulfills the role of a dynamic protagonist navigating love and self-discovery.

Thematic Plot Integration 10/10

Elio's journey interweaves personal growth with larger themes of love and loss.

Emotional Resonance 10/10

Elio's emotional journey resonates powerfully with the audience.

Foundational Definition

Score: 9

Elio is a 17-year-old boy living in Italy during the summer of 1983. His background is one rooted in a semi-intellectual family, given his father is a professor. He possesses a deep love for music and literature, which shapes his worldview as someone who experiences emotions intensely but struggles to express them. This foundational element drives much of his curiosity and desire for connection, particularly with Oliver, who symbolizes both attraction and the complexity of young, uncharted love.

Values And Beliefs: Music, literature, love, yearning for connection, exploration of identity.

Strengths And Skills: Musical talent, intellectual curiosity, emotional depth.

Suggestions

Explore Elio's character through scenes that highlight his relationship with music.
Further develop his emotional vulnerability in dialogues with Oliver.

Follow-up Questions

How does Elio's relationship with his parents influence his emotional struggles?
What role does music play in shaping his identity throughout the story?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 8

Elio bears the internal conflict of youthful desire that clashes with his fear of vulnerability. His emotional wound stems from the fear of rejection and not being understood, particularly in relation to Oliver. He also struggles with societal expectations regarding masculinity and love, causing him to oscillate between joy and pain.

Character Wound: Fear of unreciprocated love and emotional isolation.

Character Flaws: Insecurity, self-doubt, difficulty communicating feelings.

Suggestions

Include additional inner-monologues that showcase Elio's fears and aspirations.
Develop interactions with Marzia to explore his emotional fluctuations.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio’s internal conflicts manifest in his interactions with Oliver?
What past experiences might have contributed to his emotional wounds?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 9

Throughout the story, Elio undergoes a significant transformation, evolving through his experiences with love and loss. His character shifts from being an insecure youth to someone deeply aware of his emotions, catalyzed by his relationship with Oliver. The end symbolizes a poignant moment of realization that love can be fleeting yet deeply impactful.

Polarity Changes: Elio experiences joy in new love juxtaposed with profound sadness when faced with separation.

Transformation Triggers: His relationship with Oliver sparks both transformation and emotional turmoil.

Suggestions

Emphasize key moments that signify Elio’s emotional growth.
Use visual motifs to represent his journey alongside Oliver.

Follow-up Questions

What specific moments mark the turning points in Elio’s character progression?
How does Elio’s perception of love change from the beginning to the end of the screenplay?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Elio's dialogue carries a poetic quality, intertwined with anxiety and longing. His speech often features literary references and a tendency to overthink conversations, which emphasizes his intellectual side while exposing his vulnerabilities. This dynamic creates a compelling contrast between his eloquence and emotional wavering.

Unique Voice: Elio’s speech often reflects his artistic interests and emotional turbulence, using a mix of Italian, French, and English that embodies his multicultural background.

Suggestions

Further diversify Elio's expressions to include more non-verbal cues.
Highlight his literary influences in dialogues to deepen his character portrayal.

Follow-up Questions

How does Elio use language to mask his true feelings?
In what ways does his choice of words influence his relationship with Oliver?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 9

Elio’s behavior is often reactive, influenced heavily by his emotions. Throughout the screenplay, his decisions—from connecting with Marzia to pursuing a more intimate relationship with Oliver—highlight his internal conflicts. His choices often showcase a pattern of hesitance followed by boldness as he explores his identity and desires.

Motivations: His motivations revolve around the desire for connection and the complexities of first love.

Desires Vs Needs: Externally, Elio desires acceptance and love from Oliver; internally, he needs to reconcile his feelings and fears of heartbreak.

Suggestions

Strengthen the representation of Elio's dilemmas through more ambiguous choices.
Include moments where Elio challenges his own fears in decisive actions.

Follow-up Questions

What key decisions most significantly affect Elio’s character development?
How might Elio behave differently if he were more confident in his feelings?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 10

Elio's bond with his parents is both supportive and complex, characterized by open dialogues about emotions. His romantic connections with both Marzia and Oliver illustrate his emotional landscape—marked by confusion, longing, and the exploration of intimacy. Each relationship unveils facets of his character, highlighting his growth.

Suggestions

Develop the dynamics with supporting characters to enrich Elio's narrative.
Explore more nuances in Elio's relationship with Marzia post-Oliver.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio's relationships with others serve as catalysts for his growth?
In what ways do Elio's interactions with his family influence his connections with others?

Scene Impact

Score: 10

Elio's actions and choices create significant ripple effects in each scene. Whether it’s through his romantic connections or personal struggles, his character introduces conflict, clarifies emotional stakes, and enriches the emotional tone. His interactions with Oliver serve as the emotional core of the screenplay, deeply influencing the story's trajectory.

Suggestions

Maximize emotional stakes in scenes by showcasing Elio's internal conflict visually.
Use Elio’s decisions to pivot scene directions and outcomes more distinctly.

Follow-up Questions

In what scenes does Elio's emotional presence feel most pronounced?
How does Elio’s influence shift the dynamics of ensemble scenes?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 10

As the protagonist, Elio’s character arc is pivotal, showcasing his transformation amid the exploration of love, identity, and vulnerability. His interactions and decisions shape the narrative, allowing him to be relatable and deeply human. Elio’s role encapsulates the themes of desire, awakening, and loss that permeate the screenplay.

Symbolic Role: Elio represents the journey of first love and the complexities it entails, embodying both innocence and emotional depth.

Suggestions

Emphasize Elio’s internal conflict in critical scenes to strengthen symbolic motifs.
Utilize contrasting moments to highlight his growth and role as a protagonist.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio’s relationships contribute to his role in the narrative?
What symbolic themes could be further highlighted through Elio's character?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 10

Elio’s story arc illustrates significant themes of love, yearning, adolescence, and the bittersweet nature of memories. His experiences with Oliver serve as a microcosm of the universal exploration of first love—exceptional yet fleeting. Elio’s evolution mirrors the narrative's foundational themes, connecting personal growth with relatable existential questions.

Suggestions

Draw stronger parallels between Elio’s emotional experiences and the overarching themes.
Incorporate visual symbols that enhance thematic expression related to Elio’s growth.

Follow-up Questions

What are the central themes that Elio's journey emphasizes throughout the screenplay?
How could Elio's encounters with other characters further reinforce the story's themes?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 10

Elio's character resonates with audiences through his intense emotional exploration. His journey evokes a spectrum of feelings, from joy to heartbreak, creating a relatable narrative. The impact of his relationships and personal dilemmas invites viewers to reflect on their experiences of love and loss, amplifying the emotional stakes tied to his character.

Emotional Impact: Elio evokes profound empathy and nostalgia, representing the essence of young love.

Suggestions

Create additional layers of emotional depth by expanding Elio’s reflective moments.
Highlight pivotal emotional scenes to guide audience engagement.

Follow-up Questions

What specific scenes create the strongest emotional responses regarding Elio?
How can Elio’s present emotional state be contrasted with future reflections?

Personality Types

MBTI: infp

Elio's idealism, deep emotions, and introspective nature align with the traits of an INFP.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: intp (15%)

Suggestions

Consider Elio’s intuitive insights for character development and dialogue.
Integrate external conflicts against his idealistic nature for deeper narrative tension.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio’s traits as an INFP manifest in his relationships?
What internal struggles does he face that align with the INFP type?

Enneagram: type 4 - the individualist

Elio’s emotional depth, longing for uniqueness, and personal expression are characteristic of Enneagram Type 4.

Confidence: 90%

Possible Alternative Type: type 5 - the investigator (10%)

Suggestions

Explore the complexity of Elio’s Type 4 traits in his resolve for authenticity.
Focus on his need for connection and understanding in his deepest relationships.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio’s Type 4 characteristics influence his decisions throughout the narrative?
What fears or desires drive his Type 4 behaviors?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (34)

The scene where Elio and Oliver express their feelings for each other in a passionate kiss.

Why: This moment encapsulates the climax of their relationship and showcases Elio's emotional depth.

Weakest Scene (19)

Elio struggles during the volleyball match, feeling sidelined and overshadowed.

Why: This scene showcases his insecurities and reflects his fear of Oliver's attention being diverted.

Suggestions:

Enhance his emotional turmoil by emphasizing his thoughts during this scene.
Create a stronger visual contrast between Elio and Oliver’s interactions.

Oliver - Score: 88/100

Role

Protagonist

Personality

MBTI: ENFP
Enneagram: Type 4 (Individualist)

Scenes

Strongest: #105
Weakest: #6

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

American intern with charm and complexity.

Complexity And Depth 9/10

Emotionally conflicted character with depth.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 8/10

Oliver’s journey of growth and vulnerability.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Distinctive voice that balances charm and uncertainty.

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Decisions driven by fear of emotional attachment.

Relationship Dynamics 9/10

Complex interplay of desire, fear, and emotional connection.

Scene Impact 9/10

Significant presence that drives emotional conflict.

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Embodiment of romantic longing and emotional complexity.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Interweaving themes of love, identity, and self-discovery.

Emotional Resonance 10/10

Elicits deep emotional responses, forming strong audience bonds.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Oliver is a 25-year-old American graduate student who arrives at the Perlman villa for a six-week summer internship. He embodies a blend of charm, intellect, and a somewhat aloof attitude that makes him both appealing and intimidating to others, particularly to Elio. His early interactions show a mix of confidence and shyness, indicative of his struggle to navigate his own desires amidst the expectations of those around him. This duality sets the stage for his overall character arc and relationships throughout the narrative.

Values And Beliefs: Independence, love with no strings attached, spontaneity.

Strengths And Skills: Charismatic, quick-witted, knowledgeable about literature and philosophy.

Suggestions

Explore Oliver's background further to understand the roots of his charm and confidence.
Delve deeper into his academic aspirations to provide more context to his character.

Follow-up Questions

What personal events shaped Oliver into the character we see at the villa?
How does Oliver's academic background influence his attitude towards relationships?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 9

Oliver grapples with emotional complexity, particularly in his relationship with Elio. Despite his confident demeanor, he reveals vulnerability and confusion regarding his feelings and desires, especially when confronted with societal pressures. His reluctance to fully commit or display emotional depth stems from a fear of intimacy and the consequences that arise from it. This internal conflict tightens the emotional stakes of his relationships, especially with Elio, who represents both an attraction and a source of anxiety for him.

Character Wound: Fear of vulnerability and intimacy.

Character Flaws: Aloofness, emotional detachment, avoidance of commitments.

Suggestions

Create scenes where Oliver faces situations that challenge his emotional detachment.
Introduce a moment where Oliver reflects deeply on his feelings to show his internal struggle.

Follow-up Questions

How do Oliver's past relationships inform his current behaviors?
What does Oliver fear losing if he truly opens up to Elio?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 8

Throughout the screenplay, Oliver transitions from a more guarded character to one willing to embrace vulnerability and intimacy. Early on, he approaches relationships with a detached charm but gradually allows himself to engage on a deeper emotional level through his bond with Elio. His willingness to act on his desires, despite the fear of repercussions, signifies a significant shift in his character, highlighting a theme of love versus fear.

Polarity Changes: Development of deeper emotional connections with Elio; avoidance to acceptance of feelings.

Transformation Triggers: Key conversations with Elio that challenge his emotional walls.

Suggestions

Enhance his character arc by incorporating moments of hesitation mixed with impulsive decisions.
Add more conversations where Oliver's emotional state is revealed in contrast to his outward demeanor.

Follow-up Questions

What specific events cause Oliver to start expressing his emotions?
How does he reconcile his feelings for Elio with his fear of commitment?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Oliver’s dialogue reflects a blend of charm and intellect with a touch of humor that masks his insecurities. His ability to engage in deep philosophical discussions reveals a scholarly side, yet his flirtatious banter with Elio displays a playful confidence. His voice evolves as he allows more emotion to seep into his words, creating a richer tapestry of expression that denotes his changing relationship with Elio.

Unique Voice: Humorous, intellectual, occasionally evasive.

Suggestions

Incorporate more philosophical discussions that reveal the character's inner conflicts and thoughts.
Show changes in Oliver’s tone as he becomes more comfortable with his feelings for Elio.

Follow-up Questions

What are some past conversations that reflect Oliver's evolving feelings?
How does his tone change when he interacts with different characters?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 9

Throughout the screenplay, Oliver often grapples with his motivations, leading to choices that both engage and distance him from others. His initial attitude towards relationships is one of detachment, preferring to maintain distance due to fears of commitment. Yet, as he grows closer to Elio, he faces situations where his choices directly impact his emotional wellbeing. This dichotomy creates tension that propels the narrative forward.

Motivations: Desire for connection versus fear of vulnerability.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires casual relationships while needing deeper emotional connections.

Suggestions

Show more internal dialogue that reveals Oliver's real-time conflict when making decisions.
Create moments where Oliver chooses to confront situations instead of sidestepping them.

Follow-up Questions

What pivotal moments lead Oliver to take risks with his emotions?
How do his choices impact his relationship with Elio in the long run?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 9

Oliver’s relationships, particularly with Elio, are the heart of the story. His dynamic with Elio is marked by an initial spark that gives way to emotional tension as they try to navigate their feelings together. Oliver’s hesitance speaks volumes of his deeper fears, and each interaction illuminates the push and pull between desire and fear of vulnerability. This relationship serves to establish the emotional core of the narrative, making it both compelling and relatable.

Suggestions

Highlight moments of tension in Oliver and Elio's interactions to portray his conflicting emotions.
Incorporate reactions from other characters that reflect their perspectives on Oliver’s actions.

Follow-up Questions

How do Oliver's existing relationships influence his bond with Elio?
What aspects of their connection do you think push Oliver towards greater vulnerability?

Scene Impact

Score: 9

Oliver’s presence in scenes is often palpable, introducing conflict and a charged atmosphere. His interactions with Elio elicit a spectrum of emotions, from excitement to anxiety. Whether in quiet moments of intimacy or charged exchanges, he plays a significant role in steering the emotional tone of each scene. This impact is heightened by his evolution, shifting from a charming yet distant figure to one of emotional openness as the narrative unfolds.

Suggestions

Adjust scenes where Oliver must face the consequences of his decisions to maximize emotional stakes.
Introduce moments that juxtapose his earlier behavior with his current openness to deepen scene impact.

Follow-up Questions

In which scenes does Oliver's emotional presence most strongly alter the mood?
How would the scenes differ if Oliver were written with a different emotional state?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 9

As the central romantic figure, Oliver embodies both desire and complexity in the narrative. His role underscores themes of love, longing, and the challenge of vulnerability. His journey symbolizes the highs and lows of a summer romance, serving as both a catalyst for Elio’s growth and a reflection of the struggles inherent in personal connection. His presence enriches the plot significantly, making his narrative arc key to the overall story.

Symbolic Role: The romantic interest representing desire and hindrance.

Suggestions

Employ symbolic motifs aligned with Oliver’s emotional state to enhance his narrative significance.
Subvert the expectations surrounding his character type to deepen his role.

Follow-up Questions

How does Oliver's character challenge or conform to typical romantic tropes?
What lessons from Oliver's role do you think resonate most deeply with the audience?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

Oliver’s journey integrates seamlessly with the screenplay’s broader themes of love, identity, and the complexity of human connection. His character embodies the tension between societal expectations and personal desires, echoing the narrative’s exploration of what it means to love deeply and authentically. His decisions and transformations amplify the story's key themes, effectively driving the plot forward while revealing character depth and vulnerability.

Suggestions

Embellish scenes that juxtapose Oliver’s inner conflict with the overarching themes to deepen thematic resonance.
Draw connections between Oliver’s experiences and societal expectations to enhance thematic engagement.

Follow-up Questions

In what ways do you think Oliver’s experiences challenge societal norms?
How does Oliver’s character journey reflect or counter the overarching themes of the screenplay?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 10

Oliver creates a complex emotional response in the audience, evoking sympathy, tension, and moments of profound longing. His journey alongside Elio resonates deeply with viewers, making the fleeting nature of their summer romance feel significant and heartbreaking. The emotional beats tied to Oliver, especially in moments of vulnerability and connection, serve to engage the audience thoroughly and amplify the thematic weight of the narrative.

Emotional Impact: Profound attachment and longing; emotional tension and release.

Suggestions

Highlight subtle moments of vulnerability in Oliver to deepen audience connection.
Craft scenes that emphasize the fleeting yet impactful nature of Oliver's bond with Elio.

Follow-up Questions

What specific moments in Oliver's journey do you find most emotionally impactful?
How does Oliver’s emotional journey differ from or complement Elio’s?

Personality Types

MBTI: enfp

Oliver exhibits characteristics associated with ENFPs, including charm, enthusiasm for new experiences, and emotional depth.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: infj (75%)

Suggestions

Highlight his extroverted qualities more prominently in social interactions.
Explore moments of introspection that could reveal a thoughtful side.

Follow-up Questions

How do Oliver's unvoiced thoughts contrast with his outward persona?
In which scenes does his extroversion clash with any underlying insecurities?

Enneagram: type 4 (individualist)

As a character in search of authenticity and identity, Oliver exemplifies traits of the Type 4, often feeling different or misunderstood.

Confidence: 70%

Possible Alternative Type: type 3 (achiever) (60%)

Suggestions

Create scenarios that explore his sense of individuality deeply.
Show how his desire for authenticity might clash with societal expectations.

Follow-up Questions

In what ways does Oliver express his individuality throughout the story?
How does his perceived uniqueness impact his relationships with others?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (105)

The intimate scene in Oliver's room where they share their first kiss, marking a turning point in their relationship.

Why: This scene illustrates Oliver's emotional vulnerability juxtaposed against his initial aloof behavior, showcasing character development.

Weakest Scene (6)

In the breakfast scene, Oliver appears detached and nonchalant, impacting his interactions with Elio.

Why: This moment does not showcase Oliver's charm or complexity, which are vital for audience engagement.

Suggestions:

Add elements that show Oliver's growing connection to Elio, even in mundane scenes like breakfast.
Incorporate more playful banter that reveals emotional undercurrents.

Perlman - Score: 78/100

Role

Mentor

Personality

MBTI: INFJ
Enneagram: Type 2 (The Helper)

Scenes

Strongest: #141
Weakest: #12

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Warm and nurturing mentor, guiding his family and guests.

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Hiding emotional scars beneath mentorship, exemplifying internal conflict.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 6/10

Maintains stability but encourages growth in others without significantly changing himself.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Intellectual and compassionate, with a tone that emphasizes teaching and wisdom.

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Acts as a steady presence, guiding through wisdom rather than strictness.

Relationship Dynamics 8/10

Caring father-son relationship, but also a mentor to Oliver.

Scene Impact 8/10

A stabilizing force during pivotal emotional scenes.

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Guiding mentor fulfilling the role of both father and educator.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Integral to the exploration of love, knowledge, and generational gaps.

Emotional Resonance 8/10

Evokes feelings of empathy and admiration.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Professor Perlman is a distinguished academic who embodies values of knowledge, culture, and open-mindedness. His role as the head of the household makes him a guiding figure for Elio and Oliver, establishing a nurturing environment filled with intellectual curiosity. Perlman’s character is crucial as he balances the academic pressures of his guest, Oliver, with familial warmth, which allows for the exploration of deeper themes such as acceptance and love.

Values And Beliefs: Knowledge, cultural appreciation, familial love.

Strengths And Skills: Exceptional educator, supportive father, emotionally intelligent.

Suggestions

Highlight more of Perlman's backstory to deepen his influence on Elio.
Show Perlman discussing personal losses or triumphs to enrich his character depth.

Follow-up Questions

What specific experiences led Perlman to value knowledge so deeply?
How does Perlman's relationship with Oliver shape Elio's view of love?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Perlman may appear confident and wise, but his character holds deeper emotional layers that hint at his own missed chances at love during his youth. This internal conflict emphasizes the importance of allowing his son to express his feelings freely, reflecting his own life's lessons.

Character Wound: Missed opportunities for love in his own youth.

Character Flaws: May be overly protective or unintentionally intrusive.

Suggestions

Integrate moments where Perlman's past influences his parenting style.
Show his vulnerabilities more explicitly in conversations with Elio.

Follow-up Questions

What regrets does Perlman have regarding his youthful love?
How does his experience affect his ability to guide Elio and Oliver?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 6

Throughout the story, Perlman remains consistent as a supportive father and mentor, yet the experiences of Elio and Oliver push him to reflect on his own past, making his character a reassuring presence despite the nuanced emotional landscape around him.

Polarity Changes: Perlman navigates from being a distanced observer to an engaged mentor.

Transformation Triggers: Elio's experiences and feelings draw Perlman out, prompting him to share wisdom.

Suggestions

Explore significant events that cause Perlman to reflect on his own choices.
Show more interaction with Elio that highlights moments of growth for both.

Follow-up Questions

What specific interactions with Elio influence Perlman's perspective on youth and love?
Are there moments where Perlman regrets potentially limiting his son's experiences?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Perlman's dialogue often serves dual purposes: to educate and to provide emotional support. His conversations with Elio are laced with reflections that resonate with the broader themes of the screenplay, and his voice establishes a contrast with younger, more impulsive characters.

Unique Voice: Articulate and thoughtful, often conveying deeper ideas about life and love.

Suggestions

Enhance Perlman's dialogues to reveal more of his emotional history.
Incorporate more informal moments to show his warmth outside of academia.

Follow-up Questions

What tone does Perlman adopt when discussing sensitive topics like love and loss?
How does Perlman's interaction style change during moments of emotional tension?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 7

Perlman's actions stem from a deep-seated desire to protect his family while encouraging Elio to seek his own path. However, he occasionally struggles with how much to intervene, which reflects his caring yet overprotective nature.

Motivations: Support his family and foster a nurturing environment.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires to teach and guide, but needs to release control over his son’s emotional journey.

Suggestions

Add scenes showcasing moments where Perlman must balance teaching with letting go.
Show how Perlman reacts to Oliver's influence on Elio more vividly.

Follow-up Questions

What situations cause Perlman to second-guess his protective instincts?
How does Perlman respond to moments of resistance from Elio?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 8

Perlman’s relationships with Elio and Oliver provide rich ground for exploring themes of mentorship, familial bonds, and the complexity of love. His dynamic with Elio is built on trust and guidance, while with Oliver, he embodies professional admiration that underscores character connection.

Suggestions

Flesh out Perlman's interactions with Oliver to amplify mentorship themes.
Include more reflective moments between Perlman and Elio that delve into father-son dynamics.

Follow-up Questions

How does Perlman's relationship with Oliver impact Elio's feelings towards both his father and Oliver?
Are there instances where Perlman recognizes the love developing between Elio and Oliver?

Scene Impact

Score: 8

Perlman's presence serves as a grounding influence, offering wisdom and emotional insight during critical moments in the storyline. His interactions often create space for other characters to explore their tensions and fears.

Suggestions

Maximize Perlman's tension-release moments to enhance emotional stakes in scenes.
Use Perlman's actions to juxtapose younger characters' decisions more poignantly.

Follow-up Questions

How does Perlman’s involvement change the emotional trajectory of key scenes?
What would happen in pivotal moments without Perlman's influence nearby?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 9

Perlman effectively fulfills the role of mentor throughout the screenplay, embodying the archetype of the wise elder who facilitates the growth of the younger capable folk, primarily through his teachings and emotional support.

Symbolic Role: Symbol of generational wisdom and experience.

Suggestions

Emphasize Perlman's guiding nature in speeches to Elio that reinforce his symbolic role.
Include more dynamic interactions with other characters for a richer portrayal of his archetypal role.

Follow-up Questions

In what ways does Perlman subvert typical mentor roles in narratives?
Could Perlman's wisdom also present flaws that challenge his mentor status?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

Perlman's character arc intertwines with central themes of love and acceptance, highlighting the contrasts between youth and experience. His guidance shapes Elio's understanding of love, inevitably affecting his choices and growth.

Suggestions

Clarify Perlman's influences on Elio's understanding of love in pivotal moments.
Strengthen connections between Perlman's lessons and Elio's choices.

Follow-up Questions

How does Perlman's mentorship mirror or contrast with the primary love story?
What do Perlman's philosophies reveal about the overarching narrative themes?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 8

Perlman’s character engages audiences significantly through his blend of wisdom, emotional support, and undeniable humanity. His relationship with Elio showcases poignant moments of realization about love and acceptance.

Emotional Impact: An impactful character who invokes a mix of admiration and empathy.

Suggestions

Capitalize on Perlman's emotional moments to deepen audience connection.
Use Perlman's dialogues to accentuate moments where emotional truths unfold.

Follow-up Questions

What specific lines or actions can heighten the emotional weight of Perlman's character?
How can Perlman’s actions in moments of vulnerability enhance audience engagement?

Personality Types

MBTI: infj

Perlman embodies the nurturing, introspective, and insightful traits typical of an INFJ, as he seeks harmony and understanding in relationships.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: enfj (60%)

Suggestions

Highlight more situations in which Perlman demonstrates intuitive understanding or conflict resolution.
Enhance interactions that show both the introverted and extroverted sides of his personality.

Follow-up Questions

How does Perlman's counseling approach vary depending on whether he interacts with Elio or Oliver?
In what ways could Perlman's character benefit from more extroverted moments?

Enneagram: type 2 (the helper)

Perlman displays Helper traits through his nurturing behavior and desire to assist both Elio and Oliver on their personal journeys.

Confidence: 75%

Possible Alternative Type: type 9 (the peacemaker) (65%)

Suggestions

Incorporate moments where Perlman prioritizes others’ needs over his own to highlight his Type 2 tendencies.
Examine his reactions in conflict situations to reveal Type 9 characteristics more prominently.

Follow-up Questions

How do Perlman's helping behaviors complicate or assist Elio’s emotional growth?
What moments showcase Perlman's tendency toward enmeshment with those he helps?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (141)

In the scene where Perlman has a heartfelt conversation with Elio about love and pain, he showcases his wisdom.

Why: This stands out due to its emotional weight and depth, revealing Perlman’s character and depth of understanding.

Weakest Scene (12)

A weaker scene occurs during the dinner with guests where Perlman does not serve as prominently and feels overshadowed.

Why: This scene lacks Perlman's direct emotional engagement which can dilute his impactful presence.

Suggestions:

Increase Perlman's interactions during this scene to maintain his vital role.
Provide him with an impactful line that brings focus back to his influence

Theme Analysis Overview

Primary Theme: First love and its complexities, particularly the intensity, insecurity, and bittersweet transience of a summer romance.

Theme Interaction: Several themes intertwine to enrich the primary theme. The themes of cultural difference and class, parental influence, and self-discovery all contribute to the nuances of Elio and Oliver's relationship. While these themes are significant, they ultimately serve to deepen and complicate the central narrative of first love, rather than overshadowing it. The cultural and class differences create tension and unspoken anxieties. Parental influence shapes Elio's reactions and behaviors. The journey of self-discovery intensifies the emotional weight of the romance and gives it a lasting resonance beyond the summer's end.

Identified Themes

Theme

Theme Details

Theme Explanation

Primary Theme Support

First Love and its Complexities

60%

The central focus is on Elio's intense, confusing, and ultimately heartbreaking first love for Oliver. The narrative follows the emotional arc of their relationship, from initial attraction and burgeoning intimacy to the inevitable parting and its lingering effects.

The theme explores the overwhelming emotions, insecurities, and uncertainties inherent in first love. It highlights the intoxicating blend of desire, joy, pain, and self-discovery that defines this formative experience. The film uses the brevity of summer as a metaphor for the fleeting nature of this specific type of romance, while emphasizing the lasting impact of it on Elio's emotional and personal growth.

This is the core theme around which all other themes revolve. The other themes provide context, adding layers of complexity to the emotional core of the story.

Strengthening First Love and its Complexities

Suggestion Type	How to Strengthen the Theme
Dialogue Scene Multiple	Intersperse subtle, emotionally charged dialogues between Elio and Oliver that hint at the complexities of their first love. For example, conversations about fear of vulnerability, the fleeting nature of summer romance, and the anxieties of unspoken feelings. These should be woven organically into existing conversations, not as forced monologues, but as small, meaningful exchanges that reveal their inner turmoil and the unspoken desires underlying their interactions.
Visual Scene Multiple	Employ visual motifs to emphasize the theme. Recurring imagery, like the apricots (symbolizing sweetness and fleetingness), the changing colors of Oliver's bathing suits (representing his different personalities and emotional states), or the contrast between the vibrant summer setting and the melancholic tone of Elioâs internal struggles, will visually reinforce the themeâs complexities across the film.
Character Arc Scene Elio	Develop Elio's character arc to reflect the full spectrum of first love. Show him moving beyond initial infatuation and jealousy to a deeper understanding of his own emotions, including his insecurities, vulnerabilities, and the pain of unrequited or complicated love. His journey shouldn't just be about Oliver; it should be about his self-discovery through this experience.
Story Arc Scene Multiple	Structure the narrative to mirror the ebb and flow of first love. Include moments of intense connection interspersed with periods of distance, doubt, and uncertainty, reflecting the inherent instability and complexities of young love. The narrative should not only focus on the romantic connection but also showcase the wider impact of the experience on Elio's relationships with his family and friends.
Action & Subtext Scene Multiple	Use subtext and meaningful actions to convey the emotional undercurrents of the relationship. Small gestures, like a lingering touch, an averted gaze, or a stolen glance, can speak volumes about the unspoken feelings and anxieties that define first love. Pay attention to the physical interactions between Elio and Oliver â not just the explicit moments, but the subtle ways they communicate through body language and non-verbal cues. This will create a more nuanced and emotionally resonant portrayal of their relationship.

Self-Discovery and Identity

25%

Elio's journey of self-discovery is intertwined with his relationship with Oliver. He grapples with his sexuality, his emotions, and his place in the world. His interactions with Marzia and his own introspective moments throughout the story highlight this process.

The film explores how the experience of first love forces Elio to confront his own identity and feelings. His reactions and insecurities reveal his journey towards a deeper understanding of himself and the world around him.

This theme directly supports the primary theme by providing crucial insight into Elio's emotional responses to his love for Oliver. The self-discovery is fundamentally shaped and catalyzed by this relationship.

Cultural and Class Differences

10%

Oliver's American background and his more worldly demeanor create a subtle tension and unspoken anxieties in his relationship with Elio, who is immersed in the Italian environment and his family's traditions.

The differences in cultural backgrounds and social standing influence the dynamics of their interaction. These differences contribute to the unspoken anxieties and uncertainties that underlie their romance.

This theme adds layers of complexity to the relationship, highlighting the challenges and misunderstandings that can arise from such differences. It subtly impacts the way both characters interact and communicate, adding to the overall emotional resonance.

Parental Influence and Observation

Elio's parents, particularly his mother, observe and comment on the relationship. Their presence and reactions shape Elio's experience and the overall atmosphere.

The parents act as observant figures, adding a layer of commentary and indirect guidance to Elio's journey. Their subtle understanding of the dynamics and their approach influences Elio's self-awareness.

The parental perspectives provide a contrasting viewpoint to Elio's intense emotional journey. Their involvement underscores the complexities of first love within a family context, adding a dimension of societal expectations and unspoken anxieties.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Robert McKee: "The audience doesn’t go to the movies to see plot; they go to feel emotion, to be moved."

Scene by Scene Emotions

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	The protagonist's internal goals evolve from a desire for connection and understanding to grappling with feelings of love and jealousy regarding Oliver. Initially, Elio seeks hospitality and friendship but ultimately strives for emotional intimacy and affirmation of his identity amidst societal expectations.
External Goals	The protagonist's external goals shift from helping Oliver adjust to his new environment to pursuing moments of shared experience and connection, culminating in Elio's desire to maintain a relationship with Oliver despite the looming separation.
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the tension between self-acceptance and societal expectations of relationships and identity during a period of cultural conservatism. This conflict intertwines with Elio's journey as he navigates love and desire in a repressive environment.

Character Development Contribution: The progression of Elio's internal and external goals contributes significantly to his character development, showcasing his evolution from a youth grappling with confusion about his identity and desires to a more self-aware individual who ultimately embraces and communicates his emotions.

Narrative Structure Contribution: The interplay of internal goals and external actions drives the narrative structure, creating a compelling arc as Elio's experiences progress from uncertainty to empowerment, all while advancing the plot through his interactions with both Oliver and other characters.

Thematic Depth Contribution: The juxtaposition of goals and conflicts deepens the screenplay's themes, such as love, identity, longing, and the impact of societal norms, illustrating the complexities of personal relationships alongside the coming-of-age experience.

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

Scene Analysis

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			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Character Changes	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Opposition	High stakes	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - The Arrival of the Usurper	Intimate, Tense, Formal	8.2	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
2 - A Quiet Introduction	Curious, Intimate, Reflective	7.5	8	7	8	8	6	8	6	6	5	6	7	6	7	7	9	8	8	8
3 - A Quiet Dinner Invitation	Awkward, Reserved, Intrigued	8.5	9	8	8	9	8	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
4 - Breakfast Tensions	Awkward, Intrigued, Intimidating, Casual	8.2	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	8	6	7	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
5 - A Lesson in Etymology	Informative, Light-hearted, Intellectual	8.5	9	8	9	9	5	8	6	3	7	2	6	7	7	9	9	8	8	8
6 - A Summer's Farewell	Introspective, Playful, Inquisitive	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	4	6	3	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
7 - Unresolved Tensions	Introspective, Tense, Emotional	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	8	8	8	9	9
8 - Variations of the Heart	Introspective, Emotional, Intellectual	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	6	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
9 - A Game of Connection	Intriguing, Lively, Friendly	8.5	9	8	9	9	6	8	7	4	7	3	6	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
10 - Tension Under the Lime Trees	Tension, Jealousy, Awkwardness, Playfulness	8.5	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	8	9	9	8	9	9
11 - The Absence of Oliver	Tension, Intrigue, Discomfort	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
12 - A Night of Reluctance and Revelations	Tension, Resentment, Loneliness	8.5	9	8	9	9	9	8	7	9	7	8	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
13 - Under the Lime Trees: A Moment of Reflection	Intellectual, Reflective, Inquisitive	8.5	9	8	8	9	7	8	7	4	7	3	6	7	6	9	8	8	9	9
14 - Reflections at the South Terrazza	Introspective, Intellectual, Playful	8.5	9	8	9	9	7	8	6	6	6	5	8	7	8	9	8	8	8	8
15 - Playful Moments in the Orchard	Introspective, Playful, Tense	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	6	6	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
16 - Awkward Tensions	Tense, Awkward, Confused, Defiant	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
17 - Flirtations and Rivalries	Intimate, Playful, Envious	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	6	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
18 - Dancing with Desire	Envy, Amusement, Mesmerized, Embarrassment	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
19 - Secrets by the River	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	5	6	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
20 - Morning Banter and Anticipation	Reflective, Playful, Intimate	8.5	8	8	9	9	6	8	7	5	7	4	7	7	7	9	9	8	8	8
21 - A Tense Farewell	Tense, Teasing, Awkward, Surprised	8.5	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
22 - A Moment of Discovery	Excitement, Curiosity, Pride	8.5	8	8	8	8	6	8	9	3	7	6	8	7	8	8	9	8	9	9
23 - A Serene Discovery at Sirmione	Reflective, Informative, Playful	8.5	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	6	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
24 - Reflections in the Storm	Reflective, Intimate, Nostalgic	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	5	7	4	6	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
25 - Longing in Silence	Introspective, Longing, Sensual	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	9	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
26 - A Moment of Connection	Reflective, Intimate, Light-hearted	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	3	6	4	6	6	9	9	9	8	8	8
27 - A Lost Soul's Care	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	3	6	4	6	6	9	8	9	8	8	8
28 - Moments of Connection	Intense, Confessional, Reflective	9.2	9	9	8	10	9	9	7	9	6	8	9	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
29 - Whispers by the Water	Intimate, Tense, Yearning, Conflicted	9.2	9	9	9	9	9	9	7.5	8	8	9	9	8	10	9	9	8	8	8
30 - A Moment of Connection and Crisis	Intimate, Playful, Tender	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	3	7	2	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
31 - Tender Moments in the Villa	Intimate, Playful, Tender	8.5	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	3	6	2	6	6	9	9	8	8	9	9
32 - Playful Tensions	Intimate, Playful, Tense	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
33 - Betrayal in the Night	Intimate, Emotional, Tense	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	8	6	8	7	6	9	8	9	8	8	8
34 - Morning Reflections	Reflective, Intimate, Melancholic	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7.5	4	8	3	7	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
35 - Restless Longing	Introspective, Tense, Reflective	8.5	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	6	6	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
36 - A Moment of Connection	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	9.2	9	9	9	10	8	9	7	3	6	4	7	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
37 - Unspoken Bonds	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	5	7	4	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
38 - Bittersweet Reunion at Sunset	Reflective, Intimate, Content	8.5	8	8	7	9	7	8	7	3	7	4	6	6	9	9	8	8	9	9
39 - Restless Longing	Restless, Intimate, Reflective	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	6	6	6	7	6	9	8	8	8	9	9
40 - Whispers of the Night	Intimate, Vulnerable, Passionate, Confused	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
41 - Whispers of Longing	Intimate, Reflective, Yearning	9.2	9	9	9	9	8	9	7	7	6	8	9	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
42 - Morning Whispers	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	9.2	9	9	9	9	8	8	7	3	7	7	8	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
43 - Art, Anxiety, and Dinner Plans	Reflective, Playful, Serious	8.5	9	8	9	9	7	8	7.5	6	7	7	8	8	8	8	9	8	8	8
44 - Afternoon Whispers	Intimate, Passionate, Playful	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
45 - A Lesson in Acceptance	Amused, Reflective, Intimate	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7.5	5	8	4	7	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
46 - Introspection in the Night	Introspective, Yearning, Melancholic	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	3	6	4	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
47 - Nervous Connections	Anxious, Intimate, Reflective	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
48 - A Night of Intimacy	Intimate, Passionate, Vulnerable	9.2	9	9	9	10	9	9	7	7	6	7	8	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
49 - Morning Reflections	Intimate, Reflective, Vulnerable	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
50 - Awkward Longing	Intimate, Vulnerable, Awkward	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
51 - A Moment of Longing	Intimate, Reflective, Vulnerable	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
52 - Summer Confessions	Intimate, Vulnerable, Emotional, Sensual	8.7	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
53 - A Night of Longing	Intimate, Reflective, Melancholic	9.2	9	9	8	10	8	9	7	3	7	6	7	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
54 - Tangled Emotions	Intimate, Reflective, Anxious	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
55 - A Moment at the Memorial	Intimate, Reflective, Playful	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	6	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
56 - A Night of Laughter and Discomfort	Intimate, Reflective, Playful	8.7	9	8	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
57 - Bittersweet Farewell	Intimate, Bittersweet, Reflective	9.2	9	9	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	8	9	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
58 - Moments of Comfort	Emotional, Reflective, Intimate	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7.5	3	8	4	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
59 - Embracing Memories	Reflective, Intimate, Emotional, Parental, Philosophical	9.2	10	9	9	9	9	9	7	3	7	7	9	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
60 - Echoes of the Past	Reflective, Emotional, Intimate, Bittersweet, Nostalgic	9.2	9	9	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	10	9	9	8	8	8

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
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Scene Strengths

Emotional depth
Intimate character interactions
Character development
Engaging dialogue
Effective portrayal of tension

Scene Weaknesses

Limited plot progression
Low external conflict
Minimal conflict
Slow pacing in certain sections
Lack of clarity in character motivations

Suggestions

Introduce more external conflicts to raise stakes and propel the plot forward.
Enhance plot progression through dynamic events or challenges that characters must navigate.
Maintain the strong emotional and intimate moments but ensure they tie into the overarching narrative.
Consider balancing the subtle character dynamics with clearer motivations to avoid confusion.
Pacing could be improved by interspersing moments of tension or conflict to keep the audience engaged.

Sequence Analysis

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Columns

Sequence	Scenes	Overall	Momentum			Pressure		Emotion/Tone		Shape/Cohesion			Character/Arc			Novelty	Craft	Momentum			Pressure			Emotion/Tone		Shape/Cohesion			Character/Arc				Novelty	Craft
Sequence	Scenes	Overall	Plot Progress	Pacing	Keep Reading	Escalation	Stakes	Emotional	Tone/Visual	Narrative Shape	Impact	Memorable	Char Leverage	Int Goal	Ext Goal	Originality	Readability	Plot Progress	Pacing	Keep Reading	Escalation	Stakes	Reveal Rhythm	Emotional	Tone/Visual	Narrative Shape	Impact	Memorable	Char Leverage	Int Goal	Ext Goal	Subplots	Originality	Readability
Act One Overall: 8.5
1 - The Usurper's Arrival	1 – 3	7.5	6	6	6	5	5	6	8	7	7	6	5	5	5	7	8	6	6	6	5	5	6	6	8	7	7	6	5	5	5	6	7	8
2 - Bonds and Barricades	4 – 8	8	7	6	8	6	6	7	8	8	8	7	7	6	5	7	8	7	6	8	6	6	7	7	8	8	8	7	7	6	5	6	7	8
3 - Social Currents	9 – 12	7.5	6	6	6	5	5	6	7	6	7	6	5	5	4	6	7	6	6	6	5	5	5	6	7	6	7	6	5	5	4	6	6	7
4 - Private Crossings	13 – 17	8	7	7	8	7	6	7	8	8	8	7	7	6	5	7	8	7	7	8	7	6	7	7	8	8	8	7	7	6	5	6	7	8
5 - Diversions and Desire	18 – 19	7.5	6	6	6	5	5	6	7	6	7	6	6	5	5	6	8	6	6	6	5	5	6	6	7	6	7	6	6	5	5	6	6	8
6 - Journey to Closeness	20 – 23	8	7	6	7	7	6	7	7	7	8	7	6	6	5	7	8	7	6	7	7	6	6	7	7	7	8	7	6	6	5	6	7	8
7 - Threshold of Longing	24 – 25	8.5	7	7	8	7	7	8	8	7	8	8	8	8	6	7	8	7	7	8	7	7	7	8	8	7	8	8	8	8	6	6	7	8
8 - Confessional Brink	26 – 28	8.5	7	8	8	7	7	8	8	8	8	8	8	8	7	7	9	7	8	8	7	7	7	8	8	8	8	8	8	8	7	6	7	9
Act Two A Overall: 8.5
1 - Intimate Breakthroughs and Boundaries	29 – 31	8.5	8	7	8	8	7	9	9	8	9	8	9	8	7	8	8	8	7	8	8	7	8	9	9	8	9	8	9	8	7	6	8	8
2 - Pursuit of Reconnection	33 – 37	8.5	7	7	8	7	7	8	8	8	8	8	7	7	6	7	8	7	7	8	7	7	7	8	8	8	8	8	7	7	6	6	7	8
3 - Restless Diversion and Secret Confession	38 – 41	8.5	7	7	8	7	7	8	8	8	8	8	7	7	6	7	8	7	7	8	7	7	7	8	8	8	8	8	7	7	6	7	7	8
Act Two B Overall: 9
1 - Midnight Rendezvous	42 – 48	8.5	8	8	9	8	8	9	9	8	9	9	9	8	7	8	8	8	8	9	8	8	8	9	9	8	9	9	9	8	7	6	8	8
2 - Navigating New Intimacy	49 – 52	8.5	8	8	9	8	8	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	8	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	8	8
3 - Farewell Countdown	53 – 57	8.5	8	8	9	8	8	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	8	8	8	9	8	8	8	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	8
4 - First Waves of Grief	58	8.5	7	7	8	8	8	9	8	8	9	8	8	7	6	7	8	7	7	8	8	8	7	9	8	8	9	8	8	7	6	7	7	8
Act Three Overall: 9
1 - Embracing the Aftermath	59	9	8	7	8	7	8	9	9	8	9	9	9	8	6	8	8	8	7	8	7	8	8	9	9	8	9	9	9	8	6	7	8	8
2 - Confronting Finality	60	8.5	7	7	7	6	7	8	8	7	8	8	8	7	5	7	8	7	7	7	6	7	7	8	8	7	8	8	8	7	5	6	7	8

World Building

Physical environment: The screenplay is set in a picturesque villa in Italy, characterized by a blend of old and new elements, including refurbished rooms, a fruit orchard, and serene gardens. The villa's intimate spaces, such as Elio's bedroom and the study, create a cozy yet sophisticated atmosphere, while the surrounding countryside and small town of Crema add to the idyllic setting.
Culture: Cultural elements are rich and diverse, with characters speaking multiple languages, including Italian and French. The screenplay reflects Italian customs, such as family gatherings, leisurely meals outdoors, and a deep appreciation for art and music. The characters engage in intellectual discussions, showcasing a cultured lifestyle that values education and the arts.
Society: The societal structure depicted in the screenplay is one of privilege and sophistication, with a close-knit family dynamic. Interactions among characters reveal a sense of hierarchy and formality, particularly in the presence of guests. The screenplay also hints at traditional values, especially regarding relationships and social expectations, particularly in the context of Elio and Oliver's romance.
Technology: Technological elements are minimal throughout the screenplay, emphasizing a nostalgic and timeless quality. The presence of simple tools, such as bicycles and a walkman, highlights a leisurely lifestyle, while the absence of modern gadgets allows for a focus on interpersonal relationships and emotional connections.
Characters influence: The unique physical environment and cultural backdrop shape the characters' experiences and actions by providing a setting that fosters intimacy and exploration of emotions. The villa's serene atmosphere allows Elio and Oliver to navigate their complex feelings, while the cultural elements encourage open communication and intellectual engagement. The societal expectations create tension for Elio as he grapples with his identity and desires.
Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute significantly to the narrative by establishing a rich context for the characters' relationships and experiences. The villa serves as a backdrop for pivotal moments in Elio and Oliver's romance, while the cultural and societal structures create obstacles and tensions that drive the plot forward. The setting enhances the emotional stakes of their relationship, making their connection feel both urgent and poignant.
Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes of love, identity, and the passage of time. The serene and picturesque environment contrasts with the characters' internal struggles, highlighting the complexities of desire and societal expectations. The cultural richness of the setting allows for a nuanced exploration of intimacy, vulnerability, and the bittersweet nature of first love, ultimately enriching the emotional resonance of the story.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	The writer's voice is characterized by a subtle, nuanced exploration of complex emotions and interpersonal relationships. It prioritizes internal conflicts and unspoken tensions over overt drama. The style is intimate and introspective, employing rich descriptive language, evocative imagery, and naturalistic dialogue that reveals character through subtext and subtle gestures. A blend of intellectual discourse and playful banter further adds depth and complexity.
Voice Contribution	The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a deeply immersive and emotionally resonant experience. The focus on internal struggles and unspoken desires enhances the themes of first love, self-discovery, and the complexities of human connection. The rich descriptive language and evocative imagery create a strong sense of place and time, enhancing the mood of longing, intimacy, and bittersweet nostalgia. The naturalistic dialogue feels authentic and avoids melodrama, allowing the audience to connect with the characters on a deeply personal level.
Best Representation Scene	3 - A Quiet Dinner Invitation
Best Scene Explanation	Scene 3 best encapsulates the author's voice because it perfectly balances rich descriptive language ('dimly lit Perlman villa') with subtle character interaction and unspoken emotions. The narrative description creates a strong sense of intimacy and the dialogue, though sparse, effectively conveys the awkwardness and underlying tension between Elio and Oliver, hinting at the developing relationship without resorting to overt exposition or melodrama. This subtle approach to emotional depth is a consistent hallmark of the writer's style throughout the screenplay.

Style and Similarities

The screenplay exhibits a consistent style characterized by intimate storytelling, emotional depth, and nuanced character interactions. There's a strong emphasis on exploring complex relationships, internal conflicts, and the subtle nuances of human emotions. Scenes often feature poetic dialogue and evocative visual elements, creating an emotionally resonant and introspective atmosphere. While some scenes incorporate intellectual discourse and witty banter, the prevailing tone leans towards emotional realism and vulnerability.

Style Similarities:

Writer	Explanation
Luca Guadagnino	Luca Guadagnino is overwhelmingly cited across numerous scene analyses (over 40 out of 60). The recurring references to his style – focusing on intimate character relationships, emotional depth, nuanced storytelling, visually stunning settings, and subtle emotional portrayals – strongly suggest his directorial/writing influence pervades the entire screenplay. The repeated comparison to his work on 'Call Me By Your Name' further reinforces this.
Call Me By Your Name (James Ivory/André Aciman)	The frequent comparisons to the writing style and themes of 'Call Me By Your Name,' both the film (James Ivory's screenplay) and the novel (André Aciman's work), are almost as pervasive as the Guadagnino references. The similarities consistently highlight shared themes of desire, intimacy, self-discovery, coming-of-age experiences, and the complexities of human relationships, pointing to a clear stylistic and thematic resonance with the source material.

Writer

Explanation

Luca Guadagnino

Luca Guadagnino is overwhelmingly cited across numerous scene analyses (over 40 out of 60). The recurring references to his style – focusing on intimate character relationships, emotional depth, nuanced storytelling, visually stunning settings, and subtle emotional portrayals – strongly suggest his directorial/writing influence pervades the entire screenplay. The repeated comparison to his work on 'Call Me By Your Name' further reinforces this.

Call Me By Your Name (James Ivory/André Aciman)

The frequent comparisons to the writing style and themes of 'Call Me By Your Name,' both the film (James Ivory's screenplay) and the novel (André Aciman's work), are almost as pervasive as the Guadagnino references. The similarities consistently highlight shared themes of desire, intimacy, self-discovery, coming-of-age experiences, and the complexities of human relationships, pointing to a clear stylistic and thematic resonance with the source material.

Other Similarities: While other screenwriters like Woody Allen, Richard Linklater, Noah Baumbach, Greta Gerwig, and Tom Stoppard are mentioned in a few analyses, their influence appears to be less pronounced and more localized to specific scenes. The screenplay seems to largely maintain a cohesive style heavily inspired by Guadagnino's work and the themes of 'Call Me By Your Name', creating a unified emotional and visual landscape across the scenes.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
Dialogue and Emotional Impact: A Delicate Balance	Scenes with high Dialogue scores (8 or above) generally correlate with high Emotional Impact scores, except for scenes 5, 6, 9, 13, 20, 22, 24, 26, 30, 31, 34, 36, 37, 38, 42, 45, 46, 52, 53, 58 and 60. These exceptions suggest that while strong dialogue contributes to emotional impact, other factors (perhaps plot points or character actions) can create significant emotional resonance even with less impactful dialogue. Consider exploring ways to enhance the emotional punch of scenes with strong dialogue but lower emotional impact scores, possibly by focusing on character reactions or subtext.
Tone and Emotional Impact: The Power of Introspection	Scenes with predominantly 'Introspective' tones tend to show a wider range of Emotional Impact scores, including both high and low values. This suggests introspection doesn't guarantee emotional depth; its effectiveness depends on the narrative execution. Conversely, scenes with more action-oriented tones ('Tense,' 'Playful,' etc.) tend to have more consistently moderate Emotional Impact scores, suggesting a need for more depth in those types of scenes.
High Stakes and Move Story Forward: A Consistent Strength	Throughout the screenplay, scenes that effectively 'Move story forward' usually also have a decent 'High stakes' score. This suggests a strong narrative flow, but it might be beneficial to examine if raising the stakes in some scenes might correspondingly improve the narrative momentum.
Concept and Plot: A Strong Foundation	The screenplay consistently receives high scores for both 'Concept' and 'Plot,' indicating a strong underlying narrative structure. This is a significant strength and suggests that the core idea is compellingly presented.
Character Development Clusters	There are clusters of scenes with high 'Character Changes' scores (7 or above) concentrated in later parts of the screenplay, and these appear to correlate with scenes that employ 'Intimate' and 'Reflective' tones. Scenes towards the end of the screenplay might be particularly strong in character development, possibly due to increased intimacy and reflective moments that are allowing for stronger character arc. But early scenes might require more attention to character development.
Emotional Impact Dip in Mid-Story	There's a noticeable dip in 'Emotional Impact' scores in the middle sections (scenes 5-14, 20-26) of the screenplay. This could indicate a potential pacing issue, a lull in character development or conflict. Re-examine this section to ensure sufficient emotional engagement during this phase of the story.
Late-Story Surge in Intimacy and High Scores	The last third of the screenplay (scenes 40 onwards) features a significant increase in scenes utilizing 'Intimate' tones, frequently paired with high scores across multiple categories, notably Dialogue, Character, and overall grade. This suggests the screenplay's climax and resolution are particularly strong in terms of emotional resonance and character work. Consider if some of this intimacy and depth could be introduced earlier.
The Impact of 'Intimate' Tone	The 'Intimate' tone is heavily used across many scenes with high scores, particularly those near the end. This suggests that this tone is effective in raising emotional impact, dialogue, character development and overall grade. Yet this tone is not employed in scenes with lower emotional scores. Consider the purpose of this tonal choice in each instance, whether it reflects intended story impact.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

The screenplay demonstrates a strong ability to create emotionally resonant scenes with authentic character interactions, particularly focusing on intimacy, vulnerability, and internal conflicts. The writer shows skill in conveying emotions through subtle gestures, dialogue, and evocative descriptions. However, there's a recurring need to deepen character development beyond emotional portrayal and to explore more varied storytelling techniques beyond dialogue-driven scenes and character interactions.

Key Improvement Areas

Character Development

Many analyses praise the emotional depth but suggest further work on character motivations and backstories. While the writer excels at portraying surface emotions, a deeper exploration of internal conflicts, desires, and the characters' past will increase the scenes' impact and believability. Expanding beyond solely relying on subtle interactions to more overtly reveal internal struggles will also help.

Dialogue and Subtext

While the dialogue is often lauded as rich, witty, or intimate, feedback consistently points toward the need to improve its subtext and unspoken emotions. The writer should strive for more nuanced dialogue that conveys more information implicitly, rather than relying solely on explicit statements. This will create more engaging and layered scenes.

Storytelling Techniques Diversification

The writer heavily relies on dialogue and character interaction to convey the story. While effective, exploring visual storytelling, narrative structure beyond simple dialogue-driven scenes, and pacing variation are crucial for developing a more versatile screenwriting style.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Screenplay	Read and analyze 'Call Me By Your Name' (James Ivory), 'Before Sunrise' (Richard Linklater), 'Moonlight' (Barry Jenkins), 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind', and 'Lost in Translation'.	These films offer diverse examples of emotional storytelling, nuanced dialogue, intimate character interactions, and different approaches to pacing and structure, addressing the key improvement areas identified. They showcase different methods of conveying internal struggles and desires, beyond simple dialogue exchanges.
Screenplay	Read 'The Social Network' (Aaron Sorkin) and study how to craft intellectually stimulating and fast-paced dialogue, to contrast with the more intimate scenes.	This will help diversify the writer's skills beyond focusing on emotional intimacy and incorporate other stylistic elements into their work.
Book	Read 'The Screenwriter's Bible' (David Trottier) and 'The Anatomy of Story' (John Truby) to understand screenplay structure, character arcs, and storytelling techniques.	These books provide foundational knowledge in screenwriting principles, helping to improve scene structure, pacing, and overall narrative coherence, which can enhance the impact of emotionally resonant scenes.
Video	Watch behind-the-scenes footage and interviews for films like 'Call Me By Your Name' and 'Moonlight', paying attention to directorial choices and actor performances.	This helps understand how emotions are conveyed visually and through performance beyond the page, and further supports the understanding of subtle gestures and emotional depth.

Additional Notes: The writer displays a strong grasp of emotional storytelling and creates compelling character interactions, particularly in scenes focused on intimacy and desire. However, consistent focus on strengthening character development beyond emotional expression, diversifying storytelling techniques beyond dialogue, and developing subtext in dialogue will elevate their work to a higher level of sophistication and impact. A deeper exploration of themes beyond desire and interpersonal relationships might also be beneficial in expanding the writer's range.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
Forbidden Love
Summer Romance
Love Triangle
Coming of Age
The Usurper
Intellectual Connection
The Mentor
The Best Friend
The Secret
The Bittersweet Ending

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
36	ELIO: I worship you.
28	Elio: Because there is no one else I can say this to but you.
59	PERLMAN: We rip out so much of ourselves to be cured of things faster, that we go bankrupt by the age of thirty and have less to offer each time we start with someone new.
20	ELIO: All I had to do was find the courage to reach out and touch, she would have said yes.
14	Oliver: Does this make any sense to you? Not to me. Nor to your dad.

Some Loglines to consider:

A transformative summer romance unfolds between a seventeen-year-old and his father's charming guest, leaving an indelible mark on their lives.
In the sun-drenched Italian countryside, a shy teenager experiences a life-altering first love that challenges his perceptions of self and the world.
A passionate summer fling between a young man and his older guest leaves an enduring impact on both their lives, forever changing their perspectives on love and self-discovery.
Against the backdrop of 1980s Italy, the delicate dance of unspoken desires and fleeting passion unfolds between two young men, forever altering their paths.
A coming-of-age story set amidst the beauty of the Italian landscape explores the intoxicating power of first love, the uncertainty of youth, and the bittersweet ache of what might have been.
A young man's summer of self-discovery and first love is tested when he falls for his father's 25-year-old summer intern in 1980s Italy.
In a transformative summer in 1980s Italy, a 17-year-old boy navigates the complexities of his burgeoning sexuality and the profound impact of his relationship with his father's summer intern.
Elio, a precocious teenager, experiences the joys and heartaches of first love when he falls for Oliver, his father's academic intern, in the sun-drenched Italian countryside.
A coming-of-age drama about a young man's journey of self-discovery and the bittersweet nature of a summer romance that forever changes his life.
In 1980s Italy, a sensitive teenager's world is upended when he embarks on a secret relationship with his father's charming and enigmatic summer intern.
In the summer of 1983, a young boy discovers love and heartbreak during a passionate affair with a visiting scholar in Italy.
Set against the backdrop of a sun-soaked Italian villa, a teenage boy navigates the complexities of first love and self-discovery.
A summer romance blossoms between a 17-year-old and his father's research assistant, challenging their identities and desires.
As the summer heat intensifies, so does the emotional connection between a boy and a man, leading to a transformative experience.
In a tale of longing and loss, a young man reflects on a fleeting summer romance that forever alters his understanding of love.

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OverallRating: 8.5
Overview: The screenplay presents a compelling narrative that intricately explores the complexities of relationships, intimacy, and self-discovery. With an overall rating of 8.5, it showcases strong character development and engaging dialogue that resonates with the audience. While most scenes are well-crafted and impactful, a few moments lack significant emotional weight or plot progression, suggesting areas for improvement. Notable scenes highlight the screenplay's strengths in emotional resonance and character exploration, while certain scenes could benefit from heightened tension or clarity to enhance overall engagement.
Strengths:

Strong character development and emotional depth throughout the screenplay
Engaging dialogue that effectively conveys complex relationships
Consistent exploration of themes such as intimacy, vulnerability, and self-discovery
Well-crafted scenes that balance tension and tenderness

Areas of Improvement:

Some scenes lack significant plot progression or emotional impact
A few moments could benefit from heightened dramatic tension or clarity
Occasional reliance on subtlety may leave some audience members wanting more explicit emotional cues

Notable Examples

Scene 28 - explanation: This scene is beautifully crafted with intense emotions, deep character development, and significant plot progression. The poignant dialogue sets the stage for a crucial turning point in the story, showcasing the screenplay's strength in emotional resonance.
Scene 41 - explanation: This scene delves deep into Elio's inner turmoil and unrequited love for Oliver, making it a poignant and impactful moment. The emotional depth and vulnerability portrayed here exemplify the screenplay's ability to connect with the audience.

Improvement Examples

Scene 2 - explanation: While the scene establishes the setting and introduces key characters, it lacks significant plot progression or emotional impact. This could detract from the overall pacing and engagement of the screenplay, suggesting a need for more dynamic interactions or conflict.
Scene 43 - explanation: Although the scene blends art and sensuality effectively, some moments could have been more impactful. The emotional depth is present, but the execution may leave the audience craving a stronger connection to the characters' experiences.

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Screenplay Story Analysis

Elio - Score: 93/100

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Foundational Definition 9/10

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 9/10

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Relationship Dynamics 10/10

Scene Impact 10/10

Role Fulfillment 10/10

Thematic Plot Integration 10/10

Emotional Resonance 10/10

Score: 9

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Score: 8

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Score: 9

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