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INT. FUNERAL HOME - DAY MUSIC: Ave Maria by Franz Schubert Somber organ music accompanies a brunette teen singer at a mafia funeral. Mourners weep and shuffle past a wall of flowers to the casket of an elderly man with a moustache and
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INT. FUNERAL HOME SET - CONTINUOUS Many voices shout 'CUT!', repeating the director's command. GERHARDT KLUUNDT (CONT'D) Scheisse! With a pained expression, the actor playing Blue Lou pleads
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INT. STUDIO SOUND STAGE - CONTINUOUS The irritated director sits at a monitor. He removes his trendy glasses and runs a hand over his blonde buzzcut. GERHARDT KLUUNDT Lieber Gott was kommt als nächstes?
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EXT. PARKING GARAGE - SUNRISE SUPER: earlier that day A station wagon passes a yellow EXTRAS PARKING sign and climbs the ramp to a rooftop parking deck. The lot is empty, save for some traffic cones and an unmarked white cargo van.
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INT. ELEVATOR - CONTINUOUS THOMAS COVINGTON Is it supposed to rain all day? I missed the news. That reminds me, I'd better let Sarah know I'm here.
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EXT. PARKING GARAGE - CONTINUOUS ANASTASIA GLASS (30, blue-eyed blonde) rushes to beat the rain, covering her hair with a magazine. The doors close just as Stacy reaches the elevator. Furious, she angrily mashes the button and stamps her stiletto in frustration.
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INT. STUDIO SOUND STAGE - MOMENTS LATER The production's key players stand comparing notes in a loose circle. Jeff drains his java as he joins the impromptu strategy session already underway. Jerry confers with the cinematographer, flipping through a
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EXT. WAREHOUSE STUDIO - DAYBREAK SUPER: earlier that day Rainwater gushes out of a gutter and into a field behind the main building, creating a swampy quagmire. On the grassy slope is a large event tent holding rows of folding tables
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INT. EXTRAS HOLDING - MOMENTS LATER Tom sits at a table filling out a form. He notices that he is sinking as his weight pushes the legs of the chair into the turf. He signs the voucher slip and rises to turn it in. 14.
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INT. WARDROBE DEPARTMENT - LATE MORNING Jeff bites his nails and sips coffee as he meets with a middle-aged woman in cat's eye glasses. Measuring tape draped around her neck, she holds a portable tablet which displays a photo lineup of mourners.
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INT. HAIR AND MAKEUP TRAILER - LATER Tom Covington sits wide-eyed in front of a make-up mirror in Don Vincenzo's suit. A grey wig is unceremoniously plopped onto his head. The goth hairdresser tugs and pulls it over his skull, then fastens it with a pierced mouthful of pins.
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INT. EXTRAS HOLDING - MORNING SUPER: earlier that day Tom scrapes mud from his wingtips at the back of the food line. In front of him, BROCK BRADLEY (50's, brawny, rugged) carries BRIANNA BRADLEY (19, green eyes, petite) in his
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INT. FUNERAL HOME SET - AFTERNOON The set is a hive of activity. Assistants and coordinators scurry about in preparation for filming. BEGIN MONTAGE 1. The Darrells raise banks of shrouded light panels.
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INT. EXTRAS HOLDING - MORNING SUPER: earlier that day Sitting back at his table, Tom winces as he sips from the tiny carton of orange drink. His neighbors look on in amusement as Tom begins unwrapping his breakfast burrito.
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INT. FUNERAL HOME SET - EVENING Jeff sits behind the Director of Photography checking out the raw feed. Crew members make comments in his earpiece while the scene draws to a close. GERHARDT KLUUNDT
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INT. FUNERAL HOME SET - CONTINUOUS KELLEY DELORENZO (dejected) Silence, Background. (sigh)
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EXT. STUDIO SOUND STAGE - MORNING SUPER: earlier that day Emerging from the bathroom, Tom notices that the rain has subsided and slings his backpack over a shoulder. He walks toward EXTRAS HOLDING. Lights above the studio doors flash
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EXT. PARKING GARAGE - NIGHT A line of cars file out of the parking deck. The elevator opens. Tom, Gloria, Ben, and Penny exit mid-conversation. THOMAS COVINGTON So, let me get this straight.
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EXT. PARKING GARAGE - NIGHT The parking deck is completely empty. 2 pink voucher slips are caught by a gust of wind and spiral into an updraft. A crow pecks at the remains of a discarded burrito, only to be startled by the parting doors of the elevator.

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A group of aspiring actors navigate the hilarious and often absurd world of background work, while chasing their dreams of Hollywood stardom.

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Unique Selling Point

This script offers a unique blend of mafia drama, dark humor, and behind-the-scenes filmmaking chaos, all brought to life through sharp dialogue, authentic character interactions, and unexpected plot twists. The writer's voice excels in creating a dark and suspenseful mood, emphasizing themes of power, loyalty, and betrayal. The standout scene, which encapsulates the script's unique voice, is the mafia funeral hostage situation, where a young man takes the crowd hostage and accuses the newly-appointed mafia boss of murder. The scene masterfully combines tension, dark humor, and an unexpected plot twist, making it a captivating opening for the screenplay.

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Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Comedy, Crime, Action, Mystery, Thriller

Setting: Present day, A mix of locations including a funeral home, a movie studio sound stage, and a rooftop parking deck

Themes: Revenge, Family, Deception, Professionalism, Humor

Conflict & Stakes: The primary conflict is between Tom's desire to experience movie magic and his responsibilities as a teacher, as well as the challenges he faces as a new extra in the film industry. The stakes are high for Tom as he risks his teaching career and reputation to pursue his dream.

Mood: Playful and collaborative, with a hint of tension and excitement for the future

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: A middle-school teacher pursues his dream of experiencing movie magic and learning about filmmaking as an extra.
  • Plot Twist: Tom's friendship with Alistair leads to unexpected consequences.
  • Distinctive Setting: A mix of locations including a funeral home, a movie studio sound stage, and a rooftop parking deck.
  • Innovative Ideas: Explores the challenges of the film industry in a relatable way.

Comparable Scripts: The Godfather (1972) , A Bronx Tale (1993), The Sopranos (1999-2007) , The Departed (2006), The Irishman (2019), The Long Goodbye (1973), Pulp Fiction (1994), The Big Sleep (1946), The Usual Suspects (1995), Casino (1995)

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