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Everything Everywhere All at Once

A weary laundromat owner, pulled into a war that rips open countless alternate lives, must learn to draw on the bizarre skills of his other selves to stop his brilliant but nihilistic daughter from collapsing reality—and in the process, salvage the marriage he’s taken for granted.

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

The screenplay's unique selling proposition lies in its inventive multiverse concept, blending absurdist humor with profound existential and familial themes. Its ability to balance high-concept sci-fi with intimate character drama sets it apart from typical genre fare.

AI Verdict & Suggestions

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GPT5
 Highly Recommend
Gemini
 Recommend
Grok
 Recommend
Claude
 Highly Recommend
DeepSeek
 Highly Recommend
Average Score: 8.9
Key Takeaways
For the Writer:
You have an extraordinary, single‑idea engine: domestic heartbreak fuelled by wildly inventive multiverse set pieces. The immediate craft task is to make the mechanics and stakes feel dramatic rather than expository so the audience can emotionally ride the spectacle. Turn the ‘rule dumps’ into a short, active scene that shows how verse‑jumping works (limits, costs, signals) and use it as a recurring dramaturgical beat. Then ruthlessly prune mid‑act vignettes to the ones that advance Jackie’s emotional arc or provide specific skills he will need in the climax. Finally, humanize Jobu with one concrete personal beat (loss, curiosity, or a pivotal memory) so her nihilism reads as a moral choice, and clarify the Alpha/Winona signposting (visual or verbal cues) so readers/viewers never have to guess who’s who.
For Executives:
This is high‑value, high‑risk material: a commercially viable, awards‑friendly high‑concept that mixes action, comedy and intimate drama. Its USP — the domestic heart inside absurd, memorable universes — will attract top talent and festival attention. The biggest near‑term risk is audience confusion and spectacle fatigue: without clearer rules and a tightened middle, test screenings could report ‘incoherent’ or ‘meandering.’ I recommend a conditional greenlight: proceed if the writer/director commit to a targeted rewrite (clarify verse mechanics on screen, cut or consolidate vignettes, deepen Jobu’s motive, and give the climax real, visible consequences). This will protect marketability while preserving the film’s audacious visual identity.
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Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Sci-Fi, Action, Fantasy, Thriller, Comedy, Science Fiction, Romance, Family Drama, Metafiction, Meta, Surreal

Setting: Contemporary, Multiple universes including a university, IRS building, various alternate realities, and surreal environments.

Themes: Love and Empathy as a Counter to Existential Despair, Familial Relationships and Reconciliation, Finding Meaning and Purpose in the Ordinary, The Burden of Unfulfilled Potential and Regret, Existentialism and Nihilism vs. Human Connection, Intergenerational Trauma and Cultural Differences

Conflict & Stakes: Jackie's struggle to reconcile his family relationships amidst multiverse chaos, with the stakes being the survival of his family and his own identity.

Mood: Chaotic yet introspective, blending humor with deep emotional resonance.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The multiverse concept allows for endless creative possibilities and character variations.
  • Plot Twist: The revelation of Jobu Tupaki's true nature and her connection to Jackie and Winona adds depth to the narrative.
  • Innovative Ideas: The screenplay creatively blends genres, including comedy, action, and philosophical drama.
  • Distinctive Settings: The various universes, from the IRS building to surreal environments, provide a visually rich experience.
  • Unique Characters: Characters like Jobu Tupaki and Alpha Winona offer fresh perspectives and complexities.

Comparable Scripts: Everything Everywhere All at Once, The Matrix, Doctor Strange in the Multiverse of Madness, Rick and Morty, The One, Sliding Doors, Cloud Atlas, The Umbrella Academy, The Time Traveler's Wife, Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind

Script Level Analysis

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This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.

Screenplay Insights

Breaks down your script along various categories.

Overall Score: 8.30
Key Suggestions:
This ambitious multiverse screenplay is strongest when it is emotionally anchored—Jackie, Winona and Jobu’s arcs are powerful—but the rapid universe-hopping and dense exposition currently dilute those human beats. Prioritize two refinements: (1) streamline and clearly signpost multiverse transitions so viewers can follow cause and effect, and (2) deepen Joy/Jobu and Jackie–Winona moments (one or two compact, revealing flashbacks or scenes) to raise the emotional stakes. Doing both will keep the film inventive without losing audience empathy.
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Story Critique

Big-picture feedback on the story’s clarity, stakes, cohesion, and engagement.

Key Suggestions:
The script has enormous heart and daring imagination, but its emotional payoff is being buried under relentless multiverse detours. Prioritize the core family story—Jackie, Winona, and Joy/Jobu—and reduce the number of universes and side gags so each jump earns a clear emotional or plot purpose. Tighten Jobu’s motivation and Winona’s arc so the final confrontation feels earned rather than a spectacle. Use a few recurring, visually distinct universes as motifs to track stakes and character growth, and lean into quieter scenes that build empathy before the big, strange set pieces.
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Characters

Explores the depth, clarity, and arc of the main and supporting characters.

Key Suggestions:
The multiverse concept is dazzling but the script's emotional center—the fraught father/daughter/marriage triangle—needs to be clearer and more consistently foregrounded. Tighten or rework scenes that diffuse emotional stakes (notably the early tax/household scenes) so each surreal jump is motivated by a concrete turn in Jackie’s internal arc. Make Jobu’s origin and emotional wound legible earlier (give one or two concise, humanizing beats), sharpen the turning points that force Jackie to change (so the verse-jumps feel earned), and give Alpha Winona a clearer, grounded intro that shows why Jackie should trust her. In short: prune incidental spectacle, amplify cause-and-effect in Jackie/Winona/Jobu beats, and make the audience feel the stakes before you explode into the multiverse set pieces.
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Emotional Analysis

Breaks down the emotional journey of the audience across the script.

Key Suggestions:
The script has a striking high-concept core — a multiverse story anchored by a tender father/daughter relationship — but the emotional ride is uneven. Middle sections linger in confusion and sadness, while some climactic beats feel rushed and rely on shock over depth. Tighten the emotional pacing: give quieter scenes a clear arc and select moments of levity to relieve fatigue; deepen Winona and Jobu with brief, specific vulnerability beats so the audience cares when stakes escalate; and slow down key climactic scenes long enough for genuine emotional payoff rather than spectacle.
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Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Evaluates character motivations, obstacles, and sources of tension throughout the plot.

Key Suggestions:
The multiverse spectacle works best when it serves a clear emotional spine. Right now the script is rich in imaginative set pieces but at risk of diluting the audience’s investment because Jackie’s internal throughline (redemption, reconciliation with Joy and Winona) isn’t always the organizing principle of scenes. Tighten the screenplay by pruning or consolidating some universe detours, clarifying Jobu’s motive/inner stakes, and making each big sequence earn and escalate Jackie’s single emotional choice—so the chaos amplifies rather than obscures the catharsis.
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Themes

Analysis of the themes of the screenplay and how well they’re expressed.

Key Suggestions:
This script’s greatest strength is its high-concept multiverse spectacle anchored in a small, messy family drama: love, empathy, and reconciliation. Right now the emotional throughline — Jackie learning to accept and reconnect with Joy (Jobu) through Winona — is sometimes drowned by proliferating surreal set pieces and tonal leaps. Tighten the structure by pruning or repurposing sequences that don't directly advance Jackie/Winona/Jobu’s emotional arcs, clarify Jobu’s motive and emotional state so her nihilism has personal stakes, and use the multiverse moments as metaphors for inner change rather than mere spectacle. That will make the payoff feel earned and keep audiences emotionally invested through the chaos.
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Logic & Inconsistencies

Highlights any contradictions, plot holes, or logic gaps that may confuse viewers.

Key Suggestions:
Right now the screenplay’s biggest friction comes from two linked issues: a lack of setup for Winona’s Alpha/verse-jumping role and unclear, inconsistent mechanics for verse-jumping (which also weakens Jobu’s arc). Fixing those will tighten emotional stakes and reduce tonal whiplash. Seed Winona’s dual nature earlier with small, believable beats (tech props, odd knowledge, micro-behaviors) and establish a simple rule-set for how and why verse-jumps happen. At the same time, deepen Jobu/Joy’s emotional logic so her nihilism/destruction feels grounded — show a formative wound or a principled reason she believes destruction is the only solution. Make these fixes through short scenes and image-driven beats rather than long expositional speeches to preserve momentum and the film’s kinetic tone.
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Scene Analysis

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Other Analyses

Writer Exec

This section looks at the extra spark — your story’s voice, style, world, and the moments that really stick. These insights might not change the bones of the script, but they can make it more original, more immersive, and way more memorable. It’s where things get fun, weird, and wonderfully you.

Unique Voice

Assesses the distinctiveness and personality of the writer's voice.

Key Suggestions:
Your voice — a bold mix of absurdist humor, multiversal imagination, and sincere family drama — is a powerful asset. To strengthen the script, anchor the high-concept set pieces in clearer emotional throughlines: make Jackie, Winona and Jobu’s motivations and relationships unmistakable early on, then let the surreal multiverse flourishes amplify those stakes rather than distract from them. Tighten pacing by pruning repetitive verse-jumping beats and ensuring tonal shifts (comedy → violence → melancholy → cosmic) land with deliberate transitions. Keep the dark, strange moments, but earn them by building empathy first and clarifying why each surreal beat matters to the characters’ arcs.
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Writer's Craft

Analyzes the writing to help the writer be aware of their skill and improve.

Key Suggestions:
You have a brilliant, high-concept screenplay that pairs surreal multiverse spectacle with intimate family drama. The single biggest creative leverage is to deepen and clarify character interiority—especially Jackie, Winona and Jobu—so that every wild, tonal shift and universe-leap lands emotionally. Tighten scene choices to serve a clear arc (what each scene makes the protagonist feel, want, or change), sharpen dialogue to carry subtext, and deliberately ground surreal set-pieces with one emotional beat the audience can latch onto. Use the recommended craft resources (Kaufman’s Eternal Sunshine, Save the Cat! structure work) and targeted writing exercises (dialogue with conflicting intentions, character monologues, dual-perspective scenes) to translate conceptual ingenuity into lasting emotional impact.
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Memorable Lines

Spotlights standout dialogue lines with emotional or thematic power.

Key Suggestions:
The memorable lines list highlights strong emotional peaks and a few standout, provocative moments, but it also exposes uneven execution: long expository monologues and shouted repetition sit beside crisp, surprising quips. Tighten and redistribute the exposition (especially Jackie's long Scene 4 speech) into smaller beats that show rather than tell, sharpen each character's vocal identity so their lines feel distinct, and make the big repeats (e.g., “I LOVE YOU”) earn their payoff by building to them with escalating action and subtext. Trim or split verbose lines into shorter, cinematic beats so the audience can feel the emotion instead of just being told it.
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Tropes
Highlights common or genre-specific tropes found in the script.
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World Building

Evaluates the depth, consistency, and immersion of the story's world.

Key Suggestions:
You have a wildly imaginative, genre-blending multiverse with enormous emotional and visual potential. The priority now is to tighten the emotional throughline: make Jackie’s relationship to Winona and Joy the anchor that every surreal detour serves. Simplify the verse-jumping rules and reduce universe permutations to the ones that deepen character or theme. Use recurring motifs and a few consistent mechanics for jumps so the audience can follow the stakes and feel the payoff emotionally rather than getting lost in spectacle.
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Correlations

Identifies patterns in scene scores.

Key Suggestions:
Your screenplay is consistently strong in concept and plot momentum, but that very consistency flattens emotional peaks and dilutes the moments that should sing. To improve: introduce deliberate tonal contrast (moments of quiet, humor, or respite) so the many high‑stakes, tense beats land harder; sharpen dialogue so character voices feel distinctive (target the 8→9 gap); and make surreal sequences earn character change — ensure each weird set‑piece has a clear emotional consequence that shifts a relationship or decision. Practically: pick 3–5 ‘anchor’ scenes to rework as tonal counterpoints, tighten or rewrite dialogue in key confrontations, and convert abstract surreal images into catalysts for measurable character choices.
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