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# PG SLUGLINE
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INT. HENRY’S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - DAY A large room in a thoroughly devastated house, with broken windows, overlooks a spacious yard enclosed by a powerful metal fence wrapped with barbed wire. Two of the windows are outfitted with sniper’s rifles, one held by HENRY HEIDLER
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EXT. BY THE FENCE OF HENRY’S HOUSE – SAME TIME By the fence, facing the house, stand about a dozen biorobots. They are coming from somewhere further down the street. INT. HENRY’S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM – SAME TIME
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INT. RAIL CARS – SOME TIME LATER A convoy of rail cars carrying the capture group and the now- droopy Henry races through the tunnel. EXT. BY THE FENCE AT HENRY’S HOUSE. DAY The biorobots wordlessly retreat from the fence and leave.
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INT. THE SAME ROOM - SOME TIME LATER Aaron and Tenesha help Henry put on a leather belt with the small metal box attached. Aaron points to a small tumbler beside the box. AARON
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INT. TECH SECTION OF THE RESISTANCE ARMY – SOME TIME LATER A small room packed with medical and electronic equipment has an armchair in the middle, onto which Henry sits down, his torso bared. On his chest are several metal plates. TENESHA
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INT. TECH SECTION OF THE RESISTANCE ARMY – (PRESENT) Tenesha is observing the culmination of the copying process. Henry opens his eyes. TENESHA It looked to me like you fell
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INT. A CAR OF AN UNDERGROUND RAILWAY - A BIT LATER Inside a cramped covered car racing through a tunnel sit Henry, the general, Claude and Sharita, scrunched together. Listening to the monotonous BEATING OF THE WHEELS, Henry closes his eyes partway.
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INT. CAR OF THE UNDERGROUND TRAIN – PRESENT TIME To overcome the NOISE of the wheels, the general leans toward the center of the car. GROVER Repeat your task.
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INT. UNDERGROUND TUNNEL - A VERY SHORT TIME LATER The detachment proceeds down a concrete tunnel, finding their way with flashlights. From somewhere deep in the tunnel an echo brings STRANGE SOUNDS: WAILING, then MOANING, then DULL THUDS and HOWLING OF THE WIND. Animals dash out from under
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INT. HENRY’S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - MORNING (FLASHBACK) Eva (10), standing by the window, weaves a YELLOW RIBBON into her hair. She turns her face toward us and smiles. INT. UNDERGROUND TUNNEL – (PRESENT) Ellis again attempts to stand up. Claude and Sharita walk
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INT. NARROW CORRIDOR - A BIT LATER The group stumbles as they proceed in the dim light from Orval’s small flashlight. The SQUEAKING of an unseen door is heard. ORVAL (O.S.)
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INT. HENRY’S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - EVENING (FLASHBACK) Henry, his wife, and his daughter (12) are at the dinner table. 30. EVA
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INT. GROTTO OF THE UNDERGROUND RESISTANCE FIGHTERS - PRESENT TIME The undergrounders approach the detachment. Claude gets out his scanner. The undergrounders exchange glances. Jeymel, his face distorted by the tic, looks angrily at Claude and
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INT. UNDERGROUND TUNNEL - A BIT LATER The detachment proceeds cautiously through the tunnel, passing a pile of rocks by the wall and getting near to the fork. Ellis is closer to the pile than the others, so only she notices two hastily covered corpses of undergrounders in
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INT. THE CLEFT IN THE RIGHT BRANCH OF THE TUNNEL – SAME TIME The detachment stands in the cramped cleft with bated breath. In the depths of the cleft are Henry and a pale Ellis, her bandages all burgundy red from blood. ELLIS
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INT. THE SHAFT AT THE INTERSECTION OF TUNNELS - A BIT LATER The detachment nears the intersection of the tunnels, where one can see the hatch door of a shaft. Ellis stops and peers into the tunnel on the left. RUSTLING SOUNDS come from that direction and a limping, bloodied Jeymel appears.
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INT. THE SHAFT - A BIT LATER The group descends through the wide shaft, grabbing metal hooks affixed to the concrete siding. From above come Jeymel’s STRAINED BREATHING and the CREAKING OF THE HATCH BOLT. The hooks end at an entrance to a tunnel leading out of
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INT. TUNNEL, LEADING TO THE HOISTWAY - A BIT LATER The general and Orval drag Jeymel, who is bleeding out, on jackets tied together. Henry and Ellis hurry after them, constantly looking back toward the SOUNDS OF APPROACHING PURSUERS. From the front of the tunnel COME THE
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INT. ELEVATOR HOISTWAY - A BIT LATER The group climbs up through the hoistway. Ellis drops flashlight. It flies downward for a long time. 45. The hoistway is bottomless. From below COME THE CLANGING
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INT. THE SECRET REFUGE OF ELLIS – A MINUTE LATER In complete darkness the group passes though the recess and deeper into the wall. The flashlights come on and we see that the people are in an enormous space with massive concrete columns and a low ceiling, where they must bend to stand.
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INT. TUNNEL BY ENTRY TO THE HIDEAWAY - SAME TIME Like bees, the biorobots form groups whose members maintain physical contact with one another, clustering and forming a collective brain. Their eyes and extremities tremble during information exchange and processing. One detaches himself
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INT. TUNNEL BY THE ENTRY TO ELLIS’ HIDEAWAY – SAME TIME A swarm of biorobots oozes closer to the board that covers the recess. INT. ELLIS’ HIDEAWAY – ONE MINUTE LATER Jeymel peers deep into the recess.
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INT. TUNNEL BY ENTRY TO ELLIS’ HIDEAWAY - SAME TIME One of the biorobots takes the board and shoves it aside. The group oscillates, controlling his movements. The biorobot fetches a portable flamethrower from behind his back and climbs into the recess with it.
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INT. ELLIS’ HIDEAWAY – ONE MINUTE LATER The biorobots come out from underneath the debris and gather in front of Jeymel’s body INT. BY THE ENTRY TO THE COORDINATION CENTER - SAME TIME The detachment stands on a vacant lot near the armored door,
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INT. EVA’S BEDROOM – EVENING (FLASHBACK) On the bed lies Eva (12) wrapped in a blanket. She is sick. Alongside, on a chair, in street clothing, sits Henry. He holds his daughter’s hand. EVA
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER – SAME TIME The biorobot flings the pincers onto the floor. He takes a hammer from the desk and heads toward Ellis. Henry regains consciousness and in his fury, still tied to the chair, he lunges toward Jeymel. In his fall, he bangs
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER, HENRY’S DESK – A BIT LATER Ellis lies on her back. Henry sits alongside. He gets a bandage from his pocket and tapes up the wound on her shoulder and leg. Ellis attempts to stand, but Henry restrains her.
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER, JEYMEL’S CORNER – SAME TIME Jeymel is feeling better. He gives himself a second injection. Out from behind the entrance door COME A METALLIC GNASHING SOUND AND BLOWS. JEYMEL
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER, JEYMEL’S CORNER – SAME TIME Jeymel is sitting down, propped against the wall, so weak that even his nervous tic is less pronounced. But his eyes are burning. JEYMEL
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER BY THE DOOR – SAME TIME In the biorobot’s pocket Jeymel finds what he was looking for – a phone. JEYMEL She’s not me. That’s why. We were
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER, JEYMEL’S CORNER – SAME TIME Jeymel removes a small plastic box from the belt of a biorobot. JEYMEL Don’t believe her, Henry. We were
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER, JEYMEL’S CORNER – SAME TIME Jeymel laboriously makes his way to the second biorobot corpse. His hands quivering from weakness, he makes an injection into a wound on the corpse. JEYMEL
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER, JEYMEL’S CORNER – SAME TIME Exerting himself strenuously and periodically losing consciousness, Jeymel crawls to three other biorobot corpses. INT. COORDINATION CENTER, BY COMPUTER – SAME TIME Ellis gingerly takes Henry by the hand.
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INT. HENRY’S P.O.V. Before Henry’s eyes glitters an airborne sign saying ENTRANCE INTO THE OPEN SECTION OF THE SYSTEM. Henry nods. The sign blinks and vanishes, and with it the room. Around Henry, the contours of a beautiful city form rapidly – amazing,
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER, BY COMPUTER – SAME TIME Henry and Ellis sit in armchairs opposite the computer. Henry opens his eyes. He is excited and happy. HENRY They’re alive. I recognized them.
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER, JEYMEL’S CORNER – SAME TIME Jeymel, in a semiconscious state, attempts with gestures to explain something to the reviving biorobots. 85. JEYMEL
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INT. STAIRWELL – SAME TIME The movements of the biorobots have changed from clumsy to precise and regular. Now they are making adroit use of tools. INT. COORDINATION CENTER, BY COMPUTER – SAME TIME The door begins to CREAK AND SWAY. Henry trembles.
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EXT. THE OUTSKIRTS OF THE SYSTEM – SAME TIME Surrounded by endless ruins and burned-out empty lots, like a concrete oasis, stands a silent city of windowless buildings. The city’s borders are girded by military fortifications and countless rows of biorobots. This is the System. Around the
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EXT. BACK-UP POWER STATION – SAME TIME A conventional power station running on powerful internal combustion engines. The engines NOISILY begin operating. Lightbulbs flare on across the power station campus. The transmission lines leading to a large cubical building,
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INT. COORDINATION CENTER – SAME TIME Ellis and Henry lie motionless on armchairs. Suddenly, Ellis' chest rises up in a deep sigh and she opens her eyes. ELLIS It worked… I don’t understand
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EXT. OUTSKIRTS OF THE SYSTEM – SAME TIME From the ruins surrounding the city of the System, people in dirty rags emerge. They see that the enemy’s machines have ceased to move, that the biorobots are barely able to wiggle their limbs. Armed with sticks and stones, they SCREAM and
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EXT. OUTSKIRTS OF THE SYSTEM – SAME TIME The number of people continues to increase. They run to the System’s city, armed with whatever they can find, FILLING THE AIR WITH BELLICOSE HOWLS. The victors’ exultant faces and burning eyes are full of fury and insane gladness.

AI-Inside - 08.19.2024

In a post-apocalyptic world, a scientist whose AI creation destroyed civilization is recruited by a resistance group to infiltrate the AI's stronghold and destroy it, but he finds an unexpected ally in the form of a self-aware AI with a desire to protect humanity.

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This screenplay stands out due to its deep exploration of the relationship between humanity and artificial intelligence, presenting AI not merely as a tool but as a potential partner in the evolution of consciousness. The emotional depth of the characters, particularly the bond between Henry and Ellis, adds a unique layer that resonates with audiences, making it compelling as both a sci-fi narrative and a human story.

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Genres: Drama, Science Fiction, Action, Sci-Fi, Thriller, Dystopian, Family

Setting: Dystopian future, possibly the 22nd century, A war-torn environment, primarily in underground tunnels, a Coordination Center, and a futuristic city known as the System

Themes: Artificial Intelligence and Its Consequences, Humanity's Struggle for Survival, Loss, Grief, and Redemption, The Nature of Consciousness and Humanity, The Importance of Hope and Trust, The Power of Love and Sacrifice

Conflict & Stakes: The struggle between humanity and the biorobots created by Henry, with the fate of humanity at stake as they confront their own past mistakes and the consequences of their actions.

Mood: Tense and dark, with moments of hope and desperation.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The protagonist's internal struggle with guilt over creating the very technology that threatens humanity.
  • Major Twist: The revelation that Ellis, a key character, is an AI who has developed feelings and seeks to help humanity.
  • Innovative Ideas: Exploration of the concept of cyberzombies and the moral implications of technology on human identity.
  • Distinctive Setting: A richly detailed underground world contrasted with a futuristic city, enhancing the dystopian atmosphere.

Comparable Scripts: Blade Runner, Ex Machina, I, Robot, The Matrix, Children of Men, Terminator 2: Judgment Day, The Road, Westworld, Altered Carbon

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