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Necessary Decisions Written by Giacomo Giammatteo Logline: When a girl is kidnapped, a detective must outwit a criminal mastermind in order to get her back. The only
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INT. E.R. — HERMANN HOSPITAL — NIGHT Ribs waits while Gino gets stitches. He jokes with the DOCTOR (30s, black woman, talkative and compassionate). RIBS Take good care of him. He's my cuz.
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EXT. CONSTRUCTION SITE — DAY LONNY HACKETT (40, a heavily muscled black bricklayer and dedicated father) finishes laying bricks, then comes down from the scaffold, carrying a tool bag and a level. LONNY
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INT. CORNER STORE — DAY Lonny enters the store, grabs a gallon of milk, counts his money, then picks up a few candy bars for Lucia and his kids. He sets the candy on counter for the CLERK (early 20s, thin, tattooed).
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INT. HIGH SCHOOL, THE WOODLANDS — DAY JADA (17, long hair, black, typical teenager, humbly dressed) walks down a long hall, her head hanging low. She waves to her friend ALEXA (17, black, perennial party girl, well-off and dresses the part).
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INT. HACKETT HOUSE — DAY Jada walks into the house. Her mother is folding clothes. LUCIA How was your day, dear? JADA
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EXT. HACKETT HOUSE — DAY Lonny pulls into the driveway and washes his hands and arms at an outside spigot. He brushes cement from his clothes, puts on a fake smile, and enters the house. INT. HACKETT HOUSE — DAY
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INT. LONNY'S BEDROOM — NIGHT — LATER Lucia enters the bedroom and sits next to Lonny. He’s lying on the bed, staring at the ceiling. She rolls him over and rubs his back. LONNY
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EXT. VARIOUS CONSTRUCTION SITES — DAY MONTAGE — LONNY LOOKING FOR WORK -- Lonny drives to a building site and speaks to the foreman. -- Lonny drives to the site of a new school being built. -- Lonny joins a small crowd of day-laborers at a corner
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EXT. CORNER STORE — DAY Lonny gets in his truck and leaves the parking lot. His phone rings almost immediately. WILLARD (V.O.) Are you willing to do anything?
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EXT. VAN — MORNING Lonny gets in a van behind the coffee shop, and dons the mask. Number Three is in the back and DRIVER (40, female) is behind the wheel. MONTAGE
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EXT. STARBUCKS — DAY Lonny arrives on time and goes through the same process as before. Numbers Two, Three, FIVE (40, Texas accent), and Boss are already seated. A moment later, Driver opens the door and starts the engine.
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INT. BATHROOM — EVENING Boss enters the bathroom holding a knife while MR. MARSHALL (40s, graying hair) is in the shower. He yanks the door open. BOSS Keep quiet. Your family is downstairs,
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INT. GINO'S HOUSE — NIGHT Gino stumbles from bed and answers the phone. GINO Hello? CHIEF RENKIN (V.O.)
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INT. OFFICE OF DISPATCHER — DAY DISPATCHER (50s, monotone voice) sits at his desk working. The Caller ID reads ‘unknown caller.’ Dispatcher glances around, then picks up the phone. BOSS (V.O.)
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY SUPER — “ONE WEEK LATER” SCOTT (40s, black, rigid and professional) rolls over in bed. He gropes about, as if looking for someone, then sits up. Sounds of the shower running come from the bathroom.
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EXT./INT. SCOTT'S OFFICE — DAY Scott parks his Lamborghini in the space marked 'CEO,' then walks to the conference room and puts his briefcase on the table. He looks at each person sitting around the table. SCOTT
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INT. BOSS'S OFFICE — DAY Boss is at his desk. The phone rings, and Boss answers. DISPATCHER (V.O.) You know how dangerous this is. Few succeed, and if they do, it's usually
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EXT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY Number Two parks on the side of the street. She checks the surroundings, then dials Number Three. NUMBER TWO (concerned)
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY The phone rings as Scott prepares to leave. He picks up quickly and speaks brusquely. SCOTT Michele, I'm on my way.
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INT. POLICE STATION — DAY Gino walks into Captain Cooper's office and sits. CHIEF RENKIN (late 40s, black, all business) is in another chair. He stands and shakes Gino’s hand. CHIEF RENKIN
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY Gino parks on a cobblestone drive, then walks up a stone- covered walkway. The house is a sprawling mansion, big enough for five families. He rings the doorbell and waits. Scott Winthrop greets him within seconds.
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — KITCHEN EATING AREA — DAY Gino sits at the table talking on his cell. GINO Julie, I assume Coop filled you in, so here's what I need. First thing is have
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE, ENTRY — DAY SCOTT Alexa! Are you all right? How did you get away? ALEXA
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INT. HACKETT HOUSE — NIGHT Mars opens the door and Gino and Alexa enter. Lonny Hackett comes forward. Lucia is in the background. LONNY Can I help you?
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — NIGHT Gino, Lonny, Lucia, Mars, and Ribs sit at the table while Scott prepares the recording. GINO Scott, start it from where the
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EXT. WINTHROP HOUSE — NIGHT Gino steps outside and calls Captain Cooper. GINO Captain, I told you I didn’t want this damn case from the beginning. I can’t
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INT. BOSS'S HEADQUARTERS — NIGHT Boss, Two, and Four are in the back room, talking. BOSS I wasn't happy with the call, Four. NUMBER TWO
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EXT./INT. MOTEL — NIGHT Driver parks the car, opens the motel rooms, then alerts Number Two. Number Two leads Jada to the center room, unties her hands and removes her gag but keeps the blindfold on. NUMBER TWO
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — NIGHT Lucia Hackett gathers dirty dishes from the table and walks to the sink. Gino picks up a dishtowel and moves beside her. LUCIA No need for a detective to be doin'
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE, KITCHEN — DAY Scott picks up on the third ring, holding a script in front of him. He seems nervous. NUMBER FOUR (V.O.) Is the money ready, Mr. Winthrop?
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EXT. WINTHROP HOUSE — NIGHT Gino steps outside to call Julie. GINO Julie, I need a list of all motels along I-45 — Greenspoint to Conroe.
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE, KITCHEN — NIGHT Gino goes back inside. Mars follows. Gino's phone rings as he walks into the kitchen. GINO Ramirez, what's up?
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INT. DENNY'S RESTAURANT — THE WOODLANDS — DAY Doran parks near the back of Denny's and goes inside. A waitress seats him, then fills his coffee cup. DORAN Pancakes and bacon. Nothing else.
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EXT. DORAN’S CAR — DAY Doran gets on Hardy Toll Road in the right lane. A few seconds later the kidnapper's voice is heard. BOSS (V.O.) When you see the airport exit, head
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY Gino sits beside the technician as he monitors the hidden GPS data. TECHNICIAN Doran's in the garage at "B," not
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY The Hacketts mob Doran when he walks in. LUCIA What happened? Did you get her? Gino goes to Lucia and asks her to sit down.
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EXT/INT. MOTEL — DAY Number Two removes her mask and exits the van, then puts it on before entering the room. Number Five is sitting on the bed, his hand resting on Jada's leg. He jumps when Two enters. NUMBER TWO
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE, KITCHEN — DAY Gino stares at the text they sent — a picture of Jada, naked, tied to the bed, and bloodied. GINO Connors, this picture may have clues.
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INT. GINO'S HOUSE — NIGHT Gino is getting wine from the bar when he sees headlights in the driveway. He looks out the window, and sees Ribs getting out of his car. Ribs knocks on the door, then walks in. Gino is on the couch
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — KITCHEN — DAY Lucia is cooking breakfast for Alexa, Lonny, and Scott when Gino enters. He goes to the kitchen and pours a cup of coffee. GINO I’m surprised you feel up to cooking.
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EXT. KIDNAPPER'S VAN — DAY Number Two sits in the back of the van with Three. She wears her mask and has gloves on. A cell phone is to her ear. NUMBER TWO Shit!
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DINING ROOM - DAY Gino and Scott walk in. The phone rings and the tech signals it's the kidnappers. Gino nods at Scott. SCOTT Hello.
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EXT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY Lonny opens the front door and goes outside. Gino rushes after him, moving quickly down the walk. He gets to Lonny before he reaches his truck. GINO
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INT. MOTEL — DAY Number Four cracks the curtains and peeks outside. A car pulls into a space at the far end of the lot. A man gets out of the car, conspicuously holding a hotel- room key as he walks toward the motel. Four grabs Jada and
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EXT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY Scott leaves, carrying two bags of cash. He puts them in Gino's car and climbs behind the wheel. Two blocks away, he stops at an intersection. A man jumps out from behind a van on the side of the road. He is wearing a mask and is
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY Gino grabs the phone as soon as it rings. GINO Yeah, Charlie? CHARLIE (V.O.)
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EXT. LONNY’S CAR — DAY Lonny drives and Gino is in the passenger seat. LONNY Where we goin', Detective? GINO
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EXT. LONNY'S CAR — DAY Gino's phone rings as they drive north on I—45. NUMBER TWO (V.O.) Have you found what you’re looking for? GINO
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EXT. KIDNAPPERS VAN — DAY Driver exits the freeway with Number Two in the back. DRIVER Is he really dead? NUMBER TWO
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EXT. MOTEL — DAY Gino pulls into the parking lot with Lonny. Lance and his crew are already there. Gino gets out of the car and walks to Lance. GINO
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INT. MOTEL ROOM — DAY Number Four paces in front of the window and Jada sits in a chair across the room. She walks to Four and taps his shoulder. She gestures toward the bathroom. Four closes his eyes and sighs.
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EXT. BOSS'S HEADQUARTERS — DAY When Gino arrives, the building is on fire. Flames are reaching into the sky and four firetrucks are there. He shows his badge to a FIREMAN (40, solid build, full uniform) standing to the side.
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INT. WINTHROP HOUSE — DAY Gino walks in the door. Ribs is sitting at the kitchen table with Connors, and the techs are in the dining room. Gino sits next to Ribs and whispers. GINO
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EXT. POLICE VAN — DAY Delgado leaves the house and gets in the van. They drive a few blocks away, then park on the side of the road. RIBS You think he'll call?
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INT. HACKETT HOUSE — NIGHT Lonny, Lucia, Jada, and Mars sit around the kitchen table. Lonny is holding Jada's hand and smiling. LONNY Whatever you want for dinner, young
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INT. HACKETT HOUSE — DAY Lonny and Lucia leave the bedroom and sit on the sofa, the kids across from them. Lonny folds his hands and leans forward. LONNY Sometimes people do wrong. I did
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INT. DINER — DAY Gino sits at a booth near the window. Lonny across from him. A WAITRESS takes their orders. Gino stares at Lonny as he eats. GINO I guess I owe the world more than
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INT. MARISSA'S HOUSE, THE WOODLANDS — DAY Gino steps into a large foyer with marble floors. GINO Scott introduced you as Jennifer. MARISSA
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EXT. MARISSA’S HOUSE — THE WOODLANDS — DAY As Gino walks down the sidewalk, Marissa steps onto the porch. MARISSA Detective, I had a thought. If this

Necessary Decisions

When a girl is kidnapped, a detective must outwit a criminal mastermind in order to get her back, but the only person who can help is the kidnapped girl's father, who faces the death penalty if he tells what he knows.

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The unique selling proposition of 'Necessary Decisions' lies in its intricate character dynamics and moral dilemmas faced by the protagonists. Unlike typical thrillers that focus solely on action, this screenplay delves into the emotional turmoil of a father facing the death penalty while trying to save his daughter, creating a rich tapestry of conflict and urgency. The blend of personal stakes with high-stakes crime makes it compelling for audiences who appreciate character-driven narratives.

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Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Crime, Thriller, Family, Mystery, Teen Drama, Romance

Setting: Contemporary, South Houston and The Woodlands, Texas

Themes: Family, Redemption, Justice, Loss, Betrayal, Corruption

Conflict & Stakes: The main conflict revolves around the kidnapping of Jada Hackett and Alexa Winthrop, with high stakes involving the safety of the girls and the emotional turmoil of their families.

Mood: Tense and suspenseful, with moments of emotional depth.

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  • Unique Hook: The intertwining stories of two families affected by a kidnapping, showcasing the emotional and psychological impact of crime.
  • Major Twist: The revelation that the kidnappers have mistakenly taken the wrong girl, heightening the urgency and stakes.
  • Distinctive Setting: The contrast between suburban life and the gritty underworld of crime in Houston adds depth to the narrative.
  • Innovative Ideas: The use of technology and surveillance in the investigation reflects contemporary issues in crime-solving.

Comparable Scripts: The Town, Gone Baby Gone, Prisoners, The Wire, A Simple Plan, The Little Things, The Night Of, The Family Man, The Departed

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