Passengers
Executive Summary
Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend
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USP: Immerse yourself in a deeply introspective sci-fi odyssey that explores the complexities of human existence amidst the vastness of space. "Starship Excelsior" stands apart with its unique blend of introspective dialogue, philosophical musings, and a futuristic setting steeped in emotional depth and moral quandaries. Dive into the psyche of compelling characters as they grapple with profound themes of loneliness, morality, and the search for meaning. Prepare for a thought-provoking journey that will resonate long after the final frame, leaving you questioning the nature of humanity and your own place in the intricate tapestry of life.
Overview
Genres: Science Fiction, Drama, Romance, Adventure, Mystery, Thriller
Setting: The year 2243 and 100 years later, Starship Excelsior traveling from Earth to Homestead II, a Homestead Company starship colony world, and later Homestead II itself
Overview: The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation with compelling characters, a thought-provoking premise, and effective emotional engagement. However, opportunities exist to elevate the narrative's originality, enhance certain aspects of character development, and refine the pacing and conflict structure.
Themes: Isolation and Loneliness, Identity and Purpose, Love and Loss, Survival and Resilience, Hope and Redemption
Conflict and Stakes: Jim's realization that he woke up too soon and that it will be 90 years before the ship arrives at Homestead II. He is scared and alone and doesn't know what to do. Jim and Aurora must fix the ship's core computer and gravity plant before the fusion reactor goes nova. Jim and Aurora must race against time to stop the hibernation pods from being ejected from the Excelsior. Jim and Aurora fall in love, but have to overcome many obstacles, including Aurora's terminal illness.
Overall Mood: The overall mood or tone of the screenplay is one of hope and resilience, with moments of suspense, romance, and heartbreak.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: The opening scene of the screenplay is dark and suspenseful, as Jim wakes up alone on the spaceship.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The story is set on a spaceship traveling to a distant planet, which provides a unique and visually stunning backdrop for the characters' journey.
- Plot Twist : Jim discovers that he has accidentally killed Aurora by waking her up from suspended animation.
- Distinctive Setting : The Starship Excelsior is a vast and complex world, with its own unique ecosystem and culture.
- Innovative Idea : The film explores the ethical implications of advanced technology, such as suspended animation and genetic engineering.
- Unique Characters : Jim and Aurora are complex and relatable characters, with their own unique strengths and weaknesses.
- Genre Blend : The film blends elements of science fiction, romance, and drama, creating a unique and engaging experience for viewers.
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Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$75-100 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, sci-fi and drama fans, people interested in space exploration
Marketability: It has a captivating storyline with relatable characters, stunning visuals, and thought-provoking themes that are sure to resonate with audiences.
The script is well-written, with strong character development and a unique blend of genres. It has the potential to appeal to fans of science fiction, romance, and drama.
The script has a strong foundation, but it may need some additional work to make it more marketable to a wider audience.
Profit Potential: High, due to its strong commercial appeal and potential for critical acclaim
Scene Level Percentiles
Screenplay Analysis
- **Concept and Emotional Impact**: The screenplay excels in its core concept (83%) and emotional depth (91.5%), indicating a strong foundation for a compelling and thought-provoking story.
- **Character Growth and Originality**: The characters undergo significant changes (90%) and the story possesses a unique and fresh concept (92.6%), suggesting engaging and memorable characters.
- **Plot and Story Progression**: The plot structure may require more refinement (8.09%) and the story's forward momentum could be enhanced (28.26%). This will help in building a more engaging and well-paced narrative.
- **Dialogue and Conflict**: The dialogue (13.98%) and conflict level (11.02%) could benefit from further development to create more dynamic and engaging interactions between characters.
The percentile pattern suggests an **intuitive writer** who excels in crafting compelling concepts, creating emotionally resonant stories, and developing well-rounded characters. Dialogue and plot structure could be areas for further exploration to create a more balanced screenplay.
Balancing Elements- Strengthening the plot and story progression while maintaining the strong concept and emotional depth will create a more well-rounded screenplay.
- Balancing the dialogue and conflict levels with the strengths in character development and originality will result in a more engaging and dynamic script.
Intuitive
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay has a strong foundation with a compelling concept, emotional depth, and engaging characters. Refining the plot structure, pacing, dialogue, and conflict will elevate the screenplay to its full potential.
How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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Percentile | Before | After |
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Emotional Impact | 8.6 | 91 | Poor Things: 8.5 | Casablanca: 8.6 |
8.50 | 90 | The Pianist: 8.25 | fight Club: 8.50 | |
Character Changes | 7.5 | 90 | Inception: 7.4 | fight Club: 7.5 |
9.00 | 90 | Cruel Intentions: 8.75 | Terminator 2: 9.00 | |
8.50 | 88 | Interstellar: 8.25 | the dark knight rises: 8.50 | |
12761 | 78 | Psycho: 12758 | Passengers: 12761 | |
Originality | 8.87 | 77 | Interstellar: 8.86 | Her: 8.87 |
8.50 | 71 | Interstellar: 8.25 | Titanic: 8.50 | |
Concept | 8.2 | 68 | Enemy of the State: 8.1 | face/off: 8.2 |
8.50 | 65 | Inception: 8.25 | face/off: 8.50 | |
Pacing | 8.39 | 63 | KILLING ZOE: 8.38 | Pinocchio: 8.39 |
Characters | 8.3 | 56 | Inception: 8.2 | Erin Brokovich: 8.3 |
Internal Goal | 8.04 | 54 | The whale: 8.03 | True Blood: 8.04 |
1 | 50 | - | The Founder: 1 | |
8.00 | 47 | Inside Out: 7.75 | face/off: 8.00 | |
Overall | 8.3 | 47 | 2001: 8.2 | fight Club: 8.3 |
8.00 | 38 | Mo: 7.90 | fight Club: 8.00 | |
Engagement | 8.91 | 37 | Witness: 8.90 | groundhog day: 8.91 |
Plot | 7.8 | 37 | House of cards pilot: 7.7 | Erin Brokovich: 7.8 |
External Goal | 7.09 | 30 | Requiem for a dream: 7.08 | Passengers: 7.09 |
High Stakes | 6.9 | 29 | Cruel Intentions: 6.8 | Arsenic and old lace : 6.9 |
7.50 | 28 | Deep Cover: 7.25 | Casablanca: 7.50 | |
Unpredictability | 7.22 | 23 | Joker: 7.21 | Passengers: 7.22 |
Story Forward | 7.6 | 22 | Cruel Intentions: 7.5 | Rear Window: 7.6 |
7.50 | 22 | Beetlejuice: 7.25 | fight Club: 7.50 | |
Formatting | 8.00 | 16 | Wild Wild West: 7.98 | Her: 8.00 |
Conflict Level | 6.5 | 11 | The Fabelmans: 6.4 | groundhog day: 6.5 |
Dialogue | 7.2 | 10 | 2001: 7.1 | The Wizard of oz: 7.2 |
Structure | 8.00 | 9 | Easy A: 7.99 | Requiem for a dream: 8.00 |
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a blend of introspective dialogue, philosophical musings, and a futuristic setting with emotional depth and moral complexity. The dialogue is sharp and often introspective, delving into the characters' inner thoughts and motivations. The writer also explores themes of loneliness, morality, and the human condition, creating a rich and thought-provoking narrative.
Best representation: Scene 7 - Solitude in Space. Scene 7 is the best representation of the writer's voice because it encapsulates the introspective dialogue, philosophical musings, and moral complexity that are characteristic of the script. The dialogue between Jim and Aurora delves into the nature of humanity, the meaning of life, and the importance of connection. The scene raises questions about our place in the universe and our responsibility to each other, creating a sense of depth and resonance that elevates the story beyond a simple sci-fi adventure.
Memorable Lines:
- Jim: I’m not saying the universe is evil. It’s just got an ugly sense of humor. It doesn’t just crush you. It crushes you ironically. (Scene 7)
- Arthur: You can't play God, Jim. Some things are beyond our control. (Scene 8)
- Arthur: Jim, we all die. Even androids end up on the scrap heap. It’s not dying that matters, it’s living. This is your life. Are you going to live it or lie down and die? (Scene 1)
- Arthur: You're not where you want to be. You feel like you're supposed to be somewhere else. Right? (Scene 4)
- Aurora: Hell of a life. (Scene 20)
Writing Style:
The screenplay explores philosophical and existential themes in a sci-fi setting, blending elements of introspection, character-driven narratives, and technological advancements. It combines the styles of various influential screenwriters and authors, resulting in a unique and engaging storytelling approach.
Style Similarities:
- Charlie Kaufman
- Spike Jonze
- Christopher Nolan
- Denis Villeneuve
Story Shape
Consider
Executive Summary
Passengers presents a promising science fiction concept with strong world-building and visual storytelling. However, the screenplay suffers from pacing issues, underdeveloped character arcs, and a lack of external conflict. The central moral dilemma and the exploration of isolation are engaging, but the resolution and ending feel unearned and lack emotional depth. With further development, the screenplay could be elevated to explore its themes and characters more profoundly.
- The screenplay excels in world-building, creating a believable and detailed futuristic setting aboard the spaceship with advanced technology and diverse amenities. high
- The visual storytelling is strong, utilizing the vastness of space and the confined yet intricate setting of the spaceship to create impactful imagery. high
- The central moral dilemma of Jim's decision to wake Aurora is thought-provoking and raises questions about loneliness, human connection, and the consequences of our actions. high
- The screenplay effectively portrays the psychological impact of isolation and loneliness on Jim, showcasing his descent into despair and desperation. medium ( Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 )
- The developing relationship between Jim and Aurora is initially captivating, offering a glimmer of hope and companionship amidst their predicament. medium ( Scene 10 Scene 11 )
- The pacing of the screenplay is uneven, with the initial exploration of Jim's isolation feeling slow and the later crisis feeling rushed. high
- The character development, particularly for Aurora, feels underdeveloped after the revelation of Jim's actions, limiting the exploration of her emotional complexity and internal conflict. high
- The resolution of the central conflict between Jim and Aurora feels abrupt and lacks the emotional depth and complexity that their situation warrants. high ( Scene 14 Scene 15 )
- The catastrophic event of the hibernation pods ejecting feels like a forced and convenient plot device to create tension rather than an organic consequence of the story's events. medium ( Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 )
- The ending feels overly sentimental and lacks the thematic resonance and emotional closure that the story's premise suggests. medium ( Scene 22 Scene 23 )
- The screenplay would benefit from a deeper exploration of the ethical implications of Jim's actions and the impact on Aurora's agency and autonomy. high
- The story lacks a stronger sense of external conflict or threat beyond the internal struggles of the characters, which could enhance the stakes and tension. medium
- The screenplay could explore the societal and cultural implications of establishing a new colony on Homestead II and the challenges the passengers might face. medium
- The character of Arthur the android provides moments of humor and philosophical insight, offering a unique perspective on the human condition. medium
- The screenplay's exploration of themes such as isolation, loneliness, and the search for meaning in a vast and indifferent universe is compelling. medium
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 7.5, This screenplay presents a compelling premise that draws upon ideas of isolation, survival, and the human condition. While the setup is intriguing and has the potential to engage the audience, certain aspects of the premise could be refined to enhance its originality, clarity, and overall impact. See More
Structure: 8.5, The screenplay exhibits a strong narrative structure, with a well-paced and coherent plot that effectively engages the audience. It effectively builds tension and stakes, leading to a compelling and satisfying resolution. However, the underdeveloped backstory and lack of depth in character development impact the screenplay's overall effectiveness. See More
Theme: 9.0, The screenplay effectively utilizes its premise to explore profound themes of isolation, existentialism, self-discovery, and the nature of humanity. By presenting a rich and complex narrative, the screenplay invites audiences to contemplate universal questions about purpose, mortality, and the choices we make. See More
Visual Impact: 8, The screenplay showcases vivid and imaginative visual descriptions that effectively immerse readers in its futuristic setting and compelling narratives. It strives to create a visually striking experience, balancing originality with moments of cinematic familiarity. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.5, The screenplay delivers a powerful emotional impact through its introspective exploration of themes such as loneliness, existentialism, and the human longing for connection. The depth of emotional responses it elicits is commendable, leaving audiences deeply invested in the characters' journeys and the complexities of their relationships. However, a few areas offer opportunities for further emotional enhancement, particularly in exploring the subtleties of character motivations and expanding upon the transformative aspects of the emotional arcs. See More
Conflict: 7.5, The screenplay presents a compelling central conflict of isolation and identity, with well-defined stakes that drive the narrative. However, there are opportunities to enhance conflict and elevate stakes, particularly in the mid-section of the screenplay, to maintain a consistently engaging and suspenseful experience for the audience. See More
Originality: 8.5, This screenplay showcases imaginative storytelling and character development. It blends introspective elements, survivalist struggles, and self-discovery against the backdrop of a solitary journey in deep space. The nuanced exploration of human relationships and existential themes adds depth and emotional resonance to this scientifically immersive tale. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- In 2243 aboard the desolate Starship Excelsior, Jim Preston, a lone survivor, awakens from cryosleep 90 years prematurely on a century-long voyage to Homestead II. Struggling with isolation and a dwindling life span, he navigates an eerie emptiness, haunted by the mystery of his untimely awakening and the silence that surrounds him.
- Jim wakes up and goes to the shower, then proceeds to the cafeteria where he is denied access to the "Mocha Cappuccino Extreme" coffee due to his passenger status. Undeterred, he takes the elevator to the Command Deck, where he explores various rooms containing emergency gear, manuals, and space suits. Finally, he finds a manual on hibernation systems.
- Jim locates his toolbox and discovers a hibernation pod manual, which he uses to tinker with his malfunctioning pod. However, after entering the pod, he becomes trapped when it fails to activate. Desperate, he uses an emergency release to escape. Denied access to the crew's hibernation facility, Jim begins to remove the keypad cover in an attempt to gain entry, leaving his fate hanging in the balance.
- Jim attempts to break into the crew hibernation facility door, symbolizing his struggle for a deeper connection, but fails. Seeking solace, he confides in Arthur, the bartender, who advises him to embrace the present. Inspired, Jim embarks on a journey of self-discovery, indulging in various activities. Despite his newfound enthusiasm, he continues to grapple with feelings of displacement, seeking refuge in alcohol. Three months later, Jim has excelled in video games, basketball, and Russian language studies, yet his search for belonging remains elusive.
- Jim wakes up unshaven and overweight in a luxurious suite on a spaceship. He goes to the cafeteria for coffee and sits in silence. He plays a video game and sets a new high score. He tries to order a new drink at the bar, but the bartender tells him there are no more new drinks. He goes to a nightclub and touches a holographic lounge singer, but the hologram dissolves. He takes emotionless photo booth pictures of himself. He walks through a shopping district and feeds a sweeper robot chips. He goes to the forward observation deck and cries, then sits on the sweeper robot, which carries him through the ship. He ends up in the hibernation bay and sees Aurora Dunn sleeping in a pod.
- Jim explores journalist Aurora Dunn's work in the library and bar, discussing her articles with Arthur and finding her to be an impressive writer.
- Jim, conflicted by the consequences, debates whether to awaken Aurora from her hibernation. Arthur, a machine, cautions against stranding her on the ship indefinitely. Jim's indecision and the weight of his choice linger as he leaves their discussion.
- Jim explores the Excelsior's promenade and Hall of Faith, contemplating his surroundings. He then enters the Starboard EVA Room and gazes out at space, his thoughts unknown.
- Jim exits his starship and walks along its hull. He raises his arms towards the heavens, seemingly searching for answers, but encounters silence. Inside the ship, he gazes at Aurora in the hibernation bay, leaving unresolved conflicts and a sense of unanswered longing.
- Jim, a lone passenger awake for over a year, meets Aurora, a newly awakened passenger on the deserted spaceship Excelsior. Together, they face the challenges of being the only two conscious individuals, searching for answers and exploring their options for survival or returning to Earth.
- Aurora and Jim share a romantic and intimate evening together on the starship Excelsior, starting with a fancy dinner at the Stardome, dancing in a nightclub, and ending with a passionate encounter in Aurora's cabin. The next morning, they have breakfast together in the cafeteria, deepening their connection and sharing moments of closeness and vulnerability.
- Jim and Aurora, a couple living on the Excelsior starship, are struggling with feelings of restlessness and confinement. Jim is frustrated that he will never see the world that is being built in the cargo hold, and Aurora is struggling to write about her life on the starship. However, they are able to find solace in each other and in the simple act of giving each other flowers.
- A year after awakening Aurora from hibernation, Jim surprises her with a birthday celebration. Aurora discovers Jim's true intentions and rejects him, leading to Jim's spiral into depression and heartbreak. Aurora focuses on her well-being while Jim becomes obsessed with winning her back, ultimately failing and ending in defeat.
- Three months after Jim's suicide attempt, Aurora, who is struggling with a terminal illness, seeks him out to request his help with a repair.
- In this scene, Gus reveals his terminal illness and decides to sacrifice himself by stepping into space. He shares final moments with Jim and Aurora before his departure, leaving them shocked and saddened.
- Aurora and Jim work together to diagnose and fix the ship's core computer, damaged by a meteor. They replace it, but the ship's gravity fails, leaving them floating. They must race against time to fix the gravity plant before the fusion reactor goes nova.
- A surge of darkness envelops the ship. The core computer reactivates, restoring power and gravity, causing Jim and Aurora to fall. The computer crashes into the deck and the fusion reactor stabilizes. Jim and Aurora find relief in their survival. As the engines resume operation, a rhythmic sound of ejected hibernation pods fills the air. Rushing to the hibernation bay, they discover a system reboot and the ejection of non-empty pods.
- Commander Jim attempts to open a hibernation pod but is unsuccessful. As Aurora watches and warns him to hurry, the pod slides up and out of sight before Jim can open it, revealing that it is not empty.
- Jim and Aurora race against time to free the Captain from his pod before the ejection wave hits, succeeding just in time. The Captain's pod ejects, and he sees Aurora before drifting into space. Jim and Aurora watch the pods eject from the ship, and Aurora is horrified.
- Jim and Aurora engage in a heartfelt conversation on the command deck of the Excelsior, two weeks after leaving behind five thousand pods. They express their love and gratitude for each other, reconciling their differences. The scene concludes with a kiss, symbolizing their renewed connection and love.
- Jim and Aurora share a moment of intimacy and connection as they sit together on the bow of the Starship Excelsior, looking into the stars. The scene ends with a super reading 'EIGHTY-EIGHT YEARS LATER.' The tone is peaceful, romantic, and hopeful.
- The Excelsior brings colonists to Homestead II, a planet filled with lush green hills and abundant resources. The colonists disembark the starship, marveling at their new home.
- A century after Jim's awakening, the Excelsior's grand concourse has been transformed by habitation. Vegetable gardens, an oak tree, murals, and other details reflect the passage of time and the resilience of the crew. At the end of the concourse, a wall displays a timeline of events, while a table holds artifacts from the ship's history. Arthur slices vegetables at the Concourse Bar as the scene fades out.
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Character Jim Preston
Description Jim's initial reaction to being awake for 90 years seems too calm. He should exhibit more panic, confusion, and desperation, especially considering the dire circumstances.
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Character Aurora Lane
Description Aurora's rapid forgiveness of Jim feels rushed and unearned. The emotional weight of his actions should have a more lasting impact on their relationship.
( Scene 14 (CONCOURSE BAR - EVENING) )
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Description The Observatory's inability to recognize or address Jim's situation is illogical. As a sophisticated AI, it should be able to detect and respond to anomalies like a passenger waking up 90 years early.
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Description The portrayal of a functional society established within 88 years on Homestead II seems unrealistic, considering the limited resources and population aboard the Excelsior.
( Scene 20 )
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Description The Video Stewardess's overly sensual tone feels out of place and unnecessary, especially when delivering essential information.
( Scene 1 (HIBERNATION BAY) )
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Element Jim's attempts to break into the Crew Hibernation Facility
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Suggestion These repeated attempts could be condensed into a single, more impactful sequence, highlighting Jim's desperation and resourcefulness. -
Element Montage of Jim and Aurora's relationship
( Scene 12 )
Suggestion The montage could be restructured to focus on key moments that reveal the evolution of their relationship and their emotional journey.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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Jim | Jim starts off as a practical and resilient mechanic who is resigned to his situation, but as he interacts with Aurora and faces challenges, he undergoes emotional growth and self-discovery. He struggles with guilt, loneliness, and difficult decisions, ultimately learning to confront his emotions and take risks for the greater good. By the end of the screenplay, Jim emerges as a more introspective, caring, and determined character who has found a sense of purpose and connection. | The character arc for Jim is well-developed, showcasing his emotional journey and growth throughout the feature. However, there could be more clarity in his motivations and internal conflicts, as well as a stronger resolution to his character arc. Additionally, some scenes could benefit from more depth and exploration of Jim's relationships with other characters. | To improve the character arc for Jim, consider delving deeper into his internal struggles and motivations, providing more context for his decisions and actions. Develop his relationships with other characters to add complexity and depth to his journey. Ensure a satisfying resolution to his arc that ties up loose ends and highlights his growth and transformation. |
Arthur | Arthur starts off as a wise and empathetic bartender android, providing guidance and comfort to Jim. As the story progresses, he begins to question his own existence and purpose, leading to a journey of self-discovery and growth. Arthur learns to embrace his own emotions and vulnerabilities, ultimately realizing that true wisdom comes from understanding and accepting one's own humanity. | The character arc for Arthur is well-developed and adds depth to the story. However, it could benefit from more specific challenges or conflicts that push Arthur to confront his own beliefs and limitations. This would create more tension and emotional resonance in his journey of self-discovery. | To improve the character arc for Arthur, consider introducing a subplot where he faces a dilemma that challenges his beliefs or forces him to confront his own vulnerabilities. This could be a way for Arthur to grow and evolve throughout the story, adding layers to his character and making his journey more compelling for the audience. |
Jim Preston | Jim's character arc begins with his initial struggle with isolation and realization of his predicament. As he embarks on a journey of self-discovery and acceptance, he grapples with feelings of loneliness, displacement, guilt, regret, and moral dilemmas. Through his experiences, Jim learns to confront his inner demons, find connection and purpose, and ultimately show resilience, compassion, and capacity for love. By the end of the screenplay, Jim has grown emotionally and found a sense of fulfillment and meaning in his life. | The character arc for Jim is well-developed, showcasing his emotional growth and resilience throughout the story. However, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and moments of levity to provide a more balanced portrayal of his character. Additionally, the resolution of his moral dilemmas and the consequences of his actions could be further explored to add depth to his character development. | To improve the character arc for Jim, consider incorporating more moments of levity and humor to balance out the heavier themes of loneliness, guilt, and regret. Additionally, delve deeper into Jim's moral dilemmas and the consequences of his impulsive actions to provide a more nuanced exploration of his character. Showcasing his emotional growth and resilience more prominently will enhance the audience's connection to Jim and his journey of self-discovery. |
Aurora | Aurora starts off as a determined journalist grappling with a sudden turn of events, seeking a solution to their predicament. As the story progresses, she becomes more introspective, haunted by her past and struggling to find meaning in her present circumstances. Through her interactions with Jim and the Captain, Aurora finds hope, connection, and strength, ultimately realizing her purpose and embracing her resilience and compassion. | The character arc for Aurora is well-developed, showcasing her growth and transformation throughout the feature. However, there could be more clarity in her emotional journey and a stronger resolution to her internal conflicts. Additionally, more emphasis on her relationships with other characters could enhance her arc and provide a deeper exploration of her motivations and desires. | To improve the character arc for Aurora, consider adding more scenes that delve into her past traumas and how they shape her present actions. Develop her relationships with Jim and the Captain further to highlight her emotional growth and connection with others. Provide a clearer resolution to her internal conflicts and showcase her ultimate realization of purpose and strength. Additionally, explore her journalistic skills and passion for storytelling to add depth to her character and arc. |
Aurora Dunn | Aurora Dunn starts off as a character who experiences betrayal and emotional pain, but through the challenges she faces on the starship Excelsior, she learns to forgive and understand others. She ultimately finds a sense of peace and purpose in her uncertain future, embracing her vulnerability and strength. | The character arc for Aurora Dunn is well-developed, but it could benefit from more specific and impactful moments that showcase her growth and transformation. Additionally, there could be more exploration of Aurora's internal struggles and how they shape her decisions and relationships throughout the feature. | To improve the character arc for Aurora Dunn, consider adding more scenes that delve into her emotional journey and the impact of her experiences on her relationships with other characters. Show more moments of conflict and resolution that highlight her growth and development, and ensure that her decisions and actions are consistent with her established traits and motivations. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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Isolation and Loneliness | - Jim is the only one awake on the ship for over a year. - He is scared and alone, and he doesn't know what the future holds. - He tries to talk to Arthur, but Arthur is unhelpful. - He goes to the Aft Observation Deck and looks out the window at the stars, alone and scared. | Jim is a lonely and isolated figure throughout the screenplay. He is the only one awake on the ship, and he doesn't know anyone else. He tries to connect with Arthur, but Arthur is unhelpful. He also tries to connect with Aurora, but she is initially hostile towards him. As a result, Jim is forced to face his loneliness and isolation head-on. | ||||||||||||
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Identity and Purpose | - Jim doesn't know who he is or what his purpose is. - He is a mechanical engineer, but he doesn't feel like he belongs in that role. - He tries to find his place on the ship, but he is unsuccessful. - He eventually finds his purpose in helping Aurora. | Jim is a lost and confused character throughout the screenplay. He doesn't know who he is or what his purpose is. He tries to find his place on the ship, but he is unsuccessful. He eventually finds his purpose in helping Aurora, but he still struggles with his identity. | ||||||||||||
Love and Loss | - Jim falls in love with Aurora, but she is initially hostile towards him. - He eventually wins her over, but she is killed by the aliens. - Jim is heartbroken, and he doesn't know what to do with his life. - He eventually finds a new purpose in helping the other survivors. | Love and loss are major themes in the screenplay. Jim falls in love with Aurora, but she is initially hostile towards him. He eventually wins her over, but she is killed by the aliens. Jim is heartbroken, and he doesn't know what to do with his life. He eventually finds a new purpose in helping the other survivors. | ||||||||||||
Survival and Resilience | - Jim and the other survivors must band together to survive. - They face many challenges, but they never give up. - They eventually defeat the aliens and save the ship. | Survival and resilience are major themes in the screenplay. Jim and the other survivors must band together to survive. They face many challenges, but they never give up. They eventually defeat the aliens and save the ship. | ||||||||||||
Hope and Redemption | - Jim finds hope in helping the other survivors. - He eventually finds redemption for his past mistakes. - He becomes a better person and helps to save the day. | Hope and redemption are major themes in the screenplay. Jim finds hope in helping the other survivors. He eventually finds redemption for his past mistakes. He becomes a better person and helps to save the day. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goal evolves from a desire to survive and understand his situation to finding companionship, love, and purpose. |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goal shifts from seeking answers and survival to fixing the ship's systems and ensuring the safety of the crew. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the themes of isolation vs connection, individual survival vs community support, and sacrifice for the greater good vs personal desires. |
Character Development Contribution: The evolving goals and conflicts challenge the protagonist's beliefs, values, and actions, leading to personal growth, emotional depth, and moral dilemmas.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals drive the plot forward, creating tension, conflict, and resolution. The philosophical conflicts introduce deeper themes and complexities to the narrative, enriching the character's journey.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflicts explore themes of loneliness, purpose, sacrifice, love, and the human condition, adding layers of depth and meaning to the screenplay. They showcase the protagonist's inner struggles and external challenges, highlighting the interconnectedness of personal growth and societal responsibility.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - A Solitary Awakening | Mysterious, Intriguing, Desperate, Confused | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - Jim Explores the Spaceship | Curious, Exploratory, Inquisitive | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Trapped in the Darkness | Isolation, Frustration, Determination | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - The Search for Belonging | Reflective, Hopeful, Melancholic, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Jim's Loneliness and Boredom | Loneliness, Desperation, Isolation, Discovery | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Researching Aurora Dunn | Curious, Reflective, Lonely | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Jim's Moral Dilemma | Melancholic, Reflective, Philosophical | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - Solitude in Space | Loneliness, Contemplative, Existential, Melancholic | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Jim's Contemplation in Space | Melancholic, Reflective, Lonely | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Awakening on Excelsior | Hopeful, Desperate, Reflective, Curious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - A Night of Romance on the Starship Excelsior | Romantic, Reflective, Intimate, Playful | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - Restless Hearts | Melancholic, Reflective, Romantic, Exploratory | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Aurora's Rejection | Dramatic, Intense, Emotional, Reflective, Tense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - A Chance Encounter | Melancholic, Reflective, Intense, Regretful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
15 - Gus's Sacrifice | Emotional, Reflective, Resigned, Intimate | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Race Against Time to Fix Gravity Plant | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - Hibernation System Malfunction | Tense, Emotional, Hopeful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Escape from Hibernation | Tense, Dramatic, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - Escape from the Excelsior | Tense, Emotional, Hopeful | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Heartfelt Reconciliation | Emotional, Reflective, Intimate | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - A Moment in Space | Emotional, Reflective, Hopeful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - Arrival on Homestead II | Hopeful, Reflective, Inspirational | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - The Concourse | Bittersweet, Reflective, Hopeful | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Emotional depth of characters
- Engaging dialogue
- Character development
- Intriguing concept
- Strong emotional impact
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited external conflict
- Some pacing issues in introspective moments
- Lack of emotional depth in dialogue
- Minimal conflict
- Potential lack of clarity on certain character motivations or actions
Suggestions
- Focus on creating external conflict to enhance tension and pacing
- Work on crafting dialogue that has more emotional depth and impact
- Pay attention to pacing throughout the entire screenplay to maintain audience engagement
- Develop characters more fully to ensure their actions and motivations are clear to the audience
- Ensure that the conflict and resolution are well-defined and satisfying for the audience
- Physical environment: The screenplay presents a world set in the vast expanse of outer space, primarily aboard advanced starships equipped with advanced technology. The physical environment encompasses futuristic spaceships, luxurious accommodations, technologically advanced equipment, and breathtaking cosmic landscapes. These advanced spaceships feature automated systems, holographic displays, and sophisticated hibernation pods, reflecting a high level of technological advancement.
- Culture: The screenplay depicts a futuristic society focused on space travel and the exploration of new worlds, with a strong emphasis on scientific advancements and technological innovation. Within this society, there is a sense of isolation and longing for connection due to the vast distances and extended periods spent in space. Additionally, the inclusion of the Hall of Faith with its diverse religious symbols represents a society that values diversity and inclusivity.
- Society: The social structure within the screenplay reflects a hierarchical system, with distinct classes of passengers, crew members, and specialized roles aboard the starships. This class-based system is evident in the reserved coffee for gold-class passengers and the stratified access to different decks and facilities.
- Technology: The screenplay showcases a high level of technological sophistication, with advanced robotics, holographic displays, and medical technologies being commonplace. The spaceships are equipped with automated systems, computer diagnostics, and advanced navigation systems. These technological elements contribute to the futuristic atmosphere and enhance the narrative's themes of isolation and the impact of technology on human relationships.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, societal structure, and technological advancements significantly shape the characters' experiences and actions. The vastness of space and the isolation of being aboard a spaceship for extended periods lead to feelings of loneliness, introspection, and a longing for connection. The hierarchical social structure influences the characters' interactions, creating tensions and conflicts. The advanced technology, while providing conveniences, also creates dependence and raises questions about the impact of technology on human relationships.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative by providing the backdrop for the characters' journey and driving the plot. The futuristic setting and advanced technology introduce elements of mystery, suspense, and wonder, while the social structure and cultural elements create conflicts and explore themes of class, identity, and human connection. The exploration of space and the vast distances traveled allow for introspection and personal growth, contributing to the narrative's depth and emotional impact.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring various themes, including isolation, longing for connection, the impact of technology, and the human condition. The isolation experienced by characters in the vastness of space emphasizes the existential loneliness of the human experience and the desire for meaningful connections. The juxtaposition of advanced technology and human emotions raises questions about the role of technology in our lives and its impact on our relationships. Through the characters' experiences, the screenplay explores the complexities of human existence and the universal search for purpose and belonging.
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a blend of introspective dialogue, philosophical musings, and a futuristic setting with emotional depth and moral complexity. The dialogue is sharp and often introspective, delving into the characters' inner thoughts and motivations. The writer also explores themes of loneliness, morality, and the human condition, creating a rich and thought-provoking narrative. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a sense of depth and complexity in the characters and the story. The introspective dialogue allows the audience to connect with the characters on a deeper level, while the philosophical musings and moral dilemmas raise questions about the nature of humanity and our place in the universe. The writer's voice adds a layer of sophistication to the script and elevates it beyond a simple sci-fi story. |
Best Representation Scene | 7 - Jim's Moral Dilemma |
Best Scene Explanation | Scene 7 is the best representation of the writer's voice because it encapsulates the introspective dialogue, philosophical musings, and moral complexity that are characteristic of the script. The dialogue between Jim and Aurora delves into the nature of humanity, the meaning of life, and the importance of connection. The scene raises questions about our place in the universe and our responsibility to each other, creating a sense of depth and resonance that elevates the story beyond a simple sci-fi adventure. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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High Emotional Impact Correlates with Strong Dialogue | Scenes with high emotional impact consistently score well in the 'Dialogue' category, indicating a strong relationship between emotionally resonant moments and effective dialogue. |
Scenes with Character Changes Drive Plot Progression | Scenes featuring significant character changes often receive higher scores in the 'Move Story Forward' category, suggesting that these moments are key in advancing the narrative. |
Exploration of Complex Themes Correlates with High Overall Grades | Scenes that delve into introspective or philosophical themes, as indicated by the presence of terms like 'Melancholic', 'Reflective', and 'Existential', often receive higher overall grades, showcasing the impact of exploring human emotions and experiences on the screenplay's quality. |
Dramatic Moments Drive Character Development | Scenes with high intensity and dramatic elements, such as those marked 'Tense', 'Emotional', and 'Intense', frequently score well in the 'Characters' category, indicating that these moments provide opportunities for character growth and development. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
Overall, the screenplay showcases strong writing craft, with vivid descriptions, engaging dialogue, and compelling narratives that effectively convey the characters' internal struggles and emotional journeys. The writer has a unique voice and a talent for blending science fiction elements with philosophical themes and emotional depth. Some areas for improvement include pacing, character development, and exploration of moral complexities.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Screenplay | Read 'The Martian' by Andy Weir to study pacing, scene structure, and the balance between action and character development in a sci-fi setting. | This screenplay effectively combines suspenseful action with introspective character moments, providing insights into how to craft a well-paced and engaging narrative. |
Book | Read 'Story Engineering' by Larry Brooks to enhance understanding of character development, emotional arcs, and creating compelling character journeys. | This book offers practical tools and techniques for building complex and relatable characters that drive the emotional core of the story. |
Video | Watch interviews with screenwriters such as Aaron Sorkin and Charlie Kaufman to gain insights into their approaches to exploring moral complexities and ethical dilemmas in their work. | Listening to experienced screenwriters discuss their creative processes can provide valuable perspectives on how to effectively tackle these themes in storytelling. |
Exercise | Practice writing scenes that present characters with difficult choices and explore the moral implications of their actions.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise helps develop the writer's ability to create compelling moral conflicts and examine the consequences of characters' decisions. |
Exercise | Rewrite a scene from the screenplay, focusing on expanding the character's backstory and motivations to add depth to their emotional journey.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise strengthens the writer's skills in character development and creating richer, more nuanced characters. |
Exercise | Write a short story or scene that explores a moral dilemma from multiple perspectives, considering the ethical implications and potential consequences for different characters involved.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise encourages the writer to think critically about moral complexities and develop a deeper understanding of the ethical dimensions of human decision-making. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Sole Survivor | Jim Preston wakes up from suspended animation to find himself alone on the Starship Excelsior. | The Sole Survivor trope involves a character who is the only survivor of a catastrophic event or situation. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'I Am Legend' where Will Smith's character is the last human survivor in a post-apocalyptic world. |
Hibernation Pod Malfunction | Jim tries to fix his hibernation pod but gets trapped inside. | The Hibernation Pod Malfunction trope involves a character experiencing issues with their suspended animation pod. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'Passengers' where Chris Pratt's character wakes up from hibernation too early due to a malfunction. |
Manic Pixie Dream Girl | Aurora Dunn is introduced as a journalist who Jim becomes infatuated with. | The Manic Pixie Dream Girl trope involves a quirky, free-spirited female character who exists solely to inspire the male protagonist. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie '500 Days of Summer' where Zooey Deschanel's character fits the Manic Pixie Dream Girl archetype. |
Love Triangle | Jim and Aurora develop feelings for each other, leading to a romantic relationship. | The Love Triangle trope involves three characters involved in a romantic relationship where one character must choose between two love interests. An example of this trope can be seen in the TV show 'The Vampire Diaries' where Elena is torn between the Salvatore brothers. |
Terminal Illness | Aurora discovers she is terminally ill and must come to terms with her condition. | The Terminal Illness trope involves a character facing a life-threatening disease or condition. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'The Fault in Our Stars' where the main characters both have cancer. |
Sacrificial Suicide | Gus sacrifices himself by stepping out into space to save Jim and Aurora. | The Sacrificial Suicide trope involves a character sacrificing themselves for the greater good or to save others. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'Armageddon' where Bruce Willis' character sacrifices himself to save the world. |
Race Against Time | Jim and Aurora must fix the ship's gravity plant before the fusion reactor goes nova. | The Race Against Time trope involves characters having a limited amount of time to complete a task or prevent a disaster. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'Speed' where the characters must keep a bus above a certain speed to prevent a bomb from exploding. |
Reconciliation | Jim and Aurora reconcile after a period of anger and frustration. | The Reconciliation trope involves characters resolving their conflicts and coming back together after a period of estrangement. An example of this trope can be seen in the TV show 'Friends' where the characters often have falling outs but ultimately reconcile. |
Time Skip | The scene fades to black, and a super reads 'EIGHTY-EIGHT YEARS LATER.' | The Time Skip trope involves a significant jump forward in time to show the aftermath of events or the characters' future. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'Interstellar' where the characters experience time dilation due to space travel. |
Colonization | The starship Excelsior arrives on a planet called Homestead II, bringing the first group of colonists to the planet. | The Colonization trope involves characters establishing a new colony on a distant planet or world. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'Avatar' where humans colonize the planet Pandora. |
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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7 | Jim: I’m not saying the universe is evil. It’s just got an ugly sense of humor. It doesn’t just crush you. It crushes you ironically. |
8 | Arthur: You can't play God, Jim. Some things are beyond our control. |
1 | Arthur: Jim, we all die. Even androids end up on the scrap heap. It’s not dying that matters, it’s living. This is your life. Are you going to live it or lie down and die? |
4 | Arthur: You're not where you want to be. You feel like you're supposed to be somewhere else. Right? |
20 | Aurora: Hell of a life. |
Some Loglines to consider:
A mechanic on a 120-year journey to a distant colony planet wakes up 90 years early and faces a life of solitude until he makes a fateful decision that changes everything. |
Two passengers on a spaceship bound for a new world are awakened from hibernation decades too soon, forcing them to confront their mortality and build a life together in the vast emptiness of space. |
A love story set against the backdrop of interstellar travel, where two lonely souls grapple with the consequences of a life-altering decision that binds their fates together. |
When a malfunction awakens a passenger on a spaceship prematurely, he must choose between a life of solitude or awakening another passenger and condemning them to the same fate. |
As a spaceship hurtles towards a distant colony, a series of catastrophic failures threaten the lives of the only two conscious passengers, forcing them to work together to save themselves and the thousands of souls still in hibernation. |
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Explanation: Passengers presents a promising science fiction concept with strong world-building and visual storytelling. However, the screenplay suffers from pacing issues, underdeveloped character arcs, and a lack of external conflict. The central moral dilemma and the exploration of isolation are engaging, but the resolution and ending feel unearned and lack emotional depth. With further development, the screenplay could be elevated to explore its themes and characters more profoundly.