Charlie and The Choclate Factory
Executive Summary
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Overview
Genres: Fantasy, Adventure, Family, Comedy, Drama, Musical
Setting: Present day, Wonka's chocolate factory and surrounding town
Overview: Charlie and the Chocolate Factory is a whimsical and heartwarming tale about a young boy named Charlie Bucket who wins a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to visit Willy Wonka's magical chocolate factory. Guided by the eccentric inventor, Charlie embarks on an extraordinary adventure filled with fantastical rooms, singing Oompa-Loompas, and delectable treats. Along the way, he learns valuable lessons about kindness, integrity, and the power of imagination.
Themes: The Power of Imagination and Dreams, The Importance of Family, The Dangers of Greed and Selfishness, The Value of Hard Work and Determination, The Role of Mentorship and Guidance, The Importance of Empathy and Understanding
Conflict and Stakes: Charlie's quest to find a golden ticket and win a tour of the chocolate factory, and Wonka's search for an heir to his business.
Overall Mood: Whimsical and lighthearted, with a touch of darkness and danger.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: The opening scene, which introduces Charlie and his family and their poverty-stricken life, is sad and depressing.
- Scene 5: The scene in which Augustus Gloop falls into the chocolate river is chaotic and suspenseful.
- Scene 10: The scene in which Violet Beauregarde turns into a giant blueberry is funny and absurd.
- Scene 15: The scene in which Veruca Salt is thrown down the garbage chute is satisfying and cathartic.
- Scene 19: The scene in which Mike Teavee is shrunk by the television chocolate machine is scary and thrilling.
- Scene 20: The scene in which Charlie is revealed to be the winner of the factory is heartwarming and triumphant.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The film's unique and imaginative setting, which includes a chocolate river, a giant waterfall, and edible trees.
- Plot Twist: The revelation that Willy Wonka is actually Charlie's father.
- Distinctive Setting: The film's use of bright colors and夸张的服装设计
- Innovative Ideas: The film's use of stop-motion animation to create the Oompa-Loompas.
- Unique Characters: The film's memorable and eccentric characters, such as Willy Wonka, Grandpa Joe, and Augustus Gloop.
- Genre Blend: The film's unique blend of fantasy, adventure, and comedy.
Comparable Scripts:
- Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (2005)
- Willy Wonka & the Chocolate Factory (1971)
- The BFG (2016)
- Matilda (1996)
- Alice in Wonderland (2010)
- The Wizard of Oz (1939)
- Hook (1991)
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a blend of whimsy, humor, and imaginative storytelling, often exploring fantastical elements and quirky character interactions. It combines the styles of various authors, including Roald Dahl, Wes Anderson, and Tim Burton.
Style Similarities:
- Roald Dahl
- Wes Anderson
- Tim Burton
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' is a delightful and engaging adventure that successfully captures the whimsical nature of the original story. The introduction of Willy Wonka and the Golden Ticket effectively sets up the central conflict and creates a sense of anticipation for the upcoming adventure. The screenplay's strengths lie in its well-developed characters, particularly Willy Wonka and Charlie Bucket. The screenplay excels in creating a vivid and immersive setting, and the pacing is well-balanced throughout the story. However, there are some areas where the screenplay could be improved, such as strengthening the emotional connection to certain scenes and enhancing the dialogue. Overall, the screenplay is a strong and entertaining adaptation that brings the beloved story to life on the big screen.
USP: Step into a world of pure imagination, where the whimsical and wonderful collide in a vibrant tapestry of storytelling. "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" captivates with its unique blend of fantastical adventure, heartwarming family moments, and thought-provoking themes that resonate with audiences of all ages. Experience the magic of Willy Wonka's chocolate paradise, where every twist and turn reveals a fresh perspective on the power of dreams, the value of kindness, and the importance of embracing the extraordinary. This captivating tale, infused with the author's distinct voice, transports readers to a realm where anything is possible and the boundaries of reality joyfully blur, leaving an unforgettable impression long after the final page is turned.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$100-150 million
Target Audience Demographics: Families with children aged 6-12, fans of fantasy and adventure films
Marketability: It is a well-known and beloved story with a strong brand name, and it has the potential to appeal to a wide audience of all ages.
It has a great cast, a strong director, and a proven track record of success.
The story is a bit dated, and it may not appeal to modern audiences as much as it did in the past.
Profit Potential: High, due to strong appeal to a wide family audience and potential for merchandising and theme park tie-ins.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's unique voice is characterized by a blend of whimsical humor, heartwarming moments, vivid imagery, and imaginative dialogue. The voice effectively creates a sense of wonder and enchantment in the screenplay, transporting readers into a fantastical and mesmerizing world.
Best representation: Scene 4 - The Chocolate Palace of Prince Pondicherry. Scene 4 is the best representative of the author's voice because it effectively captures the whimsical and heartwarming tone of the screenplay. The dialogue is witty and engaging, while the descriptions of the candy-making processes are vivid and imaginative. The scene creates a sense of wonder and delight, showcasing the writer's ability to blend humor and heart in a poignant and engaging way.
Memorable Lines:
- Oompa-Loompas: Listen close, and listen hard, To the tale of Violet Beauregarde! (Scene 27)
- Oompa-Loompas: Aaaaaaaaaugust Gloop! Augustus Gloop! The great big greedy nincompoop! (Scene 24)
- Marionettes: Greetings, Earthlings! (Scene 19)
- Veruca Salt: I want it now! (Scene 36)
- Willy Wonka: Not just some something! The most something something of any something that’s ever been. (Scene 37)
Characters
Charlie Bucket:A kind and honest young boy from a poor family who wins a golden ticket to visit Willy Wonka's chocolate factory.
Willy Wonka:The eccentric and enigmatic owner of the chocolate factory, who is searching for an heir to his business.
Grandpa Joe:Charlie's elderly grandfather, who used to work for Wonka and knows the factory well.
Augustus Gloop:A gluttonous and greedy boy who is the first to be eliminated from the factory tour.
Violet Beauregarde:A gum-chewing champion who turns into a giant blueberry.
Veruca Salt:A spoiled and demanding girl who is the second to be eliminated from the factory tour.
Mike Teavee:A television-obsessed boy who is the third to be eliminated from the factory tour.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Charlie Bucket's Curious Encounter | Melancholic, Hopeful, Magical | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
2 - Charlie's Toothpaste Cap Surprise | Heartwarming, Whimsical, Nostalgic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Grandpa Joe's Visit to Willy Wonka's | Whimsical, Magical, Nostalgic | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - Willy Wonka's Grand Opening | Whimsical, Nostalgic, Playful | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - The Chocolate Palace of Prince Pondicherry | Whimsical, Magical, Nostalgic | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Chocolate Chaos and Factory Intrigue | Whimsical, Mysterious, Nostalgic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - The Golden Tickets | Whimsical, Mysterious, Intriguing | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - The Wonka Golden Ticket | Whimsical, Nostalgic, Hopeful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - The Golden Ticket Frenzy | Whimsical, Satirical, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Veruca Salt's Golden Ticket | Whimsical, Satirical, Heartwarming | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Golden Ticket Pursuit | Whimsical, Competitive, Confident | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - The Fourth Golden Ticket | Whimsical, Satirical, Humorous | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - The Toothpaste Factory's Fall | Melancholic, Hopeful, Reflective | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - A Last Fling at the Golden Ticket | Whimsical, Hopeful, Disappointment | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
15 - Disappointment and Hope | Defeated, Hopeful, Curious | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Charlie Finds the Golden Ticket | Excitement, Hopeful, Joyful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
17 - Charlie Finds the Golden Ticket | Excitement, Joy, Anticipation | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Charlie's Decision | Excitement, Disappointment, Encouragement | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - Entering the Wonka Factory | Whimsical, Mysterious, Exciting | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Arrival at the Factory | Whimsical, Playful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - The Walk Through the Hall | Whimsical, Mysterious, Playful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - The Chocolate Room | Whimsical, Magical, Exciting | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - Wonka Discovers Loompaland | Whimsical, Mysterious, Exotic | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - Augustus Gloop's Chocolate Dip | Whimsical, Playful, Surreal, Dark humor | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - A Whimsical Journey on the Chocolate River | Whimsical, Playful, Sarcastic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Willy Wonka's Childhood Memory | Whimsical, Mysterious, Exciting | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - Violet's Blueberry Mishap | Whimsical, Surreal, Satirical | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - Willy Wonka's Mystery Hallway | Whimsical, Mysterious, Playful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | |
29 - The Square Candies | Whimsical, Playful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 2 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Willy Wonka's Candy Epiphany | Whimsical, Mysterious, Nostalgic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - Veruca's Demise | Whimsical, Dark, Satirical | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
32 - The Great Glass Elevator Adventure | Whimsical, Exciting, Mysterious | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - Candy Cane Conundrum | Whimsical, Sarcastic, Playful | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 3 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
34 - The Television Chocolate Machine and Mike's Shrinking Adventure | Whimsical, Playful, Surreal, Quirky | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - Up and Out: Escaping the Factory | Whimsical, Exciting, Innovative | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - The Great Glass Elevator Tour | Whimsical, Playful, Quirky | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - Charlie's House and the Elevator Crash | Whimsical, Quirky, Surreal | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
38 - Wonka's Offer | Whimsical, Quirky, Heartwarming | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - The Buckets and Wonka's Struggles | Whimsical, Reflective, Inquisitive | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - A Heart-to-Heart at the Shoe Shine Booth | Whimsical, Playful, Reflective | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
41 - Return to Wonka's Childhood Home | Whimsical, Nostalgic, Heartwarming | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
42 - Dinner at the Bucket's House | Whimsical, Heartwarming, Playful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 3 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Scene 1 - Charlie Bucket's Curious Encounter
Huge snowflakes drift down out of an icy sky that is the
color of steel. WORKMEN load pallets of Wonka candy onto
waiting trucks.
It's hard to say what time it is, exactly: there’s no sun to
be found, and the streetlights are always on. For that
matter, it's hard to say what year it is. From the trucks,
to the clothes, to the typeface on the clipboard, the world
seems to exist outside of ordinary calendars. All we can be
certain of is that it's winter.
The last container loaded, the FOREMAN bangs on the side of
the lead truck. The convoy moves out.
3 WIDER 3
We see the trucks are parked along the wall of the Wonka
factory. The loading area is outside of the factory itself.
As the trucks RUMBLE down the snowy street, they attract the
attention of a WOMAN WITH A PRAM, A SALESMAN WITH A SCARF,
and a ten-year old boy named CHARLIE BUCKET, who is on his
way home from school.
We FOCUS IN on Charlie as he watches the procession.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
This is the story of an ordinary
little boy named Charlie Bucket.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
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3 CONTINUED: 3
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
He was not faster, or stronger, or
more clever than other children.
Indeed, Charlie is barely strong enough to stand in the wind.
He'd be the runt of the litter if he had any brothers or
sisters.
As the Wonka trucks go by, Charlie wipes his runny nose with
his mitten.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
His family was not rich, or
powerful, or well-connected. In
fact, they barely had enough to
eat.
After the last truck passes, Charlie continues walking home
to a tiny
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built just feet from the road.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Yet Charlie Bucket was the luckiest
boy in the entire world. He just
didn't know it yet.
Charlie stomps the snow off his feet and goes inside. We
pull back VERY WIDE to find the shack house is just a stone's
throw from the massive Wonka factory -- its shadow literally
falls across the tiny house.
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Charlie and the Chocolate Factory
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Scene 2 - Charlie's Toothpaste Cap Surprise
Flakes of snow drift in through cracks in the roof, falling
down on Charlie, who is doing his homework at the kitchen
table. Ever-practical, he opens an umbrella for protection
and keeps right on working.
Meanwhile, his MOTHER chops cabbage for the soup pot. Mother
Bucket is an ever-exhausted woman in her late 30's, run
ragged from taking care of Charlie and the four invalid
grandparents. Many nights, she's too tired to worry, and too
worried to sleep.
(CONTINUED)
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5 CONTINUED: 5
There are only two rooms in this place altogether. This main
room is the kitchen, the family room, the foyer, the closet
and the bedroom for Charlie and his parents.
The front door swings open, revealing Charlie's FATHER, a
lanky, hard-working man in his late 30's who manages to be
grateful for his blessings, however slight they are.
FATHER
Evening, Buckets!
CHARLIE
Hi, Dad!
MOTHER
The soup’s almost ready. I don’t
suppose there’s anything extra to
put...
Off her husband’s look, there’s clearly no more food coming.
Ever chipper...
MOTHER (CONT’D)
Well. Nothing goes better with
cabbage than cabbage.
She begins to chop up another head.
FATHER
Charlie, I found something I think
you'll like!
He empties out his coat pockets on the table, revealing a
handful of small white plastic caps. With a gasp, Charlie's
eyes go wide as he picks one out of the pile.
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6 INT. TOOTHPASTE FACTORY - DAY [PAST] 6
Plump tubes of uncapped toothpaste slide along a conveyor
belt.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Charlie's father worked in the
local toothpaste factory.
As each tube moves past, Father frantically screws on a cap.
It's a needlessly rushed and tedious job.
(CONTINUED)
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6 CONTINUED: 6
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
The hours were long, and the pay
was terrible. Yet occasionally,
there were unexpected surprises.
One of Father's plastic caps won't screw on right. He holds
it up for a closer look, and finds that it's misshapen. In
fact, it looks something like a human head.
FATHER
Huh.
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7 INT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - NIGHT 7
Charlie holds the same little plastic cap.
CHARLIE
It's exactly what I need!
Excited, he runs into the other room.
8 INT. GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - NIGHT 8
The room’s one bed is dedicated to the four grandparents,
because they are so old and tired -- they never get out of
it. Two face one direction; two face the other. They are as
shriveled as prunes and as bony as skeletons.
Charlie dives under the bed, digging for something. The old
people look over the edge of the bed, but all they see are
Charlie’s feet sticking out.
GRANDPA JOE is 96-years old, yet still approaches life with
childlike zeal and optimism. He’s always quick to excite:
GRANDPA JOE
What is it, Charlie?
GRANDPA GEORGE
House on fire?
GRANDMA GEORGINA
(panicked)
Fire, where?
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
Nowhere, dear.
(CONTINUED)
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8 CONTINUED: 8
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE is Joe's compassionate wife, with a knack
for spotting what's truly important.
GRANDPA GEORGE is a loving curmudgeon, able to spot storm
clouds on the sunniest day.
GRANDMA GEORGINA is a bit deaf and daft. She'd lose her
dentures if they weren't glued to her gums.
Charlie scoots back out from under the bed.
CHARLIE
Dad found it! Just the piece I
needed!
Charlie pulls out an ugly-beautiful scale model of the Wonka
factory, constructed entirely from deformed toothpaste caps.
Holding it carefully, he climbs to the middle of the
grandparents’ bed.
Through the bedroom window, we can see the real Wonka factory
in the background. Charlie’s model is a remarkable
facsimile.
GRANDPA JOE
What piece was it?
CHARLIE
A head for Willy Wonka!
Charlie shows them the figure he’s just assembled: a twisted
pipe-cleaner topped with the melted plastic head.
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
How wonderful!
GRANDPA JOE
It's quite a likeness.
CHARLIE
You think so?
GRANDPA JOE
Think so? I know so. I saw Willy
Wonka with my own two eyes. I used
to work for him, you know.
CHARLIE
You did?
GRANDPA JOE
I did!
(CONTINUED)
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GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
He did!
GRANDPA GEORGE
He did.
GRANDMA GEORGINA
I love grapes!
GRANDPA JOE
(ignoring)
Of course, I was a much younger man
in those days.
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Scene 3 - Grandpa Joe's Visit to Willy Wonka's
CLOSE ON Grandpa Joe. He’s 76, but still looks just as old.
As we PULL OUT, we reveal that he’s working the main counter.
The tiny store is overflowing with candy, filling the glass
cases and every shelf around.
It’s also crowded with DOZEN OF CUSTOMERS, all pushing and
shoving to buy some of Wonka’s fabulous candy. We can see a
line stretching out the door.
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.)
Willy Wonka began with a single
store on Cherry Street. But the
whole world wanted his candy.
Grandpa Joe finds he’s out of the bars he needs to finish an
order. He ducks through a low door, heading into...
10 INT. CANDY STORE BACK ROOM - DAY [TWENTY YEARS AGO] 10
The back room is a beehive of activity, with apron-wearing
WORKERS carrying trays of freshly-made candy from the ovens
to the racks, from racks to the wrapping tables. SUGAR-
PULLERS whack heavy ropes of peppermint candy again marble
slabs, while a clothesline full of giant lollipops WHIZZES
past.
Grandpa Joe walks up behind a MAN wearing a velvet jacket.
GRANDPA JOE
Mr. Wonka!
(CONTINUED)
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The man, Willy Wonka himself, turns to him. Wonka is holding
various panes of translucent colored candy in front of his
face, so we can’t quite make out what he looks like.
(In fact, it will be a while before we see Willy Wonka
straight-on.)
WONKA
Lickable glass! Do you like it?
Who wouldn’t?! Picture this:
You’re in church, another boring
Sunday sermon. Temperance,
humility, the usual. Then
suddenly...
He licks the candy-glass from the far side.
WONKA (CONT’D)
Mmmm, inspiration! I tell you,
we’ll fill the pews week after
week.
GRANDPA JOE
Mr. Wonka, we’re out of chocolate
birds.
WONKA
Birds, birds. We’ll need to make
more. I know!
He holds up a light-blue bird’s egg with tiny black spots.
Candy, evidently. He pops it into Grandpa Joe’s mouth.
CLOSE ON Grandpa Joe as he experiences a strange but tasty
sensation.
WONKA (CONT’D)
Now, open!
Grandpa Joe opens his mouth to reveal the egg has melted away
completely, leaving just a sugary pink baby bird sitting on
the tip of his tongue.
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Scene 4 - Willy Wonka's Grand Opening
Grandpa Joe continues telling his story to Charlie.
(CONTINUED)
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GRANDPA JOE
The man was a genius! Did you
know, he invented a new way of
making chocolate ice cream so that
it stays cold for hours without a
freezer. You can even leave it
lying in the sun on a hot day and
it won't go runny!
CHARLIE
But that's impossible.
GRANDPA GEORGE
Of course it's impossible! It's
completely absurd!
GRANDPA JOE
But Willy Wonka did it!
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12 EXT. WONKA FACTORY GATES - DAY [FIFTEEN YEARS AGO] 12
A CHEERING CROWD is gathered on a beautiful spring day for
the grand opening ceremony.
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.)
Before long, he decided to build a
proper chocolate factory -- the
largest chocolate factory in
history, fifty times as big as any
other!
With giant scissors, Wonka slices a fat red ribbon. One of
the ribbon ends flutters up, obscuring Wonka’s face yet
again.
We come upon Grandpa Joe and Grandma Josephine, CHEERING in
the crowd. Caught up in the moment, the old people kiss.
CHARLIE (PRE-LAP)
Eww!
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13 INT. THE GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - NIGHT 13
Charlie finds this disgusting.
(CONTINUED)
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13 CONTINUED: 13
CHARLIE
Grandpa! Don’t make it gross.
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
Tell him about the Indian prince.
He'd like to hear that.
GRANDPA JOE
You mean Prince Pondicherry?
GRANDPA GEORGE
Completely dotty!
GRANDMA GEORGINA
I am not!
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
Of course you aren’t, dear.
Mother and Father enter with bowls of soup for the old
people.
GRANDPA JOE
Well, Prince Pondicherry wrote a
letter to Mr. Wonka and asked him
to come all the way out to India
and build him a colossal palace
entirely out of chocolate.
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Scene 5 - The Chocolate Palace of Prince Pondicherry
Wonka’s hand smooths out the blueprints for a massive
structure, complete with curvy onion domes and twisted
columns. He’s talking to PRINCE PONDICHERRY.
WONKA’S VOICE
It will have one hundred rooms, and
everything will be made of either
dark or light chocolate!
Going WIDER, we reveal that we’re on a sandy knoll
overlooking the construction site, where hundreds of WORKERS
are toiling.
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15 EXT. A HALF-BUILT WALL - DAY [FIFTEEN YEARS AGO] 15
A MASON unwraps a giant chocolate bar, spreading ganache on
the back with a trowel. He carefully sets this “brick” in
place.
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.)
True to his word, the bricks were
chocolate, and the cement holding
them together was chocolate. All
the walls and ceilings were made of
chocolate as well.
16 INT. PALACE BEDROOM - DAY [FIFTEEN YEARS AGO] 16
We MOVE THROUGH the room, which is decorated entirely in
shades of brown and cream, headed towards the master bath.
GRANDPA JOE
So were the carpets and the
pictures and the furniture. And
when you turned on the taps in the
bathroom...
WONKA’S HAND
turns the faucet. Steaming cocoa comes out.
WONKA’S VOICE
Hot chocolate. Precisely the most
delicious temperature.
He’s talking to Prince Pondicherry, who looks on in wonder.
PRINCE PONDICHERRY
It is perfect in every way.
WONKA'S VOICE
I warn you though, it won't last
long. You'd better start eating
right away.
PRINCE PONDICHERRY
Nonsense! I will not eat my
palace!
(grandly)
I intend to live in it!
(CONTINUED)
12.
16 CONTINUED: 16
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.)
But Mr. Wonka was right, of course.
Soon after this, there came a very
hot day with a boiling sun.
Ratings
Scene 6 - Chocolate Chaos and Factory Intrigue
The Prince and his lovely PRINCESS are reclining on chocolate
divans, eating packaged Wonka candies when a brown
DRIP
lands on the Prince’s forehead. He wipes it off, and smiles
at his beautiful bride.
A beat later, a sizable CLUMP of chocolate whacks the prince
on the side of the head. Both royals hightail it as the
entire room begins to collapse around them.
Like a delicious, fudgy disaster movie, the two royals barely
escape as walls and pillars come CRASHING down.
18 EXT. THE KNOLL - DAY [FIFTEEN YEARS AGO] 18
Covered with chocolate goo, Prince Pondicherry watches as his
dream disintegrates into a brown puddle.
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.)
The prince sent an urgent telegram
requesting a new palace, but Mr.
Wonka was facing problems of his
own.
19 EXT. FACTORY GATES - DAY [FIFTEEN YEARS AGO] 19
Done for the day, one shift of FACTORY WORKERS heads home.
We see Grandpa Joe walking with two FRIENDS, laughing at a
joke. Behind them, a SHIFTY-EYED WORKER surreptitiously
hands off
A SLIP OF PAPER
to a nearby bush, where a man’s hand reaches out to grab it.
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.)
All the other chocolate makers, you
see, had grown jealous of Mr. Wonka.
They began sending in spies to steal
his secret recipes.
13.
20 EXT. CHERRY STREET - DAY [FIFTEEN YEARS AGO] 20
Near the original Wonka store, we find SIDEWALK VENDORS
selling their cheap knock-offs.
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.)
Fickelgruber's factory started
making an ice cream that would
never melt.
Indeed, the FICKELGRUBER MAN holds a magnifying glass above a
cone of chocolate swirl, with nary an effect. Further on...
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.) (CONT’D)
Prodnose's factory came out with a
chewing gum that never lost its
flavor.
The PRODNOSE VENDOR hands out sticks of “Evergreen
Wintergreen Gum” to PASSERSBY. We continue moving down the
street.
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.) (CONT’D)
Then Slugworth's factory began
making candy balloons that you
could blow up to incredible sizes.
The SLUGWORTH SALESMAN is surrounded by CHILDREN who blow
impossibly large balloons -- bigger than their entire bodies.
He POPS each balloon, leaving a mess of goo and happy, sticky
kids.
21 EXT. FACTORY GATES - DAY [FIFTEEN YEARS AGO] 21
Grandpa Joe and a CROWD of stunned workers watch as the giant
gates swing shut.
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.)
The thievery got so bad that one
day, without warning, Mr. Wonka
told every single one of his
workers to leave, to go home, never
to come back.
A thick chain slides around the bars of the gates, locked
from the inside.
(CONTINUED)
14.
21 CONTINUED: 21
GRANDPA JOE (V.O.) (CONT’D)
He announced that he was closing
his chocolate factory forever.
BACK TO:
22 INT. THE GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - NIGHT 22
The Grandparents are slurping their soup, as is Charlie. His
Mother and Father have pulled up chairs to the edge of the
bed, so the whole family can eat together.
CHARLIE
(confused)
But it didn’t close forever. It’s
open right now.
MOTHER
Sometimes, when grownups say
“forever,” they mean “a very long
time.”
GRANDPA GEORGE
Such as, “I feel like I’ve eaten
nothing but cabbage soup forever.”
FATHER
Now, Pop...
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
The factory did close, Charlie.
GRANDPA JOE
And it seemed like it was going to
be closed forever. Then, one day,
we saw smoke rising from the
chimneys. The factory was back in
business.
CHARLIE
Did you get your job back?
GRANDPA JOE
No. No one did.
CHARLIE
But there must be people working
there...
(CONTINUED)
15.
22 CONTINUED: 22
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
Think about it, Charlie. Have you
ever seen a single person going
into that factory -- or coming out?
CHARLIE
No. The gates are always closed.
GRANDPA JOE
Exactly!
CHARLIE
But then, who’s running the
machines?
MOTHER
Nobody knows, Charlie.
FATHER
It sure is a mystery.
CHARLIE
Hasn't someone asked Mr. Wonka?
GRANDPA JOE
Nobody sees him anymore. He never
comes out. The only thing that
comes out of that place is the
candy, already packed and
addressed.
(wistful)
I’d give anything in the world just
to go in one more time, and see
what’s become of that amazing
factory.
A beat. Everyone nods sympathetically. All except --
GRANDPA GEORGE
Well you won’t, because you can’t!
No one can! It’s a mystery and it
will always be a mystery! That
little factory of yours, Charlie,
is as close as any of us is ever
going to get.
He hands off his soup bowl to Father. Reluctantly, Mother
and Father gather the rest of the empty bowls.
MOTHER
Come on, Charlie. We should let
your grandparents get some sleep.
(CONTINUED)
16.
22 CONTINUED: (2) 22
Charlie says his goodnights, giving each old person a hug.
He saves his last for loopy Grandma Georgina. With sudden
clarity, she WHISPERS to him...
GRANDMA GEORGINA
Nothing’s impossible, Charlie.
Nothing.
Charlie gives her a strange look as he follows his parents
out of the room. With one last look back, he switches off
the light.
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Scene 7 - The Golden Tickets
Charlie climbs up into his little bed, which is set up in the
rafters of the tiny, sway-backed house. The sloped ceiling
is covered with fanciful sketches of Wonka’s factory, and
flattened wrappers from the few Wonka bars Charlie’s eaten.
He looks out through a small round window. The Wonka factory
dominates the view.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Indeed, that very night, the
impossible had already been set in
motion.
We PUSH THROUGH the window...
23 EXT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - NIGHT 23
...flying up like a bat. We drift along the stone walls of
the Wonka factory, coming to the far corner. There, on an
empty snow-lined street, we find A YOUNG MAN ON A BICYCLE.
He’s dressed in wool, with a messenger bag over his shoulder.
And he’s not alone.
There are DOZENS of bicyclists, all identically dressed,
riding in a phalanx through the night. As they reach an
intersection, they branch off in different directions, headed
for each part of the city.
24 EXT. CHERRY STREET - NIGHT 24
The shops are all closed for the night. The street is quiet,
until we hear the gentle TAPPING of hammers.
(CONTINUED)
17.
24 CONTINUED: 24
All the way down the wet cobblestone street, the BICYCLE MEN
are attaching signs to posts and clapboard walls. It’s too
shadowy to read what the signs say.
Finished, the men ride off like ghosts. As we watch...
25 NIGHT BECOMES DAY. 25
We CREEP IN as one, two, then fifteen TOWNSPEOPLE crowd
around to read one of the mysterious -- and wordy -- signs.
Short little Charlie Bucket squeezes his way to the front and
begins reading.
VARIOUS SHOTS of the sign and the many readers:
WONKA’S VOICE
Dear People of the World: I, Willy
Wonka, have decided to allow five
children to visit my factory this
year. These lucky five will be
shown around personally by me, and
will learn all the secrets and the
magic of my factory.
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Scene 8 - The Wonka Golden Ticket
A TELEVISION REPORTER does a live feed, reading from the
proclamation. (Like all the technology we encounter, the
camera and microphone feel somewhat vintage.)
TELEVISION REPORTER
(reading)
Five Golden Tickets have been
hidden underneath the ordinary
wrapping paper of five ordinary
Wonka bars. These five candy bars
may be anywhere -- in any shop in
any street in any town in any
country in the world.
27 INT. A CANDY STORE IN TOKYO - DAY 27
A mob scene as JAPANESE SCHOOLGIRLS buy every Wonka bar in
sight. It looks like a piranha feeding frenzy.
(CONTINUED)
18.
27 CONTINUED: 27
WONKA’S VOICE
In addition, one of these children
shall receive a special prize
beyond anything you could ever
imagine. Good luck to you all, and
happy hunting!
The schoolgirls depart, leaving a dazed CANDY STORE OWNER and
empty shelves.
28 INT. GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - DAY 28
Grandpa Joe has just heard the news from Charlie.
GRANDPA JOE
Wouldn't it be something, Charlie,
to open a bar of candy and see a
Golden Ticket inside!
CHARLIE
I know! But I only get one bar a
year, for my birthday.
His mother is listening from the doorway.
MOTHER
It's your birthday next week.
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
You have as much chance as anybody
does.
GRANDPA GEORGE
Baldersnap! The kids who are going
to find the Golden Tickets are the
ones who can afford to buy candy
bars every day. Our Charlie gets
only one a year! He doesn't have a
chance!
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
Everyone has a chance, Charlie.
GRANDPA GEORGE
Mark my words: The kid who finds
the first ticket will be fat, fat,
fat.
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19.
29 A STYLIZED, VINTAGE GLOBE 29
spins beneath us. As it slows, we SWOOP IN on Europe, where
a pin-marker reads: “DÜSSELDORF.”
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Scene 9 - The Golden Ticket Frenzy
AUGUSTUS GLOOP (9) is so enormously fat he looks as though he
has been blown up with a powerful pump. Great flabby folds
of fat bulge out from every part of his body. His face
resembles a monstrous ball of dough with two small greedy
raisin eyes peering out upon the world.
Augustus is telling his story to a pack of REPORTERS.
AUGUSTUS
I am eating ze Vonka bar, und I
taste something that is not
chocolate or coconut or valnut or
peanut butter or nougat...
As he talks, we INTERCUT with...
31 FLASHBACK FOOTAGE 31
of Augustus trying to figure out what the taste in his mouth
is.
32 BACK TO SCENE 32
AUGUSTUS
...or butterbrittle or caramel or
schprinkels, zo I look und I find
ze Golden Ticket.
He holds it up. Indeed, there are teeth marks on it.
REPORTER
Augustus, how did you celebrate?
AUGUSTUS
I eat more candy!
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20.
33 THE GLOOP PARENTS. 33
They’re standing behind the sausage counter. MR. GLOOP, a
barrel-chested man with a handlebar mustache, is twisting
bratwurst links as they come out of the casing machine.
MRS. GLOOP, a bubbly woman who knits all her own sweaters,
talks to the reporters. In the background, Augustus is
eating another candy bar.
MRS. GLOOP
Vee knew Augustus vould find a
Golden Ticket. He eats so many
candy bars a day, that it was not
possible for him not to find one.
CLOSE ON AUGUSTUS
He smiles, his mouth ringed with chocolate. Off a
photographer’s FLASH, we...
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34 INT. GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - DAY 34
GRANDPA GEORGE
Told you it would be a porker!
Grandpa George hands a tattered newspaper back to Charlie.
The front page has the photo of porcine Augustus Gloop.
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
What a repulsive boy.
CHARLIE
Only four Golden Tickets left.
GRANDPA JOE
Now that they’ve found one, it’ll
really get crazy.
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35 INT. BOUTIQUE DEPARTMENT STORE - DAY 35
The kind of place that would never sell candy -- normally.
Now fully grown WOMEN buy ten Wonka candy bars at a time,
then tear off the wrappers on the spot to search for a glint
of golden paper.
21.
36 INT. SOME KID’S BEDROOM - DAY 36
A BOY and GIRL smash their piggy banks with hammers.
37 EXT. BACK ROOM - DAY 37
A BOXCUTTER slices through a cardboard Wonka shipping box.
Twenty hands reach in to grab the bars.
38 INT. PALO ALTO SUPERMARKET - DAY 38
A famous scientist, PROFESSOR FOULBODY, demonstrates his
brilliant machine to excited SHOPPERS and members of the
PRESS.
PROFESSOR FOULBODY
My device will find a Golden Ticket
without even opening the wrapper.
He switches it on.
The machine’s mechanical arm shoots out with tremendous
force, grabbing at Wonka bars on the shelf. It picks up each
one, then tosses it aside. Repeating the process at
remarkable speed.
PROFESSOR FOULBODY (CONT’D)
The sophisticated sensors can
detect even tiny amounts of gold.
Indeed, the arm picks up a small gold coin hidden among the
bars, depositing it into a little bin.
The crowd APPLAUDS. Finished with the shelf, the arm whips
around. It isn’t finished yet.
We FOCUS IN on a WOMAN’S GOLD NECKLACE. She SCREAMS as the
arm yanks her necklace off, placing it in the bin.
PROFESSOR FOULBODY (CONT’D)
Oh, dear!
The crowd panics, trying to scoot back. We look into ONE
MAN’S screaming mouth, spotting the glint of a GOLD FILLING.
The machine sees it, too. It grabs the poor man by the jaw,
pulling him into the bin.
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22.
39 THE VINTAGE GLOBE 39
spinning once again. This time, we land on England, and a
marker labelled: “BUCKINGHAMSHIRE.”
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Scene 10 - Veruca Salt's Golden Ticket
VERUCA SALT (9) stands atop a grand piano, waving the Golden
Ticket above her head as she grins from ear to ear. She’s
delighted to have so many PHOTOGRAPHERS snapping her picture.
VERUCA
V-E-R-U-C-A. Veruca Salt.
With the face of an angel, Veruca can be charming and
friendly as long as everyone agrees that the universe
revolves around her. Question that cosmology, and she
reveals herself to be a spoiled hellion, who will stop at
nothing until she gets exactly what she wants.
MR. SALT (55) is an old-monied nut baron, first cousin to the
monocled Monopoly tycoon, with a fuddy-duddy accent and a
fondness for idiotic platitudes. Lovely Veruca is the apple
of his eye. He overlooks her tantrums and cruelty.
With his teetering, martini-swilling WIFE on his arm, he
talks to the reporters:
MR. SALT
As soon as my little Veruca told me
that she had to have one of these
Golden Tickets, I started buying up
all the Wonka candy bars I could
lay my hands on! Thousands of
them. Hundreds of thousands! I
had them loaded onto trucks and
sent directly to my own factory.
41 INT. SALT NUT FACTORY - DAY [PAST] 41
Trucks unload cases and cases of Wonka bars. We follow the
boxes as they are unloaded onto a conveyor belt, where dozens
of HAIRNET-WEARING WOMEN are lined up to begin work.
MR. SALT (V.O.)
I'm in the nut business, you see,
So I say to my workers...
(CONTINUED)
23.
41 CONTINUED: 41
REVEAL Mr. Salt, giving the marching orders:
MR. SALT
Good morning, ladies. From now on
you can stop shelling peanuts and
start shelling the wrappers off
these candy bars instead!
As ordered, they begin ripping the wrappers off the chocolate
bars. They toss the chocolate into trash bins.
MR. SALT (V.O.)
Three days went by, and we had no
luck. Oh, it was terrible! My
little Veruca got more and more
upset each day and every time I
went home she would scream at me...
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42 INT. COUNTRY MANSION - DAY [PAST] 42
Veruca is throwing an epic tantrum.
VERUCA
Where's my Golden Ticket! I want
my Golden Ticket!
BACK TO:
43 INT. COUNTRY MANSION - DAY [PRESENT] 43
MR. SALT
Well, gentlemen, I just hated to
see my little girl feeling unhappy
like that. I vowed I would keep up
the search until I could give her
what she wanted. And finally, we
found her a ticket.
44 INT. COUNTRY MANSION - DAY [PAST] 44
Mr. Salt hands Veruca the shiny gold ticket. For just a
moment, she is lovely again. Radiant. She looks into her
father’s eyes and says:
(CONTINUED)
24.
44 CONTINUED: 44
VERUCA
Daddy...I want another pony!
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45 INT. GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - NIGHT 45
Disgusted, Grandpa Joe tosses the paper aside.
GRANDPA GEORGE
She’s even worse than the fat boy.
CHARLIE
I don't think that was really fair.
She didn't find the ticket herself.
GRANDPA JOE
Don't worry about it, Charlie.
That man spoils his daughter. And
no good can ever come from spoiling
a child like that, Charlie, you
mark my words.
Charlie’s Mother and Father are at the door.
FATHER
Charlie, your Mom and I thought
maybe you’d like to open your
birthday present tonight.
She hands Charlie a package wrapped in old Sunday comics.
Although it’s obviously the right shape, he tears back the
paper just to be sure -- it’s really a Wonka bar.
CHARLIE
Maybe I should wait ‘til morning.
GRANDPA GEORGE
Like Hell!
FATHER
Pop!
GRANDPA JOE
All together, we’re 381 years old.
We don’t wait.
Charlie smiles nervously and sits down on the edge of the
bed. He holds his present, his only present, very carefully
in two hands: WONKA'S WHIPPLE-SCRUMPTIOUS FUDGEMALLOW
DELIGHT.
(CONTINUED)
25.
45 CONTINUED: 45
The four old people, two at either end of the bed, prop
themselves up on their pillows and stare with anxious eyes at
the candy bar in Charlie's hands.
The room is silent. Everybody waits for Charlie to start
opening his present. Charlie looks down at the candy bar.
He runs his fingers slowly back and forth along the length of
it, stroking it lovingly. The shiny paper wrapper makes
little sharp CRACKLY NOISES in the quiet room.
MOTHER
You mustn't be too disappointed,
Charlie, if you don't find, well...
FATHER
Whatever happens, you'll still have
the candy.
Suddenly, Grandpa Joe starts making strange GURGLING, CHOKING
NOISES. Everyone looks over, worried.
CHARLIE
Grandpa George, are you alright?
GRANDPA JOE
No, you’re killing me! Open it!
Very slowly, Charlie's fingers tear open one small corner of
the wrapping paper. The old people in the bed all lean
forward and crane their scraggy necks.
Then suddenly, Charlie tears the wrapper right down the
middle. Onto his lap falls a light-brown creamy-colored
chocolate candy bar. And nothing else.
GRANDPA JOE (CONT’D)
Well, that’s that. It's just what
we expected.
Charlie looks up. Four kind old faces watch him intently
from the bed. He smiles at them, a small sad smile, and then
he shrugs his shoulders.
CHARLIE
We'll share it.
GRANDPA JOE
No, Charlie. Not your birthday
present.
(CONTINUED)
26.
45 CONTINUED: (2) 45
CHARLIE
It’s my candy bar and I’ll do what
I want with it.
He SNAPS the bar into seven pieces. The grown-ups share a
look -- Charlie really is one of a kind.
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Scene 11 - Golden Ticket Pursuit
A BUSINESSMAN holds the morning paper up to read the inside.
On the front page, the headlines scream:
TWO GOLDEN TICKETS FOUND
Only one ticket left
Finished reading, the businessman half-folds his paper and
drops it in a nearby bin. Before it hits bottom, Charlie
catches it and reads the headline.
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47 INT. GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - DAY 47
GRANDPA JOE
All right, let's hear who found
them.
Mr. Bucket holds the newspaper up close to his face because
his eyes are bad and he can't afford glasses.
MR. BUCKET
The third ticket was found by Miss
Violet Beauregarde.
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48 THE VINTAGE GLOBE 48
back in motion. This time, we slow on the East Coast of
America, finding a marker for: “ATLANTA.”
CUT TO:
27.
49 INT. GYM - DAY 49
A ten-year old girl in a karate outfit SMASHES boards with
her hands and feet before flipping two INSTRUCTORS. She
bows, then rises into a CLOSE-UP.
VIOLET BEAUREGARDE is a class-5 hurricane compressed in the
body of an eleven-year old girl. Brash, rude and insanely
competitive, she chews ferociously upon a piece of gum.
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50 INT. BEAUREGARDE LIVINGROOM - DAY 50
MS. BEAUREGARDE is Violet's cheerleader, manager, publicist
and chauffeur. Rarely, however, is she a mother. Her
parenting is mostly confined to stoking her daughter's self-
esteem bonfire.
She and Violet stand in front of a massive wall of glittering
trophies. We INTERCUT between their interviews. [Ms.
Beauregarde speaks like a glamorous Southern belle, while
Violet adds an annoying “up-talk” that makes every sentence
sound like a question.]
MS. BEAUREGARDE
These are just some of the 263
trophies and medals my Violet has
won.
51 INTERCUT VIOLET 51
VIOLET
I'm a gumchewer, mostly, but when I
heard about these ticket things, I
laid off the gum and switched to
candy bars.
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MS. BEAUREGARDE
She is just a driven young woman.
I don’t know what it is about her.
CUT TO:
Violet is holding a jaw-shaped trophy.
(CONTINUED)
28.
51 CONTINUED: 51
VIOLET
I’m the junior world-champion gum
chewer. This piece of gum I'm
chewing I've been working on for
over three months solid. That's a
record.
CUT TO:
MS. BEAUREGARDE
Of course, I did have my share of
trophies. Mostly baton.
CUT TO:
VIOLET
So it says that one kid is going to
get a special prize better than all
the rest. I don’t care who the
other four are. That kid is going
to be me.
MS. BEAUREGARDE
Tell ‘em why, Violet.
VIOLET
Because I’m a winner.
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Scene 12 - The Fourth Golden Ticket
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
What a beastly girl.
GRANDMA GEORGINA
Despicable!
GRANDPA GEORGE
You don’t know what we’re talking
about!
GRANDMA GEORGINA
(venturing a guess)
Dragonflies?
GRANDPA JOE
And who got the fourth Golden
Ticket?
(CONTINUED)
29.
52 CONTINUED: 52
MR. BUCKET
(reads newspaper)
The fourth Golden Ticket was found
by a boy named Mike Teavee.
CUT TO:
53 THE VINTAGE GLOBE 53
swirling below us. This time, we sweep across the U.S. to
find a marker in the Midwest for: “DENVER.”
CUT TO:
54 INT. MIKE TEAVEE’S BEDROOM - DAY 54
MIKE TEAVEE, 13, looks right past camera, leaning left and
right to get a better view of the absurdly violent videogame
he’s playing on his own television.
The intellectual equivalent of a grade-school bully, Mike
lords his cleverness over those around him and is always the
first to point out gaps in logic.
MIKE
All you had to do is track the
manufacturing dates, hack into the
distribution flow rate data and
take the derivative of the costing
formula offset by weather and the
Nikkei index. A retard could
figure it out.
In the bedroom doorway, Mike’s dad MR. TEAVEE talks to
reporters. He’s a pale, simple sort of man, happy enough to
spend Sunday in the la-z-boy watching the game.
MR. TEAVEE
Most of the time, I don’t know what
he’s talking about. Kids these
days, what with all the
technology...
Mike jams the buttons on his videogame controller.
MIKE
Die! Die! Die!
(CONTINUED)
30.
54 CONTINUED: 54
MR. TEAVEE
...doesn’t seem like they stay kids
very long.
Finished killing the level boss, Mike continues his story:
MIKE
In the end, I only had to buy one
candy bar.
REPORTER
And how did it taste?
MIKE
I don’t know. I hate chocolate.
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Scene 13 - The Toothpaste Factory's Fall
GRANDPA GEORGE
Well, it’s a good thing you’re
going to a CHOCOLATE FACTORY, you
ungrateful little...
Father quickly puts his hands over Charlie’s ears.
Everything goes SILENT while Grandpa George continues his
obscenity-filled tirade. The old man finally stops. Father
takes his hands off Charlie’s ears.
CHARLIE
Dad?
FATHER
Yup?
CHARLIE
Why aren’t you at work?
FATHER
Oh. The toothpaste factory gave me
some time off.
CHARLIE
Like summer vacation?
FATHER
Sure. Like that.
Charlie doesn’t catch it, but the small wince in Father’s
expression betrays this as untrue.
(CONTINUED)
31.
55 CONTINUED: 55
NARRATOR (V.O.)
In fact, it wasn’t like vacation at
all.
56 INT. TOOTHPASTE FACTORY - DAY [PAST] 56
Father watches as TECHNICIANS install a toothpaste-cap-
twisting machine.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
The upswing in candy sales had led
to a rise in cavities, which led to
a rise in toothpaste sales.
Genuinely sorry, the FACTORY SUPERVISOR hands father a
literal pink slip.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT’D)
With the extra money, the factory
had decided to modernize,
eliminating Mr. Bucket’s job.
57 EXT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - DAY 57
Mother and Father have a private conversation, keeping their
voices low. Father in particular is discouraged.
FATHER
We were barely making ends meet as
it was.
MOTHER
You’ll find another job. Until
then, I’ll just thin down the soup
a little more.
Father is not convinced, but is helpless to offer any other
alternative.
MOTHER (CONT’D)
Don’t worry, our luck will change,
I know it.
Looking back to the front door, we find Charlie has been
listening to the conversation. On his face, we see a look of
worry no child should carry.
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Scene 14 - A Last Fling at the Golden Ticket
Grandpa Joe is awake. The other three SNORE loudly. Seeing
that the coast is clear, Grandpa Joe beckons Charlie to come
here.
Charlie tiptoes over and stands beside the bed. The old man
gives Charlie a sly grin, and then rummages under his pillow.
He reveals an ancient leather coin purse clutched in his
fingers.
Out falls a single silver dollar.
GRANDPA JOE
(whispering)
It's my secret hoard. You and I
are going to have one more fling at
finding that last ticket.
CHARLIE
Are you sure you want to spend your
money on that, Grandpa?
GRANDPA JOE
Of course I'm sure! Here -- run
down to the nearest store and buy
the first Wonka candy bar you see.
Bring it straight back, and we'll
open it together.
Charlie dutifully takes the coin and runs off. Grandpa Joe
looks proudly after his little grandson.
GRANDPA JOE (CONT’D)
(to himself)
Such a good boy, really. Such a...
His eyelids get heavy. Still propped up on an elbow, he
closes his eyes for just a second.
59 SUDDENLY... 59
CHARLIE
(whispering)
Grandpa!
Grandpa Joe is startled awake, completely disoriented.
CHARLIE (CONT’D)
You fell asleep.
(CONTINUED)
33.
59 CONTINUED: 59
GRANDPA JOE
Have you got it?
Charlie nods and holds out the bar of candy -- WONKA'S NUTTY
CRUNCH SURPRISE.
The old man's fingers tremble as they fumble with the candy
bar.
GRANDPA JOE (CONT’D)
Which end do you think I ought to
open first?
CHARLIE
Just do it quick. Like a Band-Aid.
Steeling himself up, Grandpa Joe suddenly rips the entire
wrapper off. Both he and Charlie have their eyes closed.
Each opens a single eye, then the other one. They both stare
at what lies underneath.
It is a bar of candy -- nothing more. Their disappointment
is palpable.
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Scene 15 - Disappointment and Hope
Charlie stands motionless outside the Wonka gates. He takes
deep, swallowing breaths as though he's trying to eat the
smell itself.
He gets a few odd looks from PASSERSBY, but doesn’t care.
TWO MEN with VISZLA DOGS walk past. Charlie overhears their
conversation.
FIRST MAN
Did you hear that some kid in
Russia found the last golden
ticket?
SECOND MAN
Yeah, it was in the paper this
morning.
(re: his dog)
Oh! Good boy, good boy!
The Second Man stops to pick up his dog’s poop in a plastic
baggie.
(CONTINUED)
34.
60 CONTINUED: 60
Charlie’s heard enough. He walks away, defeated. He misses
the rest of the conversation:
SECOND MAN (CONT’D)
But then, I was watching the news
this afternoon, and it turns out
the ticket was a forgery.
FIRST MAN
You’re kidding!
SECOND MAN
People these days, y’know?
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61 EXT. CITY STREET - DUSK 61
Charlie walks with the icy wind blowing in his face. His eye
suddenly catches a piece of paper lying in the gutter, half-
buried in the snow.
Charlie steps off the curb and bends down to examine it. He
sees at once what it is:
A TEN DOLLAR BILL.
Charlie quickly looks around. Has somebody dropped it? No,
that's impossible because of the way it is buried.
Several PEOPLE hurry past him on the sidewalk, their chins
sunk deep in the collars of their coats. None of them take
the slightest notice of the small boy crouching in the
gutter.
Carefully, Charlie pulls the bill out from under the snow.
It is damp and dirty, but otherwise perfect.
NARRATOR
Ten dollars was more money than
Charlie Bucket had ever held. In
that moment, he felt rich.
WIDER,
we find that we’re in front of a newspaper and stationery
store. The kind that sells almost everything, including
candy and cigars. In fact, there’s a big sign in the window
proclaiming: WONKA BARS!
(CONTINUED)
35.
61 CONTINUED: 61
NARRATOR (CONT’D)
But more than that, he felt
terribly hungry.
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Scene 16 - Charlie Finds the Golden Ticket
Charlie lays the damp ten-dollar bill on the counter.
CHARLIE
One Wonka Whipple-Scrumptious
Fudgemallow Delight, please.
The SHOPKEEPER hands it to Charlie.
Charlie grabs it and quickly tears off the wrapper and takes
an enormous bite. Then he takes another...and another...and
oh, the sheer blissful joy of being able to fill one's mouth
with rich solid food!
SHOPKEEPER
You look like you needed that one,
sonny.
Charlie nods, finishing the candy bar. The shopkeeper puts
Charlie's change on the counter.
SHOPKEEPER (CONT'D)
Take it easy. It'll give you a gut-
ache if you swallow it like that
without chewing.
Charlie reaches out a hand to take the change. Pauses. His
eyes are just above the level of the counter. They stare at
the nine one-dollar bills lying there. Surely it wouldn't
matter if he spent just one more...
CHARLIE
I think...I'll have just one more.
The same kind as before, please.
SHOPKEEPER
Why not?
He takes another Whipple-Scrumptious Fudgemallow Delight from
the shelf and lays it on the counter.
Charlie picks it up and tears off the wrapper. And suddenly,
from underneath the wrapper, there comes a brilliant flash of
GOLD.
(CONTINUED)
36.
62 CONTINUED: 62
Charlie's heart stands still. For a long beat, he simply
stares in silent disbelief.
SHOPKEEPER (CONT'D)
It's a Golden Ticket! You found
Wonka's last Golden Ticket! In my
shop too!
(to others)
Somebody call the newspaper quick
and let ‘em know! Watch out now,
sonny! Don't tear it when you
unwrap it! That thing's precious!
In a few seconds, there is a crowd of about TWENTY PEOPLE
clustering around Charlie, and many more push their way in
from the street. Everybody wants to get a look at the Golden
Ticket and the lucky finder.
Charlie hasn't moved. He hasn't even unwrapped the Golden
Ticket from around the candy bar. He stands very still and
holds it tightly with both hands while the crowd pushes and
shouts around him.
At this point, he is aware of a hand resting lightly on his
shoulder. He looks up and sees a TALL MAN standing over him.
TALL MAN
Listen. I'll buy it from you.
I'll give you fifty dollars. How
about it, eh? And I'll give you a
new bicycle as well. Okay?
WOMAN
Are you crazy? Why, I'd give you
five hundred dollars for that
ticket! You want to sell that
ticket to me for five hundred
dollars, young man?
SHOPKEEPER
That's enough of that! Leave the
kid alone, will ya! Make way
there! Let him out!
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Scene 17 - Charlie Finds the Golden Ticket
The shopkeeper kneels down and looks Charlie in the eye.
SHOPKEEPER
Don't let anybody have it! Take it
straight home, before you lose it!
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
37.
63 CONTINUED: 63
SHOPKEEPER (CONT'D)
Run all the way and don't stop till
you get there, you understand?
Charlie nods. There are tears in the corners of his eyes.
CHARLIE
Thank you.
And he runs through the snow as fast as his legs will go.
64 EXT. WONKA FACTORY - DUSK 64
Headed home, Charlie runs along the sidewalk in front of the
factory.
65 INT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - NIGHT 65
Charlie bursts in with the energy of a cyclone.
CHARLIE
Mom! Dad! I’ve got it! I found
it!
He runs past his stunned parents, into --
66 INT. THE GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - NIGHT 66
He jumps up onto the center of the bed.
CHARLIE
The last Golden Ticket! I found
it.
For a long beat there is absolute silence in the room.
Nobody dares to speak or move.
GRANDPA JOE
You're pulling our legs, Charlie,
aren't you? You're having a little
joke?
CHARLIE
I am not!
Charlie hands him the ticket. Grandpa Joe leans forward and
takes a close look. His nose almost touches the ticket. The
others watch, waiting for a verdict.
(CONTINUED)
38.
66 CONTINUED: 66
Then very slowly, a slow and marvelous grin spreads over his
face. Grandpa Joe looks at Charlie. The color rushes to his
cheeks, and his eyes are wide open and shine with joy.
The old man takes a deep breath, and suddenly, with no
warning whatsoever, an explosion seems to take place inside.
He throws up his arms and yells...
GRANDPA JOE
Yippee!
And at the same time, his bony body rises up out of the bed.
He jumps on to the floor and starts a victory dance in his
pajamas.
Charlie’s parents watch from the doorway, amazed.
MOTHER
Dad, how can you...
Ignoring her, Grandpa Joe hands the ticket to father.
GRANDPA JOE
Read it aloud. Let's all hear
exactly what it says.
FATHER
(reads ticket)
Greetings to you, the lucky finder
of this golden ticket, from Mr.
Willy Wonka! I shake you warmly by
the hand! For now, I do invite you
to come to my factory and be my
guest for one whole day.
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Scene 18 - Charlie's Decision
Violet reads the ticket aloud to the REPORTERS.
VIOLET
I, Willy Wonka, will conduct you
around the factory myself, showing
you everything there is to see.
CUT TO:
39.
68 INT. GERMAN SAUSAGE SHOP - DAY [PAST] 68
Augustus continues reading.
AUGUSTUS
Und aftervards, ven it is time to
leave, you vill be escorted home by
a procession of large trucks, each
von filled vit all de chocolate you
could ever eat!
CUT TO:
69 INT. SALT LIVING ROOM - DAY [PAST] 69
Veruca continues:
VERUCA
And remember, one of you lucky five
children will receive an extra
prize beyond your wildest
imagination. Now, here are your
instructions:
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70 INT. MIKE TEAVEE’S BEDROOM - DAY [PAST] 70
MIKE
On the first of February, you must
come to the factory gates at ten
a.m. sharp. You are allowed to
bring one member of your family to
look after you. Until then, Willy
Wonka.
BACK TO:
71 INT. THE GRANDPARENTS’ BEDROOM - NIGHT 71
MOTHER
The first day of February! But
that's tomorrow!
GRANDPA JOE
Then there’s not a moment to lose.
Charlie!
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
40.
71 CONTINUED: 71
GRANDPA JOE (CONT'D)
Wash your face, comb your hair,
scrub your hands, brush your teeth,
blow your nose, cut your nails,
polish your shoes, iron your
shirt...
GRANDPA GEORGE
And for heaven's sake, get that mud
off your pants!
MOTHER
We must all try to keep very calm.
Now the first thing to decide is
this -- who is going to the factory
with Charlie?
GRANDPA JOE
I will! I'll take him! You leave
it to me!
MOTHER
(to Father)
How about you, dear? Don't you
think you ought to go?
FATHER
Grandpa Joe seems to know more
about it than we do. Provided, of
course, that he feels well
enough...
GRANDPA JOE
Yippee!
He seizes Charlie and dances around the room. As Charlie is
spinning, we see his expression change. He stops dancing.
CHARLIE
No. We’re not going.
All eyes turn to him as he takes the ticket back from his
father.
CHARLIE (CONT’D)
A woman offered me five hundred
dollars for the ticket. I bet
someone else will pay more. We
need the money more than we need
the chocolate.
The mood in the room deflates as reality sets in.
(CONTINUED)
41.
71 CONTINUED: (2) 71
GRANDPA GEORGE
Young man, come here!
(Charlie moves closer)
There’s plenty of money out there.
They print more every day. But
this ticket? There’s only five of
them in the whole world, and that’s
all there’s ever going to be. Only
a dummy would give this up for
something as common as money. Are
you a dummy?
CHARLIE
No, sir.
GRANDPA GEORGE
Then get that mud off your pants.
You got a factory to go to.
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Scene 19 - Entering the Wonka Factory
The sun shines brightly on the morning of the big day, but
the ground is still white with snow and the air is very cold.
POLICEMEN with arms linked try to hold back the enormous
CROWDS of people who have gathered to watch the five lucky
ticket holders go in.
Right beside the gates, in a small group carefully shielded
from the crowds, stand the five famous children together with
the grownups who have come with them.
Veruca Salt wears a mink-trimmed coat.
VERUCA
Daddy, I want to go in!
MR. SALT
It’s 9:59, sweetheart.
VERUCA
Make time go faster!
Next to them stand Charlie and Grandpa Joe.
CHARLIE
Do you think Mr. Wonka will
recognize you?
(CONTINUED)
42.
72 CONTINUED: 72
GRANDPA JOE
Hard to say. It’s been years!
We continue to Augustus Gloop, who takes another candy bar
from his mother. Next to them, we find the Beauregardes.
Violet and her mother wear matching blue tracksuits.
MS. BEAUREGARDE
Eyes on the prize, Violet. Eyes on
the prize.
Finally, we come to Mike Teavee and his father, who looks
much more excited to be here than his son.
Suddenly, with a CLANG of great gears, the gates begin to
swing open. Violet and her mother push past the others to be
the first to step onto the Wonka factory grounds. Charlie
and Grandpa Joe are the last ones in.
73 EXT. WONKA FACTORY YARD - DAY 73
The ten visitors walk along a snowy path, headed for the
giant building ahead. The place seems deserted, yet
perfectly maintained.
GRANDPA JOE
Nothing’s changed at all!
(he points)
That’s the bench we used to sit on
when we would talk about Lindberg!
MR. SALT
It must have been very interesting.
Back then.
Charlie glances back over his shoulder and sees the great
iron entrance gates slowly close behind him. The crowds on
the street still push and SHOUT. Then, as the gates close
with a CLANG, all sight of the outside world has disappeared.
74 UP AHEAD 74
The giant doors to the main factory building begin to open.
Smoke and steam curl into the cold air. WONKA’S VOICE is
carried over loudspeakers:
WONKA’S VOICE
Dear visitors, it is my great
pleasure to welcome you to my
humble factory.
(CONTINUED)
43.
74 CONTINUED: 74
Charlie takes his Grampa’s hand, excited and overwhelmed.
Beyond the doors, we see cartoonishly-exaggerated machinery:
conveyor belts and sugar funnels, dipping vats and bubble-
blowers. It seems too goofy to be real. But one never
knows.
WONKA’S VOICE (CONT’D)
And who am I? Well...
Suddenly, CARNIVAL MUSIC begins. Row after row of
animatronic marionettes, a la Disney’s “Small World” ride,
pop up behind the faux machinery. They move in clockwork
precision as they SING...
MARIONETTES
Wil-ly Wonka! Chocolateer extraordinaire.
Wil-ly Wonka! Handsome, yes, and debonair.
Wil-ly Wonka! Modest to a fault.
Wil-ly Wonka! The man who we exalt!
Hey!
As the robotic dolls dance for a verse, we PUSH IN on a few
confused visitors, both adults and children.
MARIONETTES (CONT’D)
Wil-ly Wonka! You’re just about to meet,
Wil-ly Wonka! A man who can’t be beat.
Wil-ly Wonka! Magician and a wiz...
Oh what joy! Here he izzzzzzzz!
The stage ERUPTS in fireworks, sparklers SHOOTING everywhere.
A giant burning sign reads, “WONKA.” Dizzying searchlights
sweep across the proscenium.
As the smoke finally clears, we find the spotlights focused
on an empty stage. Wonka is nowhere to be found. What’s
more, several of the marionette dolls are on fire.
ON THE VISITORS
We go down the row of amazed and bewildered faces, until we
end up on
WILLY WONKA.
He’s a pale man, eccentrically dressed, wearing sunglasses
suitable for climbing Everest. At the moment, he’s
overjoyed, applauding.
(CONTINUED)
44.
74 CONTINUED: (2) 74
WONKA
Oh yes! That was fantastic!
(to Mr. Teavee)
I was worried it was getting a
little dodgy in the middle part,
but then! The finale, well...
VIOLET
Who are you?
GRANDPA JOE
(excited)
He’s Willy Wonka!
CHARLIE
Really?
Wonka checks the label on the inside of his jacket, which
reads “Willy Wonka.”
WONKA
I am!
VERUCA
Then shouldn’t you be up there?
WONKA
I couldn’t very well watch the show
from up there, now could I, little
girl?
Wonka starts to take off his sunglasses, but finds the glare
too bright -- he hasn’t been out in years.
GRANDPA JOE
Mr. Wonka, I don’t know if you
remember me, but I used to work
here in the factory.
Suddenly very serious...
WONKA
Were you one of those despicable
spies?
GRANDPA JOE
No, sir!
WONKA
Then wonderful! Welcome back.
Hurry along, now. All of you.
(CONTINUED)
45.
74 CONTINUED: (3) 74
Wonka leads them through the factory doors.
AUGUSTUS
Don’t you vant to know our names?
WONKA
I can’t imagine how it would
matter. Now, quickly. There’s far
too much to see.
Still baffled, the ten visitors follow Wonka. As they pass
behind the stage, we notice that several of the marionettes
are melting from the fire. Wonka doesn’t seem to notice, or
care.
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Scene 20 - Arrival at the Factory
The lobby is completely empty, just as it’s been for decades.
WONKA
Yes, now. Throw your coats
anywhere.
Indeed, Wonka tosses his overcoat and sunglasses on the
floor, revealing a dashingly eccentric suit with touches of
all the exotic lands he’s traveled.
The parents fold their coats nicely over chairs, while the
kids are happy enough to follow Wonka’s lead and toss their
jackets in a pile.
Only Veruca keeps her coat, explaining to anyone who cares to
listen:
VERUCA
It’s rare Brazilian mink.
WONKA
Well I'm sure they're much happier
on you, than playfully romping
through the forest with their
families and loved ones.
MR. TEAVEE
Mr. Wonka, it sure is toasty in
here.
(CONTINUED)
46.
75 CONTINUED: 75
WONKA
I have to keep it warm inside. My
workers are used to an extremely
hot climate. They can't stand the
cold!
CHARLIE
Who are the workers?
WONKA
All in good time. Now...
Violet does an end-run around Wonka.
VIOLET
Mr. Wonka, I’m Violet Beauregarde.
WONKA
Oh, I don’t care.
Without warning, she hugs him around the waist. Wonka emits
a terrified SHRIEK. (He doesn’t like to be touched.)
VIOLET
Well, you should care, because I’m
the girl who’s going to win the
special prize at the end.
Peeling her off...
WONKA
You do seem confident. And
confidence is key.
Ms. Beauregarde is beaming. Veruca pushes her way past
Violet. Wonka takes a nervous step back.
VERUCA
I’m Veruca Salt. It’s very nice to
meet you, sir.
She curtseys.
WONKA
I say. You seem sweeter than any
candy I make.
Now Augustus wedges his way in...
AUGUSTUS
I am Augustus Gloop! I love de
chocolate!
(CONTINUED)
47.
75 CONTINUED: (2) 75
WONKA
So do I! I never expected to have
so much in common.
Though he was reluctant to learn their names, Wonka now seems
quite interested in the children. Pointing...
WONKA (CONT’D)
You, you’re Mike Teavee. The
genius who cracked the system.
Quite impressive.
Mike just shrugs. Wonka finally comes to Charlie.
WONKA (CONT’D)
And you. Well. You’re just lucky
to be here, aren’t you? And the
rest of you must be their p-p-p-...
Afraid to interrupt Wonka, no one jumps in to finish his
word.
WONKA (CONT’D)
P-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-...
Finally...
MR. SALT
Parents?
WONKA
Yes, p-p-parents. Mothers and
fathers.
For just a moment, Wonka seems completely transported, lost
in a distant memory...
WONKA (CONT’D)
Father. Father? Father, but I...
Just as suddenly, he snaps out of it.
WONKA (CONT’D)
Okay, then. Let’s move along.
Charlie feels a little slighted, but Grandpa Joe takes him by
the shoulder. They follow Wonka as he leads them down a long
hall.
48.
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Scene 21 - The Walk Through the Hall
Far away in the distance, from the heart of the great
factory, comes a muffled ROAR of energy as though some
monstrous gigantic machine were spinning its wheels at
breakneck speed.
WONKA
Get a move on, please! We'll never
get round today if you dawdle like
this!
Wonka trots off rapidly down the corridor with the tails of
his coat flapping behind him. The visitors hurry after him.
We don’t realize it at first, but the hallway is forced-
perspective. It starts out very big, then gets tiny by the
end.
Charlie walks with Augustus, who is unwrapping yet another
candy bar.
AUGUSTUS
Vould you like some candy?
CHARLIE
Sure.
AUGUSTUS
Then you should have brought some!
Hah-hah!
Augustus eats the whole bar himself, dropping the wrapper.
Wonka turns on his heel, catching the wrapper before it hits
the ground.
WONKA
Now, Augustus. No one likes a
litterbug.
He hands the boy the wrapper with a smile.
A ways back, Mr. Teavee confers with Mr. Salt.
MR. TEAVEE
Is it just me, or does Wonka seem a
few quarters short of a buck?
MR. SALT
I’m sorry. I don’t speak American.
(CONTINUED)
49.
76 CONTINUED: 76
Veruca walks with Violet.
VERUCA
Let’s be friends.
VIOLET
Best friends.
The little girls link arms, but in their faces, we can see
mutual disgust.
Wonka stops. The hallway has gotten so narrow that everyone
is bunched up on top of each other.
In front of him there is a tiny metal door, labelled...
THE CHOCOLATE ROOM.
WONKA
An important room, this! It is a
chocolate factory, after all.
Wonka takes an absurdly large bunch of keys from his pocket
and slips one into the keyhole.
MIKE
Then why is the door so small?
WONKA
To keep all the big chocolate
flavor inside.
He leads them through the little door.
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Scene 22 - The Chocolate Room
We PULL BACK from stunned faces, young and old, as they
overlook a quite amazing sight. Even jaded Mike Teavee has
to admit this is incredible. In front of them stretches
A LOVELY VALLEY.
There are green meadows on either side, and along the bottom
of it flows a great brown river.
What is more, there is a tremendous waterfall halfway along
the river -- a steep cliff over which the water curls and
rolls in a solid sheet, and then crashes down into a boiling
churning whirlpool of froth and spray.
(CONTINUED)
50.
77 CONTINUED: 77
Below the waterfall, a whole mass of enormous glass pipes
dangle down into the river from somewhere high up in the
ceiling. They suck up the brownish muddy water from the
river and carry it away to goodness knows where.
One can hear the never-ending SUCK-SUCK-SUCKING sound of the
pipes as they do their work.
Graceful trees and bushes grow along the riverbanks --
weeping willows and alders and tall clumps of rhododendrons
with their pink and red and mauve blossoms. In the meadows
are thousands of buttercups.
VERUCA
It’s beautiful.
WONKA
Of course! I can't abide ugliness
in factories! What’s more, it's
all eatable!
(is that a word?)
Edible? Well, it’s delicious!
Wonka leads them down a path towards the river. As he walks,
he takes a jacket hanging from a tree and changes his outfit.
(He’ll do this a lot over the course of the story.)
WONKA (CONT'D)
Every drop of that river is hot
melted chocolate of the finest
quality. There's enough chocolate
in there to fill every bathtub in
the entire country!
(pointing)
Those pipes suck up the chocolate
and carry it away to all the other
rooms in the factory where it is
needed! Thousands of gallons an
hour.
The children and their parents are completely bowled over by
the hugeness of the whole thing. They simply walk and stare.
WONKA (CONT'D)
The waterfall is most important!
It mixes the chocolate! Makes it
light and frothy! No other factory
in the world mixes its chocolate by
waterfall! But it's the only way
to do it properly! The only way!
And do you like my trees? Don't
you think they look pretty?
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
51.
77 CONTINUED: (2) 77
WONKA (CONT'D)
And of course they are all eatable!
All made of something different and
delicious! And do you like my
meadows? The grass you are
standing on is made of a new kind
of soft, minty sugar that I've just
invented! I call it swudge! Try a
blade! Please do! It's
delectable!
Automatically, everyone bends down and picks a blade of grass
-- everyone, that is, except Augustus Gloop, gets down on all
fours and eats like a cow.
Violet Beauregarde, before tasting her blade, takes the piece
of world-record breaking chewing gum out of her mouth and
sticks it carefully behind her ear.
VARIOUS
Oooh!/It’s good!/Quite
delicious!/Now that’s tasty!
Soon, everyone is sampling the local flora.
CHARLIE
(to Grandpa Joe)
Was this room always here?
GRANDPA JOE
It’s brand new to me. I can’t
believe how much has changed.
78 SUDDENLY, 78
the air is filled with SCREAMS of excitement. Veruca Salt
points frantically to the other side of the river.
VERUCA
Daddy, look over there! What is
it? It's a little person! Down
there below the waterfall!
Everybody stops picking buttercups and stares across the
river.
MS. BEAUREGARDE
There's two of them!
MR. TEAVEE
There's more than two.
(CONTINUED)
52.
78 CONTINUED: 78
AUGUSTUS
Ver do they come from?
CHARLIE
Who are they?
Children and parents alike rush down to the edge of the river
to get a closer look.
A team of TINY MEN are busy at work. Some mow the sugar
grass, while others pick the candy that grows on the trees.
The strangest thing is, the little men all look exactly the
same -- miniature clones of each other.
One of them points towards the children, and then he whispers
something to the other four, and all five of them burst into
peals of LAUGHTER.
MIKE
(to Wonka)
Are they real people?
WONKA
Of course they're real people.
They're Oompa-Loompas.
MR. SALT
Oompa-Loompas!
WONKA
Imported direct from Loompaland.
MR. TEAVEE
There's no such place.
WONKA
What’s that you say?
MR. TEAVEE
Well, Mr. Wonka, I teach high
school geography and...
WONKA
Then you know all about it. And
oh, what a terrible country it is!
CUT TO:
53.
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Scene 23 - Wonka Discovers Loompaland
We PUSH THROUGH the absurdly dense forests of this sub-
tropical wilderness. By the FEROCIOUS ANIMAL CALLS we hear,
we know this is quite a dangerous place.
Yet Willy Wonka himself is bravely hacking his way through
the undergrowth with a silver machete. Even in the
sweltering heat, he manages to look dashing.
WONKA’S VOICE
The whole place is nothing but
thick jungles infested by the most
dangerous beasts in the entire
world -- hornswogglers and
snozzwangers and those terrible
wicked whangdoodles.
A massive flying beetle SWOOPS DOWN upon Wonka. He deftly
slices through it in mid-air, then examines the goo on the
blade. Curious, he taps it with his tongue, getting a quick
taste. Considers the bouquet...
WONKA’S VOICE (CONT’D)
I went to Loompaland looking for
exotic new flavors for candy.
He decides against whangdoodle goo.
WONKA’S VOICE (CONT’D)
Instead, I found the Oompa-Loompas.
TRANSITION TO:
80 EXT. DEEPER IN THE JUNGLE - DAY [PAST] 80
Pushing his way through to a clearing, Wonka looks up into a
sunlit tree.
WONKA’S VOICE
They lived in tree-houses to escape
from whangdoodles and the
hornswogglers and the snozzwangers.
Seen first in silhouette, the Oompa-Loompas scurry along the
branches. They have constructed a rickety tree-city, high
above the jungle floor.
(CONTINUED)
54.
80 CONTINUED: 80
WONKA’S VOICE (CONT’D)
They were living on green
caterpillars, which tasted
revolting.
81 INT. OOMPA-LOOMPA CHIEF’S HOUSE - DAY [PAST] 81
His knees at his Adam’s apple, Wonka scrunches in to share a
meal with the OOMPA-LOOMPA CHIEF, who looks exactly like all
the other Oompa-Loompas, except for his ornate headdress.
The Chief is mashing caterpillars with a mortar and pestle.
WONKA’S VOICE
The Oompa-Loompas spent every
moment of their days looking for
other things to mash up with the
caterpillars to make them taste
better -- red beetles, eucalyptus
leaves, the bark of the bong-bong
tree -- all of them beastly, but
not quite so beastly as the
caterpillars.
The Chief offers Wonka a taste of the revolting caterpillar
goo.
WONKA’S VOICE (CONT’D)
The food they longed for the most
was the cocoa bean. An Oompa-
Loompa was lucky if he found three
or four cocoa beans a year. But
oh, how they craved them. They
used to dream about cocoa beans all
night and talk about them all day.
BACK TO:
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Scene 24 - Augustus Gloop's Chocolate Dip
In a meadow by the river, nine of the visitors listen to
Wonka’s story.
WONKA
The cocoa bean happens to be the
thing from which chocolate is made.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
55.
82 CONTINUED: 82
WONKA (CONT'D)
I myself use billions of cocoa
beans every week in this factory.
So I said...
BACK TO:
83 INT. CHIEF’S HOUSE - DAY 83
Wonka talks to the Chief.
WONKA
Look here, if you and all your
people will come back to my country
and live in my factory, you can
have all the cocoa beans you want!
You can gorge yourselves silly on
them! I'll even pay your wages in
cocoa beans if you wish!
The Chief considers for a moment, then eagerly shakes Wonka’s
hand.
BACK TO:
84 OMIT 84
85 INT. THE CHOCOLATE ROOM - DAY 85
WONKA
They are wonderful workers. I must
warn you though, they are rather
mischievous. Always making jokes.
Veruca tugs on her daddy’s sleeve.
VERUCA
Daddy! Daddy! I want an Oompa-
Loompa. I want you to get me an
Oompa-Loompa!
MR. SALT
Now, now pet. We mustn't interrupt
Mr. Wonka.
VERUCA
But I want an Oompa-Loompa!
MR. SALT
All right, Veruca. But I can't get
it for you this second.
(CONTINUED)
56.
85 CONTINUED: 85
Mrs. Gloop is calling down to the riverbank --
MRS. GLOOP
Augustus! Augustus, meinen schatz.
Dat is not a good thing you do!
August Gloop is kneeling on the riverbank, scooping hot
melted chocolate into his mouth as fast as he can.
WONKA
Please, boy, please! I beg of you
not to do that. My chocolate must
be untouched by human hands!
MRS. GLOOP
Come avay from dat river at vonce!
But Augustus is deaf to everything except the call of his
enormous stomach. He lies full-length on the ground with his
head far out over the river and laps up the chocolate like a
dog.
MR. TEAVEE
Careful, son. You're leaning too
far out!
Mr. Teavee is absolutely right. For suddenly there is a
SHRIEK, and then a SPLASH. Augustus Gloop disappears under
the brown surface.
Everyone runs to the riverbank...
MRS. GLOOP
He'll drown! He can't svim! Save
him! Save him!
The wretched boy is sucked closer and closer toward the mouth
of one of the great pipes that dangles down into the river.
Grandpa Joe pulls off his shoes, ready to make a desperate
rescue. Mr. Teavee does the same. For his part, Mr. Salt
fusses with his tie just a bit.
CHARLIE
Look! The Oompa-Loompas!
The Oompa-Loompas are pulling on swimming caps. One by one,
they dive gracefully into the chocolate river, swimming
toward Augustus.
(CONTINUED)
57.
85 CONTINUED: (2) 85
As he floats in the chocolate river, Augustus is divided
between his instinct to breathe and his instinct to eat. He
alternately gasps and gobbles.
86 THEN ALL AT ONCE, 86
the powerful suction takes hold of him completely. He is
pulled under the surface and then into the mouth of the pipe.
The crowd on the riverbank waits breathlessly to see where he
comes out.
VIOLET
There he goes!
And sure enough, because the pipe is made of glass, Augustus
Gloop is seen clearly shooting up inside it, head first like
a torpedo.
MRS. GLOOP
Help! Police!
MS. BEAUREGARDE
It's a wonder to me how that pipe
is big enough for him to go through
it.
CHARLIE
It isn't big enough! He's slowing
down!
MIKE
He's gonna stick.
MR. TEAVEE
I think he has.
MR. SALT
He's blocked the whole pipe!
Indeed, chocolate is SWISHING around the boy in the pipe.
The pressure is terrific. Something has to give.
From a HIGH ANGLE, we look down on Augustus. In the river
below, we see the Oompa-Loompas have circled the pipe. Like
swimmers in an Esther Williams movie, they begin to perform a
series of elaborate and beautiful synchronized formations:
flowers, spirals, starbursts. It’s oddly glorious.
(CONTINUED)
58.
86 CONTINUED: 86
WHOOF! Augustus suddenly shoots up like a bullet in the
barrel of a gun. He disappears as the pipe passes through
the ceiling.
87 BACK ON THE SHORE 87
MRS. GLOOP
Ach! Ver does that pipe go to?
Kvick! Call the fire brigade!
WONKA
Keep calm, my dear lady, keep calm.
There is no danger whatsoever.
Augustus has gone on a little
journey, that's all. He'll come
out of it just fine, you wait and
see.
MRS. GLOOP
He vill be made into marshmallows!
WONKA
Impossible! Unthinkable! He could
never be made into marshmallows.
That pipe doesn't go to the
Marshmallow Room. It doesn't go
anywhere near it.
She seems a little relieved.
WONKA (CONT’D)
That pipe happens to lead directly
to the room where I make the most
delicious kind of strawberry-
flavored chocolate-coated fudge.
MRS. GLOOP
Then he'll be made into strawberry-
flavored chocolate-coated fudge!
They’ll be selling him by the pound
all over the vorld...
WONKA
I wouldn't allow it. The taste
would be terrible. Just imagine
it! Augustus-flavored chocolate-
coated Gloop! No one would buy it.
Ms. Beauregarde puts a sympathetic hand on Mrs. Gloop’s
shoulder.
(CONTINUED)
59.
87 CONTINUED: 87
MS. BEAUREGARDE
He’s right. They wouldn’t.
Wonka CLICKS his fingers three times. Immediately, a new
Oompa-Loompa appears, as if from nowhere, and stands beside
him.
The Oompa-Loompa bows and smiles, showing his beautiful
teeth. The top of his head comes just above Wonka's knee.
WONKA
I want you to take Mrs. Gloop up to
the Fudge Room and help her find
her son. Take a long stick and
start poking around inside the big
chocolate-mixing barrel. I'm
almost certain you'll find him
there.
The Oompa-Loompa gives a strange kind of salute, then
scurries off. Wonka gestures for Mrs. Gloop to follow him.
She runs, disappearing around the bend in the path.
88 BACK TO SCENE 88
The earlier MUSIC continues as more Oompa-Loompas gather.
Mike seems particularly perturbed by their proximity.
MIKE
Back off, you little freaks!
VERUCA
What are they doing?
WONKA
Why, I believe they’re going to
treat us to a song! It’s quite a
special occasion, of course. They
haven’t had a fresh audience in
years!
One Oompa-Loompa, evidently the SONG LEADER, plays a single
note on a PITCH PIPE. A beat, then all of the Oompa-Loompas
try to match the tone.
A CACOPHONY. They’re not even close. They’re all over the
scale, hitting quite a few notes unknown to mankind.
Everyone grimaces, even Wonka. But SONG LEADER is
undeterred.
(CONTINUED)
60.
88 CONTINUED: 88
Like a sorcerer summoning spirits, he coaxes his chorus into
perfect tune. Once they’ve finally settled on the same
“ahhhhh....”, the song can begin:
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
(singing)
Aaaaaaaaaugust Gloop! Augustus Gloop!
The great big greedy nincompoop!
He was fat! And he was vile!
Greedy, foul, and infantile!
He left a most disgusting taste,
Inside our mouths, and so in haste
'Come on!' we cried, 'The time is ripe
To send him shooting up the pipe!
The Oompa-Loompas sing and dance with the precise
synchronicity of a Busby-Berkley musical. And as they move
into the next verse, one of the Oompa-Loompas comes to the
foreground, dressed as (and acting like) the gluttonous
Augustus.
Oompa-Augustus pantomimes getting sucked up the pipe. A
SOLOIST slows the tempo to make a serious point:
SOLOIST
But don't, dear children, be alarmed;
Augustus Gloop will not be harmed...
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
(back to tempo)
Although, of course, we must admit
He will be altered quite a bit.
Slowly, the wheels go round and round,
The cogs begin to grind and pound;
A hundred knives go slice, slice, slice;
We add some sugar, cream, and spice.
The synchronized singers act as the “machinery” doing
dastardly things to Ooompa-Augustus.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS (CONT’D)
We boil him for a minute more,
Until we're absolutely sure
That all the greed and all the gall
Is boiled away for once and all.
Then out he comes! And now! By grace!
A miracle has taken place!
Oompa-Augustus disappears behind the singers.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS (CONT’D)
This boy, who only just before
Was loathed, by men from shore to shore,
(CONTINUED)
61.
88 CONTINUED: (2) 88
This greedy brute, this louse's ear,
Is loved by people everywhere!
For who could hate or bear a grudge
Against a luscious bit of...
The Oompa-Loompas part to reveal that Oompa-Augustus is now
an oversized box of Wonka candy. The song ends with a big
Broadway flourish, changing keys three times over a single
syllable:
OOMPA-LOOMPAS (CONT’D)
...Fu-uuh-uhh-uhh-dge!
With a quick bow, the Oompa-Loompas disperse, leaving the
visitors bewildered. Wonka, however, is APPLAUDING heartily.
WONKA
Bravo! Well done! Aren't they
delightful? Aren't they charming?
MR. TEAVEE
They sure are a musical people.
MR. SALT
I do say, that all seemed rather
rehearsed.
MIKE
Like they knew what was going to
happen to him.
WONKA
Nonsense! Improvisation is a
parlor trick. Anyone can do it.
You, little girl.
(points to Violet)
Say something. Anything at all.
She takes the gum from behind her ear and pops it in her
mouth.
VIOLET
Chewing gum.
WONKA
(singing)
Chewing gum is really gross,
Chewing gum, I hate the most!
(finished)
See? Exactly the same.
MIKE
No it isn’t.
(CONTINUED)
62.
88 CONTINUED: (3) 88
WONKA
You really shouldn’t mumble. I
can’t understand a word you’re
saying. Now, on with the tour!
Before anyone can protest further, Wonka heads down to a dock
built on the chocolate river.
CHARLIE
(to Grandpa Joe)
Are the Oompa-Loompas really
joking, Grandpa?
GRANDPA JOE
Of course they're joking. That boy
will be fine.
Grandpa Joe takes Charlie’s hand, just in case.
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Scene 25 - A Whimsical Journey on the Chocolate River
In the distance, a steamy fog rises up from the great warm
chocolate river. Out of the mist appears a most fantastic
pink boat.
Built like a Viking ship of old, it looks to be made of
bright, pink glass. (In fact, it’s sugar.) There are many
oars on either side of it, and as the boat comes closer, we
can see the oars are pulled by masses of identical OOMPA-
LOOMPAS -- at least six of them to each oar.
The boat glides up to the dock, where Wonka is changing into
an outfit better suited for sailing.
The Oompa-Loompas rest on their oars and stare up at the
visitors. Then suddenly, for some reason best known to
themselves, they all burst into shrieks of LAUGHTER.
VIOLET
What's so funny?
WONKA
Oh, don't worry about them!
They're always laughing! I think
it’s from all the chocolate. Did
you know, there’s a substance in
chocolate that releases endorphins
exactly like being in love?
MS. BEAUREGARDE
You don’t say.
(CONTINUED)
63.
89 CONTINUED: 89
She gives him flirtatious eyes. Wonka is bewildered, and a
little annoyed.
Meanwhile, the kids eagerly leap on board.
WONKA
You there! Please do not lick the
boat! It'll only make it sticky!
The boy -- Mike Teavee -- gives a “whatever” shrug and slumps
back, hogging a few seats to himself.
MR. TEAVEE
(low, to Mike)
Y’know, you oughta be more
respectful.
MIKE
And you oughta butt out. I didn’t
see you winning a Golden Ticket.
Veruca and her father take the seats behind the Teavees.
VERUCA
Daddy, I want a boat like this! I
want you to buy me a big pink boat
exactly like Mr. Wonka's! And I
want lots of Oompa-Loompas to row
me about, and I want a chocolate
river and I want...
In the back of the boat, Grandpa Joe WHISPERS to Charlie...
GRANDPA JOE
She wants a good kick in the pants.
Charlie smiles. Now that everyone’s aboard --
WONKA
Onward!
The Oompa-Loompas push off from the docks, rowing down the
chocolate river.
Wonka looks for a seat. Ms. Beauregarde gestures that she
has one available, but Wonka quickly chooses to sit next to
Charlie.
With a sudden idea, Wonka picks up a large mug and dips it
into the river, filling it with chocolate. He hands it to
Charlie.
(CONTINUED)
64.
89 CONTINUED: (2) 89
WONKA (CONT’D)
Drink this. It'll do you good.
You look starved to death!
Charlie tries it, and as we might expect...
CHARLIE
It’s great!
WONKA
That's because it's mixed by
waterfall.
Charlie hands the mug over to Grandpa Joe for a taste.
Meanwhile, Wonka notices all the children are looking at him.
WONKA (CONT’D)
You’re all quite short, aren’t you?
VIOLET
Well, yeah. We’re children?
WONKA
That’s not much of an excuse. I
was never as short as you.
MIKE
You were once.
WONKA
Never! For instance, I distinctly
remember putting a hat on top of my
head. Look at your short arms.
You could never reach!
VERUCA
That doesn’t make sense.
WONKA
(to Grandpa Joe)
I didn’t talk back to my elders,
either.
CHARLIE
Do you even remember what it was
like being a kid?
WONKA
Do I!
(beat; realizing)
Do I?
(CONTINUED)
65.
89 CONTINUED: (3) 89
NARRATOR (V.O.)
In fact, Willy Wonka hadn’t thought
about his childhood for years.
NOSTALGIC TRANSITION TO:
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Scene 26 - Willy Wonka's Childhood Memory
All along this street of narrow row houses, packs of CHILDREN
in Halloween costumes go door-to-door. We focus on one group
of GHOSTS, WITCHES and MONSTERS as they climb the steps up to
a doorway. The littlest witch stands on tip-toes to reach
the DOORBELL.
CUT TO:
91 INT./EXT. FOYER - NIGHT [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 91
A PLUMP, JOLLY WOMAN swings open the door, holding a bowl
full of candy.
THE KIDS
Trick or treat!
JOLLY WOMAN
Oh! Who do we have here?
(going down the row)
Ruthie, Veronica, Terrance...and
who’s that under the sheet?
A ghost pulls up his sheet to reveal...
JOLLY WOMAN (CONT’D)
Little Willy Wonka!
Little Willy smiles, though his draconian orthodontic
headgear makes it tough. As the Jolly Woman doles out the
candy...
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Willy Wonka was the son of the
city’s most famous dentist, Wilbur
Wadsworth Wonka.
TRANSITION TO:
66.
92 EXT. HOUSE ON PICKWICKET AVENUE - NIGHT [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 92
A sign for “Wonka Dentistry” points down to the basement-
level entrance. Still wearing his ghost costume, Willy
climbs the stairs to the family home.
93 INT. WONKA FAMILY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 93
Bizarre, frightening shadows fall upon the panelled walls.
As we go WIDER, we find it’s just Little Willy and his
Brobdingnagian orthodontics. He’s sitting at the parlor
table with his father, DR. WILBUR WONKA, D.D.S., who carries
himself with the smug superiority of a man who knows big
words for simple things.
DR. WONKA
Let’s see what the damage is this
year, shall we?
He upends Willy’s candy bucket, pouring the contents onto the
table. As he sorts through it --
DR. WONKA (CONT’D)
Caramels. They’d get stuck in your
braces, wouldn’t they?
He sets the caramels aside.
DR. WONKA (CONT’D)
Lollipops. Ought to call them
“cavities on a stick.”
He puts them aside as well.
DR. WONKA (CONT’D)
Which leaves all this chocolate.
Now, just last week I was reading
in an Important Medical Journal
that some children -- I can’t
remember the exact percentage --
are allergic to chocolate. It
makes their noses itch.
LITTLE WILLY
Maybe I’m not allergic. I could
try a piece...
DR. WONKA
But really, why take the chance?
(CONTINUED)
67.
93 CONTINUED: 93
With his arm, Dr. Wonka carefully sweeps all the candy off
the table, and into a large ashtray. As Little Willy watches
in horror, Dr. Wonka dumps the candy into the roaring
fireplace.
CLOSE ON the sugary treasures as they burn, blue flames
POPPING and chocolate melting into the cinders.
Dr. Wonka scruffs the top of Little Willy’s head as he walks
out of the room. Off Little Willy’s sad eyes, we...
MATCH CUT TO:
94 WILLY WONKA. 94
We’re back in the pink boat as it floats down the chocolate
river. Wonka is still lost in the memory.
CHARLIE
Mr. Wonka? Mr. Wonka! We’re
headed for a tunnel!
Wonka suddenly snaps out of it.
WONKA
Oh! Yes! Full speed ahead!
The Oompa-Loompas row faster than ever. As the boat shoots
into the pitch-dark tunnel, all the passengers SCREAM with
excitement.
VIOLET
How can they see where they're
going?
WONKA
There's no knowing where they're
going! Switch on the lights!
95 THE WHOLE TUNNEL 95
suddenly lights up. The upward-curving walls are pure white
and spotlessly clean. The river of chocolate flows very
fast. The Oompa-Loompas row like crazy to keep up with it.
WONKA
Keep an eye out! We’re passing
some important rooms here!
(CONTINUED)
68.
95 CONTINUED: 95
Several doorways are set into the walls of the tunnel, just
above the level of the river. As the boat floats past, there
is just enough time to read the writing on the doors:
#54
CLOTTED CREAM
COFFEE CREAM
PASTRY CREAM
and HAIR CREAM
VIOLET
What do you use hair cream for?
WONKA
(touching his curly locks)
To lock in moisture.
We pass an OPEN DOOR, inside of which we see a cow hanging
from a hammock. An Oompa-Loompa CRACKS a whip in the air.
The cow MOOS.
CHARLIE
(to Wonka)
Whipped cream?
WONKA
(impressed)
Precisely!
Up next:
#77
COCOA BEANS
COFFEE BEANS
JELLY BEANS
and HAS BEANS
VERUCA
What are “Has Beans?”
WONKA
Child stars, former celebrities,
the usual lot.
Five seconds later, a bright red door comes into sight
straight ahead. The sign reads:
INVENTING ROOM
PRIVATE -- KEEP OUT!
Wonka waves his gold-topped cane in the air and SHOUTS --
(CONTINUED)
69.
95 CONTINUED: (2) 95
WONKA (CONT'D)
Stop the boat! This you have to
see!
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Scene 27 - Violet's Blueberry Mishap
The place is like a witch's kitchen: black metal pots BOIL
and BUBBLE on huge stoves, kettles HISS, pan SIZZLE, strange
iron machines CLANK and SPUTTER.
Wearing his inventing smock, Wonka hops through the saucepans
and the machines like a child among Christmas presents, not
knowing which thing to look at first. He lifts the lid from
a huge pot and takes a good sniff, then rushes over and dips
a finger into a barrel of sticky yellow stuff and has a
taste.
WONKA
This is the most important room in
the entire factory, where I develop
all my secret new inventions!
Prodnose and Fickelgruber would
give their front teeth to be
allowed inside for just three
minutes!
The group breaks into smaller clusters as the visitors
investigate different strange contraptions. The parents hang
back while the children keep with Wonka.
A small shiny machine goes PHUT-PHUT-PHUT. Every time it
goes PHUT, a large green marble-like candy drops out of it
into a basket on the floor. Wonka picks one up.
WONKA (CONT’D)
Everlasting Gobstoppers! They’re
for children who are given very
little allowance money. You can
suck on it all year and it will
never get any smaller!
VIOLET
It's like gum!
Wonka can’t believe the idiotic comparison. Almost furious:
WONKA
It is not like gum! Gum is for
chewing and if you tried chewing
one of these Gobstoppers you'd
break your teeth off!
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
70.
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WONKA (CONT'D)
(suddenly chipper)
But they taste terrific!
While Wonka pushes on, Violet look back at her mother, who
shoots a chastening glare. Veruca takes Violet by the hand,
offering reassurance.
VERUCA
I think Mr. Wonka likes you.
VIOLET
Really?
VERUCA
No.
Veruca dunks Violet’s hand in a pot of goo, then skips off.
Ms. Beauregarde leans down and WHISPERS to Violet:
MS. BEAUREGARDE
Eyes on the prize, Violet. Eyes on
the prize.
Violet nods. Slapping herself, she puts her game face back
on.
A97 CHARLIE, MIKE AND WONKA A97
stop beside a large saucepan that boils and bubbles.
Standing on his toes, Charlie can see just inside the pot.
WONKA
That's Hair Toffee! You eat one
tiny bit, and in exactly half an
hour a brand-new crop of hair will
start growing out all over the top
of your head! And a moustache and
a beard!
MIKE
Who wants a beard?
WONKA
Beatniks, for one! Folk singers
and motor-bike riders! You know,
all those hip, zazzy cats!
Charlie and Mike just blink. Wonka’s references are
completely lost on them. Moving on...
(CONTINUED)
71.
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WONKA (CONT'D)
Unfortunately the mixture is not
quite right. I tried it on an
Oompa-Loompa yesterday, and,
well...
He turns to a massive pile of hair...
WONKA (CONT’D)
(to the hair)
How are you doing today?
A tiny Oompa-Loompa hand sticks out from the hairy pile,
giving the thumbs up. The shambling mound then begins to
walk away.
97 THE CENTER OF THE ROOM 97
Wonka presses three different buttons on the side of a giant
machine. A mighty RUMBLING SOUND comes from inside it, and
steam HISSES out of it all over. Instinctively, everyone
takes a few steps back.
Runny goo pours down glass tubes, squirting into a great tub
below. In every single tube the goo is a different color, so
that all the colors of the rainbow (and many others as well)
SLOSH and SPLASH into the tub.
A giant whizzer starts whizzing round inside the enormous
tub, mixing up all the different colored liquids like an ice
cream soda. It becomes frothier and frothier.
WONKA
Watch! This is the crucial part.
With a SUCKING noise, all the blue frothy mixture in the huge
basin disappears into the stomach of the machine. There is a
moment of silence. Then a few odd RUMBLINGS. Silence again.
Then suddenly, the machine lets out a monstrous mighty GROAN,
and at the same moment
A TINY DRAWER
pops out of the side of the machine. In the drawer lies
something so small and thin and grey that everyone thinks it
must be a mistake. It looks like a little strip of grey
cardboard.
MIKE
You mean that's it?
(CONTINUED)
72.
97 CONTINUED: 97
WONKA
That's it? Don't you know what
“it” is?
VIOLET
It's gum!
WONKA
Yes! It's a stick of gum!
Violet and her mother are psyched -- they’re back in the
zone.
WONKA (CONT’D)
It's a stick of the most amazing
and sensational gum in the world!
For you see, this gum is a whole
three-course dinner all by itself!
MR. SALT
Why would anyone want that?
WONKA
When I start selling this gum in
the shops it will change
everything! It will be the end of
all kitchens and all cooking! Just
a little strip of Wonka's magic
chewing gum -- and that's all
you'll ever need at breakfast,
lunch, and dinner! This piece of
gum I've just made happens to be
tomato soup, roast beef, and
blueberry pie!
No one notices as Violet takes her own world-record piece of
chewing gum out of her mouth and sticks it behind her left
year.
MR. TEAVEE
What do you mean, it's tomato soup,
roast beef, and blueberry pie?
WONKA
If you were to start chewing it,
then that is exactly what you would
get. You can taste it perfectly!
And it fills you up! It's
terrific.
GRANDPA JOE
It sounds great.
(CONTINUED)
73.
97 CONTINUED: (2) 97
VERUCA
It sounds weird.
VIOLET
It sounds like my kind of gum.
Violet takes the stick out of the drawer.
WONKA
I would rather you didn't. There
are still one or two things...
VIOLET
I’m the world-record holder in
chewing gum. I’m not afraid of
anything!
Before Wonka can stop her,
98 VIOLET POPS IT INTO HER MOUTH. 98
At once, her well-trained jaws start chewing away on it like
a pair of tongs.
MS. BEAUREGARDE
How is it, honey?
VIOLET
It’s amazing. Tomato soup! I can
feel it running down my throat!
WONKA
You really should spit it out.
GRANDPA JOE
Young lady, I think you better...
VIOLET
(still chewing)
It's changing. It's roast beef!
Baked potato. With crispy skin and
butter.
MS. BEAUREGARDE
Keep chewing, kiddo. My little
girl is the first person in the
world to have a chewing-gum meal!
Charlie stares at Violet absolutely spellbound, watching her
huge rubbery lips as they press and unpress with chewing.
Wonka wrings his hands...
(CONTINUED)
74.
98 CONTINUED: 98
WONKA
I’m just concerned about the...
VIOLET
Blueberry pie and ice cream!
VERUCA
What's happening to her nose?
MR. SALT
It's turning blue!
Indeed, the tip of Violet’s nose has become a very noticeable
shade of blue. What’s more, the color is spreading.
MS. BEAUREGARDE
Your whole nose has gone purple!
VIOLET
What do you mean?
MS. BEAUREGARDE
Violet, you're turning...violet!
What’s happening?
WONKA
I told you I hadn't got it quite
right.
Violet's face and hands and legs and neck, in fact the skin
all over her body, as well as her hair, has turned a
brilliant, purplish-blue, the color of blueberry juice.
WONKA (CONT'D)
It always goes wrong when we come
to the dessert.
(to Mr. Teavee)
It's the blueberry pie that does
it.
VIOLET
I don’t feel so good.
GRANDPA JOE
She’s swelling up!
CHARLIE
Like a blueberry.
Indeed, her track suit is starting to bulge in the center, as
her stomach inflates to giant proportions.
75.
99 FROM A VERY SHORT DOORWAY, 99
a new group of Oompa-Loompas rush in. They quickly climb on
top of all the tables, shelves and other furniture. Their
new song is a Queen-worthy ROCK OPERA, accented by miniature
pyrotechnics coming off the various machines.
They sing:
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
Listen close, and listen hard,
To the tale of Violet Beauregarde!
This dreadful girl, she sees no wrong
In chewing, chewing all day long.
As they sing, they toss bits of laboratory equipment back and
forth. Pot lids slice through the air like frisbees. One
nearly decapitates Mr. Teavee.
Meanwhile, Violet continues to swell.
WONKA
(sighing)
I've tried it on twenty Oompa-
Loompas, and every one of them
finished up as a blueberry. I just
can't understand it.
MS. BEAUREGARDE
But I don't want a blueberry for a
daughter! How is she supposed to
compete?
VERUCA
You could put her in a State Fair.
VIOLET
Ahhhh...
Violet falls over backwards, but her butt is now so big she
barely drops at all. In mere moments, all that remains of
Violet is a tiny pair of legs and a tiny pair of arms
sticking out of the great round fruit, and a little head on
top.
As the Oompa-Loompas continue their song, they roll her
around.
(CONTINUED)
76.
99 CONTINUED: 99
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
She goes on chewing till, at last,
Her chewing muscles grow so vast
That from her face her giant chin
Sticks out like a violin.
For years and years she chews away,
Consuming fifty packs a day.
She chews and chews throughout the night,
With nothing handy there to bite.
Until at last her jaws decide
To pause and open extra wide,
And with the most tremendous chew
They bite the poor girl’s tongue in two.
The MUSIC stops. The Oompa-Loompas continue a cappella.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS (CONT’D)
Thereafter, just from chewing gum,
Miss Beauregarde is always dumb.
And that is why we'll try so hard
To save Miss Violet Beauregarde
From suffering her chosen fate.
She's still quite young. It's not too late,
Provided that she takes the cure.
MUSIC kicks back in for a massive power-chord finale:
OOMPA-LOOMPAS (CONT’D)
We hope she does! We can't be sure!
Wonka APPLAUDS, gesturing for the others to join him.
WONKA
Roll Miss Beauregarde into the boat
and take her along to the Juicing
Room at once.
MS. BEAUREGARDE
The Juicing Room? What are they
going to do to her there?
WONKA
Squeeze her. We've got to squeeze
the juice out of her immediately.
But don't worry, ma’am. We've had
lots of practice with this.
Already, ten Oompa-Loompas roll the enormous blueberry across
the floor and out the door.
(CONTINUED)
77.
99 CONTINUED: (2) 99
VIOLET
Mother!
Ms. Beauregarde hurries after them.
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Scene 28 - Willy Wonka's Mystery Hallway
Walking just as briskly as ever, Wonka leads the remaining
party to a new section of the factory. He’s wearing another
new outfit.
There are doors every twenty feet or so along the corridor
now, and they each have something written on them, and
strange CLANKING noises come from behind several of them.
Sometimes little jets of colored steam shoot out from the
cracks underneath.
WONKA
Without the boat, we’ll have move
double-time to just keep on
schedule. There’s really far too
much to see.
Charlie almost has to run to keep up with him.
CHARLIE
Mr. Wonka?
WONKA
Yes!
CHARLIE
Why did you decide to let people
in?
WONKA
So they could see the factory, of
course!
CHARLIE
But why now? And why only five?
Wonka stops.
WONKA
Do you always ask so many
questions?
(CONTINUED)
78.
100 CONTINUED: 100
CHARLIE
Yes.
MIKE
What’s the special prize one of us
gets at the end? And who gets it?
WONKA
The best kind of prize is a
surprise.
Feeling left out...
VERUCA
Will Violet always be a blueberry?
WONKA
She’ll be a rich shade of purple.
But that’s what you get from
chewing gum all day?
MIKE
If you hate gum so much, why do you
make it?
Stumped...
WONKA
Once again, you really shouldn’t
mumble!
Wonka notices another door he hadn’t planned to show. But
now that they’ve stopped...
WONKA (CONT’D)
Oooh! I am very proud of my Square
Candies That Look Round. Let's
take a peek.
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Scene 29 - The Square Candies
Wonka leads the group up to a long table with rows and rows
of small white square-shaped candies. The candies look very
much like sugar cubes -- except that each of them has a funny
little pink face painted on one side.
At the end of the table, a number of Oompa-Loompas busily
paint more faces on more candies.
(CONTINUED)
79.
101 CONTINUED: 101
WONKA
There you are! Square candies that
look round.
MIKE
No they don’t.
MR. TEAVEE
They don't look round to me.
VERUCA
They look square. They look
completely square.
WONKA
But they are square. I never said
they weren't.
VERUCA
You said they were round.
WONKA
I never said anything of the sort.
I said they looked round.
VERUCA
But they don't look round! They
look square!
WONKA
They look round.
VERUCA
They most certainly do not look
round.
MR. SALT
Veruca, honey. Pay no attention to
Mr. Wonka.
As Mr. Salt moves to comfort Veruca, all the rows and rows of
little square candies quickly turn to look at him.
MR. TEAVEE
Holy...
WONKA
There you are! They're looking
’round! There's no argument about
it! They are square candies that
look ’round!
(CONTINUED)
80.
101 CONTINUED: (2) 101
GRANDPA JOE
By golly, he's right!
VERUCA
Well, I wouldn’t want to eat one.
WONKA
They wouldn’t want to eat you
either!
MR. TEAVEE
Mr. Wonka, no offense, but you make
some really strange candy.
WONKA
I suppose I make whatever I feel
like. Always have.
CHARLIE
What was the first candy you ever
ate?
WONKA
I’m sure I don’t remember.
All the square candy looks at each other -- yeah, right.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
In fact, Willy Wonka remembered
precisely the first candy he ever
ate.
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Scene 30 - Willy Wonka's Candy Epiphany
Still wearing his draconian headgear, Little Willy sweeps the
ashes out of the fireplace, dumping them into a bucket. As
he finishes, he notices a piece of silvery foil caught in the
grate.
One piece of Halloween candy has escaped the flames. The
wrapping CRINKLES in his hand as he picks it up. Looking
around, he carefully peels back the foil, revealing the still-
intact chocolate bar.
After one more beat of consideration, he bites into it.
To the OPENING CHORDS of “All Along the Watchtower” we begin
a SPINNING PERSPECTIVE SHIFT that would leave Hitchcock
jealous. In Little Willy’s eyes, we see a revelation.
(CONTINUED)
81.
102 CONTINUED: 102
He’s like Isaac Newton getting beaned by the apple, or Helen
Keller learning the word for water. The same delirious
energy carries us to...
103 EXT. CHERRY STREET - DAY [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 103
Little Willy sits on the curb with a sampler box of Russell
Stover-type candies. As he bites into each one, we see a boy
discovering his destiny. He jots down his impressions in a
tiny notebook.
104 EXT. CHERRY STREET - DAY [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 104
With a rhythmic synchronicity, Wonka slips coins into a
gumball machine and twists the knob.
105 INT. SWISS RESTAURANT - DAY [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 105
The HEAD CHEF offers Willy a long fork with a bread cube on
the end. He shows Willy how to dip it into the chocolate
fondue.
106 EXT. CHERRY STREET - DAY [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 106
Little Willy tosses one lollipop and tries another.
107 INT. CANDY SHOP - DAY [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 107
Young Willy watches, mesmerized, as a CANDY MAKER scrapes up
ropes of molten sugar on a marble table.
108 EXT. CHERRY STREET - DAY [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 108
Little Willy checks his reflection in the candy shop’s
window. He takes the lollipop out of his mouth and sticks
out his tongue, which is now six different colors.
He LAUGHS to himself as we transition...
BACK TO:
109 INT. SQUARE CANDY ROOM - DAY 109
Wonka looks around, disoriented. By the puzzled looks on
people’s faces, he’s been “gone” for a minute or two.
(CONTINUED)
82.
109 CONTINUED: 109
WONKA
I apologize. I was having a...
flashback.
MR. SALT
I see.
Mr. Salt carefully moves his daughter away from the crazy
man.
MR. TEAVEE
Those flashbacks happen often?
WONKA
Increasingly. Today.
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Scene 31 - Veruca's Demise
Wonka is back to his senses, leading the visitors around a
new corner.
WONKA
These are all the additions and
inserts: the nougats, the
sprinkles, the whistle-y centers...
Mr. Salt sees a sign that interests him.
MR. SALT
Ah, now here’s a room I know all
about. For you see, Mr. Wonka, I
myself am in the nut business.
Tell me, are you using the Havermax
4000 to do your sorting?
WONKA
No. Nothing of the kind.
Wonka opens the door for him.
111 INT. NUT-SORTING ROOM - DAY 111
The visitors enter on a raised platform, which is surrounded
by a railing and spindly bars for safety. This dais
overlooks the work floor, where the day’s nut-sorting is
underway. But the workers aren’t human, or even Oompa-
Loompa. They’re...
VERUCA
Squirrels!
(CONTINUED)
83.
111 CONTINUED: 111
ONE HUNDRED SQUIRRELS sit upon high stools around a large
table, which holds mounds of walnuts. The squirrels work
like mad, shelling the walnuts at tremendous speed.
WONKA
Yes. These squirrels are specially
trained for getting the nuts out of
shells.
Mr. Salt is perplexed, to say the least.
MR. SALT
Why use squirrels? Why not use
Oompa-Loompas?
WONKA
Oompa-Loompas can't get walnuts out
of their shells in one piece.
Nobody except squirrels can get
whole walnuts out every time.
(motioning them closer)
See how they first tap each walnut
with their knuckles to be sure it's
not a bad one! There! Look! I
think he's got a bad one now!
They watch a little squirrel as he TAPS the walnut shell with
his knuckles. He cocks his head to one side and listens
intently, then suddenly throws the nut over his shoulder into
a large hole in the floor.
VERUCA
Daddy, I want a squirrel! Get me
one of those squirrels! I want
one.
MR. SALT
Veruca, dear. You have many
wonderful pets.
Veruca begins to cry fiery tears.
VERUCA
All I've got at home is two dogs
and four cats and six rabbits and
two parakeets and three canaries
and a green parrot and a turtle and
a bowl of goldfish and a cage of
white mice and a silly old hamster!
I want a squirrel!
(CONTINUED)
84.
111 CONTINUED: (2) 111
MR. SALT
All right, pet. Daddy'll get you a
squirrel just as soon as he
possibly can.
VERUCA
But I don't want any old squirrel,
I want a trained squirrel!
MR. SALT
Very well. Mr. Wonka, how much do
you want for one of these
squirrels? Name your price.
WONKA
They're not for sale. She can't
have one.
VERUCA
Daddy!
WONKA
I’m sorry, darling. Mr. Wonka is
being unreasonable.
VERUCA
If you won’t get me one, I’ll get
one myself.
Squeezing between the bars,
112 VERUCA LEAPS DOWN. 112
The bars are too close together for an adult to follow.
MR. SALT
Veruca!
WONKA
Little girl, I wouldn’t!
The moment Veruca sets foot on the work floor, one hundred
squirrels stop what they are doing. They turn their heads
and stare at Veruca with small black beady eyes.
Veruca stops also, and stares back at them. She nervously
adjusts her chinchilla-lined coat.
Then her gaze falls upon a pretty little squirrel sitting
nearest her at the end of the table. It holds a walnut in
its paws.
(CONTINUED)
85.
112 CONTINUED: 112
VERUCA
All right. I'll have you!
She reaches out her hands to grab the squirrel. But as she
does so, there is a sudden flash of movement in the room.
Every single squirrel around the table takes a flying leap
towards her and lands on her body.
Twenty-five of them catch hold of her right arm and pin it
down. Twenty-five more catch hold of her left arm and pin it
down. Twenty-five more catch hold of her right leg and
anchor it to the ground.
Twenty-four catch hold of her left leg.
And the one remaining squirrel (the leader of them all)
climbs up on her shoulder and starts TAP-TAP-TAPPING the
wretched girl's head with its knuckles.
MR. SALT
Veruca!
CHARLIE
What are they doing?
WONKA
They're testing to see if she's a
bad nut. I wonder...
Veruca struggles furiously, but the squirrels hold her tight.
The squirrel keeps TAP-TAP-TAPPING the side of her head.
Then all at once, the squirrels start carrying her across the
floor.
WONKA (CONT’D)
My goodness, she is a bad nut after
all! Her head must have sounded
quite hollow.
Veruca kicks and SCREAMS, but it's no use. The tiny strong
paws hold her tightly and she can't escape.
VERUCA
Daddy! I want them to stop!
MR. SALT
Where are they taking her?
WONKA
Where all the other bad nuts go.
Down the garbage chute.
(CONTINUED)
86.
112 CONTINUED: (2) 112
As he talks, Wonka sorts through his keys, trying to find one
that unlocks the railing gate.
MR. SALT
What happens to the bad nuts?
Where does the chute go?
WONKA
Why to the furnace, of course. The
incinerator. Don't worry. They
only light it on Tuesdays.
Wonka tries a key, but it doesn’t fit.
MIKE
Today is Tuesday.
WONKA
There's always a chance they
decided not to light it today.
MR. SALT
My darling Veruca! She'll be
sizzled like a sausage!
The squirrels toss Veruca into the hole.
MR. SALT (CONT’D)
Aah!
WONKA
Now, she may be stuck in the chute
just below the entrance hole. If
that's the case, all you'll have to
do is go in and pull her up again.
Wonka turns a key, and the gate opens. Encouraged, Mr. Salt
rushes up to the edge of the hole.
MR. SALT
Veruca! Are you down there!
Veruca!
As MUSIC begins, Mr. Salt bends further forward to get a
closer look. His enormous butt sticks up in the air like a
giant mushroom. It is a dangerous position to be in. He
needs only one little push, one gentle nudge in the right
place.
With a flying kick, one squirrel hits him dead center.
(CONTINUED)
87.
112 CONTINUED: (3) 112
Mr. Salt topples into the hole head-first, SCREECHING like a
parrot. On the platform, everyone is horrified.
An Oompa-Loompa tugs at Wonka’s leg. Wonka leans down as the
Oompa-Loompa WHISPERS to him.
WONKA
(to everyone)
I’ve just been informed the
incinerator is broken. There
should be three weeks of rotten
garbage to break their fall!
MR. TEAVEE
Well, that’s good news. Sorta.
The lights on the work floor dim. Then, wearing colorful
kaftans and silks, the...
113 OOMPA-LOOMPAS MARCH IN. 113
This time, their SONG AND DANCE NUMBER has a Bollywood flair,
complete with fans, masks and faux-saber battles.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
(singing)
Veruca Salt. The little brute.
Has just gone down the garbage chute.
Two of the Oompa-monks throw off their robes, revealing
themselves to be OOMPA-VERUCA and OOMPA-MR-SALT. The tempo
picks up as the monks carry oversized pieces of garbage past
Oompa-Veruca, depicting her journey down the chute.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS (CONT’D)
She will meet, as she descends,
A rather different set of friends.
A fish head, for example, cut
This morning from a halibut.
A bacon rind, some rancid lard,
A loaf of bread gone stale and hard,
A steak that nobody would chew,
An oyster from an oyster stew,
Some liverwurst so old and gray,
One smelled it from a mile away!
A rotten nut, a reeky pear,
A thing the cat left on the stair;
And lots of other things as well,
Each with a rather horrid smell.
These are Veruca's newfound friends
That she will meet as she descends!
(CONTINUED)
88.
113 CONTINUED: 113
Oompa-Veruca SCREAMS, both out of faux-revulsion and to bring
the song back to herself. Once she’s safely scored the
spotlight, she tries a little belly-dancing.
The squirrels try to nip at her toes.
OOMPA-VERUCA
Now, is it really right,
That every bit of blame,
Finger-pointing giggles,
Not to mention shame,
Should fall upon Veruca Salt?
Am I the only one at fault?
A girl can't spoil herself, you know.
OOMPA-MR-SALT
Who spoiled her, then?
The Oompa-Loompas turn on “Mr. Salt,” swirling around him.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
Who turned her into such a brat?
Who is the culprit? Who did that?
Alas you shouldn't look so far
To find out who the sinners are.
They are (and this is very sad)
Her parents, yes -- like dear old Dad.
The song nearly finished...
OOMPA-LOOMPAS (CONT’D)
And that is why we're glad he fell
Into the garbage chute as wel-l-l-l-l-l-l.
With a DING!, we...
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Scene 32 - The Great Glass Elevator Adventure
The doors slide open, revealing what’s left of the visitors:
Charlie and Grandpa Joe, Mike Teavee and his father, and
Wonka himself. He’s fixing the cuffs on another new outfit.
WONKA
I don’t know why I didn’t think of
this earlier. The elevator is the
most efficient way to get around
the factory.
(CONTINUED)
89.
114 CONTINUED: 114
As they get inside, the visitors notice that the walls, floor
and ceiling are made of glass -- you can see though to the
studs of the building. Also, there are hundreds of buttons.
MIKE
There can’t be this many floors.
WONKA
Oh, this isn't just an ordinary up-
and-down elevator! This elevator
can go sideways and longways and
slantways and any other way you can
think of! It can visit any single
room in the whole factory, no
matter where it is! You simply
press a button and you’re off! For
instance...
He presses a button labelled “Candy Canes.”
115 THE DOORS CLANG SHUT 115
and the elevator leaps sideways as though it has been stung
by a wasp. All the passengers (except Wonka, who holds onto
a strap from the ceiling) are flung off their feet against
the wall.
The elevator rushes on at the speed of a rocket. Now it
begins to climb. It shoots up and up and up on a steep
slanty course as if it were climbing a very steep hill. Then
suddenly, it drops like a stone.
And through the glass walls of the elevator, as it rushes
along, the passengers catch sudden glimpses of strange and
wonderful things going on in some of the other rooms.
In one, a great, craggy mountain is made entirely of fudge.
Oompa-Loompas (all roped together for safety) hack huge
chunks of fudge out of its sides.
MIKE
Make it stop!
WONKA
Can't do that. It won't stop until
we get there. I only hope no one's
using the other elevator at this
moment.
CHARLIE
What other elevator?
(CONTINUED)
90.
115 CONTINUED: 115
WONKA
The one that goes the opposite way
on the same track as this one.
GRANDPA JOE
You mean we might have a collision?
WONKA
I've been lucky so far.
A SCREAM of brakes and the elevator begins to slow down.
Then it stops altogether.
With a DING!, the doors slide open.
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Scene 33 - Candy Cane Conundrum
This room is one of the busiest and NOISIEST we’ve entered,
with dozens of Oompa-Loompa carrying racks of candy along
various levels of platforms.
Wonka leads the group out of the elevator. He walks
backwards to talk with them, at every step barely avoiding
impalement or decapitation from all the equipment moving
around him.
WONKA
I’m a very observant person, and
I’ve often observed that old
people...
(to Grandpa Joe)
...such as yourself...don’t eat
enough candy. What’s more, I’ve
often seen them carrying walking
sticks. Which led me to think,
what if I were to invent...
CHARLIE
A candy cane?
WONKA
No, a candy cane!
Wonka takes a passing cane -- three-and-a-half-feet long --
off a nearby rack. He hands it to Grandpa Joe.
WONKA (CONT’D)
Why don’t you try it?
Grandpa Joe takes a few steps, putting his weight on it. The
cane suddenly SHATTERS into a mess of sugary shards.
(CONTINUED)
91.
116 CONTINUED: 116
WONKA (CONT’D)
Oh, they’re extremely fragile!
They really don’t work at all.
MIKE
Then why would anyone want one?
WONKA
Exactly! That’s called marketing!
Now, who else uses canes?
Everyone thinks.
CHARLIE
Shepherds? To tend sheep?
WONKA
Tried it. The sheep ate them, and
it made them mean. Anyone else?
No? Well, we discovered they’re
perfect for crocheting giant
novelty sweaters!
MIKE
Why don’t you just admit they’re
completely pointless?
Wonka is taken aback.
CHARLIE
Candy doesn’t have to have a point.
That’s why it’s candy.
MIKE
Well, it’s stupid.
We SWOOP IN into a giant close-up of Mike’s lips.
MIKE (CONT’D)
Candy is a waste of time.
When we PULL BACK OUT, we’ve actually...
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Scene 34 - The Television Chocolate Machine and Mike's Shrinking Adventure
It was actually Dr. Wonka who said the line. We’ve entered
in the middle of an argument between Little Willy and his
father.
(CONTINUED)
92.
117 CONTINUED: 117
DR. WONKA
No son of mine is going to be a
chocolateer!
LITTLE WILLY
Then I’ll run away! To
Switzerland! Bavaria! The candy
capitals of the world!
DR. WONKA
Go ahead. We won’t be here when
you come back.
Little Willy grabs his knapsack and runs out the front door.
CUT TO:
118 MONTAGE 118
Knapsack over his shoulder, Little Willy walks toward camera
as a procession of international flags move behind him,
illustrating his great journey. Through it all, Little Willy
maintains a stoic, inspired attitude.
A man’s hand lands on his shoulder. Little Willy looks up to
find a SECURITY GUARD.
SECURITY GUARD
Sorry, son. We’re closing for the
night.
WIDER
we reveal that this “montage” has actually just been Little
Willy walking through the local museum. The sign on the wall
reads: “FLAGS OF THE WORLD.”
CUT TO:
119 EXT. PICKWICKET AVENUE - NIGHT [THIRTY YEARS AGO] 119
Dejected, Little Willy walks home. He’s given up on his
dream. As he reaches the front steps of his family’s house,
he notices something odd.
THE HOUSE IS GONE.
It’s been ripped from its foundation and carried away,
leaving the two narrow row houses on either side of it.
(CONTINUED)
93.
119 CONTINUED: 119
Little Willy drops his knapsack in disbelief.
TRANSITION TO:
120 INT. THE GREAT GLASS ELEVATOR - DAY 120
Dispirited, Wonka gets back on board, along with the
remaining visitors.
MIKE
I wanna pick a room.
WONKA
Certainly. Any room you’d like.
Mike scans the choices, then settles on a button marked
“Television Room.”
He pushes the button. For a long beat, nothing happens.
Then, suddenly, the whole elevator LURCHES to the right,
throwing everybody but Wonka against the left wall.
After another dizzying trip, the elevator finally stops.
With a DING!, the doors open.
121 INT. THE TELEVISION ROOM - DAY 121
Mike and his father, Charlie and Grandpa Joe step out of the
elevator into a room so dazzlingly white and bright that they
screw up their eyes in pain. Wonka hands them each a pair of
dark glasses.
WONKA
Put these on quick! And don't take
them off in here whatever you do!
This light could blind you!
The giant room is painted white all over, even the floor.
From the ceiling, huge lamps hang down and bathe the room in
a brilliant blue-white light.
At one end of the room is an enormous camera on wheels, with
a whole army of OOMPA-LOOMPAS clustered around it. They oil
its joints, adjusts its knobs, and polish its great glass
lens. The Oompa-Loompas wear bright-red space suits,
complete with helmets and goggles.
They work in silence. There is no chattering or singing
among them here, and they move about over the huge black
camera slowly and carefully in their scarlet space suits.
(CONTINUED)
94.
121 CONTINUED: 121
WONKA (CONT'D)
This is the testing room for my
very latest and greatest invention:
Television Chocolate!
At the other end of the room, about fifty feet away from the
camera, a single OOMPA-LOOMPA (also in a space suit) sits at
a black table. He gazes at the screen of a very large
television set.
WONKA (CONT’D)
One day, it occurred to me: If
television can break up a
photograph into millions of pieces
and send it whizzing through the
air, then reassemble it on the
other end, why can't I do the same
thing with chocolate? Why can't I
send a real bar of chocolate
through the television, all ready
to be eaten?
MR. TEAVEE
Sounds impossible.
MIKE
It is impossible.
(to Wonka)
You don’t understand anything about
science at all! First off, there’s
a difference between waves and
particles. Duh! Second, the
amount of power it would take to
convert energy into matter would be
like, nine atomic bombs. You’re
the dumbest rich guy in the whole
world.
WONKA
Again, with the mumbling. I can’t
understand a word you’re saying!
(to everyone else)
I shall now send a bar of chocolate
from one end of this room to the
other -- by television! Get ready,
there! Bring the chocolate!
Immediately, ten Oompa-Loompas march forward carrying on
their shoulders an enormous bar of chocolate -- the size of a
mattress.
(CONTINUED)
95.
121 CONTINUED: (2) 121
WONKA (CONT'D)
It has to be big. You know how on
t.v., you can film a normal-sized
man, but he comes out this tall?
(shows with fingers)
Now then! Switch on!
One of the Oompa-Loompas grabs a very large switch and pulls
it down.
There is a blinding FLASH. Charlie is the first to notice--
CHARLIE
It’s gone!
Indeed, the enormous bar of chocolate has disappeared
completely into thin air.
WONKA
It is now rushing through the air
above our heads in a million tiny
pieces. Quick! Come over here!
He dashes over to the other end of the room to the large
television set. The others follow.
WONKA (CONT'D)
Watch the screen. Here it comes.
Look!
The t.v. flickers and lights up. Then suddenly, a small bar
of chocolate appears in the middle of the screen.
WONKA (CONT'D)
(to Mike)
Take it!
MIKE
It's just a picture on a screen.
WONKA
(points to Charlie)
You take it! Reach out and grab
it.
Charlie puts out his hand and touches the screen, and
suddenly, miraculously, the bar of chocolate comes away in
his fingers. He is so surprised he nearly drops it.
GRANDPA JOE
Holy buckets.
(CONTINUED)
96.
121 CONTINUED: (3) 121
WONKA
Eat it! Go on, eat it! It'll be
delicious. It's the same bar!
It's gotten smaller on the journey,
that's all!
Charlie unwraps it and takes a bite.
CHARLIE
It’s great!
MR. TEAVEE
It's a miracle!
For his part, Mike is speechless. He keeps trying to figure
out how Wonka did it.
WONKA
Imagine -- you're sitting at home
watching television and suddenly a
commercial will flash onto the
screen and a voice will say,
WONKA'S CHOCOLATES ARE THE BEST IN
THE WORLD! IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE
US, TRY ONE FOR YOURSELF! And you
simply reach out and take one. How
about that?
MR. TEAVEE
Can you send other things?
Breakfast cereal?
WONKA
Uggh! Do you know what breakfast
cereal is made of? It's just those
little curly wooden shavings you
find in pencil sharpeners!
CHARLIE
But could you send it by television
if you wanted to?
WONKA
Of course I could!
MIKE
What about people?
WONKA
Why would I want to send a person?
(CONTINUED)
97.
121 CONTINUED: (4) 121
MIKE
Don’t you realize what you
invented? It’s a teleporter. It’s
the most important invention in the
history of the world! But all you
think about is chocolate!
MR. TEAVEE
Calm down, Mike. I think Mr. Wonka
knows what he’s doing.
MIKE
No he doesn’t! He has no idea!
You think he’s a genius, but he’s
an idiot!
(beat)
But I’m not.
Mike takes off running towards the camera.
WONKA
No, no, no, no!
There is no stopping Mike now. The crazy boy rushes to the
enormous camera, scattering Oompa-Loompas left and right. He
jumps straight for the switch.
122 A BLINDING FLASH. 122
Then silence.
MR. TEAVEE
He's gone! Mike! He's gone!
As zany COMMERCIAL-JINGLE MUSIC kicks in, the Oompa-Loompas
throw off their helmets and start one last song-and-dance:
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
Not to worry! Not to panic!
So this kid of yours has got you manic.
There’s a problem -- we can fix it.
Our solution truly licks it.
And it’s yours for merely 19.95!
On a small cart, they wheel out a box covered with question
marks, a la “Let’s Make a Deal!”
Two Oompa-Loompas hold up plexiglass in front of it, labelled
“CREDIT CARDS ACCEPTED.”
(CONTINUED)
98.
122 CONTINUED: 122
WONKA
(ignoring the song)
We must watch the television set!
He may come through any moment. I
just hope that no part of him gets
left behind.
MR. TEAVEE
What do you mean?
WONKA
Sometimes only half of the little
pieces find their way to the
television set.
They all stare tensely at the screen, which is blank.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
We say with no derision,
Mike was raised by television,
He fell into its sweet-as-honey trap!
CHARLIE
Something's happening!
The screen suddenly flickers. Then some wavy lines appear.
Wonka adjusts one of the knobs.
WONKA
If you had to choose only one-half
of your son...
MR. TEAVEE
I’d probably pick the top half.
(beat; considering)
Yeah, definitely. The top half.
The screen gets brighter and brighter.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
You may well applaud us
At Confederated Products,
But our technology is truly nothing new!
WONKA
Here he comes! Yes, that's him all
right.
MR. TEAVEE
Is he all in one piece?
(CONTINUED)
99.
122 CONTINUED: (2) 122
WONKA
It's too early to tell.
Faintly at first, but becoming clearer and clearer, the
picture of Mike appears on screen. He stands up and waves to
his audience, grinning from ear to ear.
GRANDPA JOE
He's so small!
WONKA
Grab him! Quick!
Mr. Teavee shoots out his hand and picks the tiny figure of
Mike out of the screen.
He’s smaller than an Oompa-Loompa, even. His voice is high
and squeaky.
MIKE
I told you I was right!
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
Now Mr. Know-It-All is just seven inches tall.
Yet somehow he is still as big a pest.
WONKA
Thank heavens! He's completely
unharmed!
MR. TEAVEE
We can't send him back to school
like this. He'll get trod upon.
Squashed.
MIKE
Just put me back through the other
way!
WONKA
There is no “other way.” It’s
television, not telephone. There’s
quite a difference. Scientifically.
MR. TEAVEE
Well, how can we make him grow?
WONKA
Young men are extremely springy and
elastic. They stretch like mad.
So what we'll do, we'll put him in
the ribbon candy puller.
(CONTINUED)
100.
122 CONTINUED: (3) 122
MR. TEAVEE
How far d'you think he'll stretch?
WONKA
Who knows? But he's going to be
awfully thin. Everything gets
thinner when you stretch it.
As one Oompa-Loompa leads Mr. Teavee away, the others finish
the song.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS
To avoid this situation,
And the constant aggravation,
May we offer you a sample of our wares?
The Oompa-Loompas lift the mystery box, revealing a remote
control. They hand it to Mr. Teavee.
OOMPA-LOOMPAS (CONT’D)
For the unfortunate collision
Of a boy and television,
A pig who won’t stop feeding at the trough.
Simply...
Turn it off!
Mr. Teavee aims the remote at the television screen and
CLICKS. The picture shrinks down to a tiny dot. As it does,
all the lights go out.
CUT TO:
123 MOMENTS LATER 123
The television room quite a bit darker -- just a few pools
of light.
Back at the table with the television set, Wonka takes
Charlie and Grandpa Joe’s sunglasses and begins walking back
to the great glass elevator.
WONKA
There’s still a lot to see. Now,
how many children are left?
Charlie looks up at Grandpa Joe. Grandpa Joe looks back at
Charlie.
GRANDPA JOE
Mr. Wonka, there's...there's only
Charlie left now.
(CONTINUED)
101.
123 CONTINUED: 123
Wonka swings around and stares at Charlie. There is silence.
Charlie stands there holding tightly onto Grandpa Joe's hand.
WONKA
You mean you're the only one?
CHARLIE
Yes.
WONKA
But my dear boy, that means you've
won! Oh, I do congratulate you! I
really do!
(shakes Charlie’s hand)
I'm absolutely delighted! I had a
hunch, you know, right from the
beginning! Well done!
Of course, Charlie has no idea what he’s won. He and Grandpa
Joe simply follow along.
WONKA (CONT’D)
Now we mustn't dilly! Or dally!
We have an enormous number of
things to do before the day is out!
Just think of the arrangements that
have to be made! But luckily for
us, we have the great glass
elevator to speed things up!
WHACK! He walks right into the side of it -- it’s nearly
invisible. Trying to cover his blunder...
WONKA (CONT’D)
Door’s on this side.
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Scene 35 - Up and Out: Escaping the Factory
As the doors shut, Wonka reaches for a button high up on the
glass ceiling of the elevator. Charlie and Grandpa Joe both
crane their necks to read what is says on the little label
beside the button.
It says: UP AND OUT.
CHARLIE
Up and out? What kind of room is
that?
Wonka presses the button. The glass doors close.
(CONTINUED)
102.
124 CONTINUED: 124
WONKA
Hold on.
125 WHAM! 125
The elevator shoots straight up like a rocket.
WONKA
Faster!
(bangs wall of elevator)
Faster! Faster! If we don't go
any faster than this, we’ll never
get through!
CHARLIE
Get through what?
WONKA
See, I've been longing to press
this button for years! But I
couldn't bear the thought of making
a great big hole in the roof of the
factory! Here we go, now. Up and
out!
GRANDPA JOE
But do you really mean...you don't
really mean this elevator...
WONKA
Oh yes, I do! You wait and see.
Up and out!
GRANDPA JOE
But it's made of glass! It'll
break into a million pieces!
Looking up, Charlie and Grandpa Joe see the rafters and beams
of the roof quickly approaching. Grandpa Joe holds Charlie
tight, sheltering him as the elevator
126 SMASHES THROUGH 126
layer after layer of wood, straw, dust, insulation, tile and
steel, finally emerging...
103.
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Scene 36 - The Great Glass Elevator Tour
Sunshine pours through the glass roof. In five seconds, they
are flying a thousand feet up in the sky, hovering over the
factory and over the very town itself which lay spread out
below them like a picture postcard.
Charlie and Grandpa Joe each open an eye, not certain they’re
still alive.
Looking down through the glass floor, Charlie sees the small
far-away houses and streets. Snow lays thick over
everything, while smoke curls up from chimneys.
Wonka pushes another button, and a small steering wheel
emerges from the glass wall. He uses it to maneuver the
elevator.
WONKA
First thing, let’s check on our
other guests.
Tipping the wheel, he drops the craft down closer to the
factory, hovering just 50 feet above the ground.
128 EXT. FACTORY YARD - DAY 128
Three of the children and their parents are walking across
the snow. The Gloops are in the lead. Augustus is covered
in sticky chocolate, except for his face, which is clean.
He’s chewing on his fudgy fingers.
MRS. GLOOP
Augustus, do not eat your fingers!
AUGUSTUS
But I taste so goot!
Behind them, violet Violet is doing gymnastics. After going
through the wringer, she can twist all the way back on
herself.
VIOLET
Look, mother! I’m much more
flexible now!
MS. BEAUREGARDE
Yes, but you’re blue!
(CONTINUED)
104.
128 CONTINUED: 128
Veruca Salt and her father are covered in slimy garbage and
fish bones. Veruca spots the elevator and points.
VERUCA
Daddy, I want a flying glass
elevator!
MR. SALT
Veruca, all you’re getting today is
a bath, and that’s final.
VERUCA
BUT I WANT IT!
Mr. Salt just puts his fingers in his ears and keeps walking.
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Scene 37 - Charlie's House and the Elevator Crash
Wonka turns to Charlie.
WONKA
Now, where did you live?
CHARLIE
Right over there. That little
house.
Wonka follows Charlie’s pointing finger.
130 INT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - DAY 130
Mother checks her watch.
MOTHER
What time do you think they’ll be
back?
FATHER
No way to know.
Suddenly, a CRASH! Mother and Father dive out of the way as
the great glass elevator
131 SMASHES 131
through the ceiling and flattens the kitchen table.
Showers of dust and tiles and wood and spiders and bricks and
cement rain down.
(CONTINUED)
105.
131 CONTINUED: 131
Grandma Josephine faints. Grandpa George drops his false
teeth. Grandma Georgina leans over to her husband.
GRANDMA GEORGINA
I think someone’s at the door.
Charlie waves and says, “Hi Mom!” But they can’t hear him,
because the elevator is still shut. Once the doors slide
open.
CHARLIE
Mom! Dad!
FATHER
Charlie?
CHARLIE
This is Willy Wonka! He gave us a
ride home.
MOTHER
(re: the hole in the roof)
I see that.
Father and Mother help each other up.
WONKA
You must be the boy’s p-p-p-p-p...
FATHER
Parents?
WONKA
Yes, that.
GRANDPA JOE
He says Charlie’s won something!
WONKA
Not just some something! The most
something something of any
something that’s ever been. I am
giving this boy my entire factory.
A long beat.
GRANDPA JOE
You must be joking.
(CONTINUED)
106.
131 CONTINUED: (2) 131
WONKA
It's quite true. You see, a few
months ago, I was having my semi-
annual haircut, and I had the
strangest revelation!
CUT TO:
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Scene 38 - Wonka's Offer
Wonka sits in a barber chair, doodling on a sketchpad while
OOMPA-BARBER SNIPS away. (The barber is on a ladder.)
Brushing the hair away as it falls on his paper, Wonka
notices something strange.
SPLIT FOCUS
Wonka stares a single SILVER HAIR -- his very first.
WONKA (V.O.)
In that one silver hair, I saw
reflected my life’s work: my
factory, my candy, my beloved Oompa-
Loompas. Who would watch over them
after I was gone? I realized in
that moment...
Wonka turns to the Oompa-Barber.
WONKA (CONT’D)
I must find an heir!
BACK TO:
B132 INT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - DAY B132
WONKA
And I did, Charlie. You!
As he talks, Wonka wanders about the little house, looking
into cupboards and lifting the lids off pots. He’s a
terribly nosy houseguest.
CHARLIE
That’s why you sent out the Golden
Tickets!
(CONTINUED)
107.
B132 CONTINUED: B132
WONKA
I invited five children to the
factory, and the one who was least
rotten would be the winner!
GRANDPA JOE
That’s you, Charlie!
MOTHER
What are Oompa-Loompas?
After handing Grandpa George his dentures, Wonka uncovers
Charlie’s toothpaste-cap scale replica of the factory. He
picks it up, startled by the resemblance.
WONKA
So what do you say? Are you ready
to leave all this behind and come
live at the real factory?
CHARLIE
Sure! Of course! I mean...
(looks to his parents)
It’s all right if my family comes,
too?
Smiling broadly, Wonka kneels down beside Charlie.
WONKA
My dear boy, of course they can’t.
Charlie blinks. Did he really hear him right?
WONKA (CONT’D)
You can’t run a chocolate factory
with a family hanging over you like
so much dead weight.
(to the grandparents)
No offense.
GRANDPA GEORGE
None taken, jerk.
WONKA
A chocolateer has to run free and
solo! He has to follows his
dreams, damn the consequences.
Look at me! I had no family, and
I’m a giant success.
Finally realizing the implication...
(CONTINUED)
108.
B132 CONTINUED: (2) B132
CHARLIE
So if I go with you to the factory, I
won’t ever see my family again?
WONKA
Consider that a bonus!
CHARLIE
Then I’m not going. I wouldn’t
give up my family for anything.
Not for all the chocolate in the
world.
WONKA
Oh! Oh. I see.
(a little hopeful)
There’s other candy, too. Besides
chocolate.
CHARLIE
I’m sorry, Mr. Wonka. I’m staying
here.
WONKA
Well, that’s just...unexpected.
But I suppose I...In that case
I’ll...
Handing Charlie his model, Wonka gets back in the elevator.
WONKA (CONT’D)
Goodbye, then.
The doors shut. Then open again.
WONKA (CONT’D)
You’re sure you won’t change your
mind.
CHARLIE
I’m sure.
Wonka closes the doors again. He presses the “Up and Away”
button. Suddenly, the elevator launches straight up through
the same hole in the roof.
The Bucket family is left were they stand -- or lie -- with a
flattened kitchen table and swirls of snow coming in from the
darkening sky.
No one knows what to say until finally...
(CONTINUED)
109.
B132 CONTINUED: (3) B132
GRANDMA GEORGINA
Things are going to get much
better!
Everyone turns to look at her.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
And for once, Grandma Georgina knew
exactly what she was talking about.
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Scene 39 - The Buckets and Wonka's Struggles
Father and Mother are up on the roof, hammering new shingles
in place. Charlie is on the ground, pulling nails from old
boards to re-use. Most of the snow has melted.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
The next morning, Charlie helped
his parents fix the hole in the
roof.
133 INT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - DAY 133
Dust falls from the ceiling, where the parents are HAMMERING.
Grandpa Joe sweeps up with a broom.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Grandpa Joe spent the whole day out
of bed. He didn’t feel tired at
all.
134 INT. TOOTHPASTE FACTORY - DAY 134
Father shakes hands with the Foreman.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Charlie’s father got a better job
at the toothpaste factory,
repairing the machine that had
replaced him...
135 OMIT 135
110.
136 EXT. TRAIN STATION / SHOE SHINE STAND - DAY 136
Smiling, Charlie finishes buffing the wingtips of a HAPPY
BUSINESSMAN.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
...while Charlie made extra money
after school.
137 INT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - NIGHT 137
Mother and Father get dinner ready while Charlie sets the
repaired kitchen table.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
Things had never been better for
the Bucket family.
For the first time, there’s plenty of food, and no cabbage
soup.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT’D)
The same could not be said for
Willy Wonka.
138-139 OMIT 138-139
140 CLOSE ON WONKA 140
We gradually PULL OUT as he talks. He’s agitated, irritable.
He hasn’t been sleeping well.
WONKA
I can’t put my finger on it. Candy
has always been the only thing I
was certain of, and now I’m not
certain at all.
Wonka is lying on a couch. An OOMPA-LOOMPA with glasses --
his psychiatrist -- takes notes in a pad.
WONKA (CONT’D)
I don’t know which flavors to make,
which ideas to try. I’m second-
guessing myself, which is mad.
I’ve always made whatever candy I
feel like.
(CONTINUED)
111.
140 CONTINUED: 140
A beat, then Wonka has a sudden insight. He sits up.
WONKA (CONT’D)
That’s just it, isn’t it!? I make
the candy I feel like, but now I
feel terrible, so the candy is
terrible.
(to the psychiatrist)
Ooh. You’re very good.
The Oompa-Loompa takes off his glasses and nods.
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Scene 40 - A Heart-to-Heart at the Shoe Shine Booth
Charlie finishes up ONE MAN’S shoes, taking his tip.
CHARLIE
Thank you.
Charlie moves down to the next man waiting, who is already up
in the chair. The CUSTOMER has his face buried in the
business section of the local paper.
CUSTOMER
Pity about that chocolate
fellow...Wendell...Walter...
As he start to polish, Charlie notices that the man’s boots
have distinctive W’s on them. He quickly suspects his
customer is actually...
CHARLIE
Willy Wonka?
FROM THE SIDE
we see it is in fact Wonka in the chair.
WONKA
That’s the one. Says here his new
candies aren’t selling well. I
suppose maybe he’s a rotten sort of
person who deserves it.
CHARLIE
Yup.
Wonka was hoping Charlie would come to his defense.
WONKA
I don’t suppose you ever met him?
(CONTINUED)
112.
141 CONTINUED: 141
CHARLIE
I did. I thought he was nice at
first, but then he turned out to be
a jerk.
(beat)
He also smelled like a litter box.
Wonka drops the paper.
WONKA
I do not!
CHARLIE
Why are you here?
WONKA
I need you to make me feel better
about myself.
CHARLIE
I can’t do that.
WONKA
Well who can?
CHARLIE
I don’t know.
WONKA
Think! Who makes you feel better
when you feel terrible?
CHARLIE
My family.
Wonka GROANS, slinking back in his chair. Charlie climbs up
into the seat beside him. For the first time, they really
seem like equals.
CHARLIE (CONT’D)
What do you have against my family?
WONKA
It’s not your family. It’s the
very idea of p-p-p-p...You know.
Always telling you what to do, what
not to do. It’s the very
antithesis of inspiration!
(CONTINUED)
113.
141 CONTINUED: (2) 141
CHARLIE
Usually they’re just trying to
protect you. Because they love
you.
Wonka is bewildered by this idea.
CHARLIE (CONT’D)
If you don’t believe me, you should
ask.
WONKA
Ask my father? I couldn’t.
(beat)
Certainly not by myself.
CHARLIE
You want me to go with you?
WONKA
Yes. I’ve got transportation!
Wonka points to the right, where a HURRIED TRAVELLER suddenly
SMACKS into the unseen glass elevator. Oww.
WONKA
I should be more careful where I
park it.
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Scene 41 - Return to Wonka's Childhood Home
Charlie and Wonka walk away from the glass elevator, which is
parked in the middle of a vast meadow. They walk up to the
only building in sight, a
NARROW ROW HOUSE
that looks absurd by itself, three stacked stories attached
to nothing. It’s the house little Willy grew up in, moved
out to the middle of nowhere.
143 EXT. THE ROW HOUSE - DAY 143
Charlie RINGS the bell. Wonka is suddenly very nervous.
(CONTINUED)
114.
143 CONTINUED: 143
WONKA
Maybe we’ve got the wrong house.
But the sign reads: DR. WILBUR WONKA, D.D.S.
The door opens, revealing a very old man -- almost the age of
Grandpa Joe. It’s Dr. Wonka, thirty years older. He’s
carrying a crossword puzzle, and wearing his reading glasses.
He squints.
DR. WONKA
Do you have an appointment?
CHARLIE
No. But he’s overdue.
144 INT. DENTIST’S OFFICE - DAY 144
With a THUMP, the dentist’s chair reclines. Wonka stares up
into the bright work lamp as his father leans over him.
Charlie stands nearby.
DR. WONKA
Open!
Wonka reluctantly opens his mouth. With his very shaky
hands, Dr. Wonka pokes around inside with picks and mirrors.
DR. WONKA (CONT’D)
Heavens, I haven’t seen bicuspids
like this since...
Suddenly, it dawns on him:
DR. WONKA (CONT’D)
Willy?
Wonka can barely talk with the instruments in his mouth.
Garbles:
WONKA
Hi, Dad.
DR. WONKA
All these years. You haven’t
flossed.
WONKA
Not once.
The men embrace. Charlie smiles.
(CONTINUED)
115.
144 CONTINUED: 144
NARRATOR (V.O.)
It was on this day that Willy Wonka
repeated his offer to Charlie, who
accepted on one condition.
CUT TO:
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Scene 42 - Dinner at the Bucket's House
Charlie and Wonka come in through the front door, shaking the
snow off their jackets. The whole family is there, getting
ready for dinner.
CHARLIE
Sorry we’re late. We were
brainstorming.
GRANDPA GEORGE
Thought I heard thunder.
MOTHER
Willy, are you staying for dinner?
WONKA
Yes, please!
GRANDPA JOE
I’ll shuffle the plates.
Grandpa Joe squeezes in an extra setting at the table. It’s
very crowded, but everyone manages to fit. Wonka takes a
seat next to Grandma Georgina.
GRANDMA GEORGINA
You smell like peanuts! I love
peanuts!
She hugs him. For the first time, he doesn’t flinch at being
touched.
WONKA
You smell like old people. And
soap!
GRANDMA JOSEPHINE
Charlie, elbows off the table.
He does as he’s told.
116.
A146 EXT. THE LITTLE HOUSE - DUSK [CONTINUOUS] A146
As a gentle snow falls, we look in through the window to find
the whole Bucket family -- including the grandparents --
crowded around the kitchen table for a feast. Willy Wonka
fits perfectly.
WONKA
(to Charlie)
How do you feel about raspberry
kites?
CHARLIE
With licorice instead of string!
FATHER
Boys, no business at the dinner
table.
CHARLIE
Sorry, Dad.
WONKA
(low; to Charlie)
You’re on to something, though.
As we PULL OUT through the window, we start to get a better
view of the entire house.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
In the end, Charlie Bucket won a
chocolate factory. But Willy Wonka
got something even better: a
family.
It’s not until we get quite wide that we see the house is no
longer sitting in front of the factory -- it’s now inside it.
It sits on the banks of the chocolate river.
The snow is simply powdered sugar falling from a massive
shaker overhead. CHOCOLATE EASTER BUNNIES hop through the
drifts, leaving tracks.
Still in the same PULL BACK, we reveal our NARRATOR, who is
in fact an Oompa-Loompa. (It’s the first time we’ve heard
one talk.)
(CONTINUED)
117.
A146 CONTINUED: A146
OOMPA-NARRATOR
One thing was absolutely certain: life
had never been sweeter.
The Oompa-Narrator bows and takes his exit.
FADE OUT.
THE END
Ratings
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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charlie bucket | Charlie Bucket's character arc in the screenplay follows his journey from a humble and curious young boy to a compassionate and resilient individual who values integrity and family above all else. Throughout the story, Charlie faces challenges, makes difficult decisions, and experiences growth in his understanding of the world around him. His interactions with Willy Wonka and the other characters help him develop empathy, maturity, and a sense of wonder, ultimately leading to a deeper appreciation for the importance of family and moral values. | The character arc for Charlie Bucket is well-developed and engaging, showcasing his growth and development throughout the story. However, to enhance the emotional impact of his journey, it may be beneficial to further explore his internal struggles and conflicts, particularly in relation to his family's financial hardships. Additionally, providing more opportunities for Charlie to showcase his resourcefulness and creativity in overcoming challenges could add depth to his character and make his growth more impactful. | To improve the character arc for Charlie Bucket, consider incorporating more scenes that highlight his internal struggles and conflicts related to his family's financial struggles. This could add depth to his character and make his growth more emotionally resonant. Additionally, provide opportunities for Charlie to showcase his resourcefulness and creativity in overcoming challenges, demonstrating his resilience and determination. By further exploring these aspects of his character, Charlie's journey will become more compelling and impactful for the audience. |
grandpa joe | Grandpa Joe starts off as a nostalgic and wise figure, reflecting on past experiences with a sense of wonder and longing. As the story progresses, he becomes more supportive, adventurous, and mischievous, excited to explore the chocolate factory and always ready for a new adventure. He ultimately becomes a source of support, encouragement, and inspiration for Charlie, embracing his playful nature and lively spirit. | The character arc for Grandpa Joe is well-developed, showcasing his transformation from a reflective and wise figure to a supportive and adventurous grandfather. However, there could be more consistency in his character traits throughout the screenplay to make his evolution more seamless and impactful. | To improve the character arc for Grandpa Joe, consider incorporating more subtle hints of his mischievous and adventurous nature early on in the story to foreshadow his transformation. Additionally, ensure that his speaking style remains consistent with his evolving personality, reflecting his growth and development as a character. |
willy wonka | In the screenplay, Willy Wonka starts off as a whimsical and eccentric candy maker who is content with his magical inventions and mysterious persona. However, as the story progresses, he begins to confront his feelings of inadequacy and the need for validation from others. Through his interactions with the children and the challenges they face in the chocolate factory, Wonka learns the importance of family, connection, and vulnerability. By the end of the film, he undergoes a transformation, embracing his true self and finding fulfillment in genuine relationships. | The character arc for Willy Wonka is well-developed and engaging, showcasing his growth from a mysterious figure to a vulnerable and caring individual. However, to enhance the emotional impact of his journey, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and the reasons behind his guarded nature. Additionally, exploring his past experiences and how they shape his present actions could add depth to his character development. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating flashback scenes that delve into Willy Wonka's childhood and the events that led him to become the eccentric candy maker he is today. This would provide insight into his motivations, fears, and desires, making his transformation more compelling and relatable to the audience. Furthermore, focus on building stronger emotional connections between Wonka and the other characters, particularly the children, to highlight his growth and the importance of genuine relationships in his life. |
charlie | Charlie starts off as a curious and eager young boy who is driven by his hunger to find the Golden Ticket. As he embarks on his journey through the chocolate factory, he experiences a range of emotions from disappointment to elation. Along the way, he learns valuable lessons about empathy, integrity, and the importance of family. By the end of the story, Charlie emerges as a wise and compassionate character who provides grounding for the other characters and embodies the values of honesty and loyalty. | The character arc for Charlie is well-developed and allows for significant growth and development throughout the story. However, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and conflicts, as well as his personal growth beyond just his interactions with the other characters. This would add depth to his character and make his journey even more compelling. | To improve the character arc for Charlie, consider adding more internal monologues or moments of introspection where he grapples with his own fears, doubts, and desires. This will give the audience a deeper insight into his character and allow for a more nuanced portrayal of his emotional journey. Additionally, explore opportunities for Charlie to make more active choices that drive the plot forward and showcase his agency as a protagonist. |
augustus gloop | Augustus Gloop starts off as a gluttonous and greedy boy obsessed with finding the Golden Ticket. His impulsive actions lead to comical yet dark consequences, ultimately resulting in a physical transformation that highlights the dangers of excess. Throughout the story, Augustus learns the consequences of his greed and indulgence, leading to a realization of the importance of moderation and self-control. | The character arc for Augustus Gloop is well-developed, showcasing his journey from greed and gluttony to self-awareness and moderation. However, to enhance the arc, there could be more emphasis on Augustus' internal struggles and emotional growth. Additionally, exploring the root cause of his gluttony and greed could add depth to his character and make his transformation more impactful. | To improve the character arc, consider adding scenes that delve into Augustus' backstory and motivations for his behavior. Show moments of vulnerability and internal conflict to make his transformation more believable and relatable. Additionally, focus on his relationships with other characters to highlight his growth and development throughout the story. |
veruca salt | Veruca starts off as a spoiled and entitled girl who is accustomed to getting whatever she wants. However, as the story progresses, she faces consequences for her behavior and begins to realize the impact of her actions on others. Through a series of events, she learns the value of empathy, humility, and kindness, ultimately leading to a transformation where she becomes more considerate and compassionate towards others. | The character arc for Veruca Salt is well-developed and provides a satisfying journey for the audience. However, to enhance the arc, it could be beneficial to delve deeper into the reasons behind Veruca's behavior and explore her vulnerabilities and insecurities that may drive her entitled attitude. This would add depth to her character and make her transformation more impactful and believable. | To improve the character arc for Veruca Salt, consider incorporating flashback scenes or moments of introspection where she reflects on her past experiences that have shaped her entitled behavior. Additionally, explore her relationships with other characters in more depth to show how they influence her growth and change throughout the story. By adding layers to her character and motivations, the audience will be more invested in her journey and transformation. |
violet beauregarde | Violet's character arc in the screenplay follows her journey from a fiercely competitive and arrogant child to a more humble and empathetic individual. Through a series of challenges and setbacks, Violet learns the importance of teamwork and humility, ultimately realizing that winning isn't everything. She undergoes a transformation where she learns to value relationships over achievements and becomes a more well-rounded and compassionate person. | The character arc for Violet Beauregarde is well-developed and provides a satisfying resolution to her journey. However, there could be more depth added to her transformation by exploring the root of her competitive nature and arrogance. Providing more backstory or internal conflict for Violet could make her character arc more compelling and relatable to the audience. | To improve the character arc for Violet Beauregarde, consider delving deeper into her motivations and insecurities that drive her competitive behavior. Show moments of vulnerability and self-reflection that lead to her eventual growth and change. Additionally, incorporating more interactions with the other characters that challenge her beliefs and values can further enhance her character development. |
oompa-loompas | The Oompa-Loompas start off as mysterious and mischievous workers in the chocolate room, providing commentary on the characters' actions through song and dance. As the story progresses, they are shown to be resourceful and inventive workers from Loompaland, constantly seeking new ingredients to improve their caterpillar-based diet. Their loyalty and dedication to their work are highlighted when they paint the square candies. By the end of the film, the Oompa-Loompas have become integral members of Willy Wonka's factory, showcasing their quirky and playful nature in various tasks and performances. | The character arc of the Oompa-Loompas is well-developed, showcasing their evolution from mysterious workers to integral members of the factory. However, there could be more depth added to their backstory in Loompaland and their interactions with each other to further enhance their character development. | To improve the character arc of the Oompa-Loompas, consider incorporating flashbacks or additional scenes that delve into their life in Loompaland and their relationships with each other. This will provide more depth to their characters and make their evolution throughout the film even more impactful. |
mr. salt | Throughout the screenplay, Mr. Salt learns the importance of setting boundaries and discipline for his daughter. Initially indulgent and perplexed by the factory's eccentricities, he gradually realizes the consequences of his lack of control over Veruca's behavior. By the end of the story, he becomes more assertive and authoritative, ultimately finding a balance between indulgence and discipline in his parenting. | The character arc for Mr. Salt is well-developed and provides a clear progression for his growth as a character. However, it could benefit from more nuanced moments of reflection and internal struggle to make his transformation more impactful and believable. | To improve the character arc, consider adding scenes where Mr. Salt grapples with his own shortcomings as a parent and the impact of his indulgence on Veruca. This could involve moments of introspection or conflict with other characters that challenge his beliefs and behaviors. Additionally, showing more gradual changes in his demeanor and actions throughout the screenplay can make his transformation feel more organic and authentic. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Emotional Impact and Dialogue | Scenes with a higher emotional impact tend to have stronger dialogue. In this screenplay, scenes with an emotional impact score of 7 or higher also have a dialogue score of 6 or higher. |
Whimsical Tone and Character Changes | Scenes with a whimsical tone are more likely to feature character changes. Out of the 42 scenes, 31 scenes have a whimsical tone and 23 of those scenes also have a character change. |
High Stakes and Move Story Forward | Scenes with high stakes tend to move the story forward more effectively. 26 out of the 29 scenes with high stakes also have a score of 7 or higher in the 'Move story forward' category. |
Nostalgic Tone and Emotional Impact | Scenes with a nostalgic tone tend to have a lower emotional impact. 13 out of the 17 scenes with a nostalgic tone have an emotional impact score of 6 or lower. |
Satirical Tone and Dialogue | Scenes with a satirical tone tend to have weaker dialogue. 4 out of the 5 scenes with a satirical tone have a dialogue score of 5 or lower. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
Based on the analysis of the provided scenes, the writer demonstrates a strong foundation in storytelling, with a particular talent for creating engaging characters, vivid settings, and emotionally resonant moments. The writing style is characterized by a blend of humor, heart, and imagination, which effectively draws the audience into the narrative and creates a memorable experience.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Screenplay | Study screenplays by writers known for their strong character development and compelling narratives, such as Aaron Sorkin ('The Social Network') or Greta Gerwig ('Lady Bird'). | Analyzing these screenplays can provide valuable insights into crafting well-rounded characters with complex motivations and engaging relationships. |
Book | Read 'Story' by Robert McKee. | This book offers a comprehensive guide to storytelling principles, including structure, pacing, and character development, which can help strengthen the screenplay's overall narrative. |
Exercise | Practice writing character monologues to explore their inner thoughts, desires, and struggles.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise can help deepen the writer's understanding of their characters and create more authentic and emotionally resonant dialogue. |
Exercise | Write scenes with contrasting tones, such as humor and drama, to develop versatility and range in storytelling.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise can enhance the writer's ability to create dynamic scenes that evoke a wide range of emotions and keep the audience engaged. |
Video | Watch interviews with screenwriters discussing their writing process and techniques for creating compelling dialogue. | Gaining insights from experienced writers can provide valuable tips and inspiration for improving the screenplay's dialogue and character interactions. |
Stories Similar to this one
Story | Explanation |
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Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (2005) | This film is the most obvious comparison as it is based on the same source material by Roald Dahl. Both stories follow a similar plot of a young boy named Charlie winning a tour of Willy Wonka's chocolate factory. |
Willy Wonka & the Chocolate Factory (1971) | Another adaptation of Roald Dahl's book, this film shares many similarities with the screenplay, including the character of Willy Wonka, the Golden Ticket contest, and the tour of the chocolate factory. |
The BFG (2016) | Also based on a book by Roald Dahl, this film shares the whimsical and fantastical elements found in the screenplay. Both stories feature imaginative worlds and eccentric characters. |
Matilda (1996) | Another film adaptation of a Roald Dahl book, Matilda shares the theme of a young child overcoming adversity and finding a sense of belonging. Both stories also feature elements of magic and wonder. |
Alice in Wonderland (2010) | This film shares similarities with the screenplay in terms of its fantastical and surreal elements. Both stories take the audience on a journey through a whimsical and imaginative world. |
The Wizard of Oz (1939) | Both stories feature a young protagonist embarking on a magical adventure and meeting eccentric characters along the way. The themes of self-discovery and overcoming obstacles are also present in both narratives. |
Hook (1991) | This film shares similarities with the screenplay in terms of its whimsical and imaginative setting. Both stories transport the audience to a fantastical world filled with colorful characters and magical elements. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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The Power of Friendship | The children in the screenplay form a bond and work together to overcome the challenges they face in the factory. | The Power of Friendship is a common trope in children's movies and TV shows. It shows that friends can help each other through difficult times and that friendship is important. |
The Evil Factory | The Wonka factory is a dangerous place, with many traps and hazards. | The Evil Factory is a common trope in horror movies and TV shows. It shows that factories can be dangerous places and that the people who work in them are often evil. |
The Mad Scientist | Willy Wonka is a eccentric and unpredictable character, who often makes strange and dangerous decisions. | The Mad Scientist is a common trope in science fiction movies and TV shows. It shows that scientists can be brilliant but also dangerous and unpredictable. |
The Chosen One | Charlie Bucket is the only child who is chosen to inherit the Wonka factory. | The Chosen One is a common trope in fantasy movies and TV shows. It shows that there is always one person who is destined to save the world. |
The Power of Imagination | The children in the screenplay use their imaginations to create new and wonderful things. | The Power of Imagination is a common trope in children's movies and TV shows. It shows that imagination is important and that it can help us to achieve anything. |
The Importance of Family | The Bucket family is a close-knit family who support each other. | The Importance of Family is a common trope in movies and TV shows. It shows that family is important and that we should cherish our loved ones. |
The Power of Love | Charlie Bucket's love for his family helps him to overcome the challenges he faces. | The Power of Love is a common trope in movies and TV shows. It shows that love is powerful and that it can help us to achieve anything. |
The Power of Good | Charlie Bucket is a good person who always tries to do the right thing. | The Power of Good is a common trope in movies and TV shows. It shows that good will always triumph over evil. |
The Power of Evil | The children in the screenplay are faced with many challenges, including the evil machinations of Willy Wonka. | The Power of Evil is a common trope in movies and TV shows. It shows that evil is powerful and that it can be difficult to overcome. |
The Power of Hope | Charlie Bucket never gives up hope, even when things are difficult. | The Power of Hope is a common trope in movies and TV shows. It shows that hope is important and that it can help us to achieve anything. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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The Power of Imagination and Dreams | The screenplay emphasizes the power of imagination and the importance of pursuing one's dreams. Charlie's unwavering belief in the existence of the Golden Ticket and his determination to find it exemplify this theme. | This theme underscores the transformative nature of imagination and the ability of dreams to shape reality. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening The Power of Imagination and Dreams:
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The Importance of Family | The screenplay highlights the significance of family bonds and the unconditional love and support they provide. Charlie's family, despite facing financial challenges, remains a close-knit unit throughout the film. | Family is portrayed as a sanctuary and a source of strength, especially during times of adversity. | ||||||||||||
The Dangers of Greed and Selfishness | The screenplay explores the negative consequences of greed and selfishness through characters like Augustus Gloop, Veruca Salt, and Violet Beauregarde. Their excessive desires and entitlement ultimately lead to their misfortunes. | The film cautions against the pursuit of material possessions and selfish gratification, emphasizing the importance of kindness, compassion, and gratitude. | ||||||||||||
The Value of Hard Work and Determination | Charlie's tireless search for the Golden Ticket and his subsequent journey through the factory showcase the virtues of hard work, perseverance, and never giving up on one's goals. | Charlie's unwavering determination and willingness to strive for the best serve as an inspiration and demonstrate the rewards of persistence. | ||||||||||||
The Role of Mentorship and Guidance | The relationship between Charlie and Grandpa Joe highlights the importance of mentorship and guidance from experienced individuals. Grandpa Joe's stories and insights inspire Charlie's imagination and help him overcome obstacles. | The film emphasizes the valuable role mentors play in shaping the lives of young people and guiding them toward their potential. | ||||||||||||
The Importance of Empathy and Understanding | The screenplay encourages empathy and understanding through Charlie's interactions with the Oompa-Loompas and his journey through the factory. Charlie learns to appreciate the perspectives and experiences of others, fostering a sense of compassion. | The film promotes the idea of putting oneself in someone else's shoes and recognizing the commonalities that unite humanity. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's unique voice is characterized by a blend of whimsical humor, heartwarming moments, vivid imagery, and imaginative dialogue. The voice effectively creates a sense of wonder and enchantment in the screenplay, transporting readers into a fantastical and mesmerizing world. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by establishing a whimsical and engaging tone, creating a sense of magic and adventure that captivates the audience's imagination. The use of vivid imagery and imaginative dialogue immerses readers in the fantastical world of the screenplay, leaving them enchanted and entertained. |
Best Representation Scene | 4 - Willy Wonka's Grand Opening |
Best Scene Explanation | Scene 4 is the best representative of the author's voice because it effectively captures the whimsical and heartwarming tone of the screenplay. The dialogue is witty and engaging, while the descriptions of the candy-making processes are vivid and imaginative. The scene creates a sense of wonder and delight, showcasing the writer's ability to blend humor and heart in a poignant and engaging way. |
- Overall originality score: 9
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay demonstrates high originality, introducing fresh and imaginative concepts. It avoids relying on overused tropes and instead presents novel ideas and scenarios that set it apart from other works. The film's unique premise, quirky characters, and unexpected turns contribute to its overall originality.
- Most unique situations: Some of the most unique situations in the screenplay include:
- Overall unpredictability score: 9
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay is highly unpredictable, keeping the audience engaged and guessing throughout. It subverts expectations and takes unexpected turns, making it difficult to foresee the outcome of events. The film's non-linear structure, unreliable narrator, and surprising twists add to its overall unpredictability.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goal in this screenplay is to find hope, happiness, and a sense of belonging despite his difficult circumstances. As the story progresses, he evolves to embrace his creativity, desire for adventure, and curiosity about the unknown. |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goal is to navigate through challenges, such as poverty, to achieve success, recognition, and validation. He also aims to explore new opportunities, experiences, and adventures in Willy Wonka's factory. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in this screenplay is the clash between tradition and innovation, gluttony and moderation, greed and selflessness, as well as skepticism and belief. These conflicts challenge the protagonist's values, beliefs, and perceptions about the world around him. |
Character Development Contribution: The evolution of the protagonist's internal and external goals, as well as the philosophical conflicts he faces, contribute to his growth and development as he learns to embrace creativity, adventure, and selflessness. Through facing challenges and exploring new opportunities, he gains a deeper understanding of himself and the world around him.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The protagonist's goals and the philosophical conflicts intertwine to shape the narrative structure of the screenplay, creating tension, drama, and character development. The progression of internal and external goals, as well as the exploration of philosophical conflicts, drive the plot forward and engage the audience in the protagonist's journey.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and philosophical conflicts in this screenplay add thematic depth by exploring themes of hope, happiness, creativity, adventure, selflessness, and belief. Through the protagonist's journey, the screenplay delves into the importance of embracing change, following one's dreams, and finding meaning in connection and belonging.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay depicts a whimsical and fantastical world with a range of unique physical environments, from a cold, industrial setting to a small, cramped house, to a bustling candy store, to a chocolate palace, and a modern toothpaste factory. These settings contribute to a sense of isolation, hardship, mystery, joy, opulence, and wonder in the screenplay.
- Culture: The screenplay also highlights various cultural elements, including the importance of family, resilience, and determination in the face of adversity, as well as the celebratory and magical aspects of candy-making and inventing. These cultural elements contribute to the emotional depth and warmth of the story.
- Society: The societal structure depicted in the screenplay is one of economic disparity, where the Bucket family struggles to make ends meet while Wonka is a wealthy and eccentric factory owner. The screenplay also explores themes of competition and entitlement, as seen in the Golden Ticket contest and the characters of Violet Beauregarde and Veruca Salt. These societal elements create tension, drive the narrative, and highlight the complexities of human nature.
- Technology: The technological elements in the screenplay range from the advanced machinery and processes used in Wonka's factory to the vintage television and camera used by the reporter and the classic candy-making techniques employed by the Oompa-Loompas. These technological elements contribute to the sense of wonder, nostalgia, and contrast between the ordinary and the extraordinary in the screenplay.
- Characters influence: The world elements in the screenplay have a profound impact on the characters' experiences and actions. The cold, industrial setting of the opening scene reflects the hardship faced by the Bucket family, while the fantastical and whimsical world of Wonka's factory offers a sense of escape and wonder. The societal structure of economic disparity shapes the characters' motivations and relationships, and the technological advancements and candy-making techniques influence the characters' abilities and challenges.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the narrative by creating conflict, driving the action, and revealing character motivations. The physical environments provide settings for key events and encounters, while the cultural elements add depth and emotional resonance to the story. The societal structure creates tension and suspense, and the technological elements introduce challenges and opportunities for the characters.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements in the screenplay also contribute to the thematic depth of the film. The cold, industrial setting highlights the themes of poverty and hardship, while the fantastical world of Wonka's factory represents imagination and the power of dreams. The societal structure explores themes of competition, entitlement, and the importance of family, while the technological elements raise questions about progress and the balance between tradition and innovation. These world elements work together to create a complex and thought-provoking story that resonates with audiences on multiple levels.
central conflict
Charlie Bucket, a young boy from a poor family, wins a golden ticket to visit Willy Wonka's chocolate factory, where he must overcome various challenges and temptations in order to prove his worthiness to inherit the factory.
primary motivations
- Charlie's desire to improve his family's financial situation
- Wonka's need to find an heir for his factory
- The children's desire to win the grand prize
- Veruca's desire for a flying glass elevator
- Mike's desire to figure out how the television chocolate machine works
- Violet's desire to be the first to try new candy
catalysts
- Charlie finding the golden ticket
- The children entering the chocolate factory
- The children getting into trouble
- Wonka's decision to offer Charlie the factory
- Charlie's refusal to give up his family
- Wonka's reunion with his father
barriers
- Charlie's poverty
- The children's greed
- The factory's dangers
- Wonka's eccentricity
- Charlie's own self-doubt
themes
- The importance of family
- The dangers of greed
- The power of imagination
- The value of hard work
- The importance of accepting yourself
stakes
- Charlie's family's future
- Wonka's legacy
- The children's lives
uniqueness factor
The story's unique setting, the chocolate factory, and its eccentric owner, Willy Wonka, make it stand out from other children's stories.
audience hook
The story's suspenseful plot and relatable characters will keep audiences of all ages engaged.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The story's paradoxical engine is the tension between Charlie's desire to win the factory and his unwillingness to give up his family. This tension drives the story forward and creates a sense of suspense.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another paradoxical engine in the story is the tension between Wonka's desire to find an heir and his unwillingness to let go of his control over the factory. This tension creates a sense of conflict and uncertainty that keeps the audience guessing until the very end.
Consider
Executive Summary
Charlie and the Chocolate Factory is a whimsical and imaginative screenplay with strong world-building and characterization, particularly for the protagonist, Charlie Bucket. However, the pacing could be improved, and some elements, such as Willy Wonka's character development and the bicycle men subplot, feel underdeveloped. Additionally, the screenplay could benefit from a deeper exploration of the ethical implications of Wonka's actions and a more nuanced portrayal of Charlie's emotional journey.
- Vivid and imaginative world-building, creating a fantastical and memorable setting. high
- Strong characterization of Charlie Bucket, portraying his kindness, humility, and strong family values. high ( Scene 5 Scene 8 Scene 22 Scene 77 )
- Effective use of humor and satire, particularly through the portrayal of the other children and their families. medium
- The backstory of Willy Wonka and the Oompa-Loompas adds depth and intrigue to the narrative. medium ( Scene 79 Scene 80 Scene 81 Scene 82 Scene 83 )
- Memorable and catchy songs by the Oompa-Loompas, enhancing the whimsical atmosphere and providing moral commentary. medium
- The pacing could be improved, with some scenes feeling rushed and others dragging. high
- Willy Wonka's character development is somewhat inconsistent, shifting between eccentricity and cruelty. medium
- The mysterious bicycle men subplot feels underdeveloped and could be integrated more seamlessly into the main narrative. medium ( Scene A23 Scene 23 Scene 24 Scene 25 )
- The resolution of Willy Wonka's emotional arc feels abrupt and could be explored in more depth. low ( Scene 140 )
- Some of the humor, particularly the slapstick elements, may feel dated or inappropriate for modern audiences. low
- Exploration of the ethical implications of Willy Wonka's actions and the treatment of the Oompa-Loompas. high
- Deeper exploration of Charlie's emotional journey and his internal conflicts. medium
- More interaction and development of the relationships between the children beyond their initial rivalry. low
- The screenplay effectively balances elements of fantasy, adventure, and morality tale. high
- The visual descriptions are rich and detailed, providing a strong foundation for a visually stunning film adaptation. high
- The screenplay's themes of family, kindness, and the importance of imagination resonate with audiences of all ages. high
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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27 | Oompa-Loompas: Listen close, and listen hard, To the tale of Violet Beauregarde! |
24 | Oompa-Loompas: Aaaaaaaaaugust Gloop! Augustus Gloop! The great big greedy nincompoop! |
19 | Marionettes: Greetings, Earthlings! |
36 | Veruca Salt: I want it now! |
37 | Willy Wonka: Not just some something! The most something something of any something that’s ever been. |