The Real Lone Ranger

A pioneering African American deputy marshal in the late 19th century American West must confront his own son, who is wanted for murder, in order to uphold the law he has sworn to protect.

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Unique Selling Point

The screenplay stands out for its historical portrayal of Bass Reeves, one of the first black deputy marshals in the Wild West, offering a fresh perspective on a traditionally white-dominated genre. Its compelling storytelling and thematic depth make it a unique and engaging narrative.

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Claude
 Recommend
GPT4
 Recommend
DeepSeek
 Consider
Average Score: 0.0
Story Facts

Genres: Western, Drama, Action, Romance, Family Drama, Historical Drama, Historical, War, Adventure

Setting: 1873 and various flashbacks to earlier years, including 1854 and 1861, Indian Territory, Oklahoma, and Fort Smith, Arkansas

Themes: Justice and Law Enforcement, Racial Identity and Prejudice, Family and Sacrifice, Resilience and Determination, Community and Support

Conflict & Stakes: The central conflict revolves around Bass's pursuit of justice as a black lawman in a racially prejudiced society, facing threats from outlaws like Webb while balancing his responsibilities to his family.

Mood: Tense and dramatic, with moments of warmth and familial love.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The story of Bass Reeves, one of the first black deputy marshals in the U.S., offers a fresh perspective on the Western genre.
  • Major Twist: The emotional conflict when Bass must confront his own son, accused of murder, adds depth and complexity to the narrative.
  • Distinctive Setting: The juxtaposition of the rugged Indian Territory and the oppressive societal norms of the time creates a rich backdrop for the story.
  • Innovative Ideas: The screenplay blends historical drama with action and social commentary, appealing to a wide range of viewers.

Comparable Scripts: The Harder They Fall, Django Unchained, 12 Years a Slave, The Underground Railroad, Justified, The Revenant, The Magnificent Seven, Roots, The Good Lord Bird

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Overall Score: 7.61
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