Rear Window
A voyeuristic photographer becomes suspicious of his neighbor's actions and investigates the potential murder of a woman.
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Highly Recommend
Story Facts
Genres: thriller, mystery, drama, romance, comedy, suspense, crime
Setting: Present day, New York City
Themes: Voyeurism, Paranoia, Obsession, Suspicion, Appearance vs. Reality
Conflict & Stakes: John's struggle to clear his name after being falsely accused of a crime, with his career and reputation at stake
Mood: Tense and suspenseful
Standout Features:
- Plot Twist: Unexpected revelation about the true culprit behind the crime
- Unique Characters: Complex and morally ambiguous characters that challenge audience expectations
- Innovative Setting: Exploration of the legal world in a modern urban setting
Script Level Analysis
This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.
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Executive Summary
- Masterful use of limited setting and voyeuristic perspective to create suspense and engage the audience. high ( Scene general )
- Compelling and well-developed characters with distinct personalities and motivations. high ( Scene general )
- Expertly crafted dialogue that is both witty and revealing, furthering character development and plot. high ( Scene general )
- Seamless blend of suspense, humor, and romance, offering a captivating and multi-layered narrative. high ( Scene general )
- Strong opening that quickly establishes the setting, introduces the protagonist and his limitations, and sets the stage for the mystery. high ( Scene 1 Scene 2 Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 )
- The portrayal of female characters, particularly Stella's comments, could be seen as outdated or sexist by modern audiences. medium ( Scene general )
- The ending could benefit from a more explicit resolution to the romantic tension between Jeff and Lisa. low ( Scene general )
- The use of the 'Rear Window' as a metaphor for voyeurism and the limitations of perspective is thought-provoking and adds depth to the story. high ( Scene general )
- The subplot involving Miss Lonelyhearts adds a layer of emotional complexity and explores themes of loneliness and despair. medium ( Scene 16 Scene 18 Scene 19 )
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.2, The screenplay effectively develops complex and relatable characters who drive the narrative forward. However, some characters, like Coyne, lack a clear arc and could be fleshed out to enhance the overall character engagement. See More
Premise: 6.9, The screenplay's premise has the potential to be compelling, with its focus on a curious and adventurous photographer who becomes embroiled in a murder investigation. However, some aspects of the premise could be refined to make it more original and engaging. See More
Structure: 8.3, The screenplay's structure and plot showcase a well-crafted narrative that effectively builds tension and suspense. It deftly balances character development with plot progression, maintaining a steady pace that keeps the audience engaged. However, the resolution may benefit from further refinement and the exploration of secondary characters could enhance the overall depth. See More
Theme: 8.0, The screenplay effectively explores multifaceted themes of loneliness, voyeurism, and the power of observation. It conveys the dangers of being an outsider, the importance of connection, and the responsibility of those who witness wrongdoing. However, certain aspects of the message and its integration within the plot could be refined to deepen the screenplay's thematic resonance. See More
Visual Impact: 7.9, This screenplay features a compelling visual style that immerses the reader in the voyeuristic world of Jeff and his neighbors. The focus on everyday actions and observations through the lens of a telephoto camera creates a unique and engaging visual experience. See More
Emotional Impact: , This screenplay effectively utilizes suspense and intrigue to build emotional tension, but there are areas where the emotional depth and resonance could be enhanced. By addressing these areas, the screenplay has the potential to elicit a stronger emotional response from the audience. See More
Conflict: 7.2, The screenplay presents a compelling conflict and high stakes, successfully drawing the audience into the mystery and suspense of the narrative. However, there are opportunities to further refine these elements and enhance the overall tension and engagement. See More
Originality: 7.3, The screenplay is a suspenseful and gripping thriller that plays with voyeurism and the dangerous allure of peeking into the lives of others. It boasts a unique protagonist with a broken leg who finds himself spying on his neighbors as a form of entertainment. This sets the stage for a series of thrilling events that keep the audience on the edge of their seats. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
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Character Lisa Fremont
Description Lisa's transformation from a sophisticated socialite who initially dismisses Jeff's voyeurism to an active participant in his investigation and a potential accomplice in breaking and entering seems abrupt and unjustified. Her actions appear driven more by the plot's need for a female lead involved in the mystery than by her established character traits.
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Character Jeff Jefferies
Description Despite previously expressing strong reservations about marriage and a desire for an independent woman, Jeff seems readily accepting of Lisa's decision to stay with him and her potential involvement in his dangerous lifestyle. This shift feels somewhat inconsistent with his earlier characterization.
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Description The screenplay presents conflicting information about Mrs. Thorwald's physical condition. Initially described as an invalid requiring constant care, she is later reported to have left for a train trip unassisted. This inconsistency raises questions about the reliability of observations and the true nature of Mrs. Thorwald's health.
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Description Thorwald's decision to confront Jeff directly in his apartment is a major plot hole. Given his awareness of being watched and his meticulous efforts to conceal his crime, it is illogical and out of character for him to risk exposure by entering Jeff's apartment without a clear plan or motive. This action serves the purpose of creating a climactic confrontation but defies the established logic of the story.
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Description Stella's dialogue, while providing comic relief, often feels overly exaggerated and unrealistic, particularly her references to historical events and pop culture. While her character is established as outspoken and opinionated, her dialogue occasionally strays into caricature.
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Element Descriptions of Miss Torso's physical attributes and activities
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Suggestion The repeated emphasis on Miss Torso's attractiveness and her dance routines, while establishing her character, could be streamlined to avoid redundancy and maintain a tighter narrative pace.
Jeff - Score: 85/100
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Protagonist
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Lisa - Score: 80/100
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Stella - Score: 78/100
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Coyne - Score: 64/100
Role
Supporting Character
Character Analysis Overview
Thorwald - Score: 77/100
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Antagonist
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Identified Themes
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Voyeurism
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The protagonist, LB Jeffries, spies on his neighbors as a form of entertainment due to his boredom and injury.
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Voyeurism is a theme throughout the screenplay, demonstrated by Jeffries' obsession with observing his neighbors through his rear window. It highlights the problematic nature of observing and intruding on other people's privacy. |
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Paranoia
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Jeffries becomes increasingly suspicious of his neighbor and assigns his friend Coyne as a detective to investigate.
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Throughout the screenplay, Jeffries becomes increasingly paranoid of his neighbor's actions, leading him to assign his friend as a detective to solve a potential crime. This theme highlights how paranoia can cloud one's judgment and lead them to act out of character. |
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Obsession
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Jeffries becomes obsessed with his neighbor's behavior, leading to tension in his relationship with Lisa.
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Jeffries' obsession with his neighbor's behavior becomes a prominent theme throughout the screenplay, ultimately impacting his romantic relationship with Lisa. It highlights how an obsession can consume a person's life and lead to negative consequences. |
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Suspicion
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Jeffries suspects his neighbor of committing murder, leading to an investigation and ultimately uncovering evidence of the crime.
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Suspicion is a theme throughout the screenplay, with Jeffries becoming increasingly convinced that his neighbor has committed murder. This quest for the truth ultimately leads to the discovery of evidence and the solving of the crime. |
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Appearance vs. Reality
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Jeffries' observations of his neighbors lead him to form conclusions about their lives that are not always accurate.
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Throughout the screenplay, Jeffries' observations of his neighbors lead him to make judgments about their lives that are not always accurate, highlighting the theme of appearance vs. reality. This theme demonstrates that appearances can be deceiving and that it is important to look beyond surface-level observations. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
| Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
| John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
| What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
| Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
| Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | ||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Characters | Character Changes | Conflict | High stakes | Story forward | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | ||
| 1 - Opening Sequence | "suspenseful" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
| 2 - Introduction to the Neighborhood | "Observational" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 0 | ||
| 3 - Assignment Offer | "intriguing" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 8 | 3 | 6 | ||
| 4 - Interpreting the Neighborhood | "Observational, Intrigued" | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 5 | 5 | 6 | ||
| 5 - Neighborhood Watch | "observant, voyeuristic" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 4 | 6 | 3 | 6 | 5 | 7 | ||
| 6 - Stella the Nurse | "Light-hearted" | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 1 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 8 | ||
| 7 - The Love Advice | "Playful" | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 5 | 9 | ||
| 8 - Jeff's Observation and Lisa's Visit | "Observational, Romantic" | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 5 | 6 | 8 | ||
| 9 - Dinner and Dancing | "Playful" | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 9 | ||
| 10 - Romantic Dinner | "romantic" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 6 | 5 | 9 | ||
| 11 - Observing the Neighbors | "sympathetic" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 6 | 6 | 7 | ||
| 12 - Watching and Dining | "Somber, Romantic" | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 7 | 7 | ||
| 13 - A heated argument about lifestyles | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | ||
| 14 - The Break-Up | "Tense" | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | ||
| 15 - Nocturnal Activities | "Tense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 2 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 6 | ||
| 16 - Observations in the Night | "Tense" | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | ||
| 17 - Jeff and Stella Observe the Suspicious Salesman | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | ||
| 18 - Salesman's Suspicious Actions | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 6 | ||
| 19 - Observing Suspicion | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
| 20 - The Suspicious Salesman | "tense" | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
| 21 - Jeff's Paranoia Deepens | "Tense" | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | ||
| 22 - Jeff and Lisa Gather Information | "Suspenseful" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 7 | 10 | ||
| 23 - Jeff Becomes Increasingly Paranoid | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | ||
| 24 - Surveillance and Disappointment | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | ||
| 25 - Jeff and Coyne Discuss the Murder Suspicions | "Suspenseful" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | ||
| 26 - Observing Thorwald | "Tense" | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 7 | ||
| 27 - Jeff and Coyne Argue about Searching Thorwald's Apartment | "Tense" | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | ||
| 28 - Jeff Surveils the Neighbors | "Suspenseful" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
| 29 - Preparing to Leave | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | ||
| 30 - Observing Thorwald's Movements | "Tense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 6 | ||
| 31 - Investigating Mrs. Thorwald's Disappearance | "Suspenseful" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
| 32 - Observations and Revelations | "Tense" | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 8 | ||
| 33 - Detective Doubts | "Tense" | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 5 | 6 | ||
| 34 - The Blame Game | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | ||
| 35 - The Case Against Thorwald | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | ||
| 36 - The Trunk | "Serious" | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 6 | ||
| 37 - Ethics and Love | "serious" | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 8 | ||
| 38 - The Aftermath of the Scream | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | ||
| 39 - Jeff's Discovery | "suspenseful" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | ||
| 40 - The Letter | "Suspenseful" | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | ||
| 41 - The Confrontation | "Tense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | ||
| 42 - The Investigation Continues | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 8 | ||
| 43 - Jeff makes a deal with Thorwald | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 4 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | ||
| 44 - Lisa's Break-In | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | ||
| 45 - Lisa Confronts Thorwald | "Tense" | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 6 | ||
| 46 - Lisa is caught breaking in | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
| 47 - The Break-In | "Suspenseful" | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 4 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
| 48 - Jeff Reports Lisa's Arrest | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 4 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | ||
| 49 - Confrontation with Thorwald | "Tense" | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
| 50 - Jeff's Dangerous Escalation | "intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 11 | 10 | 8 | 7 | ||
| 51 - The Final Confrontation | "tense" | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 3 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 5 | ||
| 52 - The Final Confrontation | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
Scene 1 - Opening Sequence
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Scene 2 - Introduction to the Neighborhood
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Scene 3 - Assignment Offer
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Scene 4 - Interpreting the Neighborhood
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Scene 5 - Neighborhood Watch
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Scene 6 - Stella the Nurse
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Scene 7 - The Love Advice
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Scene 8 - Jeff's Observation and Lisa's Visit
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 9 - Dinner and Dancing
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Scene 10 - Romantic Dinner
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Scene 11 - Observing the Neighbors
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 12 - Watching and Dining
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 13 - A heated argument about lifestyles
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 14 - The Break-Up
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 15 - Nocturnal Activities
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 16 - Observations in the Night
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 17 - Jeff and Stella Observe the Suspicious Salesman
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 18 - Salesman's Suspicious Actions
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 19 - Observing Suspicion
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 20 - The Suspicious Salesman
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 21 - Jeff's Paranoia Deepens
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 22 - Jeff and Lisa Gather Information
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 23 - Jeff Becomes Increasingly Paranoid
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 24 - Surveillance and Disappointment
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 25 - Jeff and Coyne Discuss the Murder Suspicions
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 26 - Observing Thorwald
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 27 - Jeff and Coyne Argue about Searching Thorwald's Apartment
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 28 - Jeff Surveils the Neighbors
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 29 - Preparing to Leave
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 30 - Observing Thorwald's Movements
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 31 - Investigating Mrs. Thorwald's Disappearance
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 32 - Observations and Revelations
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 33 - Detective Doubts
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 34 - The Blame Game
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 35 - The Case Against Thorwald
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 36 - The Trunk
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 37 - Ethics and Love
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 38 - The Aftermath of the Scream
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 39 - Jeff's Discovery
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 40 - The Letter
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 41 - The Confrontation
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 42 - The Investigation Continues
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 43 - Jeff makes a deal with Thorwald
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 44 - Lisa's Break-In
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 45 - Lisa Confronts Thorwald
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 46 - Lisa is caught breaking in
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 47 - The Break-In
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 48 - Jeff Reports Lisa's Arrest
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 49 - Confrontation with Thorwald
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 50 - Jeff's Dangerous Escalation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 51 - The Final Confrontation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 52 - The Final Confrontation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|---|---|
| Voyeurism | The protagonist, LB Jeffries, observes his neighbors through his rear window as a form of entertainment. | Voyeurism is the act of watching someone without them knowing. An example of this trope can be found in the TV show 'You', where the protagonist Joe Goldberg becomes obsessed with a woman named Beck and starts stalking her, watching her without her knowledge. |
| Suspense | Throughout the screenplay, LB Jeffries becomes increasingly worried and paranoid about the activities of his neighbors, particularly a salesman who he suspects of murder. | Suspense is the feeling of anticipation or uncertainty about the outcome of events. An example of this trope can be found in the movie 'Psycho', where the audience is kept in suspense about the true identity of the murderer until the end of the film. |
| Mystery | LB Jeffries becomes suspicious of his neighbor's behavior and begins investigating a possible murder. | Mystery is a plot device that involves the solution of a problem or puzzle. An example of this trope can be found in the TV show 'Sherlock', where the protagonist Sherlock Holmes solves complex crimes and mysteries using his intelligence and deduction skills. |
| Romance | LB Jeffries and his girlfriend Lisa argue about their future together, but ultimately they reunite and work together to take down the suspect. | Romance is a storytelling trope that involves a love story between the protagonist and another character. An example of this trope can be found in the movie 'The Notebook', where two young lovers are separated by war and social class, but ultimately reunite in old age. |
| Police Procedural | The police work to solve the mystery of the suspected murder and ultimately capture the suspect. | Police Procedural is a storytelling trope that focuses on the investigative procedures of the police in solving a crime. An example of this trope can be found in the TV show 'CSI', where a team of forensic scientists solves complex crimes using science and investigation skills. |
| Damsel in Distress | Lisa is arrested and Jeff and Stella work to free her from jail. | Damsel in Distress is a storytelling trope that involves a female character who is in danger and needs to be rescued by a male character. An example of this trope can be found in the movie 'King Kong', where a giant ape falls in love with a woman and kidnaps her. |
| Action | Jeff uses his camera flash as a defense against Thorwald, who is attempting to kill him by hanging outside the window. The police ultimately capture Thorwald after his failed attempt to kill Jeff. | Action is a storytelling trope that involves fast-paced physical action and often includes fight scenes and chases. An example of this trope can be found in the movie 'Die Hard', where a police officer single-handedly takes down a group of terrorists who have taken hostage a building. |
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 1 | L.B. Jeffries: We've become a race of Peeping Toms. What people ought to do is get outside their own house and look in for a change. |
| 14 | Lisa: "I'm in love with you. I don't care what you do for a living. Somehow I would just like to be part of it." |
| 41 | Jeff: You did it, Thorwald! You did it! |
| 39 | Stella: Nobody's invented polite words yet for killing. |
| 6 | Stella: The New York State sentence for a peeping Tom is six months in the workhouse! |
Some Loglines to consider:
| Array ( [0] => A voyeuristic photographer becomes suspicious of his neighbor's actions and investigates the potential murder of a woman. [1] => An immobilized photographer risks everything to catch a killer in his apartment complex. [2] => When a man with a broken leg becomes obsessed with spying on his neighbors, he uncovers a potential murder mystery. [3] => A photographer watches his neighbors through his window and stumbles upon a potential crime scene, putting his own life in danger to solve the case. [4] => A man confined to his apartment becomes a detective when he suspects his neighbor of murder and risks everything to uncover the truth. ) |
| Confined to his apartment with a broken leg, a photographer becomes convinced that his neighbor has committed murder and sets out to prove it, using only his binoculars and the help of his girlfriend. |
| A wheelchair-bound photographer's boredom turns into obsession as he witnesses a series of suspicious events in his neighbor's apartment, leading him down a dangerous path to uncover the truth. |
| Love and suspicion intertwine as a photographer and his glamorous girlfriend become entangled in a murder mystery, unfolding right outside their window. |
| With his camera lens as his weapon, a disabled photographer must race against time to expose a killer and protect his girlfriend from a dangerous fate. |
| Rear Window offers a thrilling and voyeuristic glimpse into the lives of ordinary people, where secrets lurk behind closed doors and appearances can be deceiving. |
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