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A group of aspiring actors navigate the hilarious and often absurd world of background work, while chasing their dreams of Hollywood stardom.

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

This script offers a unique blend of mafia drama, dark humor, and behind-the-scenes filmmaking chaos, all brought to life through sharp dialogue, authentic character interactions, and unexpected plot twists. The writer's voice excels in creating a dark and suspenseful mood, emphasizing themes of power, loyalty, and betrayal. The standout scene, which encapsulates the script's unique voice, is the mafia funeral hostage situation, where a young man takes the crowd hostage and accuses the newly-appointed mafia boss of murder. The scene masterfully combines tension, dark humor, and an unexpected plot twist, making it a captivating opening for the screenplay.

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Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Comedy, Crime, Action, Mystery, Thriller

Setting: Present day, A mix of locations including a funeral home, a movie studio sound stage, and a rooftop parking deck

Themes: Revenge, Family, Deception, Professionalism, Humor

Conflict & Stakes: The primary conflict is between Tom's desire to experience movie magic and his responsibilities as a teacher, as well as the challenges he faces as a new extra in the film industry. The stakes are high for Tom as he risks his teaching career and reputation to pursue his dream.

Mood: Playful and collaborative, with a hint of tension and excitement for the future

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: A middle-school teacher pursues his dream of experiencing movie magic and learning about filmmaking as an extra.
  • Plot Twist: Tom's friendship with Alistair leads to unexpected consequences.
  • Distinctive Setting: A mix of locations including a funeral home, a movie studio sound stage, and a rooftop parking deck.
  • Innovative Ideas: Explores the challenges of the film industry in a relatable way.

Comparable Scripts: The Godfather (1972) , A Bronx Tale (1993), The Sopranos (1999-2007) , The Departed (2006), The Irishman (2019), The Long Goodbye (1973), Pulp Fiction (1994), The Big Sleep (1946), The Usual Suspects (1995), Casino (1995)

Script Level Analysis

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Characters
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Emotional Analysis
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Goals and Philosophical Conflict
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Themes
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Logic & Inconsistencies
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Scene Analysis

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Unique Voice
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Writer's Craft
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Memorable Lines
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Tropes
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World Building
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Correlations
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