A Case of Blindness

A prejudiced, elderly blind man's worldview is challenged and transformed when a young, intelligent woman befriends him and introduces him to the power of empathy and understanding.

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Unique Selling Point

The unique selling proposition of 'A Case of Blindness' lies in its poignant exploration of prejudice through the lens of a blind character, allowing for a fresh perspective on societal biases. The screenplay's ability to blend humor with serious themes makes it relatable and engaging for a diverse audience, while its focus on literature as a bridge for understanding adds depth to the storytelling.

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Claude
 Recommend
GPT4
 Recommend
Average Score: 0.0
Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Family, Literary

Setting: Contemporary, Walker House and local park

Themes: Prejudice and Bigotry, Connection and Friendship, Generational Conflict, Redemption and Growth, Community and Belonging

Conflict & Stakes: The primary conflict revolves around Grandpa Walker's prejudiced views towards different ethnicities, particularly regarding Tony's friends, which creates tension in their relationship. The stakes involve the potential for personal growth and understanding across generations.

Mood: Warm and uplifting with moments of tension.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The relationship between a blind grandfather and his diverse granddaughter, exploring themes of prejudice and acceptance.
  • Character Growth: Grandpa's journey from prejudice to understanding, particularly through his bond with Shannon.
  • Literary Connection: The use of literature, particularly 'To Kill a Mockingbird,' as a bridge for connection and understanding.

Comparable Scripts: The Blind Side, Gran Torino, A Beautiful Day in the Neighborhood, The Help, The Pursuit of Happyness, The Farewell, Little Miss Sunshine, The Intouchables, The Odd Life of Timothy Green

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Overall Score: 7.80
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