Interstellar
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USP: **Unique Selling Proposition:** This script masterfully weaves a captivating tale that transcends the boundaries of science fiction, familial drama, and philosophical exploration. Set against the backdrop of a relentless Dust Bowl and a mysterious drone hovering overhead, it follows a family grappling with the intersection of tradition and technology. As they confront the harsh realities of their drought-stricken community, their resilience is tested by a series of extraordinary events. With its evocative dialogue, complex characters, and innovative storytelling techniques, this script presents a compelling exploration of love, loss, sacrifice, and the boundless possibilities of the cosmos. It is a journey that will leave you pondering the profound questions of life, love, and the relentless pursuit of human connection.
Overview
Genres: Drama, Science Fiction, Adventure, Sci-Fi, Action, Thriller
Setting: Near future, Earth, Saturn, and a wormhole near Saturn
Overview: The overall score of 8.46 indicates a strong screenplay with significant potential. The strengths lie in its compelling characters, thought-provoking themes, and the effective blend of scientific concepts with human drama. However, there are opportunities for improvement in pacing, character depth, and the exploration of certain plot elements.
Themes: The Power of Love and Sacrifice, The Importance of Science and Exploration, The Nature of Time and Space, The Human Condition, The Power of Technology, The Importance of Hope, The Power of Teamwork
Conflict and Stakes: The fate of humanity hangs in the balance as Cooper and his crew must find a way to find a new home before Earth becomes uninhabitable. The stakes are raised even higher when Murph is left behind on Earth and must find a way to save herself and her father.
Overall Mood: Epic, awe-inspiring, and thought-provoking
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: The scene where Cooper and his crew first travel through the wormhole, which is visually stunning and awe-inspiring.
- Scene 7: The scene where Cooper realizes that his daughter, Murph, has been sending him messages through gravity from the future, which is emotionally resonant and thought-provoking.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The film's exploration of the possibility of life beyond Earth, through wormholes, and in other galaxies.
- Plot Twist : The revelation that Cooper's daughter, Murph, has been sending him messages through gravity from the future.
- Distinctive Setting : The visually stunning scenes of the wormhole and the black hole, as well as the futuristic space station, Cooper Station.
- Innovative Idea : The concept of using gravity to send messages across time.
- Unique Characters : The diverse and well-developed main characters, including Cooper, Brand, and Murph.
- Genre Blend : A unique blend of science fiction, action, and drama, which will appeal to a wide range of audiences.
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Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$165 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 15-54, fans of science fiction, action, and drama
Marketability: It has the potential to attract a wide audience and generate buzz due to its unique blend of genres and exploration of compelling themes with a diverse cast.
unique blend of genres and explores compelling themes with a diverse cast, making it appealing to a wide range of audiences.
It has the potential to generate strong word-of-mouth due to its emotional resonance and thought-provoking themes.
Profit Potential: Very high, due to strong appeal to a wide adult audience and potential for award nominations.
Scene Level Percentiles
Emotions Elicited Percentiles
This is a rough estimate of how the average intensity of emotions elicited in this script compare to all scripts in the Vault (all genres).
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Screenplay Analysis
- Strong concept and emotional impact, earning a near-perfect percentile of 98.41% and 94.44%, respectively, suggesting a compelling and emotionally resonant story.
- Exceptional character changes and internal goal development, with percentiles of 90.72% and 82.85%, indicating well-crafted and dynamic character arcs.
- Dialogue quality could benefit from further refinement, as indicated by the 51.19% percentile, to enhance the impact and memorability of conversations.
- Structure and formatting aspects, with percentiles of 75.23% and 59.52%, respectively, could be improved to ensure clarity and coherence in the narrative flow.
The writer seems to possess a blend of conceptual and intuitive storytelling, with high percentiles in both concept (98.41%) and dialogue (51.19%).
Balancing Elements- Balancing the emotional impact with a stronger plot (currently at 66.66%) could enhance the overall narrative drive and keep the audience engaged.
- Improving the dialogue quality while maintaining the strength in character development would create a more well-rounded screenplay.
Conceptual with intuitive elements
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay has notable strengths in concept, emotional impact, character development, and internal goal structure. By addressing areas such as dialogue quality, plot pacing, and formatting, the writer can further enhance the screenplay's overall effectiveness and potential.
How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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Percentile | Before | After |
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Script Visual Impact | 9.25 | 98 | The whale: 9.00 | Knives Out: 9.25 |
Script Emotional Impact | 8.75 | 96 | Gladiator: 8.50 | Casablanca: 8.75 |
Scene Concept | 8.5 | 95 | Battlefield Earth: 8.4 | the dark knight rises: 8.5 |
Scene Emotional Impact | 8.7 | 95 | Midsommar: 8.6 | Titanic: 8.7 |
Scene Character Changes | 7.5 | 90 | Inception: 7.4 | fight Club: 7.5 |
Overall Script | 8.46 | 90 | Inglorious Basterds: 8.43 | The usual suspects: 8.46 |
Scene Overall | 8.7 | 89 | Gladiator: 8.6 | the black list (TV): 8.7 |
Script Premise | 8.75 | 86 | Hot Fuzz: 8.50 | Erin Brokovich: 8.75 |
Scene Story Forward | 8.6 | 86 | Gladiator: 8.5 | the 5th element: 8.6 |
Script Theme | 8.75 | 84 | Gran Torino: 8.50 | scream : 8.75 |
Scene Internal Goal | 8.24 | 83 | Pinocchio: 8.22 | Interstellar: 8.24 |
Scene External Goal | 7.60 | 81 | True lies: 7.57 | Inglorious Basterds: 7.60 |
Script Structure | 8.37 | 79 | Fargo Pilot: 8.36 | Interstellar: 8.37 |
Scene High Stakes | 8.4 | 78 | Memento: 8.3 | the 5th element: 8.4 |
Script Conflict | 8.25 | 76 | KILLING ZOE: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 |
Scene Pacing | 8.49 | 76 | Silence of the lambs: 8.48 | Interstellar: 8.49 |
Scene Unpredictability | 7.76 | 73 | Lucifer: 7.75 | Interstellar: 7.76 |
Scene Originality | 8.86 | 70 | Her: 8.85 | Blade Runner: 8.86 |
Scene Plot | 8.2 | 70 | The Pianist: 8.1 | Casablanca: 8.2 |
Scene Formatting | 8.38 | 69 | Stranger Things: 8.36 | Rambo: 8.38 |
Script Structure | 8.25 | 67 | Gladiator: 8.00 | Titanic: 8.25 |
Script Originality | 8.50 | 64 | Swingers: 8.25 | face/off: 8.50 |
Scene Dialogue | 7.7 | 51 | 500 days of summer: 7.6 | Erin Brokovich: 7.7 |
1 | 50 | - | The Founder: 1 | |
Scene Characters | 8.2 | 45 | Hot Fuzz: 8.1 | face/off: 8.2 |
Script Characters | 8.25 | 45 | The Hudsucker Proxy: 8.00 | Erin Brokovich: 8.25 |
Scene Engagement | 8.95 | 42 | a few good men: 8.94 | Erin Brokovich: 8.95 |
Scene Conflict Level | 7.5 | 41 | The shining: 7.4 | Blade Runner: 7.5 |
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a blend of high-stakes action in space with intimate family drama on a farm, creating a juxtaposition of futuristic technology and traditional values. The dialogue is sharp, emotional, and reflective, while the narrative is filled with tension, mystery, and philosophical undertones.
Best representation: Scene 5 - The Last Frontier. This scene could serve as the encapsulation of the writer's unique voice in the screenplay because it effectively combines suspense, humor, and character dynamics to create a compelling narrative.
Memorable Lines:
- Brand: Love is the one thing we're capable of perceiving that transcends dimensions of time and space. (Scene 22)
- Dr. Mann: Do not go gentle into that good night... Rage, rage against the dying of the light. (Scene 29)
- Cooper: Murph, don’t let me leave ... (Scene 37)
- Professor Brand: I needed you to believe your father was coming back ... (Scene 23)
- Professor Brand: We’re not meant to save the world ... we’re meant to leave it. (Scene 6)
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a blend of science fiction, emotional depth, and philosophical themes, with a focus on complex characters and introspective dialogue. The writing style is characterized by its ability to create immersive and thought-provoking scenes, often exploring existential questions and moral dilemmas.
Style Similarities:
- Christopher Nolan
- Denis Villeneuve
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
Engine: Claude
Recommend
Executive Summary
Interstellar is a compelling and thought-provoking science fiction screenplay that explores humanity's relationship with the planet, the responsibility to future generations, and the moral dilemmas posed by the mission to find a new home for the human race. The screenplay effectively establishes a strong emotional connection between the protagonist, Cooper, and his daughter Murph, and effectively depicts the scientific and technical aspects of the mission, including the exploration of the wormhole and the foreign galaxy. The screenplay also effectively addresses the moral and ethical dilemmas faced by the characters, particularly the revelation about Professor Brand's deception and its impact on the mission and the people left on Earth. While there are some areas for improvement, such as further development of the physical altercation between Cooper and Dr. Mann and tighter integration of the parallel storylines, the screenplay is a strong and compelling work that is recommended for consideration.
- The screenplay establishes a strong emotional connection between Cooper and his daughter Murph, highlighting their bond and foreshadowing the importance of their relationship to the story. high ( Scene 1 (INT. BEDROOM, FARMHOUSE - NIGHT) Scene 4 (INT. FRONT PORCH, FARMHOUSE - NIGHT) )
- The exploration of the wormhole and the foreign galaxy is vividly depicted, immersing the audience in the scientific and technical aspects of the mission. high ( Scene 6 (INT. NAVIGATION, RING MODULE, ENDURANCE - CONTINUOUS) Scene 7 (INT. RING MODULE, ENDURANCE - CONTINUOUS) )
- The screenplay effectively addresses the moral and ethical dilemmas faced by the characters, particularly the revelation about Professor Brand's deception and its impact on the mission and the people left on Earth. high ( Scene 23 (INT. RING MODULE, ENDURANCE - CONTINUOUS) Scene 24 (INT. COMMUNICATION ROOM, NASA - DAY) )
- The physical altercation between Cooper and Dr. Mann could be further developed to heighten the tension and drama of the confrontation. medium ( Scene 18 (EXT. ICE FIELD, DR MANN'S PLANET - CONTINUOUS) Scene 19 (EXT. ICE PLAIN, DR MANN'S PLANET - CONTINUOUS) )
- The parallel storylines between Cooper's journey and Murph's efforts on Earth could be more tightly integrated to create a stronger narrative connection. medium ( Scene 29 (INT. RING MODULE, ENDURANCE - CONTINUOUS) Scene 30 (EXT. CORNFIELDS - DAY) )
- More details and exploration of Miller's planet and its environment could add depth and a stronger sense of place to that narrative thread. medium ( Scene 16 (EXT. MILLER'S PLANET - CONTINUOUS) Scene 17 (EXT. MILLER'S PLANET - MOMENTS LATER (DAY)) )
- The depiction of the tesseract and Cooper's interactions within it could be further developed to fully explore the implications and significance of this four-dimensional construct. high ( Scene 36 (INT. MURPH'S BEDROOM - TWILIGHT) Scene 37 (INT. THE TESSERACT - CONTINUOUS) )
- The screenplay effectively explores the themes of humanity's relationship with the planet, the responsibility to future generations, and the moral dilemmas posed by the mission. high ( Scene 22 (INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - CONTINUOUS) Scene 24 (INT. PROFESSOR BRAND'S OFFICE - DAY) )
- The use of the tesseract to facilitate communication and the passing of critical information across time and space is a unique and compelling narrative device. high ( Scene 37 (INT. THE TESSERACT - CONTINUOUS) Scene 38 (INT. MURPH'S BEDROOM - TWILIGHT) )
Engine: Gemini
Recommend
Executive Summary
Interstellar is a thought-provoking and emotionally resonant science fiction screenplay with a strong father-daughter relationship at its core. The screenplay excels in its portrayal of space exploration, its exploration of complex ethical dilemmas, and its intelligent dialogue. While the pacing could be tightened in the middle section and some characters could be further developed, the screenplay's strengths far outweigh its weaknesses. The tesseract sequence and the exploration of love as a powerful force are particularly noteworthy. Overall, Interstellar is a highly recommendable screenplay with the potential to be a captivating and successful film.
- The screenplay masterfully establishes the emotional core of the story through the complex father-daughter relationship between Cooper and Murph. Their bond, tested by separation and time, resonates deeply and drives the narrative's emotional stakes. high ( Scene 1 Scene 9 Scene 36 )
- The portrayal of interstellar travel and the exploration of the unknown is both scientifically grounded and visually stunning. The screenplay captures the awe and wonder of space exploration while maintaining a sense of realism. high ( Scene 14 Scene 35 )
- The ethical dilemmas and moral complexities surrounding survival, sacrifice, and the future of humanity are explored with depth and nuance. The screenplay challenges the characters and the audience to grapple with difficult choices and their consequences. high ( Scene 25 Scene 28 )
- The dialogue is intelligent, thought-provoking, and often poetic. The characters engage in meaningful conversations that explore complex themes and reveal their motivations and beliefs. medium ( Scene 22 )
- The action sequences are thrilling and suspenseful, particularly the scenes involving the mountain waves on Miller's planet and the daring docking maneuver near Gargantua. The screenplay effectively balances character-driven moments with high-stakes action. medium ( Scene 17 Scene 33 )
- The pacing in the middle section of the screenplay could be tightened, particularly during the exploration of Dr. Mann's planet. Some scenes feel slightly drawn out and could benefit from a more concise approach. medium
- The resolution of Professor Brand's character arc and the revelation of his lie could be explored with greater depth and emotional impact. The screenplay could benefit from more scenes that delve into his motivations and the consequences of his actions. medium ( Scene 21 )
- The scientific explanations, while generally well-integrated, can occasionally feel overly expositional. The screenplay could find more organic ways to convey the scientific concepts without interrupting the flow of the narrative. low
- The screenplay could benefit from a more in-depth exploration of the other characters, particularly Romilly and Doyle. Their backstories and motivations could be further developed to enhance the overall richness of the ensemble cast. medium
- The screenplay could explore the societal and political landscape of Earth in more detail. While the focus on the Cooper family and the NASA mission is understandable, a broader perspective on the state of the world could add depth and context to the story. low
- The tesseract sequence is a mind-bending and visually captivating exploration of time and space. The screenplay's depiction of Cooper's interaction with the past and his ability to influence events through gravity is both innovative and thought-provoking. high ( Scene 36 )
- The screenplay's exploration of the concept of love as a force that transcends time and space is both poetic and profound. Brand's passionate defense of love as a guiding principle adds an unexpected layer of depth to the story. high
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 8.75, The screenplay for "Interstellar" establishes a compelling and clear premise, effectively blending elements of science fiction, human drama, and space exploration. The premise's strength lies in its exploration of relatable themes such as family bonds, sacrifice, and the survival of humanity. However, there are opportunities to enhance the premise's originality by delving deeper into the motivations of the unknown entity behind the wormhole and the true nature of the tesseract. See More
Structure: 8.25, The screenplay showcases a complex and engaging structure and plot, effectively weaving multiple storylines and compelling conflicts to maintain audience interest. The pacing is generally well-balanced, allowing for exposition, character development, and thrilling sequences to unfold. While the overall narrative is well-executed, there are a few areas where refinement could enhance its impact. See More
Theme: 8.75, The screenplay's exploration of humanity's resilience and the power of love in the face of adversity is effectively conveyed through a compelling storyline and well-developed characters. It prompts contemplation about the nature of time, space, and personal sacrifice, resonating deeply with the audience. See More
Visual Impact: 9.25, The screenplay showcases a strong command of visual storytelling, weaving immersive and impactful imagery that brings the narrative to life. The descriptions are vivid, imaginative, and evocative, creating a rich tapestry of visual experiences. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.75, The screenplay effectively utilizes themes of family, sacrifice, and the human spirit's resilience to create a powerful emotional impact. The characters are relatable, and their emotional journeys evoke empathy and investment from the audience. However, there are opportunities to deepen the emotional complexity of certain characters, particularly Tom and Professor Brand, and to further explore the internal struggles and motivations that drive their actions. See More
Conflict: 8.25, The screenplay effectively employs conflict and stakes to drive the narrative, engaging the audience with a compelling story. However, there are opportunities to deepen the conflict and elevate the stakes, which would further enhance the screenplay's overall tension and audience engagement. See More
Originality: 8.5, The screenplay for Interstellar displays originality and creativity in its exploration of scientific concepts, particularly in the depiction of black holes and the theories surrounding the manipulation of space and time. The narrative structure and character development also exhibit unique elements, making the screenplay stand out within the science fiction genre. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- A former pilot awakens from a nightmare about a plane crash. As his family grapples with the harsh conditions of the Dust Bowl, a mysterious drone appears overhead, leaving them with a sense of unease. Despite reassurances, the pilot's daughter remains fearful of ghosts, while his son dismisses her concerns. As they confront the realities of their drought-stricken community, the family's resilience is tested.
- Cooper and his children pursue a drone, leading to Cooper piloting it and planning to repurpose it. Murph's passion for space conflicts with her teacher, resulting in a fist fight and a suggestion to take her to a baseball game.
- A phone call alerts Cooper to malfunctioning harvesters heading towards the house. Meanwhile, Murph unveils a bookshelf with intentional gaps, attempting to interpret them as Morse code.
- Cooper and his daughter discover hidden coordinates, leading them to a secret facility. Upon discovery, they are detained and questioned by Dr. Brand and Tars. Tension arises as Cooper fears for his daughter's safety, but Dr. Brand assures him that she is unharmed. Dr. Brand agrees to listen to Cooper's account, and the scene concludes with them being directed to a conference room.
- Cooper and Brand stumble upon a secret underground facility and are interrogated by its occupants. Cooper's quick wit and resourceful nature lead to the revelation that they are NASA members and have a connection to Professor Brand. The tense atmosphere transforms into one of camaraderie as the true identities of the questioners are unveiled, leaving a trail of laughter and newfound understanding.
- In the face of a devastating blight, Professor Brand unveils a secret plan to abandon Earth aboard a spacecraft, the Endurance. Despite his initial hesitation, Cooper, the chosen pilot, accepts the mission, driven by a desperate hope to secure his children's future.
- Romilly reveals the detection of gravitational anomalies, including a wormhole near Saturn created by an unknown entity. Professor Brand unveils the Lazarus missions, where humans were sent to explore potential new worlds, with one showing promise. They discuss Plan A (finding a habitable planet) and Plan B (evacuating Earth's population). Cooper realizes the anomaly influenced his failed fly-by wire during his crash.
- Cooper is taken to a launch facility where he is shown a massive structure that is both a vehicle and a space station. Professor Brand explains that they have been working on it for 25 years as Plan A to solve the problem of gravity and get humans off Earth. However, they haven't solved it yet, which is why there is a Plan B: a population bomb of fertilized eggs that can be incubated and raised on board the station to create a new colony. Cooper is unenthusiastic about Plan B, as it involves giving up on the people on Earth. Professor Brand assures him that Plan A is still their goal, but they need to trust her to find a solution. Cooper struggles with the decision, but ultimately agrees to go on the mission. He returns home to find his daughter Murph has barricaded herself in her room and refuses to see him.
- In Murph's barricaded bedroom, Cooper attempts to reconcile before leaving. Murph, angry and upset, reveals she decoded the bookshelf message as 'STAY'. Despite Cooper's denial, she confronts him with the missing books. He fabricates a return promise and offers a watch to measure time dilation. Murph, realizing Cooper's uncertainty, throws it at him. Heartbroken, Cooper departs as a book falls from the shelf.
- Cooper bids farewell to his son, overwhelmed with emotion as he drives away. Despite Murph's desperate attempt to catch up, Cooper leaves. As the rocket launches, carrying Cooper, Brand, Doyle, Romilly, and Tars, their journey to space commences.
- The Endurance embarks on its journey to Saturn with Cooper, Brand, Doyle, and Romilly settling into cryo-beds for the two-year voyage. Brand highlights the three potential planets, discovered by previous astronauts. Cooper inquires about Dr. Mann, a renowned astronaut on the third planet, drawing admiration from Brand. Despite curiosity about Brand's connection to Edmunds, Tars remains silent. Cooper records a message for his family before entering cryo-sleep.
- Cooper sends a message to his family on Earth from space. He expresses his awe at the view of Earth from space and hopes that his family is doing well. Donald watches two vehicles approach, but it is not Cooper. Professor Brand arrives in Cooper's truck and gives Donald a message from Cooper. Murph is upset with Cooper for leaving. Professor Brand offers to transmit messages from Donald to Cooper. Donald agrees. Professor Brand suggests that Murph is a bright spark and should come to work with him. Donald looks up into the sky and asks where Cooper is. Professor Brand says that Cooper is heading towards Mars. The Endurance streaks away from Mars. Cooper watches a video message from his son, Tom. Tom says that he is doing well and that he hopes Cooper is safe. Donald apologizes to Cooper for not getting Murph to say hi. Cooper enters the Hab Pod and talks to Romilly about the dangers of space travel. Romilly expresses his fear of being in space, but Cooper reassures him that they are explorers and that they are meant to be there. Cooper gives Romilly his earbuds and the sounds of a thunderstorm wash over Romilly.
- Cooper and Doyle examine distorted images of the foreign galaxy through the wormhole from the relay probe. Brand instructs the crew to prepare for entry in 45 minutes. Cooper and Romilly, in the Ranger cockpit, marvel at the spherical shape and discuss the nature of the wormhole, speculating on its origins.
- Endurance's journey through the wormhole induces disorientation and uncertainty. Cooper and Doyle acknowledge the unknowns, while Romilly observes spacetime distortions. Brand experiences a warped space without pain, concluding the scene with awe and anticipation.
- After traveling through a wormhole, Cooper and Doyle arrive in a new galaxy. They discover that Brand's hand, which was previously deformed, is now healed. Doyle reports that they have received messages from the other planets, including Miller's and Mann's. Miller's planet is closer to Gargantua than expected, and landing there will significantly slow down their time compared to Earth. Cooper suggests a plan to orbit Gargantua and send a Ranger down to Miller's planet to collect samples. Romilly suggests using the time to study gravity, and Tars agrees to stay in orbit.
- The Ranger spacecraft crew approaches Miller's planet, detaching from the Endurance module. Despite concerns from Doyle, Cooper pilots the Ranger through intense acceleration and atmospheric entry, successfully landing in shallow water. The crew disembarks to explore the planet.
- Astronauts search for a crucial device on an alien planet, but a towering wave threatens their mission as they remain oblivious to its approach.
- During a mission on Miller's Planet, a group of astronauts face danger. Cooper urges Brand to return to the Ranger due to an approaching mountain wave. Brand hesitates, intent on gathering data. Case rescues Brand and they attempt to escape the wave, but Doyle is tragically lost. The Ranger is caught in the wave and tumbles violently, but eventually comes to rest with damaged engines.
- Ranger submerges, engines waterlogged. Time dilation and gravity discussed. Another wave approaches. Engines still won't start.
- After escaping a deadly mountain wave, the Ranger crew reunites with Romilly on the Endurance. Cooper receives messages from his children, learning of his father's survival and his own missed moments. Murph's message, now the same age as Cooper when he left, brings him both joy and sadness.
- Murph and Professor Brand confront their fears and work together to solve the equation.
- The crew debates visiting Dr. Mann's ice world or Edmunds' desert planet. Brand advocates for Edmunds' planet due to her connection to him, but Cooper challenges her judgment. Despite Brand's emotional appeal, Cooper decides to prioritize Dr. Mann's planet.
- The Endurance orbits Gargantua, and Cooper apologizes to Brand. Brand believes it's because of her error on Miller's planet. Cooper informs her of a potential choice between Dr. Mann's and Edmunds' planets. If they go to Dr. Mann's planet, they risk running out of fuel for their return. Brand confronts Cooper with the choice between seeing his children and securing the human race's future. Cooper vows objectivity. The Endurance navigates a nebula. On Earth, Murph and Tom witness a field burning. Tom predicts crop loss but expresses optimism for recovery. Murph inquires about Nelson, but Tom evades her question. At the farmhouse, Lois invites Murph to stay, but she declines, citing overwhelming memories. Cooper coughs, and Murph suggests a medical consultation with a friend. Murph and a doctor visit Professor Brand at NASA. Dying, Professor Brand reveals his lie to Murph. He claims no reason exists for their return or means of assistance. Murph confronts him about Cooper's knowledge, but Professor Brand urges her to stay. He passes away, leaving Murph devastated.
- Murph accuses Dr. Brand of abandoning them. The Ranger encounters ice clouds, damaging it. Cooper rescues Dr. Mann, who explains his planet's conditions. Brand examines promising data from the planet's surface.
- Dr. Mann discloses that Plan A was abandoned due to scientific limitations. Plan B, creating a space colony, was chosen instead. Cooper and Brand confront Mann, questioning the deception. Mann defends Professor Brand's decision as a necessary sacrifice, while Cooper condemns it as a lie that will condemn those on Earth. The scene concludes with Cooper pleading with Brand to help him return home.
- Amidst a dusty plain, Murph and Getty confront the missing half of a solution to an impending disaster. Murph's belief in an Earthly answer prompts Getty's concern about public panic. Recalling a childhood experience, Murph suggests a toy lunar lander as a potential clue. Despite the urgency and setbacks, Murph's determination fuels their search as they navigate a dust storm and continue their relentless pursuit.
- Cooper and Romilly discuss sending Tars back to the black hole for quantum data. Cooper agrees after being convinced by Romilly. Dr. Mann tries to convince Cooper to stay, but Cooper insists on returning to his family. The scene ends with Cooper and Dr. Mann walking through an ice canyon, contemplating the importance of human connections and instincts.
- Murph introduces Getty to her parents, Lois and Coop. However, Getty deems them unfit to stay. Tom confronts Murph, leading to a physical altercation with Getty. Meanwhile, Dr. Mann reveals his deceptive actions to Cooper and attempts to eliminate him. A fierce struggle ensues between Cooper and Mann, leaving their fates uncertain.
- Amidst icy desolation, Murph begs Tom to join her, but he refuses, handing her a box. Cooper grapples with Dr. Mann, who intends to kill him. Mann's hesitation allows Cooper to activate a transmitter. Murph returns just as Brand and Case fly to Cooper's aid. Romilly's doubts about data accuracy linger.
- Murph ignites a cornfield to fulfill her mission. On Dr. Mann's planet, Brand rescues Cooper, exposing Mann's treachery. Meanwhile, at the farmhouse, Murph alerts her family to the blaze.
- The Ranger rockets upwards to dock with the Endurance in orbit. Cooper and Case are in the lander, while Dr. Mann attempts to dock the Ranger manually, despite facing challenges with the autopilot and docking procedure. Murph discovers a box in her bedroom, while Getty remains outside, anxious about the distant fire. Despite Dr. Mann's attempts to override the computer and engage the mechanical grapples, the Ranger encounters imperfect contact and a hatch lockout, which Dr. Mann also overrides.
- Cooper and Case attempt to stop Dr. Mann from opening the Ranger's hatch, leading to a catastrophic sequence of events. Dr. Mann is sucked into the airlock, causing the Ranger to be destroyed and the Endurance to spin out of control. Cooper takes the controls of the lander to pursue the Endurance.
- Cooper pilots the lander towards the spinning Endurance, assisted by Case, Brand, and Tars. Despite concerns and risks, Cooper remains determined to dock. Tars connects the two crafts as they enter the planet's atmosphere, facing intense heat and debris. Cooper's skilled maneuvering slows their spin and pulls them back up. The team works to secure the ships as they prepare to enter Gargantua's gravitational field.
- Cooper informs Brand about the destroyed navigation mainframe and limited life support, but proposes a risky plan to reach Edmunds' planet using Gargantua's gravity. Amidst concerns about fuel and time slippage, Cooper insists on a decisive action. Tars volunteers to sacrifice himself by detaching and being sucked into the black hole to reduce mass and enable their escape. Despite Brand's reluctance, Cooper convinces her of its necessity. With the lander prepared for the slingshot maneuver, Cooper and Tars embark on a perilous journey as the Endurance falls towards Gargantua.
- Cooper and Brand clash over detaching from Tars to save themselves. Despite Brand's reluctance, Cooper chooses to depart, leaving Brand and Case to continue their mission. As Cooper's lander plummets towards the black hole, Brand and Case witness his sacrifice with fear and sorrow.
- Murph (forty) reflects on her past, holding a lunar lander model. Simultaneously, Cooper, in a tesseract, tries to communicate with Murph (ten) at different ages, but she remains unaware of his attempts.
- Murph discovers the word 'STAY' in her notebook, realizing her father was her 'ghost.' Cooper, trapped in the tesseract, cries in frustration and attempts to communicate with Murph through gravity. The scene ends with Cooper grasping a way to send a message.
- Cooper, stranded in the tesseract, realizes his mission is to send data to Earth. TARS assists him in transmitting binary coordinates using the watch's second hand in Morse code. Back in the present, adult Murph discovers the pattern in her childhood bedroom and attempts to decipher it.
- Murph's discovery of her father's watch sparks hope and leads to a breakthrough in decoding the watch's movements. Cooper witnesses the creation of the tesseract and embarks on a transformative journey through the cosmos.
- Cooper awakens on Cooper Station, learning he's 124 and was found near Saturn. The station, named after his daughter Murphy, hosts an upside-down town. Murphy's arrival is imminent, leaving Cooper anticipating their reunion.
- Cooper revisits Cooper Station, navigating through advanced hangars, a cornfield, and an old farmhouse. Intrigued by an old-fashioned machine, he commits to its restoration. He reunites with an aged Murph in the hospital, who had been in cryo-sleep. Despite her disappointment, Murph accepts his choice to leave for humanity's sake, leaving a lingering mystery as the scene ends.
- Brand kneels before Edmunds' cross, lost in contemplation. Meanwhile, Cooper and Tars prepare for launch. As the sun sets, Brand watches it with longing, while Cooper and Tars take their places in the ship. Brand descends the hill towards the camp, and the scene ends.
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Character Murph
Description Murph's anger and resentment towards her father seem to disappear abruptly when she discovers his role as the "ghost" and his efforts to communicate with her from the tesseract. While her anger is justified, a more nuanced transition would enhance character authenticity.
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Character Professor Brand
Description Professor Brand's decades-long deception regarding the impossibility of Plan A raises questions about his character's motivations and morality. While his goal was to ensure humanity's survival, his methods are ethically questionable and contradict his earlier portrayal as a compassionate and dedicated scientist.
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Character Dr. Mann
Description Dr. Mann's transformation from a respected scientist and leader to a desperate and ruthless survivor feels somewhat abrupt. While the harsh realities of his situation are understandable, his willingness to endanger the entire mission and kill Cooper for his own survival could be better developed to provide a more convincing character arc.
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Description The revelation that Professor Brand had already solved the gravity equation before the Endurance mission undermines the core premise of the story. If Plan A was never a viable option, the entire journey and the sacrifices made by the crew seem pointless. This inconsistency creates a significant logical gap in the narrative.
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Description The mechanics of the tesseract and Cooper's ability to manipulate gravity within it to communicate with Murph are not fully explained. While the concept of higher dimensions is introduced, the specific rules and limitations of this space remain unclear, creating a sense of ambiguity in the plot.
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Description Tars's flippant and sarcastic remarks, particularly during the critical slingshot maneuver around Gargantua, seem out of character for a robot programmed to prioritize the mission's success and the crew's safety.
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Element Theme of sacrifice
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Suggestion While the theme of sacrifice is central to the story, its repeated emphasis through dialogue and character actions could be streamlined. Some instances could be conveyed more subtly or through visual storytelling to avoid redundancy and maintain narrative momentum.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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Cooper | Cooper's character arc begins with a protective father driven by duty and responsibility. As the story progresses, he faces moral dilemmas, betrayal, and personal sacrifices, ultimately leading to a transformative journey of redemption and reconciliation with his daughter. His arc culminates in a deep sense of love, connection, and understanding of his role in the universe. | The character arc for Cooper is well-developed, showcasing his growth and emotional depth throughout the film. However, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and the consequences of his decisions, adding complexity to his character. Additionally, exploring his relationship with other characters in more depth could enhance the emotional impact of his journey. | To improve Cooper's character arc, consider delving deeper into his internal conflicts and the emotional toll of his choices. Show more interactions with other characters to highlight his relationships and how they shape his decisions. Additionally, provide moments of vulnerability and introspection to further humanize Cooper and connect with the audience on a deeper level. |
Murph | Murph's character arc follows her journey from a curious and defiant young girl grappling with her father's departure to a mature and resilient woman who forgives and accepts her father's sacrifices. Throughout the story, she grows in emotional depth, understanding, and strength, ultimately finding peace and hope in the power of family bonds. | The character arc for Murph is well-developed and engaging, showcasing her growth and emotional complexity. However, to enhance the arc further, it could benefit from more nuanced exploration of Murph's internal struggles and the impact of her father's choices on her personal development. Additionally, providing more insight into Murph's relationships with other characters could add depth to her journey. | To improve the character arc for Murph, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into her internal conflicts, emotional growth, and relationships with other characters. Showcasing her vulnerabilities, doubts, and moments of self-discovery can add layers to her journey and make her transformation more impactful. Additionally, exploring how Murph's experiences shape her worldview and beliefs could provide a deeper understanding of her character development. |
Tom | Tom's character arc in the screenplay follows his journey from a rebellious teenager to a mature and reflective adult who learns to navigate the challenges of family expectations and personal growth. He starts off challenging authority and teasing his sister, but as he grows older, he becomes more focused on traditional values and loyalty to his family. Through the ups and downs of life events, he learns to accept loss and find his own path while still honoring his father's legacy. | The character arc for Tom is well-developed and shows a clear progression from youth to adulthood. However, there could be more depth added to his emotional struggles and inner growth throughout the story. Additionally, more emphasis could be placed on his relationships with other characters to further enhance his development. | To improve the character arc for Tom, consider adding more scenes that delve into his emotional struggles and growth, showing how he copes with challenges and learns from his experiences. Additionally, explore his relationships with other characters, such as his sister and father, to provide more depth and complexity to his journey. |
Professor Brand | Professor Brand starts off as a confident and authoritative figure, revealing the existence of the wormhole and the mission to find habitable worlds. As the story progresses, his guilt and fear come to the forefront, leading to a struggle with deception and the consequences of his actions. Ultimately, he must confront his inner demons and make a choice that will determine the fate of humanity. | The character arc for Professor Brand is compelling and adds depth to his character. However, there could be more development in showing the gradual shift from confidence to guilt and fear. Additionally, more exploration of his internal turmoil and the reasons behind his deception could enhance the emotional impact of his arc. | To improve the character arc, consider adding scenes that delve deeper into Professor Brand's past and motivations for his actions. Show more moments of internal conflict and decision-making to highlight the complexity of his character. Additionally, allow for more interactions with other characters that challenge his beliefs and force him to confront his inner demons. |
Romilly | Romilly starts off as an enthusiastic and knowledgeable scientist excited about exploring the unknown. As the mission progresses, he becomes more introspective and cautious, reflecting on the challenges they face in space. Ultimately, he evolves into a loyal and analytical crew member who provides valuable insights and serves as a voice of reason in critical moments. | The character arc for Romilly is well-developed, showcasing his growth and evolution throughout the feature. However, there could be more emphasis on his personal struggles and internal conflicts to add depth to his character. | To improve the character arc for Romilly, consider delving deeper into his backstory and motivations. Explore his fears, doubts, and vulnerabilities to make his journey more compelling and relatable to the audience. Additionally, give him more agency in the plot and allow him to make significant decisions that impact the mission and his relationships with the other characters. |
Brand | Brand starts as a strong and pragmatic leader, dedicated to the mission of finding a new home for humanity. As the story progresses, she faces challenges that test her resilience and ethical beliefs, ultimately leading to a moment of introspection and growth. By the end of the screenplay, Brand emerges as a passionate and emotionally complex character, filled with hope and determination for the future of humanity. | The character arc for Brand is well-developed, showcasing her evolution from a strong leader to a more emotionally complex and introspective individual. However, there could be more emphasis on her internal struggles and growth throughout the screenplay to make her transformation more impactful and relatable to the audience. | To improve the character arc for Brand, consider adding more scenes that delve into her internal conflicts and emotional journey. Show moments of vulnerability and self-reflection that highlight her growth and development as a character. Additionally, explore her relationships with other characters to further enhance her arc and provide more depth to her interactions. |
Doyle | Doyle starts off as a nervous and cautious crew member who seeks guidance from others. As the mission progresses, he gains confidence in his abilities and decision-making skills. He learns to trust his instincts and takes more initiative in assessing risks and ensuring the safety of the crew. By the end of the screenplay, Doyle emerges as a practical, observant, and loyal team member who plays a crucial role in the success of the mission. | The character arc for Doyle is well-developed, showing growth and development throughout the screenplay. However, it could benefit from more specific challenges or conflicts that force Doyle to confront his fears and doubts, leading to a more dramatic transformation. Additionally, providing more backstory or personal motivations for Doyle could add depth to his character and make his arc more compelling. | To improve the character arc for Doyle, consider introducing a specific event or obstacle that challenges his cautious nature and forces him to take risks or make difficult decisions. This could create more tension and drama in the story, as well as showcase Doyle's growth and development more effectively. Additionally, exploring Doyle's personal motivations or backstory could help the audience connect with him on a deeper level and understand his actions and decisions better. |
Dr. Mann | Dr. Mann starts off as a survivor who is grateful for being rescued, but as the story progresses, his true nature is revealed as manipulative and self-serving. He betrays the crew for his own survival, ultimately leading to his downfall as his actions are exposed. In the end, he is left to face the consequences of his deceit and selfishness. | The character arc for Dr. Mann is well-developed and effectively showcases his descent into darkness. However, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and motivations that drive him to betray others. This would add depth to his character and make his actions more understandable to the audience. | To improve the character arc for Dr. Mann, consider adding flashback scenes or moments of introspection that delve into his past experiences and the trauma that has shaped his behavior. This would provide a clearer understanding of his motivations and make his actions more nuanced. Additionally, exploring his relationships with other characters in more depth could add complexity to his arc and create more emotional impact in the story. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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The Power of Love and Sacrifice | Cooper's love for his daughter drives him to go on the mission and ultimately save humanity. He is willing to sacrifice his own life to ensure the survival of his family and the human race. | This theme explores the power of love and sacrifice in the face of adversity. It shows how love can drive people to make extraordinary sacrifices and achieve great things. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening The Power of Love and Sacrifice:
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The Importance of Science and Exploration | The film emphasizes the importance of science and exploration in advancing human knowledge and progress. The crew of the Endurance is tasked with exploring a new galaxy in search of a new home for humanity. | This theme celebrates the human spirit of exploration and discovery. It shows how science and exploration can lead to new discoveries and advancements that can benefit humanity. | ||||||||||||
The Nature of Time and Space | The film explores the nature of time and space through the use of wormholes and black holes. The crew of the Endurance experiences time dilation and gravity in ways that challenge their understanding of the universe. | This theme explores the mysteries of time and space and how they can affect human experience. It raises questions about the nature of reality and the limits of human knowledge. | ||||||||||||
The Human Condition | The film explores the human condition through the experiences of the crew of the Endurance. The characters face challenges, setbacks, and sacrifices that test their limits and reveal their strengths and weaknesses. | This theme examines the human experience and the challenges that we all face in life. It shows how we can overcome adversity and achieve our goals through perseverance and resilience. | ||||||||||||
The Power of Technology | The film showcases the power of technology in advancing human capabilities. The Endurance is a marvel of engineering that allows the crew to travel through space and explore new worlds. | This theme explores the potential of technology to improve human lives and advance our understanding of the universe. It shows how technology can be used for both good and evil, and it raises questions about the ethical implications of scientific progress. | ||||||||||||
The Importance of Hope | The film emphasizes the importance of hope in the face of adversity. The crew of the Endurance never gives up hope, even when they face seemingly insurmountable challenges. | This theme celebrates the human spirit of hope and resilience. It shows how hope can inspire us to persevere and achieve our goals, even when the odds are stacked against us. | ||||||||||||
The Power of Teamwork | The film highlights the importance of teamwork in achieving great things. The crew of the Endurance works together to overcome challenges and accomplish their mission. | This theme explores the power of teamwork and collaboration in achieving shared goals. It shows how people can work together to accomplish great things that would be impossible to achieve alone. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goal is to overcome his fear and trauma from a past crash, as seen in his nightmare and interactions with his daughter. |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goal is to deal with the challenges of farming life and provide for his family, as shown through his interactions with his children and father. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the tension between fate and free will, as seen in Cooper's questioning of the origins of the wormhole and the characters' discussions on the nature of time and gravity. |
Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals challenge him to confront his fears, make difficult decisions, and reconcile his responsibilities with his desires. The philosophical conflicts he faces force him to question his beliefs, values, and understanding of the universe, leading to personal growth and self-discovery.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflicts drive the narrative forward by creating tension, suspense, and emotional stakes for the protagonist. They shape the character's actions and decisions, driving the plot towards its resolution.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflicts explore themes of sacrifice, love, family, exploration, and the search for meaning in the face of uncertainty and adversity. They add depth to the narrative by delving into existential questions about humanity's place in the universe and the power of connection and resilience in the face of overwhelming challenges.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Unease on the Farm | Tense, Mysterious, Family-oriented | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - Cooper's Determination and Murph's Curiosity | Tense, Confrontational, Emotional, Informative | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Strange Harvesters and Mysterious Books | Tense, Mysterious, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
4 - Interrogation at the Secret Facility | Tense, Mysterious, Emotional, Intriguing | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Unexpected Encounter at the Underground Facility | Tense, Mysterious, Serious, Excited | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - The Last Frontier | Serious, Foreboding, Philosophical | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
7 - The Wormhole and the Lazarus Missions | Serious, Informative, Mysterious | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
8 - The Launch Facility | Serious, Reflective, Emotional | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Emotional Farewell | Emotional, Reflective, Tender | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
10 - Departure | Emotional, Tense, Reflective | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Voyage to Saturn | Serious, Reflective, Hopeful | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - Contact with Earth | Reflective, Hopeful, Melancholic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Approaching the Wormhole | Wonder, Excitement, Curiosity | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
14 - Navigating the Wormhole | Awe, Tension, Mystery | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8.5 | 9 | 8.5 | |
15 - Arrival in the New Galaxy | Tense, Serious, Intriguing, Emotional | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Descent to Miller's Planet | Awe, Tension, Excitement | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
17 - Race Against the Wave | Tense, Suspenseful, Action-packed | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - The Mountain Wave | Tense, Urgent, Dramatic, Fearful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
19 - Race Against Time | Tense, Emotional, Dramatic, Regretful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Reunion and Regrets | Emotional, Intense, Reflective | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
21 - Afraid of Time | Reflective, Introspective, Serious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - The Planet Decision | Emotional, Philosophical, Intense | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
23 - Difficult Decisions | Emotional, Intense, Reflective | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
24 - Unexpected Discovery and Confrontation | Tense, Emotional, Reflective, Hopeful | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - The Truth Unveiled: Plan B Revealed | Tense, Emotional, Revealing, Philosophical | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Search for the Missing Solution | Serious, Reflective, Intense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - Cooper's Dilemma | Serious, Reflective, Informative | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - The Truth Unmasked | Tense, Emotional, Action-packed, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Desperation and Hope on Icy Plains | Tense, Emotional, Action-packed | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Unveiling Deceit and Desperation | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - Approaching Endurance | Tense, Dramatic, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
32 - Confrontation in Space | Tense, Dramatic, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
33 - Docking with the Endurance | Intense, Suspenseful, Determined, Heroic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
34 - Sacrifice and Survival | Tense, Determined, Emotional | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
35 - Cooper's Detachment | Tense, Emotional, Action-packed | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - The Lunar Lander | Intense, Emotional, Mysterious | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - The Revelation | Emotional, Intense, Reflective | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
38 - Communication Across Time | Emotional, Intense, Reflective | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - Hope Amidst Despair | Hopeful, Intense, Emotional, Inspirational | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - Cooper Station Arrival | Hopeful, Reflective, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
41 - Tears of Time | Emotional, Reflective, Hopeful, Nostalgic | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
42 - Mourning and Preparation | Reflective, Emotional, Hopeful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Emotional depth
- Engaging concept
- High stakes
- Compelling dialogue
- Intriguing development
Scene Weaknesses
- Some cliched dialogue
- Limited character development in some scenes
- Some exposition-heavy dialogue
- Lack of external conflict
- Some confusion in dialogue
Suggestions
- Focus on character development in all scenes to ensure emotional resonance
- Streamline exposition-heavy dialogue to maintain pacing and engagement
- Create more external conflict to engage audiences and drive the narrative forward
- Ensure all dialogue is nuanced, character-specific, and impactful to enhance emotional depth and engagement
- Consider simplifying complex concepts to avoid confusion for some viewers
- Physical environment: The screenplay depicts a world that includes rural farmhouses, cornfields, rivers, dust storms, underground facilities, space stations, black holes, ice planets, and distant galaxies. The physical environments range from traditional farming settings to advanced space exploration locations.
- Culture: The cultural elements in the screenplay include references to family dynamics, societal structures, secrecy, exploration, survival, and scientific exploration. The characters' actions and interactions are influenced by these cultural elements.
- Society: The societal structure in the screenplay revolves around space exploration, colonization, survival, and the future of humanity. There is a sense of urgency and high stakes as characters navigate through different worlds and face challenges beyond their control.
- Technology: The technological elements in the screenplay include advanced spacecraft, communication devices, automated farm machines, navigation mainframes, cryo-chambers, and futuristic equipment. Technology plays a crucial role in shaping the characters' experiences and actions.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology in the screenplay shape the characters' experiences and actions by presenting them with challenges, opportunities, and moral dilemmas. Characters are influenced by their surroundings and the world they inhabit.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the narrative by creating a rich and diverse setting for the characters to navigate. The physical environments, cultural elements, societal structures, and technological advancements drive the plot forward and provide a backdrop for the characters' journeys.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the thematic depth by exploring themes of family, sacrifice, survival, exploration, time, and the unknown. The physical environment, culture, society, and technology add layers of complexity to the story and enhance the overall thematic depth of the screenplay.
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a blend of high-stakes action in space with intimate family drama on a farm, creating a juxtaposition of futuristic technology and traditional values. The dialogue is sharp, emotional, and reflective, while the narrative is filled with tension, mystery, and philosophical undertones. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by adding depth and complexity to the characters, exploring themes of family, science, survival, and redemption. The blend of emotional dialogue, technical descriptions, and introspective moments enhances the mood, themes, and character dynamics, creating a compelling and immersive narrative. |
Best Representation Scene | 5 - Unexpected Encounter at the Underground Facility |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene could serve as the encapsulation of the writer's unique voice in the screenplay because it effectively combines suspense, humor, and character dynamics to create a compelling narrative. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Strong correlation between emotional impact and character changes | Scenes with higher emotional impact tend to also have more significant character changes. This suggests that emotional moments in the screenplay are driving character development and growth. |
Tone and concept correlation | Scenes with a tense or serious tone often involve mysterious or emotional concepts. This indicates a deliberate choice by the author to match the tone with the concept to create a cohesive narrative. |
Dialogue and emotional impact correlation | Scenes with impactful dialogue tend to also have a higher emotional impact. This suggests that the author is effectively using dialogue to evoke emotions in the audience. |
Conflict and high stakes correlation | Scenes with higher conflict levels also tend to have higher stakes. This shows that the author is effectively raising the stakes to create tension and keep the audience engaged. |
Character changes and plot correlation | Scenes with significant character changes often contribute to the progression of the plot. This indicates that the author is using character development as a driving force for the overall story. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The analyzed screenplay showcases the writer's talent in crafting compelling narratives that explore complex themes, develop engaging characters, and effectively blend genres. The scenes demonstrate a strong command of storytelling techniques, including scene structure, dialogue, and pacing. The writer's ability to create immersive worlds and explore emotional depth is evident throughout the screenplay, engaging the audience and leaving a lasting impact.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Screenplay | Study screenplays known for their exceptional dialogue, such as 'The Social Network' by Aaron Sorkin or 'Manchester by the Sea' by Kenneth Lonergan. | Analyzing these screenplays will provide insights into writing authentic, impactful dialogue that drives character development and narrative. |
Exercise | Practice writing dialogue-heavy scenes that focus on character interactions and emotional depth. Use subtext and unspoken communication to convey hidden motivations and relationships.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will enhance the writer's ability to write nuanced and emotionally resonant dialogue that reveals character dynamics and advances the plot. |
Video | Watch interviews and masterclasses with screenwriters who excel in scene structure, such as Christopher Nolan or Greta Gerwig. | Learning from experienced screenwriters through interviews and masterclasses will provide valuable insights into crafting well-structured scenes that maintain tension, pacing, and emotional impact. |
Screenplay | Analyze screenplays that effectively explore complex character motivations and backstories, such as 'Moonlight' by Barry Jenkins or 'The Power of the Dog' by Jane Campion. | Studying these screenplays will help the writer understand how to delve into characters' past experiences, desires, and fears to create depth and emotional connection. |
Course | Enroll in an online or in-person screenwriting course that focuses on scene structure and pacing. | Structured learning through a course will provide a comprehensive understanding of scene structure, pacing techniques, and how to create a cohesive and engaging narrative flow. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Alien Planet | Interstellar features a number of different alien planets, each with its own unique characteristics. Miller's planet is a water world, while Mann's planet is an icy wasteland. Edmunds' planet is a desert world. | An alien planet is a fictional planet that is not Earth. Alien planets are often depicted as being very different from Earth, with different climates, landscapes, and even life forms. |
Artificial Gravity | In Interstellar, the Endurance spacecraft is equipped with artificial gravity. This allows the crew to walk around and move about the ship as if they were on Earth. | Artificial gravity is a fictional technology that creates a gravitational field in an environment where there would normally be none. This can be done using a variety of methods, such as spinning the spacecraft or using magnetic fields. |
Chosen One | Cooper is chosen by Professor Brand to pilot the Endurance spacecraft. Cooper is a former pilot who is now a farmer. He is chosen because he is the best pilot and because he has the right stuff to lead the mission. | The Chosen One is a fictional character who is destined to save the day. The Chosen One is often chosen by a higher power and is given special powers or abilities to help them complete their mission. |
Civilian Hero | Cooper is a civilian who is chosen to pilot the Endurance spacecraft. He is not a trained astronaut, but he is a skilled pilot and he has the right stuff to lead the mission. | The Civilian Hero is a fictional character who is not a trained professional, but who is chosen to save the day. The Civilian Hero often has special skills or abilities that help them complete their mission. |
Death world | Miller's planet is a death world. It is a water world with high levels of radiation. The planet is also home to a number of dangerous creatures. | A death world is a fictional planet that is extremely hostile to life. Death worlds are often characterized by extreme temperatures, high levels of radiation, or dangerous creatures. |
Doomed love | Cooper and Brand fall in love during the mission. However, they know that they will not be able to be together because Cooper will not be able to return to Earth. | Doomed love is a fictional love story in which the two lovers are doomed to never be together. This can be due to a number of factors, such as death, social class, or distance. |
Frame narrative | Interstellar is told in a frame narrative. The story is told by Cooper's daughter, Murph, as she looks back on her father's journey. | A frame narrative is a fictional story that is told within another story. The frame narrative often provides context for the main story and can help to create a more complex and engaging story. |
Future Space Travel | Interstellar features a number of futuristic space travel technologies. These technologies include the Endurance spacecraft, the Ranger spacecraft, and the wormhole. | Future space travel is a fictional depiction of space travel in the future. Future space travel technologies are often more advanced than current space travel technologies. |
Interstellar | Interstellar is a science fiction film that deals with the themes of space travel, time travel, and the future of humanity. | Interstellar is a subgenre of science fiction that deals with the themes of space travel and the future of humanity. |
Macguffin | The wormhole is a Macguffin. It is a plot device that is used to move the story forward. The wormhole is not explained in detail and it is not clear how it works. | A Macguffin is a plot device that is used to move the story forward. The Macguffin is often not explained in detail and it is not clear how it works. |
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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22 | Brand: Love is the one thing we're capable of perceiving that transcends dimensions of time and space. |
29 | Dr. Mann: Do not go gentle into that good night... Rage, rage against the dying of the light. |
37 | Cooper: Murph, don’t let me leave ... |
23 | Professor Brand: I needed you to believe your father was coming back ... |
6 | Professor Brand: We’re not meant to save the world ... we’re meant to leave it. |
Some Loglines to consider:
When Earth's resources are depleted, a former NASA pilot is recruited to lead a mission to find a new home for humanity among the stars, a journey that pits him against the moral dilemmas of abandoning his family and the fate of the planet. |
In a desperate attempt to save humanity from extinction, a team of astronauts is sent through a mysterious wormhole to explore potential new worlds, but their mission is complicated by personal relationships, moral choices, and the revelations of a devastating cover-up. |
A father must choose between returning to his family on a dying Earth or continuing his mission to find a new home for humanity, as he navigates the complexities of time, space, and the human condition. |
Interstellar explores the lengths one family will go to ensure the survival of the human race, as a former pilot is called upon to lead a mission that will take him away from his loved ones and force him to confront the ethical and personal consequences of his actions. |
In a race against time, a group of astronauts venture through a wormhole to find a new home for humanity, but their mission is complicated by the moral dilemmas they face, the revelations of a deception, and the emotional bonds they must sever. |
A former pilot turned farmer must leave his family behind and embark on a perilous interstellar journey through a wormhole to find a new home for humanity. |
Driven by love and the survival instinct, a team of astronauts faces the unknown as they explore distant planets and grapple with the mysteries of time and space. |
As Earth faces extinction, a father must choose between saving his children and the future of the human race in this epic sci-fi adventure. |
A dying scientist's lie forces his daughter to confront the truth about her father's legacy and her own role in saving humanity. |
Through a tesseract, a father connects with his daughter across time and space, guiding her towards a solution that could save the world. |
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Engine: Claude
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Explanation: Interstellar is a compelling and thought-provoking science fiction screenplay that explores humanity's relationship with the planet, the responsibility to future generations, and the moral dilemmas posed by the mission to find a new home for the human race. The screenplay effectively establishes a strong emotional connection between the protagonist, Cooper, and his daughter Murph, and effectively depicts the scientific and technical aspects of the mission, including the exploration of the wormhole and the foreign galaxy. The screenplay also effectively addresses the moral and ethical dilemmas faced by the characters, particularly the revelation about Professor Brand's deception and its impact on the mission and the people left on Earth. While there are some areas for improvement, such as further development of the physical altercation between Cooper and Dr. Mann and tighter integration of the parallel storylines, the screenplay is a strong and compelling work that is recommended for consideration.
Engine: Gemini
Recommend
Explanation: Interstellar is a thought-provoking and emotionally resonant science fiction screenplay with a strong father-daughter relationship at its core. The screenplay excels in its portrayal of space exploration, its exploration of complex ethical dilemmas, and its intelligent dialogue. While the pacing could be tightened in the middle section and some characters could be further developed, the screenplay's strengths far outweigh its weaknesses. The tesseract sequence and the exploration of love as a powerful force are particularly noteworthy. Overall, Interstellar is a highly recommendable screenplay with the potential to be a captivating and successful film.