The script's continuation score is moderate because while this scene itself doesn't hook the reader, the author's note hints at a compelling character-driven drama with themes of mental health, trauma, and queer identity. The promise of a 'gradual collapse' and exploration of complex relationships creates some initial intrigue. However, it's all theoretical at this point, and the reader's interest will depend on how effectively these themes are explored in subsequent scenes. There are no existing plot threads yet to keep the reader interested.

The script has started well, introducing the protagonist and key relationships. The author's note established that Ben will 'unravel' in Act Two, creating a sense of foreboding and anticipation. This scene builds on that by hinting at a potentially complex relationship with Finn. The rivalry with Alexander could also be a continuing plot point. While no huge mysteries are afoot, the reader is compelled to continue and see how these seeds develop.

The script still has a good level of intrigue. We've seen Ben as a confident swimmer and now get a glimpse of his home life, which adds dimension to his character. The slightly ambiguous relationship with his coach, Finn, introduced in the previous scene, is still lingering. We're waiting to see how that dynamic will develop. This scene is setting up his life, but is missing some elements that foreshadow future challenges that were alluded to in the author's note.

The script has established Ben as a successful and well-liked individual. The hints of underlying complexity from the author's note and the slight tension from the previous scene (the possibly-too-long hug) still linger, making the reader curious about what challenges Ben might face later. However, these threads are subtle, and the overall tone remains positive, so the script's momentum is moderate at this point.

The script maintains a good level of momentum. The author's note promises a darker turn in Act Two, creating anticipation. The swim meet established Ben's athletic prowess and competitive spirit, while also hinting at a potential connection with Finn. Each scene continues to reinforce Ben's seemingly perfect life. The scene also shows a connection with Finn, whom Ben is becoming increasingly closer to. However, none of the scenes have delivered on the darker themes.

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum with ongoing character development and unresolved tensions, particularly regarding Ben's feelings for Finn and the implications of his friendship with Emma. The introduction of new plot elements, such as Emma's relationship and the upcoming frat party, adds layers to the narrative while keeping the reader invested in Ben's journey. The previous scenes have established a solid foundation of character relationships and conflicts, and this scene continues to build on those threads, ensuring that the reader remains engaged with the story's progression.

The script continues to build intrigue, primarily through Ben's increasingly obvious infatuation with Finn. The scene solidifies that something is brewing beneath the surface, and we as readers are compelled to keep reading to see how this plays out. The earlier scenes showcasing Ben's athletic prowess and academic success are now being contrasted with his internal turmoil. However, Emma's comments about Finn being gay felt a bit on the nose, and could have been dropped in a more subtle manner.

The script maintains strong momentum by developing the central conflict: Ben's burgeoning feelings for his teacher. The progression from admiration to sketching and secretly cherishing the image significantly escalates the stakes. Ben's age combined with Finn's position as a teacher, makes this situation inherently risky and adds to the compelling nature of the story. The previous scenes established Ben as a seemingly well-adjusted and successful student; now, cracks are starting to show, and the reader is drawn in to see how he handles these confusing emotions.

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum as it delves deeper into Ben's emotional struggles and relationships. The introduction of Finn and Dylan's relationship adds layers to Ben's character arc, highlighting his internal conflict regarding his feelings and identity. The ongoing themes of friendship, jealousy, and self-discovery are effectively woven throughout the scenes, keeping the reader invested in Ben's journey. The unresolved tension from this scene, combined with the previous developments, ensures that the reader is eager to see how Ben navigates these complex dynamics moving forward.

The script continues to build tension around Ben's growing obsession with Finn. Previous scenes established Ben's initial attraction, the drawing, and his discomfort when seeing Finn with Dylan. This scene solidifies the love triangle dynamic, albeit one-sided, and raises questions about how Finn will handle the situation, especially given his position as a teacher. The script also introduces an element of potential danger/career risk with Dylan's reminder that Finn's job could be in jeopardy if Ben accused him of any wrongdoing.

The script continues to build tension effectively, with Ben's unrequited feelings for Finn reaching a boiling point. The unresolved nature of this infatuation, combined with the awkward encounter in the previous scene and Ben's volatile emotional state, creates a strong desire to know what drastic actions Ben might be taking. However, The script has been building this crush of Ben for a few scenes now. It might be good to either change it up or make the situation more dire.

The script maintains a strong sense of intrigue due to the escalating tension surrounding Ben's feelings for Finn and his internal struggles. The previous scene in Fox Park left Ben in a state of intense confusion, longing, and jealousy. The current scene highlights his inability to connect with his peers and his growing isolation. The suppressed trauma from his past is also a looming question, and the reader anticipates a breaking point. The scene makes me wonder what happened when he was younger to lead him to such a place.

The script maintains a moderately strong continuation score. Ben's internal turmoil, hinted at through his actions and interactions with Emma, is becoming more pronounced. The recent scenes have increasingly focused on Ben's discomfort and growing isolation, his interaction with Finn is still fresh, and this current fantasy sequence could shed light on the source of his distress. The slow reveal of Ben's issues, coupled with the unanswered questions surrounding his behavior, keeps the reader engaged.

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum, particularly through the exploration of Ben's internal conflicts and his relationships with other characters. The introduction of Emma's concern for Ben adds depth to the narrative, while the fantasy sequence highlights Ben's struggles with his feelings for Finn. The ongoing tension surrounding Ben's mental health and the dynamics with his mother and friends keeps the reader engaged. As unresolved plot lines and character arcs continue to develop, the script effectively encourages the reader to keep turning the pages.

The script's overall tension has been building effectively, with Ben's increasing obsession with Finn, his acting out, and Emma's growing concern. This scene takes it to another level, hinting at a potential breakdown. While the audience now has more context for his behavior (hinted at by Cathy's unease), it still feels like only part of the story is known. The scene solidifies that the story is escalating towards something drastic, making the audience concerned but also increasing the desire to see what happens next. We are on the edge of a cliffhanger.

The script continues to be compelling. The central tension of Ben's hidden issues and his increasing emotional turmoil is escalating rapidly. The previous scenes hint at a past trauma, and Ben's interactions with Finn are becoming increasingly fraught. This scene acts as a clear turning point, confirming that Ben's mental state is deteriorating and that some kind of confrontation or crisis is inevitable. This draws the reader to see what steps Finn will take and what issues Ben will be forced to address (or not).

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum, particularly with the introduction of Ben's internal conflict regarding his feelings for Finn. This revelation adds depth to Ben's character and raises questions about the implications of their relationship. The previous scenes have established Ben's struggles, and this moment serves as a pivotal turning point that heightens the emotional stakes. The unresolved tension from this scene, combined with the ongoing themes of identity and acceptance, keeps the reader engaged and eager to see how the story unfolds.

The script continues to be compelling because it finally pushes Ben over the edge, delivering on the tension that has been building for several scenes. His feelings for Finn, coupled with his existing internal struggles, have become overwhelming. The script has also successfully created concern and empathy. The questions now are: will Ben harm himself? Will Finn be able to help him? Where is Ben going?

The script's continuation score remains at a 7 as the central conflict has intensified but lacks resolution. Ben's emotional state has become increasingly alarming, culminating in a clear expression of suicidal ideation and self-harm. While the script is addressing Ben's issues, the audience is still worried about what will happen to him. The slow pace of administrative response and the lack of direct intervention contribute to a growing sense of dread. Finn's involvement further complicates the situation, adding to the tension of whether this will be handled effectively or will get swept aside until something even worse happens.

The script maintains a strong level of reader engagement due to the escalating crisis surrounding Ben's emotional state and its impact on Finn. The unresolved tension between Finn and Ben, coupled with the introduction of legal and career concerns for Finn and Dylan, creates a multi-layered conflict. The audience is left wondering if Ben will make an allegation and how Finn will keep his career and support Ben at the same time. These interwoven threads increase the overall stakes of the story.

The script maintains a high level of engagement due to the escalating tension surrounding Ben's mental state and the ethical complexities involving Finn. Ben's confession, subsequent breakdown, and Finn's conflicted response create a compelling narrative with significant emotional weight. The introduction of Dylan adds another layer of complexity by highlighting the potential consequences of Finn's actions. The script successfully balances the immediate crisis with lingering questions about Ben's past and future.

The script maintains strong momentum due to the escalating crisis surrounding Ben. His emotional state is increasingly unstable, and the series of events, including the rejected text, Ben's outburst and flight, and now Finn's confession, creates a sense of impending doom. While this scene is dialogue-heavy, it provides a critical turning point, as the consequences of Finn's actions have now moved into another person's purview. The focus has shifted slightly, building suspense about how Ben will handle these issues going forward, as well as how the adults in his life deal with his escalating situation.

The script maintains strong momentum due to the escalating tension surrounding Ben's emotional state and the fallout from his confession to Finn. The unresolved issues of Ben's past abuse, his complicated feelings for Finn, and his struggles with his identity all contribute to a sense of impending crisis. The previous scenes have built up to this point, making the reader invested in seeing how Ben will cope with his challenges and whether he will receive the help he needs. The introduction of the Becoming Yourself (BY) program and training educators feels a long way off.

The script is building tension effectively. Ben's downward spiral is accelerating, with each scene showing him more isolated and distressed. The unresolved issues surrounding his feelings for Finn, combined with the implied trauma from his past, create a compelling and worrying narrative. The audience wants to see how Ben will handle the situation and what the ultimate consequences will be.

The script is hitting a critical point as Ben's emotional state deteriorates rapidly. The handling of Ben's confession and the reactions of Finn and Peters have created a powder keg of tension. The unanswered questions about Ben's past, alluded to in previous scenes, become more pressing as his behavior becomes increasingly erratic. The reader is deeply invested in seeing how Ben's situation will resolve, especially after the erasure of Finn's text message.

The script remains compelling due to the escalating crisis surrounding Ben. His avoidance, anger, and the mentioned phone call from the principal (and the history with Mr. Thomas) create strong suspense. The reader is left wondering how Ben will handle the pressure and whether he will confide in anyone or spiral further out of control. The mention of cutting classes further raises the stakes, leaving readers anticipating further consequences.

The script maintains a high level of tension as Ben's behavior becomes increasingly erratic and concerning. His issues with Finn, compounded by his history of abuse and mental health struggles, are escalating towards a crisis. The ongoing conflict between Ben and Cathy, coupled with the school's concerns, builds suspense. Reader interest in how Ben's downward spiral will resolve remains strong, even as some of the subplots around other characters have faded into the background.

The script has maintained a strong sense of forward momentum as Ben's mental state deteriorates. The unresolved tension between Ben, Finn, and Cathy, coupled with the mystery surrounding Ben's past trauma and his sexuality, continues to drive the narrative. Each scene adds layers of complexity and urgency to Ben's situation. The script continues to present new challenges and escalate the stakes, making the reader invested in Ben's fate and curious about how the relationships between the characters will evolve.

The script is maintaining a high level of tension due to Ben's continuing downward spiral and his increasingly desperate attempts to avoid dealing with his problems. The suppressed memories of abuse, the unaddressed feelings for Finn, and the academic decline are all converging. This scene heightens the tension, making the reader wonder if Ben will ever confront his issues and what the consequences of his actions will be. The unanswered call from the previous scene is addressed, but only by Ben making everything worse. However, story lines around other relationships, such as his sister or the swim team, have gone cold.

The script maintains strong momentum because of the escalating conflict surrounding Ben's mental state. The unanswered phone call from the previous scene created suspense, and this scene satisfies that while simultaneously creating another point of high tension. Ben is actively sabotaging communication and his life is falling apart, and the audience is compelled to know what comes next. Also, the teacher has some responsibility here but the audience is unsure to what extent he could have helped.

The script maintains a good level of suspense, primarily driven by Ben's increasingly erratic behavior and the mystery surrounding his actions. The central conflict of the story arc involves the character's struggles and hidden issues is coming to a head and the reader knows it. This is the moment of unraveling. The script's exploration of adolescent mental health continues to make the reader want to see what happens next. It's clear there is lots of angst on the way.

The script has built up immense tension, and this scene represents a critical turning point. Ben's downward spiral has been gradual but relentless, and the revelation of past abuse combined with his self-harm attempt creates a powerful emotional impact. The earlier scenes hinting at Ben's feelings for Finn, his academic struggles, and his strained relationship with his mother all contribute to the sense of impending crisis. While some earlier plot points may have faded slightly, the core narrative focus on Ben's mental health and trauma remains intensely gripping.

The script has reached a crisis point. Ben's self-harm attempt is the culmination of a series of escalating events – his confused feelings for Finn, his traumatic past with Bill, his conflicts with his mother, and his increasing isolation. The unanswered questions of who will find him, what the consequences will be, and how this event will impact the other characters makes the reader highly invested in seeing the story through. The script has masterfully built tension, and this is the payoff.

The script has been steadily building to this crisis point. Ben's internal torment, coupled with external pressures, has created a sense of impending doom. The unresolved tension between Ben, Finn, and Cathy now explodes. This scene acts as a major turning point, demanding resolution of the central conflicts surrounding Ben's mental health, his feelings for Finn, and his past trauma. The script's prior setups pay off here, making the reader heavily invested in the consequences.

The script has been building to this moment, with Ben's internal turmoil and Finn's conflicted feelings creating a sense of impending crisis. Ben's plea to Cathy to 'tell Mr. T not to hate me' at the end of the previous scene acted as a final hook. The revelation of the suicide attempt is a shocking escalation that completely shifts the narrative focus. The script hinges on whether Ben survives, how Finn copes with his role, and how the underlying issues of abuse and mental health are addressed. This makes the reader extremely invested in the immediate future.

Overall, the script maintains a high level of engagement as it explores deep themes of trauma, identity, and the consequences of unaddressed mental health issues. The introduction of Ben's backstory and his relationship with Cathy adds layers to the narrative, while the tension surrounding Finn's role in Ben's life keeps the reader invested. The stakes are high, and the emotional weight of the characters' experiences creates a strong impetus to continue reading to see how they navigate these challenges.

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum, particularly following the intense emotional arcs established in previous scenes. The ongoing exploration of Ben's mental health, his relationship with Finn, and the impact of his past trauma keeps the reader engaged. The introduction of new dynamics, such as Ben's feelings for Finn and the consequences of his suicide attempt, adds layers to the narrative that compel the reader to continue. The script effectively balances moments of tension with hope, ensuring that unresolved questions about Ben's recovery and his relationships with others, including Emma and Cathy, remain at the forefront. The emotional depth and character development throughout the scenes create a strong narrative drive that encourages the reader to keep turning the pages.

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum, particularly with the recent developments surrounding Ben's mental health and his relationships. The tension between Ben and Dr. Carson adds depth to the narrative, while the ongoing exploration of Ben's feelings for Mr. Thomas keeps the reader invested in his character arc. However, there are moments where the pacing could be improved, especially in scenes that focus on exposition rather than action or emotional conflict. As the story progresses, it will be crucial to balance character development with plot advancement to maintain reader engagement. The unresolved issues from this scene, particularly Ben's anger and pain, create a compelling reason to continue reading.

Overall, the script maintains strong momentum as it delves deeper into Ben's psychological struggles and the impact of his past trauma. The previous scenes have established a complex emotional landscape, and Ben's current actions reflect his internal conflict and desire for autonomy. The stakes are high, and the unresolved issues surrounding his mental health and relationships with Finn and his mother keep the reader engaged. The introduction of Ben's escape plan adds a thrilling element, suggesting that the narrative is building towards a critical turning point.

The script is maintaining high tension due to Ben's unraveling and the audience's investment in his fate. His confession to Finn, the revelation of past abuse, and his subsequent suicide attempt have created a strong emotional connection. The unresolved issues surrounding the abuse, Ben's sexuality, and his relationship with his mother contribute to the overall compulsion to see how these threads resolve. While Finn's role felt forced in earlier scenes, Ben's emotional response to him feels more realistic. The script is doing a good job of balancing Finn's perspective and Ben's.

The script has built significant momentum with Ben's struggles, his confession to Finn, and subsequent breakdown. This scene acts as a culmination of those events, putting Ben in extreme danger and raising the stakes considerably. While some earlier threads like Emma's concerns feel less prominent, the focus on Ben's immediate crisis is compelling. The question of whether Finn can save Ben drives strong reader engagement, overshadowing any fading interest in other plot points.

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum as it delves deeper into Ben's struggles with trauma and his relationship with Finn. This scene serves as a turning point, where Ben begins to confront his past and the possibility of seeking help. The ongoing tension surrounding Ben's mental health and the dynamics between him and Finn create a compelling narrative that keeps the reader engaged. The emotional stakes are heightened, and the reader is left wanting to know how Ben's journey will unfold after this critical moment.

The script maintains a solid level of reader investment due to the ongoing consequences of Ben's actions and the lingering questions about his recovery and future. The central conflicts regarding Ben's mental health and his relationship with Finn are still unresolved. Dylan's advice to Finn creates some additional tension, making the reader question how Finn will handle the situation moving forward. This creates a desire to know if Finn will obey.

The overall script tension remains high due to Ben's previous suicide attempt and continued resistance to treatment. The previous scene ended with Finn and Dylan at odds. The progression of this scene shows how Ben continues to distance himself from others. The confrontation with Dr. Carson showed how raw his emotions are, so this scene is the direct aftermath of that.

The script remains compelling due to the investment in Ben's character arc and the desire to see him overcome his trauma and find a path to healing. The unresolved tension between Ben, Finn, and Cathy continues to drive the narrative, as well as the lingering question of whether Ben will genuinely commit to therapy and make progress. The script's exploration of complex themes such as abuse, sexuality, and mental health keeps the reader emotionally engaged and invested in the outcome of Ben's journey.

The script is now reaching a point where the immediate crisis surrounding Ben's suicide attempt seems to be resolving. This scene represents a turning point, with Ben expressing his needs and setting boundaries, and Cathy showing genuine remorse and support. The questions that remain are whether Ben will truly heal, whether his relationship with his mother will improve, and how he will navigate his future. These unresolved questions maintain a good level of reader engagement.

The script continues to be compelling due to the audience's investment in Ben's well-being and his journey toward recovery. The lingering questions about his future, his relationship with his mother, and the impact of his experiences create a desire to see him succeed. While the script appears to be nearing a potential resolution with Ben's emotional growth and newfound support system, there's a subtle curiosity about how these relationships evolve and if his mental health remains stable as he transitions back into the world.

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum as it delves into Ben's struggles and triumphs, particularly in this scene where he openly discusses his past and acceptance of his identity. The ongoing themes of mental health, trauma, and self-discovery are effectively woven throughout the narrative, keeping the reader engaged. The resolution of Ben's character arc is approaching, and the anticipation of how he will integrate these experiences into his life post-discharge adds to the script's overall appeal.

Overall, the script maintains a strong momentum as it explores Ben's journey through mental health challenges and personal growth. The introduction of college applications and the discussion of resilience serve as significant plot points that resonate with the audience. The ongoing development of Ben's relationship with his mother and his therapist adds depth to the narrative, while the humor and light-hearted moments provide relief from the heavier themes. The unresolved issues regarding his flashbacks and the transition back home keep the reader invested in Ben's story, ensuring that the stakes remain high as the narrative progresses toward its conclusion.

The script has followed Ben's journey through significant trauma and mental health struggles, culminating in a period of healing and growth. The reader is likely invested in seeing the long-term outcomes and how Ben integrates his experiences into his future. While the primary conflict is resolved, the curiosity about Ben's overall well-being and future relationships (with Finn, Emma, and potential new connections) keeps the reader engaged. However, with only a few scenes left, the story's end is clearly in sight which could reduce the strong pull to immediately keep reading.

The script has largely tied up its major plot threads, offering a sense of resolution to Ben's struggles. The audience has witnessed his journey from suicidal ideation to a hopeful future. However, the lingering questions are now primarily thematic: Will Ben maintain his progress? Will he find lasting happiness and love? The introduction of Seth in the following scene and Emma's call still create a draw to see how Ben's romantic life unfolds.

The script has successfully navigated Ben's turbulent journey, and this scene builds upon the positive momentum of his recovery and personal growth. Lingering questions about his future happiness and romantic life are addressed, offering a sense of resolution. The introduction of Seth reinforces the theme of self-acceptance and moving forward, solidifying the reader's investment in Ben's well-being. With only two scenes left, there's a strong desire to see how Ben's story concludes and if he truly achieves lasting happiness and stability.

At this point, the major conflicts of the script have been resolved. Ben is thriving in college, has reconciled with his mother, has found closure with Finn, and is open to new relationships. The script is clearly moving towards its conclusion. This scene reaffirms Ben's improved state and hints at a potential romance, but the reader is likely anticipating a final, conclusive scene rather than a continuation of the story.

The script ends on a note of hope and resilience. Ben has faced immense trauma, struggled with his identity, and attempted suicide. The final image of him swimming, present and alive, signifies his healing and growth. The unresolved romantic element is now gone and Ben is looking forward and working on himself and has a group of friends who care about him. The script overall delivers a powerful message of overcoming adversity, making it a compelling and satisfying read.