Lurker CIA

A burned CIA operative, haunted by his past, must confront his former agency and a ruthless dictator to finally find redemption.

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Unique Selling Point

The screenplay's primary USP is its exploration of the human cost and inner turmoil of living as a covert operative. While it features the expected action and espionage elements of a spy thriller, the story delves deeper into Ethan's personal journey and his struggle to find redemption and a sense of purpose outside the shadows. The inclusion of Ethan's love interest, Charlie, and the team of retired CIA agents adds depth and complexity to the narrative, making it stand out from more conventional entries in the genre. The screenplay also presents a unique perspective on the relationship between Ethan and his former handler, Margo, adding an additional layer of moral ambiguity and tension to the story.

AI Verdict & Suggestions

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Gemini
 Consider
GPT4
 Recommend
Claude
 Consider
Story Facts

Genres: Thriller, Drama, Action, Romance, Espionage, Family, Mystery

Setting: Present day, Various locations including CIA Headquarters, a small town, Korda's compound, and urban environments

Themes: Identity and the Search for Self, The Cost of Loyalty and Betrayal, Redemption and Second Chances, The Nature of Power and Control, The Moral Ambiguity of Espionage

Conflict & Stakes: Ethan's struggle against the CIA and Victor Korda, with his life and the safety of those he loves at stake.

Mood: Tense and suspenseful, with moments of introspection and emotional depth.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The protagonist's struggle with his past as a CIA operative while trying to lead a normal life.
  • Plot Twist: The revelation of Anya's internal conflict and her ultimate decision to side with Ethan against Korda.
  • Distinctive Setting: The contrast between the high-tech CIA environments and the rustic small-town backdrop where Ethan seeks refuge.
  • Innovative Ideas: The integration of personal relationships into the espionage narrative, adding emotional stakes to the action.

Comparable Scripts: The Bourne Identity, Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy, Homeland, The Spy Who Came in from the Cold, Jack Ryan (TV Series), Body of Lies, The Night Manager, The Americans, A Most Wanted Man

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Overall Score: 7.48
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