Necessary Decisions

When a girl is kidnapped, a detective must outwit a criminal mastermind in order to get her back, but the only person who can help is the kidnapped girl's father, who faces the death penalty if he tells what he knows.

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Unique Selling Point

The unique selling proposition of 'Necessary Decisions' lies in its intricate character dynamics and moral dilemmas faced by the protagonists. Unlike typical thrillers that focus solely on action, this screenplay delves into the emotional turmoil of a father facing the death penalty while trying to save his daughter, creating a rich tapestry of conflict and urgency. The blend of personal stakes with high-stakes crime makes it compelling for audiences who appreciate character-driven narratives.

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Claude
 Recommend
GPT4
 Recommend
Average Score: 0.0
Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Crime, Thriller, Family, Mystery, Teen Drama, Romance

Setting: Contemporary, South Houston and The Woodlands, Texas

Themes: Family, Redemption, Justice, Loss, Betrayal, Corruption

Conflict & Stakes: The main conflict revolves around the kidnapping of Jada Hackett and Alexa Winthrop, with high stakes involving the safety of the girls and the emotional turmoil of their families.

Mood: Tense and suspenseful, with moments of emotional depth.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The intertwining stories of two families affected by a kidnapping, showcasing the emotional and psychological impact of crime.
  • Major Twist: The revelation that the kidnappers have mistakenly taken the wrong girl, heightening the urgency and stakes.
  • Distinctive Setting: The contrast between suburban life and the gritty underworld of crime in Houston adds depth to the narrative.
  • Innovative Ideas: The use of technology and surveillance in the investigation reflects contemporary issues in crime-solving.

Comparable Scripts: The Town, Gone Baby Gone, Prisoners, The Wire, A Simple Plan, The Little Things, The Night Of, The Family Man, The Departed

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Overall Score: 7.36
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